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Re: More Angels
« Reply #45 on: February 15, 2012, 07:10:12 AM »
Oh my! I wonder what it mean? Can't wait for next update!

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #46 on: February 15, 2012, 07:49:19 AM »
I can't wait to meet Clothilda!  :D
I hope will be able to help Lucy!  :-\



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Re: More Angels
« Reply #47 on: February 15, 2012, 04:16:15 PM »
Aw thanks guys.  I really appreciate your comments.  ;D

One Clothilda coming up.

A witch.  Why would Lucy ever imagine this town with all its strangeness would not have its very own witch?  And historian.  She added to herself. 

Maxwell Lilybanks had slid that one in too maybe to improve the credibility of said witch.

And now, here was she, Lucy Angel, modern cell-phone using Lucy who didn't believe in witches or ghosts or anything that couldn't be explained in text books, standing at the back door of said witch's house and trembling in her boots.



Lucy had thought she had explored this town from top to bottom but she had never noticed this house before. 

While it crouched behind its cover of trees and plants, it was a substantial house all the same and right slap bang in the middle of town.



Tinkerbell nuzzled her neck. 

'Bring your horse,'  Maxwell had said. 'She will know the way.'

'I'm here,' she whispered to Jett on her phone.  She needed the sound of his voice for reassurance. If she was killed and eaten or turned into a newt, at least he would be able to point a finger at the culprit.

'Go for it,' his voice was tinny in her ear. 

'Alright for you safe and sound away from here,' she muttered to herself but she took a deep breath anyway and knocked at the door.

If Lucy had been expecting a story-book witch with tall black hat, pointy chin and a wart, then she was disappointed for Clothilda looked like nothing more than someone's kindly granny.



She was round like a dumpling, her eyes twinkled when she smiled, and she smelled of lemon verbena.

'Come in, come in,' she invited. 'Maxwell has told me all about you.  Those nasty ghosts...'

'Sit and I will put the kettle on.  Ghosts have no sense.  They forget that the living need their sleep...One lump or two?'

Lucy looked around the house half listening to Clothilda's prattle.  It was a welcoming house, warm and clean.  She expected to see a cat by the fire and a bag of knitting.

'Most of those ghosts were not too smart when they were still living.   I daresay they are not likely to improve on that in the afterlife, eh?' Clothilda chuckled as she bustled about in the kitchen.

'It's the curse though.  Brings them out of the woodwork.  Keeps Maxwell and Pilar busy.  If it wasn't for them this town would float off on its own.'

'There,' she plonked down a plate of rather burnt looking cake. They both looked at it dubiously.

'I never was much of a cook,' Clothilda sighed, pushing the plate away from them.  Then she turned her keen glance on Lucy.  'So, tell me about yourself.'

Clothilda nodded as Lucy talked of her family.



'Ah yes, the young doctor.  Thinks he knows everything but there's the young for you and he will learn once he realises that there is more to people and their ills than is described in medical textbooks.'

'And you, Lucy.  Where do you fit into this I wonder?' For a moment she was silent as she scrutinised Lucy's face so closely that Lucy began to feel uncomfortable.

'I do believe...yes, Maxwell is onto something...and so are those pesky ghosts...hmm.'

Lucy fidgeted and wondered if she should just walk out of this mad woman's house now before it got any crazier.

'The skin, the hair...yes...Hortense.'  Clothilda clapped her hands in glee.



'I had an great aunt Hortense.' Lucy offered.  Her mother had once told her she resembled her aunt.

'Yes, yes.  Hortense's branch left the town long ago.  Decided to put it all behind them.  One or two drifted back.'  Clothilda's forehead was creased in an effort of remembering.

'Beatrice, who owns your house but then the blood is dormant in her.  It's dormant in your brothers too but you, now...I wonder.'

'Tell me Lucy, is there someone you love.'

The change of tack took Lucy off guard.  She almost blurted out 'Andy' but those grey eyes were sharp and the name died on her lips.

She wasn't that sure if she loved Andy any more.  Sometimes she had trouble picturing his face.  His features blurred.

There was only one true answer really and she gave it.

'My family,' she said at last.

Clothilda nodded. 'Yes, family love.  It was family love that caused the curse and got us into all the bother in the first place.'  Her words might have been harsh but her face was kind.

'Let me tell you a love story, Lucy.  One about passion and envy, anger and treachery but most of all, about family love.'


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Re: More Angels
« Reply #48 on: February 15, 2012, 06:48:29 PM »
Wow, this is getting more and more interesting! I can't wait to hear Clothilda's story of passion and envy, anger, treachery, and family love!

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More Angels
« Reply #49 on: February 15, 2012, 08:14:37 PM »
Oh, I really love this story! It's like reading one of my novels ;) Good job!

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #50 on: February 15, 2012, 11:50:07 PM »
Thank you.  I hope no-one minds another update so soon but when I am on a roll, I really just want to write and write :)


Clothilda settled herself down onto one of the comfy chairs and motioned Lucy to do the same.  She then sat with her eyes closed, gathering her thoughts.   

It was so quiet that Lucy could hear the ticking of the clock on the wall and a bird chirping in the tree outside the window. 

Just as she was wondering if Clothilda had drifted off to sleep, she started to speak and the tale began.

Long ago and far away there was a kingdom called Edenshire.  The land was lush, green and fertile and the people were plump and happy.  There had been peace in the kingdom for many a long year.



The Kingdom was ruled by King Edward and his wife, Queen Rosamond. 



So peaceful was the Kingdom that it was nothing for the King to walk amongst his people, greeting them by name and sharing a pint or two at the local inn with his subjects. 

The royal couple had shared many years together and together, were facing the final chapters of their lives.


They had a son who was the apple of their eyes.  For many years they had despaired of being blessed with a child.  The months had rolled into years and the crib had remained disappointingly empty. 

However, it seemed almost at the final moments before they both grew too old, the gods relented and Prince Nicolas was born. 

The royal couple were delighted with their son and he grew into a strong, active boy, obedient and placid.  If he showed a distressing lack of imagination and wit, then his golden good looks and dimpled smile surely made up for it.

Indeed, there was scarcely a maid in the village who didn't dream of one day being selected as his bride, for even plump and happy villagers dream of a life of luxury.


The prince was of an age when he should take a wife.  The thought did not make him particularly happy, or sad.  He realized it would interrupt his fishing but he knew his duty. 

He trusted his father to choose a healthy, docile girl and if she was pleasing to look at, so much the better.


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Re: More Angels
« Reply #51 on: February 16, 2012, 04:09:48 AM »
The prince is a handsome fellow! Can't wait to see what happens next. ;D



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Re: More Angels
« Reply #52 on: February 16, 2012, 08:40:03 AM »
I've come to love the fact that you're using an ample number of words in your writings. It's quite interesting (and absorbing!) to read through both a well-though and a well-written story. You're also quite descriptive about the behaviour and personality of your characters; that's another thing I enjoy about your storytelling. That's to approve my stance that there is nothing pretentious here.

So, please continue with your writings. I'm very delighted by this story and which each chapter you make me more intrigued for what's to come next.

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #53 on: February 16, 2012, 09:40:23 AM »
Figwit, you are spinning a fine web. It has me caught up in it and I am curious as a cat, as to what happens next! ;D

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« Reply #54 on: February 16, 2012, 12:34:07 PM »
I just started reading this story and I am enjoying it very much. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Re: More Angels
« Reply #55 on: February 16, 2012, 02:16:50 PM »
Thank you all.  I am pleased you are enjoying it.  ;D



'That is just too awful,' Lucy cried.  'I'd hate to think what sort of husband my brothers would choose for me.  Yuck.'

'Well, I imagine if you had been a princess back then, you would have understood the reasons,' smiled Clothilda. The chill of the evening was drawing in and she placed a log on the fire.

"I daresay that most of the ordinary villagers chose who they wanted with impunity.'


Edenshire was also home to the witch sisters, Maleficent and Primrose. 

Maleficent was the bad witch


and Primrose, the good. 


Of course, real life is not as cut and dried as all that.  Maleficent was not always evil.  She was very kind to animals and small children and her sister, Primrose.  She adored Primrose and would do anything to make her happy.

Primrose, the good witch, was not always so good either.  She could be vain, self-centred and greedy and was not above manipulating Maleficent into doing her bidding.

If you wanted a curse or a potion to cure a malady, you went to Maleficent.  If you wanted to attract a suitor and win a heart, then you hastened to Primrose for a love potion or amulet.

The sisters also had a brother, Hammet, the village blacksmith. 



He lived apart from them.  He didn't have much time for his sisters or their chanting and the noxious odors they brewed. 

He claimed his magic was in his muscles and indeed it must have been so because when the village maidens were not fawning over Prince Nicolas, they were batting their eyelashes in the general direction of Hammet the blacksmith.

The day was drawing near when the Prince's bride would be announced and rumours were running rife in the village.

Primrose spent long hours, studying the arcane tomes in the family bookcase or sweating at her cauldron,


brewing and chanting and casting spells, and seeking assistance from the fates



for she had set her heart on the Prince as her husband.

Maleficent was uneasy.  She knew in her soul that nothing good would come from using one's magical gifts so selfishly but she hated to chastise her sister.  She was such a pretty thing and surely the most beautiful maid in the Kingdom. 

The King could not be blind to her charms and what an attractive couple she and the prince would make. 

Maleficent could picture in her mind's eye the  golden haired children they would produce, each one prettier than its parent and had she not herself  seen a sly exchange of glances between the prince and her sister on more than one occasion. 

Clothilda sighed.  'Ah such dreams we have for our own.'  She stood and stretched the kinks from her limbs.

'It is growing dark, Lucy,' she said over her shoulder as she tweaked the curtains closed at the cottage windows. 

'Your brothers will be worried if you don't return soon and I am sure your horse wants her warm stall.'

'But, did he marry Primrose?' Lucy asked.  She wasn't ready to leave the tale just yet.

Clothilda smiled mysteriously.  'That is for another day.  I am tired now and my cats need to be fed.  Come again tomorrow and we will continue.'

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #56 on: February 16, 2012, 02:46:13 PM »
    :o
Like Lucy, I want to know more!  :)

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #57 on: February 16, 2012, 04:07:31 PM »
Yes please tell us more.  :)

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #58 on: February 16, 2012, 04:49:06 PM »
Thanks Raven and special thanks to you, Richdre, for the two very beautiful worlds in this story.  ;D

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #59 on: February 17, 2012, 05:04:15 AM »
Don't let us wait to long! Awesome update. ;D