The Jade Immortal Dynasty - Failed

[Asleep]

Nice update~! ^^

Uhm... Would you be mad if I pointed out a few typos?

[Juxtaposition]

Shannon looks great as an elder, she hasn't lost it a bit!

Woo George, way to keep your feet on the ground while your mom blows your mind!

Great update.

[Esther1981]

Awesome updates! Happy birthday Hank and Shannon! George is a good boy, he took it well!

[Lilygirl]

Happy Birthday to Hank and Shannon! Anyone else notice Shannon skinny dipping in the hot tub?

[samoht04]

Not at all Simstar. I was in a rush earlier and didn't have time to proof read it, I am going to start typing in Word and transferring it over to catch any spellings.

I was happy when I saw that Shan had been treated well with age! Must be the best looking elder I have had!

George seems very laid back in the way he does stuff so I thought he would take it well.

Lol yeah she was Skinny Dipping! Kids were at school, it was her Birthday so. She spent some time with her younger. Less baggy birthday suit, my sims always Skinny Dip when they have the chance!

Thanks for all the comments!

[Asleep]

Okay, there's this one:

...I think we can indulg eon ourselves a bit...

And this one:

Chris and Agnes are ahrdly speaking because one the accusations was cheating.

That's all I could find.

[samoht04]

Thanks I'll change them when I get home.

[samoht04]

I fixed the ones that Word found, and yours Simstar!  Now for another Chapter. 

[samoht04]

Chapter 17 - The End of an Era


I only had my Friends and Artworks to do before Ambrosia, well the Life Fruit as well but Hank says the Plants I planted are getting bigger. Almost at the top of the pole I put in for support. Poor Jared, he was older now, I don't know how long he will last. He had a Daughter apparently, I shall have to go and find her. This is another of my colleagues, Emma Hatch. She is a Vampire. We are Best Friends from work, I invited her around the day after my Birthday for a good catch up, until she had to leave for work. She is below me in the Culinary Field.



I then posed for my Sculpture, Chris is painting my Portrait as I speak and Hank is waiting for a good shot, I have a sneaky feeling he wants to catch me unawares. Oh and we also made a proper Sculpting room! It has three stations and is in a blue colour. It also has a Fridge and a hot beverage machine, because it is quite far from the main Kitchen. Everything has to be rearranged but the money isn’t really that great at the moment.



Then it was time for the Kids Birthdays! It seems like only yesterday me and Agnes had that hectic labour in the Kitchen, now they are almost Young Adults and will be starting their own families.



Hank is very proud, his Son is growing up. Chris was very proud of his Joss as well, Agnes was there cheering, I didn’t see her but I heard her. What more could you want than seeing your Children living happy and healthy lives?




Joss went first, she looks ever so much like her Parents, I never really noticed that. She really is turning into a lovely young girl, or should I say woman.






Joss sure changed into that Beautiful young woman!  Just look at her! I think that hair style suits her.


Here goes my George, my little man. Hank says he isn’t so little any more, just like his Dad. I think even George rolled his eyes at that!






Look at how handsome he is! He looks so much like Hank! Something to remind me of him.


So the second Generation are now Young Adults, most of us First Generation are Elders, only Chris is still an Adult. Time for us to relax and get to know each other again, poor Agnes. Those scandals are horrible and she does so much for the community! All those hospital events and such, I have to refuse due to work. So here I am waiting for the others. Come to think of it, I’m almost done, my part of the story is over. I think it is time to pass this book to George.

[samoht04]

Chapter 17.5 - The Georgian Era Begins


Hi, I’m George. Mum gave me this book thing, she has loads of pages written in it, I glanced over them quickly and it has her whole life in, including from that other place she told me about. It’s quite cool that she recorded everything. She said it’s my turn now. Well I guess I’ll start with a basic fact. I like cake. Simple but useful. Oh wait, I think I’m going to have to leave it there. A stunning woman just walked into the room… I’ll tell you later. Maybe.

[Asleep]

Yaay! Now we get to hear about George! ^^

[Lilygirl]

Hello George! *Waving enthusiastically* We've watched you grow up from the day your mom brought you home from the hospital. Shall we tell the embarrassing stories now or wait until your wedding like we tend to do?

[Esther1981]

Hi George nice to see you!

[samoht04]

Yaay! Now we get to hear about George! ^^

Yep, although I doubt Shannon will just shut up after all this time!  

@ Lily - George says he has nothing to hide, well he says he hopes he doesn't.  

@ Esther - George says Hi!  

EDIT:- Just spent half an hour planning. Names and Skills etc. so as long as no Sim marrys anyone with the same name I won't have a mad rush trying to name a child! 

Plan of Supermax and Career. I think it is doable. Number 4 will probably be Inventor as a Career. Undecided about Number 7.

1 - Cooking, Culinary
2 - Painting, Painter
3 - Martial Arts, Professional Sports
4 - Inventing, Inventor or Military.
5 - Logic, Medical
6 - Gardening, Science
7 - Guitar or Nectar, Music or Nectar Maker
8 - Writing, Writer or Journalism

[Asleep]

Nice! ^^
I wouldn't try to max the Writer Career. Have you read Pam's Dreamweaver Dynasty?
She tried it with Gen. 8, and ended up having to switch to Journalism really last in Forest's life.