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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #15 on: August 13, 2011, 09:55:06 PM »
Yes, she actually did.  :o I came to realize that I don't think the relationship bar was high enough.

I know I could've just ignored it and written something else, but the story took an interesting turn for me when that happened. It wouldn't have turned out like this if she had accepted originally, for sure.

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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #16 on: August 14, 2011, 01:54:45 AM »
Week One, Day Five - Bachelor Bum
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"Dear, I'm going out to the library to browse the baby name books. I might stop in at EverFresh Delights to grab a couple watermelons while I'm out. I've been having the strangest cravings lately," the increasingly pregnant Meg informed Eliot.

"I noticed that when we ran out of canned soup," teased Eliot. She poked him playfully before dancing through the doorway, humming catchy tunes from the indie radio station.

"Tonight, since I have the house all to myself, I may finally finish up 'The H-W Effect'," he hoped. Sitting down at his pre-historic computer, he began to type, until he heard the doorbell ring.

"P-A-R-T-Y Patrol!" yelled Connor Frio from the patio. "We heard at the office today that someone was getting hitched, so we just HAD to catch you by surprise with an impromptu bachelor bash."

"Guys, as much as I appreciate the thought, you better not..."

"ELIOT! We are not taking no for an answer!" interrupted Victoria Andrews from just beyond the living room walls.

The crew barged in and instructed Eliot to change into a dapper vest and hat for the festivities. When he resisted, they forcibly buttoned the vest and topped him off with the tall hat.

"This isn't a good idea. Meg is... well... moody often nowadays, and I just can't..."



Eliot was cut short once again by Connor spraying fizzy nectar in his face.

"YEAH! Time to bring in the dancer!" the Frio brother reported enthustiastically.

In stepped Sparkles Sanchez in a skimpy cheerleader uniform. "I guess you need me to put some pep back in this party..." purred Sparkles. She danced next to Eliot, while he tried his best to look away. Just as he caught a glimpse of her and joked flirtatiously... Keys rattled, and the front door opened.

"Eliot??" Meg questioned woefully. "How could you..." her voice softened as she dropped the watermelon she was carrying.

"But, love, I wasn't..."

"Just take your irresponsible friends and leave..." she said with a sorrow-filled tone. "I need to put together the crib I bought with our savings." Meg ran past Eliot's co-workers to the bedroom where Eliot had cried only three nights earlier. This time, it was her turn to feel hurt.

Fiona's jaw dropped, while Simis couldn't believe what he was hearing. They had just ruined the pre-wedding bliss the couple had shared since discovering Meg's pregnancy.

The friends shuffled out the entryway. "Yeah, man... See you whenever you come back to work," they mumbled.

Eliot could make out soft sobs coming from behind their door. He lifted his hand to knock, but lowered it slowly.

How impossible would it be for his love to forgive him before the wedding set to take place the very next day?
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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #17 on: August 14, 2011, 04:59:14 AM »
Week One, Morning and Afternoon of Day Six - Here Comes the... Baby?
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"You know, it's not really ever too late to say you made a mistake," Meg's sister told her over the phone. It was the morning of the wedding, which was supposed to begin at 1 pm that afternoon. In need of advice concerning the disasterous bachelor bomb, she called up her closest friend from back in Twinbrook: her younger sibling.

"For me, I'm afraid it is, Maddie," Meg replied. "I have told Momma this, and I've been wanting to tell you; it's too late because... I'm having his baby."

Meg only heard silence for a couple seconds as Maddie struggled to comprehend the news. Maddie was only a teen, but she knew enough about life and how Meg viewed things. She knew that her sister meant she wanted to follow through with the wedding for the soon-to-be born baby.

"I still think it would be better to realize today that you need to back out than to realize when you are an older adult that you want a divorce. This new child and any others would be heartbroken at their mommy and daddy splitting."

Meg, a bit taken aback by her best friend's newfound maturity, just nodded and said, "I see what you mean."

"Oh, Layton just told me to wish you well on your wedding day."

Meg felt concerned that she had not yet told her brother about his future niece or nephew. More importantly, she was aware that she needed to make up her mind about marrying Eliot soon. She didn't want to add insult to injury by leaving him at the altar; she knew that, if she was going to break things off, she would do it privately.

Guests began arriving shortly after Meg hung up the phone. A trellis had been set up on their walkway with chairs lined up in rows. She slipped on her cotton halter wedding ensemble and looked in the mirror. As her head slowly tilted downward and she stared at her belly, she compared how she had always envisioned herself looking on her wedding day to how she appeared now. The images didn't match up.

Frowning as she peeked out the window, Meg noticed that the guests were being seated. She swallowed her pride and called for her co-worker Dorothy to deliver the message to Eliot that he was needed inside. Meg had chosen... And she wanted to break it to him the most honorable way she could.

Eliot walked into the room with a concerned look on his face. He wrung his hands together and asked, "What is wrong, Sweetea? Getting cold feet?" He felt pangs of guilt as he recalled flirting with Sparkles the night before. If this was her choice, he could hardly blame her.

"Eliot, I have something I need to say. I..." her voice trailed off as a strange look overtook her face.

"You what, love?"

"Oh, Eliot, I feel like my water just broke! I think our nooboo has decided to meet us early!"



Eliot went pale but managed to call out for help. Fiona McIrish, Dorothy DeMayo, and Jamie Jolina came running. The first two panicked along with the father-to-be, but since Jamie was a surgeon, she knew exactly what to do. Meg clutched her stomach and tried to steady her breathing while Jamie reassured her that they were going to the hospital. Eliot regained his composure to hail a cab and helped Meg in. The couple rode to the hospital, leaving Fiona and Dorothy to stall and entertain the rest of the wedding guests.

When the cab pulled up to Sacred Spleen Memorial, Meg climbed out and nearly waddled toward the entrance, leaving a wake of townies freaking out. "The baby is coming!" they all shouted. Eliot followed close behind, but for some reason, he stopped to answer his mobile on the way. "NOT NOW! The baby is coming!" he reiterated the sentiment to the caller and hung up. He rushed to the maternity ward where Meg's doctor was already preparing for delivery.

Somewhere in the huge flurry of mayhem, excitement, and madness, Eliot and Meg looked at each other. They shared a glance that meant the same thing for each of them: they would make this work for their new baby.

Meg delivered a girl that Friday afternoon. After being born, the bundle of joy was handed to her father. As the baby whimpered, Eliot shed a tear before he handed the little nooboo to his partner. He leaned over them, watching mother and child together. He softly cried a bit before Meg broke the silence and spoke.

"Her name is..."
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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #18 on: August 14, 2011, 05:33:18 AM »
OOOhhh... Cliffhanger  ;D

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« Reply #19 on: August 14, 2011, 06:13:12 AM »
That's exactly the kind of reaction I was aiming for, Candy. :D

But don't think you will be stuck hanging on the cliff for long... I plan on finishing this 3-part update in the next 12 hours.  8)
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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #20 on: August 14, 2011, 06:51:19 AM »
How dare you leave us on such a huge cliffhanger, huh? ;D Just kidding, of course, incredible updates. You continue to impress me with soulful and mesmerizing writing, which ranks up up there with the greatest stories I've read on this forum (I won't mention names, certainly). Curiously waiting for more. :)
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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #21 on: August 14, 2011, 09:14:42 AM »
You will get more, for sure, as I will post the last third of the update sometime today. You could read it tomorrow, at the latest, because of the time difference. :)

I am regretful to say that this story MAY possibly go on a short hiatus (perhaps 1-2 weeks) as I need to start 3 others stories I have in the works. This is my favorite concept, though, so it won't be gone for long. Who knows, maybe no one will miss it? ;)

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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #22 on: August 14, 2011, 09:28:24 AM »
Ooh, way to leave us on a cliffhanger! I honestly think this is the best story on the forum. You write so well that I would forget it was a sims story if it wasn't for the screenshots! :D

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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #23 on: August 14, 2011, 09:29:42 AM »
Ahw, I'm so sorry it'll have to go on a short hiatus, but, watch out, don't end up like me, all my stories are on a hiatus frequently, so to say. :P
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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #24 on: August 14, 2011, 09:36:43 AM »
Chronic, I have a feeling this is the story that I would have to KEEP myself from playing, as I can only write so fast. ;)

Fez, :,) <--- This is the emoticon for a happy tear. I made it up. I can't believe you like it so much as to say that. :D

My boyfriend, who wants to be published eventually and who has been proofreading this, did mention something similar to what you said, Fez. He said it could be adapted to an actual real-world short story because it isn't extremely Sim saturated. Thank you; I take that as a big compliment. :)

EDIT: Just wanted to mention in the post so I don't have to make another one... Once my special "Seasons" house is chosen (I have two builders working on it as we speak), I might use money cheats to grant my Simmys enough money to move into it. Definitely if I fall in love with the house, I will be cheating. But that is alright in my book, since this is not a challenge. I'll just have to create a clever way to work it into the plot. :D
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« Reply #25 on: August 14, 2011, 12:20:48 PM »
EDIT: Just wanted to mention in the post so I don't have to make another one... Once my special "Seasons" house is chosen (I have two builders working on it as we speak), I might use money cheats to grant my Simmys enough money to move into it. Definitely if I fall in love with the house, I will be cheating. But that is alright in my book, since this is not a challenge. I'll just have to create a clever way to work it into the plot. :D
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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #26 on: August 14, 2011, 12:23:32 PM »
Do it like chronic did in meet the pieces! They get a million dollar check in the mail.

Heh, yeah, or million dollar bills flying in the sky, like with Esther's Halliwells. :P
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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #27 on: August 14, 2011, 01:08:35 PM »
You could say the house was left by a recently deseased relative with a bit of money.

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Re: Seasons of Change
« Reply #28 on: August 14, 2011, 01:51:18 PM »
Hi, Charlotte! Nice to see you reading. :D

I like yours the best, but whatever I decide, I hope you guys think it is clever. ;)
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« Reply #29 on: August 14, 2011, 02:52:43 PM »
Alrighty, before you guys fall off a ledge from the cliffhanger, I will introduce you to the newest member of the "Seasons" family. This is not the third update in the 3-part one, though; I will post that later in the day, as soon as I finish writing the conclusion of the wedding event saga.

Welcome to the world, Terra May Wolff.



Name: Terra May Wolff
Gender: Female
Age: Newborn
Traits: Genius, Perceptive
Lifetime Wish: Not Chosen Yet
Favorites: Cookies, Roots, Green
Voice: Unknown
Sign: Virgo

Terra May represents a fresh, precious stage of life for the couple. She will fill their lives with color and bright happiness. Terra May, obviously, is SPRING.
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