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"We will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« on: May 08, 2011, 03:07:20 AM »
This is Suzanne Petrie.  This is going to be one of the characters in my story, "I will survive: The Orphanage Project".  The second person will join later, but right now, I must go to work, but will try and start this later.


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Re: Suzanne Petrie "I will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2011, 03:21:35 AM »
Nice shack and sim.



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Re: Suzanne Petrie "I will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2011, 10:29:16 AM »
She's beautiful!  The house is a little different from your usual gorgeous creations, Salty  ;).  Looking forward to more.
 
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Re: Suzanne Petrie "I will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2011, 03:28:11 PM »
Chapter I:  Am I Normal?

My name is Suzanne.  I am not sure how you would describe normal.  I lived in a big house and I suppose my parents had money, I am not sure.  I was home schooled and did alot of work for mum and dad.  They said it would make me a strong person, but at 5 years old, I didn't quite see it that way.  Is it normal for a 5 year old to scrub floors, clean bathrooms, clean the yard and many other chores that I care not to mention.  I basically had no social skills or friends.  I have my teddy bear, Roseanne and I remember talking to her about everything.  Come to think about it, I suppose that was a pretty sad childhood.  I don't even hardly remember my parents talking to me, except to tell me what to do.  When I was 15, I received a letter from my Uncle.  He said he knew how my parents treated me and if I wanted to move out, I would have to keep it a secret and he said he would join me in a few days.  In short, he had purchased a small shack in Riverview, it wasn't much, but it would be mine if I was willing to do a few tasks.  He said he would explain everything when he saw me.

That night, I overheard my parents talking and their voices were a little louder than usual.  I heard my dad tell my mom, "no more kids, I don't won't to go through this again.  Suzanne was enough and I don't won't to deal with that adoption agency again".  My jaw fell through the floor, ADOPTION, I was adopted.  Why was I never told, is this the way these people treat kids? Was I treated right?  I didn't know these answers, but I was sure to find out.

On my 16th birthday, I snuck out of the house in the middle of the night and had just enough money to take a train to Riverview.  After roaming the streets, for what seemed like forever, I finally found this little, um, hmm, shack.  Well, I suppose it could be fixed up and there was plenty of land, if you could call it that.
At that moment, I started to cry and felt very alone, of course, I was use to it, but this was somehow different.


Then I started having a conversation with myself and said it would all work out, when my uncle got there, I hope.
And then I sort of lost it, just for a second, but I guess it was all of the stress and built up anxiety, which should not even be happening to someone my age.


All in all, I guess it could be worse, I could be outside under the stars, but even that wouldn't be as bad as what I was use to.  I know one thing, if I ever have kids or am around them, I would never treat them like I was treated.  Maybe there would be a way I could be of some good one of these days, right now though, I need to get myself situated and this, um, house, before I can think of anything else.  My uncle will know what to do, I hope.
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Re: Suzanne Petrie "I will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2011, 03:32:30 PM »
When I made Suzanne, I didn't touch up anything.  She was gorgeous from the get go.  Only thing I did was give her her traits and change the hair, but I left the clothes and did not put any makeup on her, which was hard for me not to do.  I am trying to make it different from your story Schipperke, because, there is no way I could come close to yours, but it will have the same principle and guidelines that you have in your rule set.  I don't want to deviate too much from it, but every one has a unique style of their own.  I love your idea of this kind of story and I hope I can do it justice. :)
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Re: Suzanne Petrie "I will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #5 on: May 08, 2011, 04:41:44 PM »
Awesome start Salty! Good luck Suzanne and her uncle!

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Re: Suzanne Petrie "I will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #6 on: May 08, 2011, 05:51:19 PM »
Great start Salty. Suzanne is beautiful my starting Sim looked like she had fallen out of the ugly tree.

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Re: Suzanne Petrie "I will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #7 on: May 08, 2011, 06:01:34 PM »
Good luck to Susanne. House - check, no money - check, bring on the nooboos!
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Re: Suzanne Petrie "I will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #8 on: May 08, 2011, 06:22:42 PM »
I am going to try and play tomorrow and figure out how I want to approach this story.  I only have about 4 more weeks before my cross country trek, so I won't be on the computer for two weeks, yikes, lol.  Talk about going into sims withdrawal.  Thanks for the comments and I really look forward to getting into this story and trying to finish up my other ones too. ;D
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Re: Suzanne Petrie "I will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #9 on: May 08, 2011, 06:37:00 PM »
Amazing start, Salty! :D Suzanne is beautiful!
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Re: "We will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #10 on: May 10, 2011, 08:28:18 AM »
Chapter  II:  The Arrival

My uncle Vic called and said he would be here the next day.  I only remember bits and pieces of him being around, but I remember what he looks like.  He was always very nice to me, but mum and dad would not let us spend hardly anytime with each other.

I remember he left about three years ago and I had not really heard too much from him or about him since.  He called on my 14th birthday and that was the last time I spoke to him, until a few months ago.  I am not sure why I am here or why he chose these surroundings, but I guess I will find out tomorrow.  The next morning, after a very restless night, I heard a car and ran out the door.



I welcomed him to our new, but somewhat run down home and then got a sudden panic attack.  Not sure what came over me, maybe seeing someone that I had not seen for so long or maybe I was just tired from no sleep.

We went into the house and I ask "so Uncle Vic, how have you been and what have you been doing?"  He said, "I haven't done too bad, but do me a favor, don't call me Uncle anymore."  I kind of looked at him funny, I suppose and he continued, "Look, I am not your uncle, I am your brother, or adopted brother, as it may."

"Excuse me, ok, this is just too much.  Why would everyone lie to me about this?"  
Victor, "After I was adopted, I was sort of a black sheep of the family.  I stayed out late, skipped school, etc. Mom and dad tried doing the same thing to me as they did to you, as far as cleaning and cooking, but I wanted no part of it, so I left at 14, you were only 10 and I vowed one day, I would come and get you so you would not have to endure the misery of a poor homelife.  I swear, this all true."

After I collected my thoughts and tried to make sense of all of this, I asked him, so now what.  He explained that he had moved to Bridgeport, a big fancy city, with lights and clubs.  Ok, now what is a club, I wondered.  He said he didn't make much money, but that he had met this man,  Mr. Payne and they had sort of become friends.  Then Uncle Vic, I mean, Victor, went on to say that Mr. Payne had a project for us to undertake, if we wanted and that was to take in orphaned children, give them a good home and make sure they are happy and then send them out into the world.
Ok, this just didn't make sense, but I actually liked the idea, but what about money?  We have no money.  Victor said, well, he liked to do things around the house and he could stay here while I got a job, if I wanted.  I always had liked to cook, I just did not tell anyone, so I suppose I could get a job at the diner.  So we chatted some more and off I went.  I was fortunate and got hired at the diner and went straight to the library and started reading cookbooks.

Victor stayed home and kind of took stock in what we might need for our first orphan.


So, this is what it is all about.  I will make sure that any child we adopt, will have a good home and I will try to instill values of how to treat people and to be happy, like I never was, but I am actually starting to feel pretty good about myself and what we are doing.  We will survive!!!
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Re: "We will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #11 on: May 10, 2011, 08:33:06 AM »
Welcome Vic! Yes, you shall survive! :D
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Re: "We will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #12 on: May 10, 2011, 09:55:23 AM »
Welcome, Vic!  Suzanne is really beautiful.  I can't wait to see what they do with that hilly lot.
 
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Re: "We will survive: The Orphanage Project"
« Reply #13 on: May 10, 2011, 12:57:33 PM »
Welcome Vic! I actually thought her "uncle" would be Mr. Payne!  ;D

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« Reply #14 on: May 14, 2011, 07:01:04 AM »
Chapter III: Second Thoughts


After returning from the library, Victor had done some fixing up, well, sort of.  I am not sure how he did it so fast, but it looked a little better than it did.  Now, we were completely broke.  I had not even gone to work yet.

Victor said he wanted to give me my own room, because it just wouldn't look right for us to be sharing bedrooms. He said he took the bigger one, because he would put the crib in his room, since I worked.

Later in the evening, we were reading together and I decided I needed to explain some feelings that I was having about this whole adoption thing.


Suzanne:  Victor, I was thinking.  Do you think we can wait for a while before we start adopting?
Victor:   Why do you want to wait?  Is there a problem? Are you having second thoughts?
Suzanne:  Well, sort of.  Look, I am still like  a kid myself.  I am not sure if I am responsible enough for this whole thing.  Remember, I have not even been around kids basically my whole life.  I never even thought about being a mom or having kids until I talked with you.
Victor:   I am not happy about this Suzanne.  That man I was telling you about, Mr. Payne, he is suppose to be here tomorrow and go over things.

Suzanne:  What do you mean, go over things?  I hope you didn't sign anything Victor.
Victor:   Well, I, um. I guess I did.
Suzanne:  How could you sign something without discussing it with me first?  Here I am trying to be honest and you sneak behind my back and do this.
I could see how truly upset Victor was about doing this and I suppose I might have overreacted some, but this was not fair.  I am finally free and now I have take care of babies.  How was I going to do this?  I thought for a minute and told Victor that we would talk to this Mr. Payne person and I would sleep on the whole manner.  Victor jumped for joy and hugged me and said I would not regret it.
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