WOW
I just read your whole story in one long evening, just because I needed to know the rest of the story after every single chapter!
Your writing is amazing! Thank you very much for this wonderful and creative story!
The first thing I'll do is go and check if you have written more stories, but then I'll have to get some sleep first before reading it and being unable to turn of my computer
After this I feel like writing a story of my own maybe, you're very motivating!