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Offline warr2098

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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 31
« Reply #195 on: April 22, 2012, 09:54:26 AM »
NOOOOOOOOOO! Not Aurora!  :'(
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 31
« Reply #196 on: April 22, 2012, 03:07:20 PM »
The scene in the bedroom was so well written, it feel if I was in the room with her! Wow! and this is from a thirteen year old!
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 31
« Reply #197 on: April 22, 2012, 10:37:21 PM »
R.I.P Aurora...You will be missed! I hope Devon and Alexander will be okay! The scenes were very well described!
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 31
« Reply #198 on: April 23, 2012, 05:23:59 PM »
Wow... I missed a lot. I come back and my favorite character is dead. D: R.I.P Aurora. You'll be missed dearly.
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 31
« Reply #199 on: April 27, 2012, 09:08:11 PM »
Chapter 32: Devon
Aurora's final goodbyes were held by the lake. Nola, Jack, Heather, Joy and Ella met me by the banks. We surrounded Aurora's lifeless body. Nola cried softly holding Celia in a blanket to her chest, Jack comforting her. Joy rocking Alexander stood by Ella and Heather. My heart was shattered and my tears ran cold on my face. The rain rippled the lake and cooled the air. I knelt down next to Aurora. I cried by her side. I then opened a small wooden box that was in my pocket and I lifted a single white rose from it. I carefully placed the delicate flower in Aurora's hands. We then all held hands and stood in a moment of silence. Then it was the goodbye. Slowly we lifted Aurora on to a a small wooden boat and pushed it out into the lake.  Slowly it drifted out and we stood by the banks holding hands, crying and remembering. Goodbye my friend, my love...

Aurora Kinlyn: 1799-1821
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 32
« Reply #200 on: April 27, 2012, 09:38:14 PM »
That was so beautiful and heartfelt. Poor Devon and Alexander.  :(
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 32
« Reply #201 on: April 27, 2012, 09:45:58 PM »
I agree with Sugar, that was really beautiful writing. R.I.P Aurora.  :'(
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 32
« Reply #202 on: April 28, 2012, 10:29:58 AM »
She was only twenty two! Poor Devon. This is just so sad.
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 32
« Reply #203 on: May 15, 2012, 03:52:32 PM »
Wow you are an amazing writer! and that is so sad!!  :'(
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 32
« Reply #204 on: May 15, 2012, 08:04:34 PM »
Chapter 33: Devon
"Devon Please!" Nola called to me.
"Devon, you need to sleep!" She repeated I ignored.
"Its been a month." She said. I walked out of the room. She grabbed my shoulder. I went limp and passed out. Next thing I know  I am in bed, Joy, Ella, Heather, Nola and Jack looking down on me worried.
"Oh thank god!" Nola said hugging me.
"We thought you were..." Joy began.
"I'm fine." I said.
"Your exhausted!" Nola pleaded. 
"You really should sleep." Heather backed her up.
"Aurora doesn't want you to suffer!" Nola insisted.
"Come, we will leave him rest." Ella led them out.

 After the door clicked shut the room began spinning and I felt ill. My eyes closed and I tried to yell but no
thing came out
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"Devon... Devon..." A familiar voice called in a soft tone. I couldn't see anything, it was black as night.
Then a flash of white light appeared and I was looking out on the lake.
"Devon.........." A figure came into vision.

"Come closer..." She called The vision was still a bit of a blur. Then she was in focus. I was so close and I knew who it was...
"Aurora..." I whispered. I was looking up at her.

She glowed and white light strands filled her hair.
"Aurora..." I repeated in awe.
"I have a warning..." She said "the spirits send a warning message."
"What about?" I said.
"Beware the 10th stroke, Faith is coming to seek." a metallic voice of many called.
"The spirits have spoken. Protect my Alexander from danger... be safe my love." She called and I began to float out to the lake once again and visions became blurred.
"AURORA!" I called reaching for her.
"AURORA!!!!" I yelled but I was restrained.
"10th stroke..." The voices repeated in my head and the white flash brought me back to my room. I gasped and my eyes opened.
BONG-BONG-BONG-BONG-BONG the clock tower chimed 5 times.
My heart pounded.
"NOLA!!!" I screamed and Nola ran in.
"What! ARE YOU OK!?!?" She gasped.
"I saw Aurora, 10th stroke! What does it mean!?!" I yelled.
"Huh?!?" She stared at me like a loopy person "HEATHER! JOY! ELLA!" She called.  They ran in.
"Stop! I am not crazy!" I cried "Aurora told me that at the 10th stroke Faith will come!!!!"
"Faith?" Heather questioned.
"Faith.... oh lord help us all." Ella whispered.

To Be Continued...
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 33
« Reply #205 on: May 16, 2012, 12:36:13 PM »
Gahh! Suspense!! Great update!
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 33
« Reply #206 on: May 16, 2012, 03:14:54 PM »
Wow! Great update!
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 33
« Reply #207 on: May 16, 2012, 04:03:36 PM »
Awesome update! The last two pictures are amazing. :D
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 33
« Reply #208 on: May 17, 2012, 06:57:34 PM »
Quote from: loveSims on May 16, 2012, 04:03:36 PM
Awesome update! The last two pictures are amazing. :D
Thank you the last one happened on a whim. She posed like that and it just so happened the moon was right there.
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Re: Little House in the Woods: Chapter 33
« Reply #209 on: May 21, 2012, 03:32:39 PM »
Wow, I didn't get a notice for this chapter, so I missed it! The suspense!! :o
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