Great job, my favorite books, the Belgariad, by David Eddings, are incredibily predictable, in one of the forwards he says of his own books, "I'm sure it will surprise no one that the good guys win, and the bad guys get what's coming to them." A good book doesn't always keep you guessing, but it will always keep you turning pages, and that's what your story has done for sure. Well, you know, in an electronic *click* way
*Confetti* for Max and Pippa, I'm so glad they're not star crossed lovers, but rather super happy ones!
*Confetti* for Sebastion and Maxine, may they have a super happy Sim family.
Great great story, thanks for all your time put in *confetti* just for you!