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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty five posted June 19
« Reply #225 on: June 19, 2012, 12:43:45 PM »
I apologise in advance for the frivolous post, I am going to justify it by pointing out that clearly Rachel needs open and honest feedback on her story.

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So cute! He's so adorable, swooning over Alexis...aaahhhh.
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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty five posted June 19
« Reply #226 on: June 19, 2012, 06:42:42 PM »
Chapter thirty six.


Alexis:It is my birthday today too Alby I am getting old I have wrinkles.
Alby:You are beautiful Alexis.
Alexis:You seem different Alby what changed.
Alby:I grew up.

Alexis:Hello.
Alby:Hello.
Alexis:Alby I am too old for you.
Alby:When I look into your eyes I don't see your age I see you...the woman I love.
Alexis:I love you too.


Alby:Will you?
Alexis:Yes.
Alby:I don't think I will ever forget this night.

Meanwhile at exactly the same time.

Jamie:No..why now.
Grim:Hey man the names Grim Artie Grim pleased to meet you.
Jamie:Wait aren't you the guy in Rica's dynasty.
Artie:Yeah I am here moonlighting I thought this would be better comming from someone who understands.
Jamie:How can you understand.
Artie:Hey man I have lost people I have lost a whole lot of people so don't tell me that I don't understand.
Jamie:Okay I am sorry but why can't I stay around a little longer.
Artie:The dynasty has to go on it is time for the young ones to take their turn. You have done your part it is their time now.The second that Alby and Alexis get engaged will be the moment that you die.
Jamie:Just tell me that they will be happy.
Artie:I can't tell you that.
Jamie:Why?
Artie:Spoilers..

Alby:(Slips ring onto Alexis finger)
Artie:And it is done.
Alby:Voice why do I feel that I have lost something?
Voice:Sweetheat your grandpa just died.
Alby:Oh no..(bursts into tears)
Voice:Take care of him Alexis.
Alexis:I will for the rest of my life.


Rachel noteThis all really did happen at the same time at exactly the moment that Alby proposed Jamie died talk about timing.I hope you didn't mind me borrowing Artie for a guest role Rica.
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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty five posted June 19
« Reply #227 on: June 19, 2012, 06:50:34 PM »
I am just catching up after my holiday and I must say I love how your story is going!
I must say I am still thinking of the cute "Fowum". My son is 4 and can't say the r either. He says an l instead, so sweet. We recently had a small discussion about two words that he pronounced the same, but one is with an l and the other with an r, and I was joking and pretending to misunderstand him.
It were different words, but the difference is like read and lead. As if he said "Mommy I want to lead a book" and I replied "Lead a book?" Then he got a little annoyed "No, lead a book!" It was so funny how he wanted me to pronounce the r, while he didn't. That's when I saw him realize the difference and that was just too cute! ;D
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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty six also posted June 19
« Reply #228 on: June 19, 2012, 07:51:32 PM »
Artie!  That's where you disappeared to this afternoon!  You are so going into a hole for this (;))

Congratulations to Alby and Alexis.  I guess this means you have the room you need for a nooboo!  Great update!
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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty six also posted June 19
« Reply #229 on: June 19, 2012, 08:24:21 PM »
*Sigh* That was just like a movie Rachel...so perfect. And the screenshots are amazing, too. I can't wait to see the wedding! No really, I can't wait. Make it soon! ;)
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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty six also posted June 19
« Reply #230 on: June 20, 2012, 05:54:56 AM »
Aww, how sweet! I'm sure they'll make beautiful nooboos together. ^-^

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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty six also posted June 19
« Reply #231 on: June 20, 2012, 10:08:35 AM »
Congrats Alby and Alexis! R.I.P Jamie. Can't wait for the wedding and nooboos. :D



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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty six also posted June 19
« Reply #232 on: June 20, 2012, 07:58:10 PM »
Chapter thirty seven.


As mother of the groom Pigeon decided she needed a new hat. As mothers of the grooms go I think she looks pretty classy.

Alby:Well hello Mrs Simself
Alexis:Hello there yourself.
Alby:I never thought I could be this happy again,you know,after gramps and everything.
Alexis:I know sweetie,there is something that would make me even happier.
Alby:Oh and what is that.
Alexis:I will tell you later.

The wedding guests pose for a picture.

Alby:So are you going to tell me what would make you happier.
Alexis:Why don't you try and guess.
Alby:Why don't you give me a clue.
Alexis:Close your eyes Alby.
Alby:Okay,now what.
Alexis:Try to imagine a little nooboo of our own a mini us with your eyes and..
Alby:Your mouth..
Alexis:I want a family Alby while I still have time.

Alby:Are you sure this is what you want.
Alexis:I never wanted anything more in my life.
Alby:We don't have to decide right now we could wait..
Alexis:(puts finger to his lips)This is what I want Alby..I want us to have a nooboo of our own.



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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty seven posted June 21
« Reply #233 on: June 20, 2012, 08:08:42 PM »
Your writing is fantastic. I think this is my favourite couple of yours. They feel so real. Also, which ghost is that in the wedding picture?
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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty seven posted June 21
« Reply #234 on: June 20, 2012, 08:14:49 PM »
Thank you so much I really like writing the storyline for Alby and Alexis they are one of my favorite couples too,the ghost is Kris the others occasionaly pop back to their graves but he is out all the time.

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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty seven posted June 21
« Reply #235 on: June 21, 2012, 07:20:06 AM »
Congrats on the wedding. The bride look lovely! I like Pigeon's hat. Can't wait for the nooboo. ;D

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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty seven posted June 21
« Reply #236 on: June 21, 2012, 09:18:34 AM »
That was a wonderful wedding! Alexis is so sweet!  :)

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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty seven posted June 21
« Reply #237 on: June 21, 2012, 09:51:06 AM »
Chapter thirty eight.


Alexis:It is offical we are going to have a nooboo.
Alby:Woot.
Alexis:I thought you would be happy.

Alby:I think I just felt a kick.
Alexis:Alby don't be silly he is barely a pixel at the moment.
Alby:He?
Alexis:I want a boy.
Alby:Well I want a girl..Voice can you do something about that.
Voice:No lets leave it to the game to decide.
Alby:Spoil sport.
Voice:Come on it is nice to have a surprise sometimes.

Voice:Hello there nooboo Simself.
Nooboo:Hello there Voice.
Voice:Who is a cute nooboo yes he is yes he is.
Nooboo:Did I happen to get a name.
Voice:Of course,Ladies and Gentlemen say a big hello to Macaw Simself.
Macaw:You are just going to call me Mac aren't you.
Voice:Naturally.
Mac:I thought as much.

Alexis:Hello little man.
Mac:Hello mummy.
Alexis:You are just the most adorable little man ever.
Mac:You're not so bad yourself mum.

Alexis:So shall we go blow out the candles on your birthday cake.
Mac:Birthday cake gets a big thumbs up from me.
Alexis:I thought it might. I wonder if you will have mine or daddy's hair colour.
Mac:I don't know lets go find out.


Voice:Happy birthday Mac you got your Grandpa Keiths hair colour and your dad's eyes. I think you might have your mummys mouth and you certainly have her face shape. It is so weird not seeing the Sekemoto bone structure after three generations.
Mac:You have to admit I look cute though.
Voice:Yes you look adorable Mac.



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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty eight posted june 21st
« Reply #238 on: June 21, 2012, 10:17:40 AM »
Congratulations on the birth of Macaw! He looks adorable :) Nice wedding pictures too and a very classy mother of the groom indeed!

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Re: Ratchie's Simself Dynasty. Chapter thirty eight posted june 21st
« Reply #239 on: June 21, 2012, 10:34:32 AM »
Welcome, Mac!  ;D  Aww, he's lovely!

 

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