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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #75 on: August 03, 2011, 12:52:51 PM »
That's good! :D
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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #76 on: August 03, 2011, 02:15:06 PM »
Yeah it doesn't have to exactly follow what you're doing. It's more fun to make stuff up.



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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #77 on: August 03, 2011, 02:31:37 PM »
First of all - a question - Do you guys like my writing? If so, I think I will be releasing another story (Miscellaneous - I think)... Just wanted this in a seperate post to see if you were interested... An update coming soon!

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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #78 on: August 03, 2011, 02:51:17 PM »
Ah, I really do feel bad for Apollo. 

I've got a question, if you don't mind -- Apollo, Psyche and Phoebe are all Aphrodite's kids?  I just want to make sure I'm not confused. :)

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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #79 on: August 03, 2011, 02:53:09 PM »
Of course I like your writing. I wouldn't be still reading this if I didn't.

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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #80 on: August 03, 2011, 03:09:38 PM »
I think you're writing is great, and I will read any story you write.

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Chapter 21: Smash 'n Dash
« Reply #81 on: August 03, 2011, 03:34:39 PM »
Chapter 21: Smash 'n Dash   
   
   
Nobody must know that I still play with Jelly Bean... My friends would just make fun of me... Especially Wade... Me and Him used to be real tight, but now, that he's a teenager, and is going to High School, he became mean... Ok, Jelly, Time to go inside now...   
   
Meanwhile, the guys decided it was time for the girls to learn how to talk - because Aphrodite was at the Spa, they had to do it (Of course, the guys do ALL the hard work around the house, while women relax and read the paper on the couch! That's the way of the modern family!).   
We go to a pond...catch the fish...cook it and eat it... And brush our teeth!    
 
 
In the moment when he needed a friend one appeared... but this friend was not very good at his job...
 
Apollo: "Whatever shall I do, Jelly? My parents don't like me anymore! They don't take time off to play with me... I'm always alone..."
Jelly: "Well, than give them a reason for them to pay attention to you!"
Apollo: "What do you mean?"
 


 
During Apollo's 'Rebel Rampage' Phoebe has learned to talk, Psyche was on the way too, she just had problems with more complexed words and sentences - Phoebe is a big crybaby - however, went great!

 
Will Apollo go unpunished? Will he learn to adore the girls? Will Aphrodite need a shower after the dirtyest bath of all - the mud bath? All that and more in the next episode!



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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #82 on: August 03, 2011, 03:35:59 PM »
Thanks for the support guys, now I just need to think of a story ;)
 
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Yes. Apollo is the firstborn and Psyche & Phoebe are the secondborn twins (Psyche was born first ;))

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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #83 on: August 03, 2011, 03:53:56 PM »
Haha lol. I think Apollo is starting to lose it!

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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #84 on: August 04, 2011, 07:17:00 AM »
Sorry about the 2 mini-pics in the last update - will not happen again :/

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Chapter 22: Re-Rebel
« Reply #85 on: August 04, 2011, 05:24:44 PM »
Chapter 22: Re-Rebel 
 
The girls were playing with their Brand-New doll house! 
 
 
 
"You must really STICK IT to the man, to get his attention! Do something he won't easily forget!
"I don't know, Jelly... Sure we're not going a bit overboard with this? I mean, I don't hate my dad..." 
"What are you thinking? I know just as well as you do that you despise those little brats and you want to show your dad that YOU are the important one in this family! 
"Well.. If you say so..." 
"There you go! And I have just the Idea!" 
 
 
 
"Waaargh! I'm Apollo the Dinosaur! I have to destroy! I'm on a rampage!" 
 
Meanwhile... 
 
"What tha? This Picture doesn't even make any sense! Since when am I wearing a Ponytail? Just for showering, huh? Well, what about the pink stuff? Those rotten kids and their ImageShop and PhotoShack... Apollo!!" 
 
Leo walked right into the bedroom to see Apollo smashing the girls... Wait? What? Oh, spelling error... Leo walked right into the bedroom to see Apollo smashing the girl's...... Yeah that's better... favorite toy!
Random XD
 
Consequences were inevitable!


"What the heck do you think you're doing? Your sisters are crying! You destroyed their favourite toy! What do you have to say for yourself?"
"But... Jelly told me to... I don't want to be in trouble..." *Tear*
"Well you sure are in trouble now! Wait what... Jelly... don't even start with me boy!"
-Aphrodite: "What's wrong?"
Leo: "He destroyed the doll house we bought the girls!"
Aphrodite: "That's terrible! What are we going to do with him?"
Apollo: "You can buy him a mini-fridge and send him to his room... Or a Guitar... Yeah, I guess a guitar would do..."
Leo: "You see! In the Military, they didn't allow us this kind of arrogance! Wait! That's it! What if we send him to the military?"
Apollo: "They don't exept kids there dad..."
Aphrodite: "And don't even think about the boarding school! It's not that bad!"
Leo: "No, I want to see my son salute to me!"

The next day...


Apollo: "I guess this isn't so bad..."

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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #86 on: August 04, 2011, 08:10:35 PM »
Thanks for the support guys, now I just need to think of a story ;)

Yeah, I find that's always the hard part. :P
 
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Yes. Apollo is the firstborn and Psyche & Phoebe are the secondborn twins (Psyche was born first ;))

Ah, ok.  I wanted to make sure I have that right.  I find it really easy to lose track of who's the immortals and who's not when I read Dynasty stories.

And Apollo is quite the mischief maker.  I recently got a chance to try out the pranks, and yeah, for the right character, they're a lot of fun.  Just hope he doesn't get grounded like my prankster did!  (Or maybe you want him to, I don't know. :D)

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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #87 on: August 04, 2011, 08:16:19 PM »
Hee. It definitely could have been worse - Leo might have signed him up for ballet instead. Improves discipline and coordination and all that, and Apollo would look adorable in a tutu. :)
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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #88 on: August 04, 2011, 08:19:48 PM »
Bad Apollo, bad! But then again... he's such a sweetheart. Great update!
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Re: Mistiques write Myths... Double Trouble
« Reply #89 on: August 04, 2011, 08:57:58 PM »
This story is hurting my head big time. I can't for the life of me figure out if I love or hate Apollo.