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Zlare Immortal Dynasty-Graveyard
« on: August 13, 2011, 04:14:31 AM »
Prolouge
My name is Zoey Zlare. My family were taken to a jail. An Immortal Jail. Anyone who enters will be in there forever, or until a family member completes an Immortal Dynasty. I’m that family member.
I know what I’ll have to do and my first steps in adding to the household. I’ll be working on the museum pieces for all my descendants. Being a friendly, artistic, savvy sculptor this should be quite easy. My kleptomania and photographer’s eye should help as well.
I am Zoey Zlare, a soon-to-be Immortal.


Table of Contents:
Prolouge
Chapter 1:Connor and Agnes
Chapter 2:The Final Piece of the House
Chapter 3:A Cycl0n3 of a House
Chapter 4:A New Zlare
Chapter 4.3. A New Crumplebottom
Chapter 4.6: Another Zlare
Chapter 5: 2 New Adults, 2 New Children
Chapter 6: Requirements and Birthdays
Chapter 7: Birthdays and Teenage Love
Chapter 8:Weekend Skilling
Chapter 9:The Final Joint Birthdays
Chapter 10:The First Key
Chapter 11:Charlie's Vacation
Chapter 12:A Wedding Into a Honeymoon

Immortals
Zoey Zlare Immortal 77 Days
Lifetime Wish: Living in the Lap of Luxury
Career: Painter
Supermax Skill: Painting
Other Max Skills: Sculpting
Building: Agnes and Adam Books (Bookstore)
Property: Connor and Zoey Family Falls (Stoney Falls)
3 LTRs: Inheritance, Food Replicator, Extra Creative
6 Opportunities: Art Class, Retreat to Inspiration, Painting the City, Sculpture for a Friend, An Old Ruse, Sims on Ice
6 Best Friends: Agnes Crumplebottom, Connor Zlare, Zane Zlare, Adam Crumplebottom, Christopher Steel, Blair Wainwright
Portraits: YA, A, Elder
Sculptures: YA, A, Elder
Photographs: YA, A, Elder

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Re: Zlare Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2011, 04:15:01 AM »
Chapter 1: Connor and Agnes
See that tree behind me? It’s beautiful isn’t it? Just like me.

I was off on my journey of finding a woman named Agnes but first a trip to the consignment store. The man working there is Chris Steel. Many think he’s cute but I think his lips are disgusting!

Anyway, back to Agnes. I went over to her grand house.

We were acquainted very quickly and after throwing a few peace signs and long chats, we were best friends.

I even stayed over at her house and had some very nice food she made.

Next day, I was off to Connor’s.

After throwing around peace signs (again) and short chats we became great friends.

Later on, we watched the stars and before it was time for bed, we were engaged!

The wedding was the next day, down at the beach. Connor and I got right into the marriage.

Everyone enjoyed the cake as well!

I went off to talk to Agnes, we talked for a while and by the end of the night Agnes was part of my family too!

To finish off, let’s look at Agnes’ and Connor’s make-overs!

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Re: Zlare Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2011, 04:36:16 AM »
Great premise! I considered something similar, like a world between worlds, where the founder was sent back to Sim earth from to redeem herself. I like yours better, though.

Great choice of traits! You'll have to let us know if the painter/photographer/sculptor trait combo works well for you.

Yes, Zoey is quite beautiful.

You are not wasting any time in getting your spouse and helper. I think that's awesome! Really shows that Zoey is determined to do whatever it takes.

I caught a small error in the next to last sentence. It say "Agnes of part of". I believe you want it to read "Agnes was part of".

Other than that, perfect start Gogo! I know this isn't your first dynasty, but with practice, determination, and a little luck, I hope it's your last until you are successful. :D

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« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2011, 04:45:39 AM »
Gogo, that was amazing! How did you get them to do the "peace" signs? Did she go to the school of Peace and Love? I adore those makeovers you gave Connor and Agnes. I don't particularly think Chris is disgusting, you could guess, heh.

And you know what you did right now, right? You buddy gave me the motivation to play my own Dynasty. ;D
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Re: Zlare Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2011, 05:11:35 AM »
Great premise! I considered something similar, like a world between worlds, where the founder was sent back to Sim earth from to redeem herself. I like yours better, though.

Great choice of traits! You'll have to let us know if the painter/photographer/sculptor trait combo works well for you.

Yes, Zoey is quite beautiful.

You are not wasting any time in getting your spouse and helper. I think that's awesome! Really shows that Zoey is determined to do whatever it takes.

I caught a small error in the next to last sentence. It say "Agnes of part of". I believe you want it to read "Agnes was part of".

Other than that, perfect start Gogo! I know this isn't your first dynasty, but with practice, determination, and a little luck, I hope it's your last until you are successful. :D

"Elizabob"
Thank you Elizabob! I'll go change the error now. most people actually have the painter/sculptor/photographer combo. My last dynasty had sculpting a seperate Supermax skill though.
Gogo, that was amazing! How did you get them to do the "peace" signs? Did she go to the school of Peace and Love? I adore those makeovers you gave Connor and Agnes. I don't particularly think Chris is disgusting, you could guess, heh.

And you know what you did right now, right? You buddy gave me the motivation to play my own Dynasty. ;D
I gave you inspiration! *faints*
Thanks CHronic. The peace signs are from the School of Peace and Love. Zoey just happened to ave went there! I don't think Chris is disgusting either but I odn't think he's beautiful. Besides, Agnes still needs to find her love...
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« Reply #5 on: August 13, 2011, 05:50:50 AM »
Sorry to hear (a bit belatedly I admit) that the Ragen's have been sent to immortal prison! Oh noes!  :o

Luckily Zoey Zlare is apparently on the move to rescue them *phew!*

Before the makeover I was thinking to myself, you chose Connor over Chris, that's no much difference in the looks department I think! But after his makeover he looks pretty darn spiffy, it must of been a bad hair day or something :) Because he is looking fine now!

Agnes and Chris always make a fabulous couple I think, they have so much in common LOL
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Re: Zlare Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #6 on: August 13, 2011, 05:56:23 AM »
Sorry to hear (a bit belatedly I admit) that the Ragen's have been sent to immortal prison! Oh noes!  :o

Luckily Zoey Zlare is apparently on the move to rescue them *phew!*

Before the makeover I was thinking to myself, you chose Connor over Chris, that's no much difference in the looks department I think! But after his makeover he looks pretty darn spiffy, it must of been a bad hair day or something :) Because he is looking fine now!

Agnes and Chris always make a fabulous couple I think, they have so much in common LOL
Haha! You've given me the reason why Zoey is doing this. Thanks. I'll give a quick backstory of what you gave me:
The Ragens failed and have been sent to jail by the Grim Reaper. 3 People Escape. Agnes, Xander and one other person. Xander and Agnes lose their memory. Xander won't be in this story at all! Zoey will tell Agnes about everything. When I hopefully complete this the Ragens will be free. Although I don't have old Xander and Agnes saved.
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Re: Zlare Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #7 on: August 13, 2011, 08:52:20 AM »
Great start gogo.  My dynasty just started and I moved in Connor and Agnes too, so it will be interesting to see what your babies look like compared to mine.  Your founder is absolutely gorgeous.

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« Reply #8 on: August 13, 2011, 02:41:56 PM »
This is great so far Gogo!  ;D

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« Reply #9 on: August 13, 2011, 03:30:42 PM »
This is awesome! Keeping up with this. :) Zoey is pretty! :D

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« Reply #10 on: August 13, 2011, 05:14:06 PM »
Great start gogo.  My dynasty just started and I moved in Connor and Agnes too, so it will be interesting to see what your babies look like compared to mine.  Your founder is absolutely gorgeous.
Thanks! It will be interesting!
This is great so far Gogo!  ;D
Thanks Candy!
This is awesome! Keeping up with this. :) Zoey is pretty! :D
Thanks Fez! Zoey is very pretty!
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« Reply #11 on: August 16, 2011, 03:39:52 AM »
I've written one chapter and a prologue and already have 100 views! I wish all my stories were this popular!

I've moved in Agnes' love and built a house. I haven't furnished it yet and I forgot about the art studio so it may be a while before the next update!
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« Reply #12 on: August 16, 2011, 06:00:57 AM »
You are an excellent writer which is why you have so many views. I am looking forward to seeing Connor as dynasty spouse he is rarely used.
One of the reasons I didn't choose Christopher for my dynasty spouse was because I had used him for so many legacies and the fact he didn't have enough money so went with Thornton instead.

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« Reply #13 on: August 16, 2011, 06:34:49 AM »
You are an excellent writer which is why you have so many views. I am looking forward to seeing Connor as dynasty spouse he is rarely used.
One of the reasons I didn't choose Christopher for my dynasty spouse was because I had used him for so many legacies and the fact he didn't have enough money so went with Thornton instead.

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Thanks Rachel! When it comes from you, it's makes me feel so proud! It's all about the cash when choosing spouses!
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« Reply #14 on: August 21, 2011, 02:42:08 AM »
Chapter 2: The Final Piece to the House
The three of us stayed out at the firestation for a couple of nights.

When morning came around, I began painting, Connor went to learn to Garden and Agnes went to chase up her man.

Agnes didn’t succeed in her first attempt as the ‘man’ had just gone to work. So she joined Connor done at the library and also got herself a job as a chef.


I completed my first painting and went off exploring the town. I sold the painting down at the consignment store, took a painting class and became a self-employed painter. Chris still works at the store and every time I see him he becomes more of a friend. I still don’t like him though.

The next day was the final day in the firestation, with the three of us doing what we did yesterday, paint and read, during the morning and going off during the afternoon. Connor and I had a little date down at the Bistro while Agnes had a date of her own.

Agnes was down at her ‘man’s’ house making sure she snagged him. Now that he was part of the family, the work on the house could begin.

Agnes seems to be very happy with her choice but Connor and I aren’t quite sure. Anyone know who he is?
Author’s Note: You might be able to find out who Agnes’ man is by looking at the photos, but you might not! Haha.
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