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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Get Your Party Hats On
« Reply #45 on: February 16, 2012, 04:39:39 AM »
Poor Sam to grow up with grandpa hair and clothes! No wonder Jared laughed lol. He look great after the makeover. Poor Agnes for that to happen at a party! ;D

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Sam Gets A Girlfriend
« Reply #46 on: February 18, 2012, 12:09:54 PM »
Sam Gets A Girlfriend

Chris: I want to get a new car, a new wife, a new house, a new beard!

You can have the beard.



Chris: I feel moderately fulfilled. I think I look hot with a beard.



Agnes: Writing books is hard. Maybe this is why I always opt to become a painter. Although, I still think it's more to do with the fact that there's no requirement in the immortal dynasty for a book to be written at each lifestage.

Maybe you should phone up Metro and suggest it's added in.

Agnes: No thanks. It'd just be adding more to my workload. You've never tried to make 25 ice sculptures in about 15 days before, have you? It's a lot of work.

I don't doubt it for a second. I'm starting to think you need some therapy though, you clearly have unresolved issues.

Agnes: You would too.

But anyway. The title of this chapter isn't about Agnes' literary travails or her unresolved issues about being an immortal dynasty wife. Nor is is about Chris' beard, however hot he looks in it.

Chris: Oi! I look very hot in it!

I said that.

Chris: Oh, right. *whistles*



The title of this chapter was about Sam getting a girlfriend.

Sam: Must you really show everyone this part?

Yes.

Sam: You have really pretty eyes.

Naomi: Thanks. So do you. Erm...

Yes, meet Naomi Ursine, the girl Sam's got his eye on. Although he's going about getting her in an interesting way.



Sam: Hang on, you've got something on your lips.

Naomi: Have I?

Sam: Yes...

Naomi: *thinks* I so can see what's coming...

Sam: *thinks* Well, that backfired.

Sadly Naomi rejected Sam's attempt for a first kiss.



So he asks he to the prom instead.

Sam: Ermmm... so... you know there's a prom on Sunday, right?

Naomi: Yes.

Sam: Doyouwannagotoitwivme?

Naomi: What?

Sam: Doyouwannagottothepromwitme?

Naomi: I really don't know what you're trying to say.

Sam: Prom. With me?

Naomi: I've been hoping you'd ask that all week.

Sam: Win.



Georgia: It's my birthday!

Really? I'm trying to get your brother to ask a girl to go steady with him here, and you've decided now is a good time to age up?

Georgia: I can't wait to be a teenager. All that freedom, no school, it's going to be great!

You still have to go to school.



Georgia: Wait! What? I don't want to age up anymore!



Too late.

Agnes: Those sparkles are going to make a massive mess on my carpet.



Emily: It's my birthday too!

Might as well get your brother to come home from his date then. Oh, wait, he has asked Naomi to go steady. A successful day all around.

Emily: Can we please have some attention over here? I need a makeover, now!

First up on the runway is Emily, sporting her new everyday outfit designed to be suitable for painting while looking athletic and like the genius she is.



Second is Georgia, showing off her everyday outfit. This one also evokes artistic ability, as well as her musical skills.



Now Emily's back with her formalwear. It looks fun while also keeping true to the Good side of her personality.



And finally, here's Georgia in her formalwear. She's an ambitious sim, so this fantastic long number shows that she's grown-up and ready to achieve.



Georgia: I have a fourth trait you know!

Yes. But you try making an outfit that demonstrates somebody's grumpiness.



Sam, what are you doing?

Sam: I'm making the doorbell play a haunted house sound to scare Mum.

That's an interesting sort of teenage prank.

Sam: Well, I might as well work on my ten unique upgrades while annoying my parents.

Chris: It's been nearly a whole chapter since you paid attention to me now.

You spent all of it fishing.

Chris: I demand picture equality! I'm a star! A star, I tell you!

I think your new celebrity status is going to your head.



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The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Sam Gets A Girlfriend
« Reply #47 on: February 18, 2012, 12:29:33 PM »
Too funny! Made my granddaughter ask what I was laughing so hard about. LOL

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Sam Gets A Girlfriend
« Reply #48 on: February 18, 2012, 12:39:19 PM »
Naomi is very pretty, usually Claire's offspring isn't.
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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Sam Gets A Girlfriend
« Reply #49 on: February 18, 2012, 01:18:19 PM »
I really like the way that you let each Sims personality shine through.

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Prom Night
« Reply #50 on: February 19, 2012, 12:58:04 PM »
Prom Night

There's nothing like a bit of sibling rivalry. Georgia and Emily have decided that if Sam can get a date for the prom, so can they. So they've headed to the park to track down the teenage boys of Sunset Valley.



Georgia: Hi, my name's Georgia CrumpleSteel. You look reasonably attractive. What's your name?

Sam Sekemoto: You really know how to make a guy feel liked.



Hang on, Emmy. I think you may be going about this the wrong way.

Emily: I'm being interesting and intelligent. Boys like interesting and intelligent.

Yes. But to get a date, you probably need to be interesting and intelligent while talking to them.

Emily: Fine.



Ohhh no. Oh no you don't.

Emily: You said I had to talk to a boy. I am.

There's just so many things wrong with you choosing Arlo Bunch.



Emily: So, the sun has a diameter of 1,392,000 km and it accounts for about 99.86% of the mass of the solar system. Isn't that awesome?

Arlo: Uh huh.

Georgia: I hate school. I want to be a world famous rockstar when I grow up and seriously, rockstars don't go to school.

Sam Sekemoto: Uh huh.



Georgia: Sooo.... my brother has a date to the prom and I don't. Want to go with me?

Sam Sekemoto: Again, you really know how to make a guy feel liked.

Unsurprisingly, neither Emily or Georgia have got a date to the prom.



Georgia: I think I'm going to stick to my guitar.

I think that's a very good idea.

Georgia: Besides, rockstars don't stick with one partner for life. I've got lots of chances to meet and dump men.

Why don't you ask your dad for some driving lessons?



Chris: My new car... it's going to die...

Since when did you have a new car?

Chris: I'm having a mid-life crisis here. I need pampering.

Georgia: I love it! It's so fast, so awesome!

Chris: And there's a brick wall ahead!



Chris and Georgia both came back stressed, so they worked off their stress with a nice pillow fight. And then it was time for prom.



Sam: Naomi Ursine, will you do me the very great honour of accompanying me to the prom?



Emily: I can't believe you got a date and we didn't.

Sam: You played chess and then tried to chat up Arlo Bunch, and he's an adult anyway. Georgia insulted Sam Sekemoto, and was then surprised when he turned her down. I was actually nice to my potential date.

Emily: Yeah. Maybe you have a point there.

Georgia: But at least I don't have toilet paper on my shoe.



Agnes and Chris have been invited to Gobias Koffis party.

Agnes: Where's my husband? I can't believe he's left me.



Chris: I'm getting my gardening skill up, dear.

Chris! You can't just start harvesting other people's plants at a party!

Chris: Why not?

It's rude.

Chris: So are you sometimes.



Chris: So, my watcher told me I had to come inside and impress you, Gunther, as she wants me to stop nicking Life Fruit. So, business is awesome, right?

Gunther: Wow, I'm impressed. It's nice to meet someone who's famous like me!

Agnes: I wonder about my husband sometimes.



Where are you off to?

Georgia: I had a horrible time at the prom. I got rejected for a dance, saw Sandi French wearing the same dress and then got in a fight with her! Emily got prom queen and Sam prom king, and I've got a bruise on my knee!

I'm sympathetic, and all, but that doesn't answer the question of where you're going.

Georgia: I'm going to take out my anger by egging Sandi's house.

Oh dear.



Vampire River McIrish: And what are you doing?

Georgia: Erm...nothing? These eggs in my hand don't actually exist. Honest.



Policeman: Whether the eggs exist or not, you've broken curfew.

Georgia: I hate you all.



Back at home, Chris is waiting for Georgia to arrive.

Chris: How could you?! Those eggs were for my breakfast pancakes!

It's been an interesting day in the CrumpleSteel household.

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Prom Night
« Reply #51 on: February 19, 2012, 06:53:09 PM »
Very funny update lol! No wonder they don't get dates. Poor Arlo he need plastic surgery bad. ;D



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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Prom Night
« Reply #52 on: February 19, 2012, 06:58:23 PM »
I think the girls need to work on their seduction skills.

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Love All Around
« Reply #53 on: February 20, 2012, 06:57:56 PM »
Love All Around



Agnes: It's time. The birthday I've been dreading. You'd think I'd get used to being an elder over and over again, but it never really gets much better.







Agnes: Do I look old?

You still look lovely.



Chris: You do. You look gorgeous.

Agnes: But I'm old, and you're still young.

Chris: I love you for what's inside of you, not what's on the outside, even though that still looks great. You're the best wife and friend anyone could hope for and I don't know what I'll do when you're gone.

Emily: I think I may throw up.



Agnes: I love you too.



Emily: Really. Seriously, you two. Get a room or something.

Agnes: Shut up, stop ruining our lovely moment!



Toby: Hi, I'm Toby Griffiths.

Georgia: *swoons* I think I'm in love.



What are you doing down here, Sam?

Sam: Mam says I've got to upgrade the washing machine before I can have Naomi over.

I think that's entirely justified.



Naomi: Flowers! What are these for?

Sam: Can't a man spoil the woman he loves?



Awwwww. Just awwwww.

Sam: Some privacy?



What are you doing down here now? Surely you can't want Naomi over again? She only left ten minutes ago, and you can't be that lovestruck?

Sam: Nah. This time it's because I pointed out that Mam had grey hair.

Once again, she's entirely justified.



Oh Georgia. We ended the last chapter with you getting arrested, and I don't want to end this one with it too.

Georgia: This time I have an amazing strategy to not get caught. It's completely and utterly foolproof.

Go on then.



Yes. Because nobody can see you there.

Georgia: I told you it was amazing.

Next time, Sam's YA birthday.

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Love All Around
« Reply #54 on: February 28, 2012, 02:23:26 PM »
Sam Becomes YA

Thanks to work, it's taken me over a week to get this update ready, even though I'd played all of it long before. I'm a long way ahead of updates in the game, so I'll try to catch this thread up as soon as I can.

Sam: Who are you talking to?

The readers.

Sam: Well, whoever The Readers is, I'm sure he's not as important as my YA birthday party. Which is about to start.

Hint taken.



Thornton Wolff and Mortimer Goth are propping up the bar.

Thornton: Well, someone needs to pay the wages of the bar staff.

There aren't any bar staff.

Mortimer: I just like juice.



Chris: Jared. Seriously. Why are you always at my parties? I have never once invited you, and all you do is eat cake and argue with my family.

Jared: I like arguing. And eating cake. I can do both at your parties.

Chris: You are the worst party guest ever.



Sam: I guess this is it, then. Leaving my teenage years behind, becoming a responsible adult. Becoming older and wiser.

Georgia: Pffft. Becoming older and more ugly, more like.



Make a wish, birthday boy.

Sam: I wish that my sister would be nice to me.

Georgia: Yessssss. If you tell someone, it doesn't have to come true!



Everyone: Happy birthday Sam!

Naomi: Wait, what's happening over there?



Oh. No Claire, not now!

Naomi: Mum!

Claire: I feel... light. And sparkly. I think it's time I went.



Thornton: What's going on? Mr Grim? How dare you storm a birthday party like this!

Grim: Shut up, Thornton Wolff, or I'll take you too.

Thornton: What did she ever do to you?

Grim: It's my job. Some people get to spend their days saving lives, I have to spend my days taking lives. It pays the bills. I have children to look after!

Thornton: I hate children. This is not the way to get sympathy from me!



Claire: Maybe I can just sneak off, while he's distracted.

Grim: I can see what you're doing, you know.

Chris: Okay, I think I have finally found the one party guest worse than Jared Frio.



And, during all that, Sam aged up to a Young Adult. Once again he had that dodgy hairstyle that he so loves...



...but I gave him a makeover and he looks dashing. I hope the readers agree.

Sam: The Readers needs to know that I'm taken. I don't want him getting any ideas.

Go join the fire service like you wanted to.



Sam: *mutters* I joined the fire service to save lives, not upgrade fire trucks. I spent all my teen years upgrading things. Anyone would think I had a unique skill to supermax or something.

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Sam Becomes YA
« Reply #55 on: February 28, 2012, 03:59:33 PM »
Lovce the Jared Frio part! Claire is one of my favorite original townies for some reason, I'm glad her daughter will be part of the family.
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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Sam Becomes YA
« Reply #56 on: February 28, 2012, 04:04:10 PM »
Can you tell Sam that this particular reader is also taken so he doesn't need to worry about me attempting to take him away from the future Mrs Crumplesteel.

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Sam Becomes YA
« Reply #57 on: February 29, 2012, 05:44:15 AM »
Very funny that Claire want to sneak away from Grim lol! Great update. ;D

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Sam Becomes YA
« Reply #58 on: February 29, 2012, 07:50:52 PM »
A Proposal



Sam: Naomi, I love you.

Naomi: Seriously, did you drag me all the way up here to tell me that?

Sam: Errrrrmmmm... no! Will you... will you... will you watch the stars with me?



Naomi: They're beautiful, aren't they?

Sam: Not as beautiful as you.

N'awwww.

Sam: Shut up, watcher.



Sam: Ever since I first kissed you, I've known you were the girl I wanted to be with forever. I love everything about you. I even love how clumsy you are. Naomi Ursine, will you marry me?



Naomi: Yes. Yes I will.



I would say get a room, but there aren't any here yet because I haven't upgraded it. So I'm going to back away now and go and see what the others are doing.



Emily: It's my biiiiiirrrrttthhhhdaaayyyyy!

And you'll cry if you want to...

Emily: I do not have either the dramatic or the overemotional trait.



No. You're clearly a technophobe.

Emily: Die, evil machine! You may be able to oppress other people with your technological ways, but not me!



Georgia: I wish that someone would set fire to all those party blowers.

I hope your wish comes true. I really, really do.



Madison Van Watson: You know, Chris Crumplesteel is a really great guy.

Chris: I'm awesome. I'm just so awesome.

And a quick show off of Emily and Georgia's makeovers. Georgia gained the friendly trait, and will be staying in the house. Between her and Chris, they'll be responsible for making all the friends. Georgia will be finding a husband and moving out in a few days.









Sam finds workouts a little difficult.



Sam: Help! It's winning!



Sam: No, seriously! Help! I thought I'd stopped it, but it's fighting back again!

Maybe you should stick to the treadmill.



Sam: This stereo just keeps breaking. I don't understand why.

Emily: Mwahaha! My plan is working!

You're not even an evil Sim.



Agnes: So, they're all young adults now.

Chris: Yeah. Our little babies. They get older so fast, don't they?

Agnes: I hope we've done a good job raising them. I guess only time will tell.

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: A Proposal
« Reply #59 on: February 29, 2012, 09:54:34 PM »
Aww, what a sweet chapter. I can't wait to see Naomi and Sam's nooboo since they are both very good looking.
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