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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #465 on: October 04, 2012, 12:55:04 PM »
Ok, I got ya Wiry. Awesome idea!

Awesome idea Joanne!

I'm having alot of fun writing the ending, and playing it will be even more fun!! I love these creative answers!!  ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #466 on: October 06, 2012, 08:53:30 AM »
Ok, I'm seriously not saying when this will end any more.  ::) My older sis had surgery on her ankle and needs my help while she recuperates. Not only is the file in Mt Vernon, my note pad and other stuff is in Mt Vernon and I'm in Marion, so I will only say this. It will end one of these days.  ;D



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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #467 on: October 10, 2012, 01:27:29 PM »
I think I will be going home friday, so hopefully sometime after friday it will be finished. Fingers crossed for me!  ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #468 on: October 12, 2012, 06:36:24 PM »
I'm home now!  ;D Not sure when I'll be ending it for sure but it will be done soon as long as nothing else happens.

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #469 on: October 14, 2012, 06:12:54 PM »
Esther's words:
Sorry it's been so long. Also, I'm fighting a nasty cold, and even though I have played through to the ending, I don't feel like posting it right now, but it is completed on my computer, and I just need to feel better to post it. Thanks for everyone's support and love.


Zalise grew up, and turned her IF Zap real. They got married.

Tried for baby than moved out. Remember I've been painting all my babies pictures? They take up 3 walls.



On an awesome note, I figured out how to get the family tree pics! Yancy and Zalise haven't had theirs yet, but here is A-F!

G-K

L-Q

R-V

and W-Z!

That's it for this time. Stay tuned for the ending of my story.

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #470 on: October 14, 2012, 06:18:05 PM »
Whee! Can't wait for the ending. Holy moly, that's a massive family tree
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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #471 on: October 17, 2012, 05:56:42 PM »
As I gazed into Erik's eyes, I knew my pain was gone forever. Never again would I be the bitter old woman I was when I started this. Erik has totally changed me forever. He is the love of my life, and always will be.

Erik and I drunk age freeze so we could spend eternity together, never worrying about getting old.

All of a sudden, something horrific happened. I caught Erik with another woman, so I filed for divorce, screaming at him I don't know how he could do this to me.

Suddenly, a fire started, and I could see death. My two potted plants, named Spongebob and Patrick were the only thing I could see through the smoke. As the fire enveloped me, I screamed "goodbye" to my plants as I let death take me.

As the smoke cleared, the Grim Reaper himself appeared infront of me. I could feel my soul being ripped from my body. All of a sudden, the pain stopped. I looked up and he was holding the deathflower I had in my pocket in his hand. He said it was his favorite flower, and he disappeared as quickly as he had appeared. My heart was racing like it had never raced before. Erik was gone. Only me and Esther were still there. Esther's eyes were filled with tears as she ran to me and hugged me. Her words "Mom, I thought I'd lost you forever!" were ringing in my ears. I hugged her back, than told her she would never lose me. I looked deep in my daughters eyes and told her, "My work in Sunset Valley is done. There is nothing here for us anymore. I have always longed to be a witch, with superpowers. Do you want to move with me to Moonlight Falls?" She laughed and said "Yes! I'd also love to be a witch! Let's go!"



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Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #472 on: October 17, 2012, 06:17:59 PM »
Wow, what a ending! Esther that was great. Could we be hearing more from these two ladies in the future?

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Re: Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #473 on: October 17, 2012, 07:07:29 PM »
Thanks Wiry, I hope it lived up to your expectations! Yes it is impressive!

Thanks Sdhoey! I don't have anything planned, but who knows? The future is bright for them!  ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #474 on: October 17, 2012, 07:09:45 PM »
Congratulations Esther.  I'm moving you to the completed stories board right now!
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Re: Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #475 on: October 17, 2012, 07:12:54 PM »
Thank you Rica! It feels awesome to have completed a story!! My first complete one ever!  ;D

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« Reply #476 on: October 17, 2012, 08:12:09 PM »
Whee! I loved it! So worth waiting for  ;D
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Re: Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #477 on: October 17, 2012, 09:26:04 PM »
Congratulations on a wonderful story! I read it from beginning to end and enjoyed ever minute of it. Brilliant! :)

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Re: Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #478 on: October 18, 2012, 03:43:08 AM »
Congrats Esther! I love the ending. The picture of Agnes in the fire are awesome! I hope we see them in a new story. ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #479 on: October 18, 2012, 01:31:50 PM »
Thanks so much Wiry, SimBlip and Louise!!

I hope we see them in a new story. ;D
I actually have no plans on doing another story with them, but like I said before, who knows! Plans change!