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A Triple Experience: Graveyard Please
« on: January 12, 2012, 10:03:20 PM »
Chapter 1: Introduction


It was late at night in the city of Bridgeport. For other towns this meant all things winding down but here it was just starting. Clubs were opening, scandals were spreading, and the paparazzi were raving. The big dish? The hottest new celebrity couple was just coming back from their honeymoon to their new home in Bridgeport. Their flight had just arrived from France, and any newspaper that cared at all about selling was fighting to get some sort of interview before they locked themselves away for the evening.

At one particular newspaper, a man named William Benson was fighting with his boss for a chance to premiere one of his articles in the next edition.

"Please sir, I really think I have something here. Can't you just take a look?"

"I told you, you bring coffee to the people who write the articles, you aren't actually one of them. If I wanted a writer I would've hired one."

"Just look it over! If you don't like it, I promise I'll never try to get you to read another one of my articles ever again."

The man sighed, took the paper and looked it over. It read as follows:

Everyone knows by now the newly proclaimed Cortez couple has arrived in Bridgeport. The thing everyone's wondering though is, what are the newlyweds planning? Is there a possible nooboo in their future? I spoke to their newly hired butler who was glad to give me some information.

"Oh yes, Ms. Tiffani had hired an interior decorator a week before they were scheduled to come back. I don't know much about it, but it seems very high up in price. There's a high end kitchen, dining room, and living room all set up. Of course there's also the royal bedroom, as well as another. Mr. Cortez himself made sure they would be sleeping on the finest sheets money can buy, they also have a nursery completely decked out in expensive cribs, toys, and a $10,000 simolean mural that wraps around the entire room. I do wonder how Ms. Tiffani will react though, since I think the nursery is a surprise for her."

So, is Tiffani not in on the nooboo plan? Is her family-oriented husband going from step to step a little too quickly? How about all the people who think they are too young to be doing all of this, will this college romance soon fall to Grim?


The boss looked up from this and eyed the new member suspiciously.

"Are you sure you wrote this, no help from the writers?"

Flattered, William replied with a quick "No sir, I interviewed the butler myself. She's an old family friend and, bless her, didn't seem to know that her new employers may not be so happy to hear all that she told me."

His boss looked at him "Alright you win; I'll premiere this in tomorrow's edition. However, I hear one complaint about this from our readers and it’s out the door with you, understand??!!!"

Before William could answer, he was whisked away for another coffee order, but he still felt the happiest in his entire life.

~Meanwhile~
Paparazzo was everywhere. It was clear that the Cortez couple would need some type of security surrounding them at all times. Indeed, it took 3 bodyguards, the limo driver, and the butler to get them into the house without being swallowed by the crowd. Even after they were safely locked inside it took 3 hours for the last reporter to finally accept they weren't getting a story anytime soon.

At that moment, the newest eddition of the Scandal (the newspaper where William works) had been published. Everyone was whispering about it, the newest house across the bridge was getting a lot of dirty looks.

But for Tiffani and Carlos Cortez, none of this mattered. What mattered was his persuasive whisper, her nervous giggle, and the dozens of perfect roses on top of their silken sheets. And what mostly mattered was the sound of a midnight lullaby sent from the heavens, signifying the gods’ approval.


Authors Notes:
*Hi! This is my first story in a while; hopefully I'll be able to stick to it for a long time.
*What do you think? I welcome all feedback, especially about any spelling/grammar mistakes on my part.

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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 1: Introduction
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2012, 10:19:32 PM »
So far, I think this is great! You really have drawn me in. Can't wait to see where you go with this!



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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 1: Introduction
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2012, 01:56:59 AM »
I like it! Can't wait for more. :D

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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 1: Introduction
« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2012, 03:04:10 PM »
Same as what moonareblue said, so far so great, I like

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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 1: Introduction
« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2012, 05:11:57 PM »
Thanks for all the kind comments, and how the heck did I get almost 100 views with one chapter??!!  :o

Anyway, I should have an update soon but for now here's:

Tiffani Cortez:




Her husband, Carlos Cortez:




Enjoy!  ;D
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 1: Introduction
« Reply #5 on: January 15, 2012, 03:56:45 AM »
My,my, my Carlos is one hot sim and Tifanni is beautiful.  :D Can't wait to see more.
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 1: Introduction
« Reply #6 on: January 16, 2012, 03:42:03 AM »
Very good story Alex! Your characters look really nice. I can't wait for more.
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 1: Introduction
« Reply #7 on: January 19, 2012, 01:44:18 PM »
Heh, I just read the story myself and hope the home I built works out nicely for you! I can make some changes if desired. :P
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 2: Some Honeymoon
« Reply #8 on: January 21, 2012, 12:51:45 AM »
Chapter 2:  Some Honeymoon
Tiffani’s Point of View

So much for a honeymoon. I woke up this morning with a phone call from my boss saying he wanted me at work at 3pm sharp since we were shooting the season finale for the show and as the star I would be in the center of everything. I don’t know if this is a coincidence or not, but about 2 hours later I was practically spewing toxic waste in the toilet.



I read the newspaper after and some nasty writer from the Scandal says Carlos is just using me for kids. The paparazzi are monsters; do they actually believe the things they write about? I was fuming which was bad since I was due for work in an hour and a half. Luckily Carlos calmed me down with, umm, a little romance.



After it was off to work, and don’t say anything about the outfit. I know it is awful, but my character is going undercover as a schoolteacher in this episode so I don’t really have much say in it.



What was weird was after a couple of hours at work, none of the clothes in wardrobe fit anymore. I was worried I was getting fat, but one of the stylists said “Honey, I think you’ve got bigger things to worry about.” Then she handed me some maternity clothes and asked when I was due.
I’M PREGNANT??!! I took the clothes, put them on, and uncertainly reached down to touch my stomach. Something more than grilled cheese from lunch was in there for sure.



I drove home as fast as I could to tell Carlos the news. He was ecstatic and immediately wanted to buy a crib, toys, and pregnancy books. I told him that before any of that he should get about 20 watermelons for the first of what will be many cravings. Oh, and I also let him feel my tummy.







I didn’t even know they made watermelons that small!
I decided to go to the doctor the next day. While I was plenty nervous, I was not ready to hear I was expecting triplets! A panic attack almost wiped me out, lucky that there was a doctor in the room. He gave me some advice on taking care of myself, but mostly just made sure I told my husband since he knew from experience that men do not take unexpected babies very well.
He was right, I think choking on his waffles was a pretty big sign Carlos wasn’t prepared either. But we loved each other and that’s all that really matters.



I stuck to the doctor’s advice, even listening to kids music and watching kids zone on television at the same time. Needless to say, it was not a fun time. 



It was especially not fun when rumors started to go around I had been arrested, got in my car to go sue for slander, and then halfway across the bridge to the city I went into labor. Oh and did I mention that Carlos was off shooting commercials for the local diner?





You have no idea what it was like standing on the side of the road while having contractions. How on earth was I going to drive to the hospital while in labor? I was so desperate I almost wished some paparazzi would show up and let me hitch a ride. Then suddenly, Carlos literally appeared next to me. Later he told me he had used the diner’s teleporter to come to me when I hadn’t answered his call. (Had my phone really been ringing? I don’t remember it at all but my screams probably drowned it out.) The next thing I know we are driving at almost twice the legal speed limit towards the local hospital. I am immediately rushed in, but Carlos isn’t allowed for some reason.
3 hours, and a lot of screaming later we have 3 beautiful nooboos sleeping by side.
“Do they have names yet?” Carlos asks.
“Yes, the first is Artemis, after the goddess of the hunt since she is a brave little one. The second is Aphrodite after the goddess of beauty, since there is no doubt she will be pretty.”
“All of them will, just like their mother. They are named for gods after all.”
I smile, and continue. “The third is an athletic genius, so she is called Athena after the goddess of wisdom and battle.”
After that we didn’t talk anymore. We just looked at our sweet little miracles for what felt like forever. I knew that everything changed now, but whatever happened we would always remember these first moments as a mother and father.



Author's Notes:
* Yay an update!  ;D
* Sorry for the bad writing, its 12:45 here and I really wanted to get an update in so here it is! I know this probably doesn't live up to your expectations, sorry.  :'(
* Tiffani's labor scene really went like that, except I just used cheats to get Carlos to come. And it wouldn't let him go in the hospital with her! I tried my best, but for some reason he just couldn't go in. :(
* The triplets are the main part of this story. (hence the title) I didn't know for sure if it would be triplets and I was praying that 3 would come.
* Thanks for all the comments, and to all the people who are reading, but not commenting. I know you're there!  ;)
* Tell me what you think, and feel free to point out any spelling or grammer mistakes on my part.
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 2: Some Honeymoon
« Reply #9 on: January 21, 2012, 01:31:10 AM »
Welcome to the three Gods! I found no mistakes or anything so considering it was written so late I'm rather surprised! Fantastic update. I can't wait for more.
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 2: Some Honeymoon
« Reply #10 on: January 21, 2012, 04:47:43 AM »
Lovely update! Good luck with the triplets ;)

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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 2: Some Honeymoon
« Reply #11 on: January 22, 2012, 03:56:48 PM »
Nice!
Just wondering, that home I built for you, why aren't you using it? I thought it was going to be for this story? Unless it comes in later. :P
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 2: Some Honeymoon
« Reply #12 on: January 22, 2012, 07:12:59 PM »
I enjoyed reading that! I've bookmarked it for further chapters.

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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 2: Some Honeymoon
« Reply #13 on: January 23, 2012, 03:14:38 PM »
Nice!
Just wondering, that home I built for you, why aren't you using it? I thought it was going to be for this story? Unless it comes in later. :P
They are moving there soon.  ;)
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 2: Some Honeymoon
« Reply #14 on: January 23, 2012, 08:39:17 PM »
They are moving there soon.  ;)

Yey! Looking forward to how you use it. :)
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