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Re: The Jade Dynasty
« Reply #120 on: April 15, 2011, 09:39:15 PM »
Don't lose hope about Agnes!

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Re: The Jade Dynasty
« Reply #121 on: April 16, 2011, 07:19:10 AM »
Agnes will live on forever in our hearts! (or something corny like that  8))



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« Reply #122 on: April 17, 2011, 12:36:23 AM »
Wow, I was gone for a week and came back to so many new chapters!
I still love the story - you've done so well.

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« Reply #123 on: April 17, 2011, 05:37:43 AM »
Long live, Agnes! :D
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« Reply #124 on: April 17, 2011, 06:08:15 AM »
I'm about to play them, not long enough for Agnes to go though, I've already had too many deaths by old age today. :(
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« Reply #125 on: April 17, 2011, 06:13:19 AM »
I'm about to play them, not long enough for Agnes to go though, I've already had too many deaths by old age today. :(

That's why I play with aging off, or frequently use the makeover station. Just it's banned in Dynasties and Legacies... :( Good luck, Aggie!
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« Reply #126 on: April 20, 2011, 04:40:09 AM »
Oh My! There is a Chapter Missing! I thought I posted it.  :-\ Looks like a longer one coming now then.  :-X
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Re: The Jade Dynasty
« Reply #127 on: April 20, 2011, 05:20:59 AM »
Chapter 13 - Time Moves On



I have been working on my Gardening. I am currently at Level 6 of the Skill. Not long till I can get those Life Fruits planted! My Career works well with Gardening, I always wake up at 8am after getting home from Work in the evening and have plenty of time in the mornings for Gardening, Cleaning, Cooking and Hank.



Agnes had her birthday, she is officially elderly. She still hacks at that Ice with a chainsaw. Although she has moved into Blow Torches lately.






I asked her what she wished for, what she said made me cry. She said 'I made two wishes, first I wished that you are successful in your challenges, I know how much it means to you. For my Second Wish I wished that I would see my Daughter married, I fear I may not.' Agnes knows everything, I didn't tell her but she knew. She also thanked me, thanked me for being her friend.



Agnes wanted to Sculpt me in my Wedding Dress, you know I am surprised it still fits! I swear I have not used the Body Sculptor Agnes bought!



It's the Kids Birthday, they had their last day of Elementary School and they came home on the Honour Role! I'm so proud!



George was up first, Hank, as good as he is at Photography, pressed the wrong button and we didn't catch the Sparkles!




When I saw that Hair style George had I almost fainted, Hank didn't look all to pleased either. George is so happy now, Agnes and Hank agreed to tutor him in Sculpting, they say he is already looking very good, almost natural. I still think it's just the Chainsaw... He will concentrate on his Painting though, Hank also wants me to do Sculpting. Yeah, when I have time, I am reaching the top of the hill of my Career you know! He looks a lot like Hank, none of my Looks eh?



Then Joss had her Birthday.





Joss says she is going to take Business at School, she has a natural talent at selling things you know. She aged up very beautiful, just like Agnes with Chris' nose and Mouth and Eyes and probably Hair. Her best features are Agnes' her worst are Chris'.



Point proved...



Again, first day of School and George was late, again. Must be some Trend he is starting. Poor Joss, going to School on the Bus alone.



They are good kids though, get their homework done and all.



I got promoted! You can now call me, Shannon, Chef de Cuisine! One more promotion and I am at the top of the ladder! I can't wait!



Agnes still stays isolated, Chris is worried. Hank and I don't tell him but we think Agnes is going distant because she doesn't want to hurt him so much when she is gone.



I confronted Agnes over Dinner, we have late dinner when the others are asleep. I told her to stop isolating herself and to enjoy life while she still has it. It was harsh but needed to be said, I only hope she listened. She still won't change her look, it kind of suits her though so I'm not too bothered.



Their second day and they sit together. They may have grown up like Brother and Sister but I'm starting to think there is something going on... Separate bedrooms time.



Hank and I are still so much in love! We dance often, I'm getting a bit creeped out though, thee are so many people hanging around outside, we keep the curtains closed most of the day.



This is my Best Friend Jared Frio, he threw a Party and I was invited so I went over. I had to leave though... Gobias Koffi kicked the Bucket. Poor Jared, dealing with this.




I just realised something, I can't keep George in the dark for much longer, I have to tell him everything, what I worked out, what I felt like as a Spare, what Maddy felt like, What Eliza felt like. What happens to your heart. I'll tell you what happens to your Heart. When you eat Ambrosia your Heart dies.

It dies along with the person you love, I would rather die than live forever. That will not happen though, I must live. Otherwise we are all doomed. I am doing this for my Family.
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Re: The Jade Dynasty
« Reply #128 on: April 20, 2011, 05:35:55 AM »
Excellent writing well done.

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« Reply #129 on: April 20, 2011, 05:39:38 AM »
Thanks Ratchie!  :)
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Re: The Jade Dynasty
« Reply #130 on: April 20, 2011, 06:06:21 AM »
Happy birthday to Agnes and the teens!

You may want to add locks to those bedroom doors as well Jade!

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« Reply #131 on: April 20, 2011, 11:07:14 AM »
Hey, maybe George and Joss can get married! That'll satisfy both of Agnes' wishes~! ;D
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Re: The Jade Dynasty
« Reply #132 on: April 20, 2011, 11:13:37 AM »
If she lives long enough to see them be YA...
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« Reply #133 on: April 20, 2011, 11:14:24 AM »
She will! Think positive! ;D
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Re: The Jade Dynasty
« Reply #134 on: April 20, 2011, 11:18:28 AM »
Happy birthday George and Joss! Yea marry them!  ;D

 

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