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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #225 on: February 01, 2012, 08:45:22 PM »
I just read the whole thing! :) It's very good!! Although, I noticed a lot of detail-forgetting. :-\ But that's okay! I still liked it!
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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #226 on: February 02, 2012, 11:14:03 AM »
I just read the whole thing! :) It's very good!! Although, I noticed a lot of detail-forgetting. :-\ But that's okay! I still liked it!
Just wondering what do you mean by detail forgetting.  :) And Happy birthday to Amber and Max.  :)
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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #227 on: February 02, 2012, 11:54:03 AM »
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Just wondering what do you mean by detail forgetting.

Just how at one point Sterling said "I'm 39!" then a couple chapters later she was 32. And then Velvet was Queen and then went back to princess. Just little things like that. I think they'd be sort of hard to catch if not read right back to back.

I'm not trying to be mean or anything, though! Just trying to be helpful!
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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #228 on: February 03, 2012, 01:42:26 AM »
I don't analyze a story when I read it, I just enjoy it, it is not a official dynasty after all.

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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #229 on: February 03, 2012, 10:15:21 AM »
Just how at one point Sterling said "I'm 39!" then a couple chapters later she was 32. And then Velvet was Queen and then went back to princess. Just little things like that. I think they'd be sort of hard to catch if not read right back to back.

I'm not trying to be mean or anything, though! Just trying to be helpful!
Well I appreciate that, and I am sorry about the details... I confuse myself sometimes with ages, and the reason for princess-queen to princess-queen is because she got married and then divorced and then married. I will try to be more aware of it...  :D

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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #230 on: February 03, 2012, 12:41:38 PM »
Just how at one point Sterling said "I'm 39!" then a couple chapters later she was 32. And then Velvet was Queen and then went back to princess. Just little things like that. I think they'd be sort of hard to catch if not read right back to back.

I'm not trying to be mean or anything, though! Just trying to be helpful!
Oh right, I was wondering and you didn't sound mean.  :)
Spork I'm waiting for my lovely Vell and her equally lovely daughter Amber to arrive in a new chapter. Hehe  ;)
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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #231 on: February 03, 2012, 12:59:34 PM »
Oh right, I was wondering and you didn't sound mean.  :)
Spork I'm waiting for my lovely Vell and her equally lovely daughter Amber to arrive in a new chapter. Hehe  ;)
I got your "Hint, Hint" I'm working on it... cookin' up some new ideas for the story to keep it alive... I feel like my writing is kind of bland right know so I'm taking some time to add spice!



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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #232 on: February 03, 2012, 03:09:38 PM »
Dear Journal,
I am sad to say that today is the day I pass the book to Amber...  Last night Max came up to me and asked if it would be ok to ask for Amber's hand in marriage. I told him "Go ahead" so before he takes Amber on the date tonight I am passing the book on...

"Amber Honey?" I said calling her to the couch.
"Yeah mom?"
"I have something I want to give to you..." I said handing her a box wrapped in pink and white paper.
"Thank you mom!" She said with a smile and began unwrapping it...
"A book?" she said.
"No Amber, a Journal, the Journal of Amber Rose." I said.
"Why a journal?"  She asked.
"Well, my mom kept one and then before I..." I pause almost giving the proposal away. "I mean after I became I young adult my mother gave me a journal, which I wrote in... now its your turn..." I said making a smooth recovery.
"Thank you mom, this is such a sweet gift... and I promise to keep the tradition going." She said and hugged me.
-The last entry of my journal Queen Velvet Rose

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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #233 on: February 03, 2012, 03:11:34 PM »
Yay for Amber's point of view for the next update! Can't wait for the wedding a nooboo!  ;D
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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: The Honeymoon
« Reply #234 on: February 03, 2012, 03:28:39 PM »
Dear Journal,
This is my first entry... so here it goes...
Well my mom gave me this journal early this morning... I wonder why today thought? Oh well!  I like being an adult now! Some much more freedom! I can go shopping when ever I want sleep in the same room and Max without being scolded, not have to go to school! This is the life!

There's Max now!

"Hi honey!" I said with pure joy in my heart.
"Hi! Ummm I was wondering if you would like to go out tonight?" Max asked sounding a smidgen nervous.
"I would love to! Why do you have in mind?" I asked.
"How about that VIP dance club downtown?" He said holding my hands.
"Oooo! That sounds fabulous Max!" I said.
"We will get going at 5." He said.  Its 4 now some... I better get freshened up!


On my way out of the door I said goodbye to little Peter.
"Bye sweetie!" I said scooping him up with a kiss and handing him off to my mother.
"Have fun you two!" Mom said waving.

I drove... I wasn't ready to let Max drive my car yet! Ha ha ha!

"Here we are!" Max said helping me out of the car.
"Thank you darling!" I said.


Once we got inside the VIP section music pounded... Max took my hand and we went straight for the dance floor!

Max taught me a couple of club-moves and I am sure we looked like pros out there! Ha ha!

Then at 8 they rolled out the smoke machines so that couples on the floor could have more privacy.


time flew, who would have thought we could kiss and hold each other for an hour.

Then the smoke died down and couples were revealed again. Then I looked down.



Of coarse I said yes!
Then we got some fancy drinks to celebrate!





That night we slept like babies...
-The soon to be queen Amber Rose

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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: Amber
« Reply #235 on: February 03, 2012, 03:57:45 PM »
Yay for Amber. Congrats on the engagement  ;D and I was just wondering about "The Ex Cheater Husband of Velvet Rose. What ever happened to him ?
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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: Amber
« Reply #236 on: February 03, 2012, 04:18:51 PM »
Dear Journal,
I have A LOT of wedding planning to do... but until then I have to come up with an amazing gift for Max! This morning I woke up and on my desk was a letter from Max... It said...
Dear my soon to be wife,
Here is you Honey-gift, something we can do together that I know you will truly love...
a escape-package-trip to an over night spa, just you and me honey...


I completely forgot about a honey-gift (a honey-gift is an island tradition that a day or few days after you get engaged you plan something for you and your spouse.  Mostly something your spouse loves to do even if you don't.) What am I going to get Max! I swear I thought for hours! Then it hit me... he has been spending lots of time on the computer, what is he looking at... I will do a little bit of snooping...  He was probably doing house work at this time (Mom said now that he is part of the family she is gonna put him to work cleaning and repairing broken plumbing.)  I checked history on the computer this is what he typed in...

Tattoo parlors in Sunset Valley
Motorcycles for sale in sunset valley
Motorcycle group rides in sunset valley
biker leather for sale

That's it! I will get him a motorcycle and a certificate for the tattoo parlor! I quickly ran into town to the car dealer and looked for a tough-looking orange (his favorite color)  and black motorcycle... I found one! The man at the dealer said he would deliver it to our house later today.  I told my mom to put it in the drive way while I take Max to get the tattoo.

"Happy Honey-gift!" I said handing him a letter. He opened it and the letter wrote
Dear husband to be,
I am taking you to get a tattoo like the one you have been wanting... but that won't be the only gift... you will have to wait and see!

"Thanks! When are we going?" He said and kissed me.
"How about now?" I said.
"Sure!"

BUZZZZZZZ the machine went as it created patterns all over his arms... it made him look very tough, which is something I have always loved about him!


When we got home I covered his eyes.

"TADA!" I yelled
"WOW!" Max said running over to it.
"This is beautiful! Thanks so much honey!"
"Your welcome! So now you can join a bike club and go on rides!" I said hugging him
"I'm going to go sign up for a club and get some leather..."  He said excitedly. I laughed.
"Ok!" Then I thought Where on earth do you sign up for a biker club? Oh well he will find it!

I went back down stairs and looked at the spa certificate... I can't wait to go!

Finally, Max got home with a big paper bag and holding a  box in his hand.
"What's all that?" I asked.
"Got some leather for riding..." He said looking so very proud
"What's in the box?" I asked.  He opened the box and pulled out a jacket...
"Island Riders official jacket... I'm part of them!" He said putting it on with pride.
"Congrats honey!  When's your first ride?" I asked.
"Well since its getting toward Valentine's Day its a couples ride, we take a ride around the island with your girl and then head back to the bar for drinks and dancing, wanna come?" He said coming closer to me.
"Ummm its not really my thing..." I started.
"But its a Honey-gift, and we have to do something together..." He said. Darn those rules!
"Fine I will go... but what do I wear?" I asked
"Go down to the leather shop and they will get you all fixed up...  The rides tomorrow." He said giving me a kiss.
"Alright I will go get some leather..." I said with a laugh... I went into town and found this little old shop on main street. When I  walked in an old man with a big gray beard was whipping down the counter.
"Hello sir!" I said.
"Hello little missy! What do you need?" He said... what a sweet old coot!
"I need something to ride in, my fiance wants me to come on a couples ride with him tomorrow."
"Oh I see... Is your husband a Island Rider?" He asked.
"In fact he is..." I said
"I was once upon a time... then I crashed and wrecked up my leg... couldn't ride after that..."
"I am so sorry to here that!" I said feeling bad for the poor guy who walks with a limp.  He came over to me slowly and measured me.
"I got the perfect outfit for you..." He walked in the back and brought back a really cute outfit... Who would have guess! For a leather-biker outfit it was  quite cute! So I bought it... this will make Max happy. I waved by the the man and went home.
-The biker for a day Amber Rose

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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: Amber
« Reply #237 on: February 03, 2012, 04:20:19 PM »
Yay for Amber. Congrats on the engagement  ;D and I was just wondering about "The Ex Cheater Husband of Velvet Rose. What ever happened to him ?
Well actually I put him and Carla in the bin and some how they moved into a small house together... once in a while I will see them out and about!

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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: Amber
« Reply #238 on: February 03, 2012, 06:10:04 PM »
 The look om Maxs' face when getting that tatoo is priceless!~

I have read the whole story over the past few days,sorry it took me so long,life sometimes,ugh.
And i have to say i'm one of those crazy people not much into 'legacy' stories,but i like this one,can't wait for the marriage!~

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Re: The Journal of Sterling Rose: Amber
« Reply #239 on: February 03, 2012, 08:39:34 PM »
Dear Journal,
Today I am going on the ride with Max... Leather itches!
I got up early and hoped on the bike with Max. I  clung to his back for dear life... motorcycles are scary! I almost slipped off the seat when we came to a stop. Once we arrived after an 4 hours of riding we pulled up to a dive bar!  I could us a drink but I heard drinks from this place makes you do crazy things... When we walked in music blasted, glasses clinked, men laughed and people talked... the over whelming musty smell filled my nose causing me to cringe. I stayed close to Max.


"Look who's here!" a fat man that was clearly drunk yelled when we walked in...
"OOOO! Looks like little dog got a cat!!!" He yelled elbowing the man behind him.
"Yeah..." Max said loudly back. I squeezed his arm tighter.
"Looks like the girl is a little tense..." Another fat man said.
"Yo bartender! Fix the tense one up a soother..." Another said.
"Go with it honey the drinks here are good..." Max whispered.
Max pulled me over to the bar and the bartender handed me a drink. I looked at Max, he nodded. I sipped it.
"Its good!" I said continuing to drink it. Then I felt the party get into me... everyone was dancing so me and Max danced the night away.

Then things got blurry when the drink really kicked in... A fat man lifted me onto the bar so I was sitting on it. Then I looked over and another young women (my age) am pretty got lifted too. She looked at me confused and I did the same back, then I looked at Max... where did he go? Then I remembered he said he was going to the bathroom.
Max hurry! I thought. Then the man handed me another drink.
"Drink it!" He yelled. So I did... I didn't want to mess with at guy! The they started cheering to dance. 
I got up on the counter wobbled a little from all the drinks and then danced as well as the other women did.


Ugh... this morning I can't remember much... I only remember dancing on the counter because Max told me. I just laid in bed for awhile this morning. I have such a head ache!
-The achy Amber Rose

 

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