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Re: The Angels
« Reply #60 on: June 28, 2011, 06:55:55 PM »
Interesting story! Lucy has very weird skin, is it the bottom of either the blue or green skin sliders or is it CC?

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Re: The Angels
« Reply #61 on: June 28, 2011, 08:45:48 PM »
Thank you.

Her dad has a pale green cc skin and pointy ears so she inherited from him.  I can't remember now if I tweaked her skin or not but I probably did. It would be the low range of the green because she has had babies (as a YA) in Simmerqueen's game and some of them have been pale green.



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Re: The Angels
« Reply #62 on: June 29, 2011, 04:28:29 AM »
The next morning, as she was about to head downstairs to breakfast,  Lucy heard male voices in earnest discussion on the floor below. 

It seemed that Raphael had kept to his word and was trying to talk Michael out of grounding her for the school formal.

Quiet as a mouse she tiptoed down a few stairs and hid herself just out of sight.  She strained her ears to listen.  Sadly, the conversation didn't sound as if it was going all that well.

'You know, if you didn't spend every spare minute at work and took your share of the responsibilities once in a while, Gabriel and I wouldn't always be the bad guys, huh?'



'I'm a doctor,' Raphael said quietly. 'I don't always get to choose the hours when my services are needed.'

'The point is,' Michael grumbled, 'She's getting out of hand.  Did you see Gabriel's hair the other day and there was pink dye all over the shower recess?  It wasn't her that had to clean it up.'

'And then there was that brawl.  Fighting in public like that. Can you believe it and the second time in as many weeks?'

Raphael interrupted. 'It was the other girl who started it.  I saw it.  Besides,' he chuckled. 'Lucy made a good show of herself, don't you think?'

'You are not taking this seriously enough.' Michael was getting angry now.

Time to interrupt.  Lucy felt guilty about her brothers arguing when she was the cause.

She clattered down the stairs with enough noise to wake the dead and they dropped their discussion, watching her in silence. 

So, no luck with Raphael then.  She felt bad that her brothers were at odds with each other but she felt worse that she was no nearer in going to the school formal.


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Re: The Angels
« Reply #63 on: June 29, 2011, 09:20:02 AM »
Ahw, poor Lucy. :(
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« Reply #64 on: June 30, 2011, 03:51:57 AM »
Sometimes Lucy just had to shake her head.  Fate had a funny way of playing her cards.  Why was it, she wondered, that she not only had a date lined up for the school formal - which incidentally made her friends very envious - a school formal which was fast receding from her grasp, than suddenly she became Ms Desirable to other boys in her class.

Truly, no-one had paid her any attention up till now and soon she would need a stick to beat off her admirers.  Well, maybe that was a bit exaggerated.

Gunther Goth caught her attention on the way in to school that morning.  



He was new to the school and didn't know many girls but wondered if she would do him the honour of being his date.

She was touched by his charm but gently declined.  She generously pointed him in the direction of Cornelia Crumplebottom who she had seen observing Gunther from under her lashes in science class.

Gunther hurried off with a happy smile.  'Well, he could have had the grace to be a little disappointed,' Lucy thought.

The next was Tybalt Capp.  He stopped to ask Lucy her favourite colour.

'Well, duh. What else?', she thought.  


He then went on to ask her what time he would pick her up.  The cheek.
She was more polite than he deserved but he didn't take her refusal well.



He was just so horrible.  He even turned up at her house that evening to harangue her some more.

Luckily for her, Michael answered the door.  Not that it stopped Tybalt from being his usual unpleasant self.


Michael was not pleased.


Then Dustin Broke asked her.  He was very sweet.


And took it well when she turned him down.  They even had a giggle together over Tybalt daring to annoy Michael.  Michael must have suspected because he soon sent Dustin on his way telling Lucy she had homework to do.


'Well I don't think much of your boyfriends,' Michael grumbled at her later that night.



Lucy cast her eyes skywards.  As if, Michael.


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« Reply #65 on: June 30, 2011, 05:16:09 AM »
Poor Lucy, becoming the new Christopher Steel (aka Mr Highly Desirable)!
She's a good matchmaker though. Gunther and Cornelia met at High School, who knew?
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« Reply #66 on: June 30, 2011, 05:40:33 AM »
 ;D  If only she knew where it all will lead.



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Re: The Angels
« Reply #67 on: June 30, 2011, 06:36:57 AM »
I'm so sorry for Lucy - I'd pick Gunther if I were her, lol. It's not her fault that she is becoming the new Chris, though! Tell that to Michael. ;) Awesome updates, Figwit.

Oh, by the way, I like Michael's skin much. Would you mind PMing me the link? Thanks. :)
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Re: The Angels
« Reply #68 on: June 30, 2011, 06:54:21 AM »
Thank you.  Don't feel too sorry for Lucy.  They love her dearly and she gives as good as she gets off camera.  Check your message box.  :)

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Re: The Angels
« Reply #69 on: June 30, 2011, 07:00:19 AM »
Thank you.  Don't feel too sorry for Lucy.  They love her dearly and she gives as good as she gets off camera.  Check your message box.  :)

Thank you! ;D Oh, that's great. I'm glad they don't treat her badly.
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« Reply #70 on: July 01, 2011, 04:20:01 AM »
Of her brothers, Lucy found Gabriel the strangest.  Michael was bossy and Raphael was quiet, but Gabriel was just plain odd.

He was an artist of course.  His talented fingers could not only coax a chord of sublime musicality from the strings on his guitar, but they could also paint pictures of surpassing beauty.



He didn't hear and see the world in the same sounds and colours as normal people.  Or so he said.

Gabriel tended to sleep later than most, as he worked late into the night, and then would wander the house and grounds for most of the day in his pyjama bottoms.

Lucy sometimes wished he would at least wear a shirt.


Once he was playing his guitar on their front steps, shirtless as ever, when the mail lady paused in her deliveries.  She stood entranced, just listening to his music - and Lucy suspected - gazing equally rapt at his bare chest.  She must have been there at least 10 minutes before she seemed to awaken to reality.  She threw a handful of bills onto the ground declaring that a virtuoso, such as he, should not be troubled by such mundane burdens as the rest of us.

Gabriel nodded, finishing his song with a flourish, and the mail lady wandered off to complete her round, tears of joy in her eyes.

Lucy had picked up the mail and brushed off the dirt.  Well, the bills had to be paid never mind his artistry.

Gabriel was always fun to prank as you could be guaranteed a satisfying reaction.  His distressed calls of 'LUCEEE' sent her scurrying to the basement to hide or out of the house to the park, chortling with glee.

He once slept on the cold hard kitchen floor, preferring it over his soft, warm bed. 'To get in touch with my muse', he said.  Whether he did or not, it made things awkward for those intent on breakfast the next morning.



There was no opening the fridge with him in the way.

Her friends at school thought it must be cool to have a brother who played in a rock band.  Lucy didn't think so.  As part of the family, all you ever heard were the same riffs over and over as he practiced or tried different tempos.  You never got to hear a whole song, unless he was playing for the mail lady.

So it was strange when Lucy woke up on Tuesday morning to hear Gabriel playing a rather catchy tune.  She tapped her foot along to it.

'Do you like it?' He asked. 'You should you know.  You were the inspiration'.



'Me?' she asked.

'Yes,' He replied 'Remember the pink hair?  Well I wrote a song about it.  I called it 'Pink Hair Rage'.  The guys in the band loved it. Sammy put down a great bass line.'

He grinned, reaching out to ruffle her hair. 'We played it last night and the audience went wild.  A radio station has asked for a demo tape and there are murmurs about a record deal from our agent.'

Lucy's jaw dropped.

'So' He grinned.  'I am so happy with you that I asked Michael to let you off the hook so you could go to the formal.'



'Really?'  Lucy's eyes shone.  She would have hugged him if he had been wearing a shirt. 'What did he say?'

Gabriel shrugged. 'Oh something about when Hell freezes over, but I thought you would be pleased that I asked.'

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Re: The Angels
« Reply #71 on: July 01, 2011, 05:36:43 AM »
Gabriel is an artist - which means that no tops and t-shirts for him! Is he a hipster as well? Lol. :D

Figwit, I may repeat myself but your writing is absolutely fan-tas-tic!
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Re: The Angels
« Reply #72 on: July 01, 2011, 05:38:47 AM »
Aw thank you.  I had a lot of fun with that chapter.  I nutted it out as I drove home from work.  Just as well the other drivers were paying attention.  ;D

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Re: The Angels
« Reply #73 on: July 01, 2011, 09:28:01 AM »
OK, I just have to say this: Gabriel looks great shirtless ::)
Now, Figwit, don't quit on this story. I and a bunch of other people love it! (Very impressive, you wrote this story driving home from work, lol)

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Re: The Angels
« Reply #74 on: July 01, 2011, 12:07:14 PM »
I really hope she can go to the prom!
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