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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #30 on: August 02, 2011, 04:37:10 PM »
Chapter 6: More Birthdays!
Ayesha was busy painting Mercury's young adult portrait:

When she feels something change inside of her. So she celebrated.

And she becomes an adult. No longer is she affiliated with the term "young".  That makes her smile.

The next morning, Venus feels the same feeling that Ayesha had felt the night before. And so she blows out her candles.

And ages up to a very beautiful child.

Ayesha celebrates by painting a portrait of her daughter

Venus finds a new toy!

Mercury loved the taste of that muffin.
Now that Venus is grown up to a child, Mercury believes that she should be allowed to do what she wants.
So she goes where she wants.

I don't think that was what Mercury had in mind.
But it was a profitable adventure in which she discovered gold. And came out looking like this:

As I said earlier, beautiful!
That night, a burglar enters the house, and steals a stove. That enrages Ayesha, who fights.

The police come in time, but the policeman tells Mercury that the robber got away.
When the robber was standing right next to him!

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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #31 on: August 02, 2011, 08:58:07 PM »
Happy Birthday, Venus~! ;D
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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #32 on: August 02, 2011, 09:04:51 PM »
Just a quick update: Mercury just got the Uncommonly Good oppurtunity, so he should be supermaxing gardening shortly.

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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #33 on: August 03, 2011, 07:57:44 PM »
School
Today is Venus's first day of school! She is very excited and can't wait to go. She feels a bit lonely on the bus though, I guess all the other kids walk to school.

She is able to raise her grade to a B by working very hard, and then she does a report on the supermarket (which the Galaxian's happen to own) in order to raise her grade to an A. Ayesha helps her on her homework that evening, taking a break from her painting to do so.
After tending his garden, which includes a full grown money tree and another one that is still growing, Mercury decides to do a little fishing.

The next day passes by without incident, Mercury gardens and fishes, Venus makes friends in school, and Ayesha paints at home.
After school, Venus cooks some muffins. She tries one of them

Venus: Yuck! Whoever cooks this trash is a terrible cook!
Mercury: Ummm... Honey, you cooked this.

She decides that if she doesn't want them, she better trick someone into paying her for them. And she gets her first customer.

Person who's name is not relevant to story: These are delicious! I'll take the whole batch!
Venus: Haha sucker.

The next day, Venus brings home a friend from school. Venus gets to know her a bit, and tries to tell her a joke, which should have been successful because Venus has a great sense of humor, but her clasmate was grumpy, and didn't laugh.
Ayesha is offended that that child would dare not laugh at her wonderful daughter's joke, and sends her home immediately.
The money is coming good now, and Mercury bought and fully upgraded either Stoney falls or crystal springs (I can't remember right now which one). I'll have pictures of that in my next update.

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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #34 on: August 03, 2011, 08:01:06 PM »
I know Venus' feeling... When my simmy bakes his/her first batch of muffins, they end up in FOUL quality if I'm very lucky!

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« Reply #35 on: August 03, 2011, 08:10:24 PM »
Haha lol. I made that part up. They were all nice quality. Except for one, that one was horrifying. Mercury ate that one.
The next update will probably just be pictures of them, their house, and the venue they got. Venus is super cute!

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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #36 on: August 03, 2011, 08:38:05 PM »
Great update! :D
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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #37 on: August 03, 2011, 08:53:32 PM »
Great update! :D
Thanks! I just read the man dynasty and I can tell from my writing that it influenced me a lot. And I wasn't even thinking about it when I was writing this lol.

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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #38 on: August 05, 2011, 04:58:09 PM »
The Family:
Venus riding her bike:

Mercury gardening:

Venus at the park:


And Ayesha:

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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #39 on: August 05, 2011, 05:00:18 PM »
Stoney Falls:



As you can probably guess, I was feeling a little silly when I made the bathrooms.


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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #40 on: August 05, 2011, 05:23:16 PM »
And where is the light? ;)
Well, that's your opinion, isn't it? And I'm not about to waste my time trying to change it. - Lady GaGa

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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #41 on: August 05, 2011, 06:09:07 PM »
And where is the light? ;)
The light?
Looks like I forgot that. I thought something was missing.
I'll post a new chapter in a couple of minutes.

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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #42 on: August 05, 2011, 06:19:41 PM »
Chapter 8: Another Burglary
Somedays before she goes to school, Venus holds a bake sale at the park. Nobody ever buys anything.

And sometimes she plays on the playground before she goes to school.

They go to bed that night, and the after effects of the burglary have just worn off. And then they get woken in the middle of the night. And they see the same burglar. Venus, too young to do anything, goes back to sleep, seemingly unconcerned. Mercury calls the police.
Mercury: There's a burglar here! Someone please help!
Police Officer: I'm sorry, but no one is here right now to take your call. Please leave a message after the beep.

Ayesha doubts that the policeman will ever come, so she takes matters into her own hands before the thief can take anything. They fight, and it was not a pleasing sight, but in the end, Ayesha is triumphant.
Ashamed, the thief leaves empty handed.

"Hey, Did you need me?"


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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #43 on: August 05, 2011, 07:28:34 PM »
Chapter 9: Another Birthday!
Everyday, after harvesting his garden, Mercury goes to the science facility to harvest the plants there and feed the omni plant. It's where he gets the most money for his career.

Venus invites a boy from her school over that afternoon. They hardly knew each other, and Venus still doesn't know his name.

"And dad, I don't like having you blow a trumpet in my ear."
She ages up to a beautiful teen.

However, she is unhappy with her look, and goes to get out of those terrible clothes.

Ahhh... That's better.
Mercury knows that in order to be immortal, he has to have some best friends, so he goes to the park to do some socializing.
Dave Ramsey is soon his friend.

Dave: My favorite thing to do is pour seeds out of a bag. I could do that all day long.
Dave is unemployed, so he definitely has time to do that all day long.
Next to fall under his spell is Emma Hatch.

Mercury: I love shoving people in frames.
Guy walking by: Maybe if I think about her hard enough, Emma will notice me.
Elderness is quickly approaching, and Mercury is doing all he can to become immortal.

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Re: The Galaxian Dynasty
« Reply #44 on: August 05, 2011, 09:51:51 PM »
Great update! ;D
But wasn't that lady at the end Emma Hatch?
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