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More Angels
« Reply #75 on: February 19, 2012, 07:03:06 PM »
This is such a good story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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« Reply #76 on: February 19, 2012, 08:57:20 PM »
Poor Isolde!  :-[
Idiot Prince! to allow and even encourage such monstrous actions to be taken.  >:(



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Re: More Angels
« Reply #77 on: February 19, 2012, 09:54:40 PM »
Poor Isolde and her baby. I hope they get reunited! But I have the feeling they won't be. :'(

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #78 on: February 20, 2012, 02:55:51 PM »
Thank you all.  :)

She presented herself at Clothilda's bright and early next morning. The house was bathed in light as all the curtains had been pulled back as far as they could go to allow the sunshine in. 

'She does take the curse thing seriously,' Lucy noted.

Clothilda poured the tea.  There was no cake this morning.  Clothilda had obviously given up trying to rescue it.

She cleared her throat and began.

So it was that Maleficent, Primrose and the tiny baby left the village and the Kingdom.  They were accompanied by many of the villagers because even plump and happy villagers sometimes dream of a better life where kings do not throw their grand-daughters out of their homes.  As well, Hammet the Blacksmith left with them.  He said he did not trust his sisters to survive long outside civilization so, despite his impatience with them, the bonds of family were too strong for him to ignore.



Maleficent did not go quietly, as was to be expected, for she was furious with the King.  She seems to have overlooked her own part in this tragedy but I am guessing she never expected such harshness from the king.  He had always seemed a genial old fellow and maybe she had anticipated nothing more than ridicule of the prince followed by acceptance by all concerned.

Her parting words, dark and grim, were amplified by her powers to a thunderous roar and resounded throughout the village that night.  The villagers shook in their boots and cows went off their milk for days afterwards.

'Hear me good citizens of Edenshire for this bane I place upon the royal house of King Edward.

I curse the House of the King and all who are yet to be born of it.  Never will the blood of this House reject another daughter because the wombs of the wives shall bear only sons.   By all the power I can call to my bidding, I doom this House to its fate.  No daughter shall it bear yet only a  daughter can break this curse.   



In his castle, King Edward drew the curtains and settled down with a favourite book in front of the fire.  Stupid witch.  What sort of curse was that anyway?  He shrugged and lived out the rest of his days, disturbed only by the raucous games of his many grandsons.



Lucy was puzzled. She was inclined to agree with the king. 

Hadn't she overhead many times that her own parents should have quit while they were ahead – while their family was limited to three charming, obedient and high achieving sons.

'What is so wrong with only bearing sons.'

'Normally nothing.' Clothilda smiled. 'Little boys are fine, if a trifle noisy.  But we are talking about generations of sons here.  It upset the balance and, for a royal dynasty, it spelt disaster.'

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #79 on: February 20, 2012, 04:00:09 PM »
Hmm... So does Lucy break the curse? I guess I'll have to wait to find out! Excellent chapter. I love those mentions of the "Plump and happy villagers." This story is both funny and intriguing. Very nice!

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #80 on: February 20, 2012, 06:32:29 PM »
Hmmmm...
Intrigue.
Lucy is the key to the curse! But there has to be a decendent of the prince hidden in this story. There is a prince? Who could it be?
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« Reply #81 on: February 21, 2012, 03:48:38 AM »
'A Kingdom needs its princesses.' Clothilda continued.

'A Kingdom grows and expands with the lands and alliances that princesses bring through marriage.  Without growth, the once happy and prosperous Kingdom was reduced to many small stakeholdings of squabbling princelings.



It was the end of Edenshire and the beginning of a new town which managed quite well without a royal family.



The males who carried the curse took themselves off to lands far away for a family line, that is infamous for producing only sons, was viewed with suspicion by many budding brides who opted instead for less royal, but curse-free suitors.

'But how could you know?'  Lucy asked, her brow creasing as she thought it through.  'How could you be aware of what was happening in lands far away?'

'A good question and easily answered,' Clothilda winked and hefted her crystal ball.



'Witches are not without their resources. As well, much was gleaned from new settlers for Dry Gulch attracts many who have been outcasts in their own towns.  People drifting for years in search of a welcoming home pick up snippets of gossip along the way.  The witches of my line are nothing, if not meticulous, in recording details.' 

She led Lucy to a book on a stand. 'Read for yourself.' She invited.



It's been boys all the way for anyone who could trace their ancestry back to King Edward.  Generation after generation of little boys who then produced more little boys and on it goes to this present day.'

Lucy carefully thumbed through the pages of the book.  Line upon line of names - ancient people long since gone, their children, their hopes and dreams. A son, another son. The son of a son of a son.  So it went.  She skipped pages.  More male children.  Her head spun.

'But surely there was something they could do.' Lucy frowned.  She knew her fairy stories and there was always a way of breaking a curse and freeing the princess or turning the toad to a prince or whatever you had to do.

Clothilda sighed deeply.  'You have not paid attention.  There were only sons.  The curse called for a daughter to break it.  They could not conjure a daughter out of thin air.'

'But what of the princess?  She was a daughter of the House.'

Clothilda led her back to the chair.  'Sit, again my dear for there is more.'



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Re: More Angels
« Reply #82 on: February 21, 2012, 08:29:04 AM »
Oh dear! Yet another cliffhanger. :) What a good storyline. Excellent writing! And very good characters. ;D I'm a huge fan of your story.

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #83 on: February 21, 2012, 09:49:14 AM »
Don't stop now! We want to know more. :P

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #84 on: February 21, 2012, 09:54:33 AM »
More!
Please.  ;D

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #85 on: February 21, 2012, 04:27:07 PM »
Thank you all.  I love your comments. I have to catch up with the pictures but hopefully I can post some more later.   ;D

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« Reply #86 on: February 22, 2012, 12:42:55 AM »
In the early days of this town, the people were not too concerned about the trouble brewing in the kingdom they had left behind.  They had their own problems in adapting to a very different environment.  They no longer had pleasant fertile green fields which sprouted with an abundance of crops.  Instead they faced a dry, harsh landscape and a relentless sun which baked the earth as hard as rock and scorched their seedlings as they poked their heads above the ground.

And then there were the ghosts who plagued them during the night and made their already difficult lives, even more miserable.

For their dead did not rest. They rattled the doors at night, turned over pots, frightened the maids and spooked the horses.  It was all very well when grand-dad popped in for a visit when you had sorrowfully bid his remains goodbye,



but it was not so good when he disturbed your slumbers night after night,



and infinitely worse when it was someone else's grandfather.



Maleficent and Primrose researched far and wide



and finally had to admit that the ghosts were most likely a side effect of Maleficent's curse.



'Curses are dangerous things,' Clothilda fixed Lucy with a stern eye. 'They are not to be undertaken lightly and more often than not, they are more trouble than they are worth'.

Lucy swallowed loudly and swore to herself that she would remember the warning if ever she felt inclined to cast a curse.

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #87 on: February 22, 2012, 12:59:09 AM »
Poor Lucy.  I think Clothilda is very good for her!  ;D

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #88 on: February 22, 2012, 02:11:24 AM »
Awesome update! Can't wait to read more. ;D

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« Reply #89 on: February 22, 2012, 10:39:08 AM »
"and infinitely worse when it was someone else's grandfather." That was so funny!

 

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