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« Reply #75 on: March 17, 2011, 05:53:36 PM »
Wow that's quite awesome, Samoht! I wish I could build like you :)
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« Reply #76 on: March 17, 2011, 06:02:33 PM »
Thanks!  :) Wish I had the patience to finish my Buildings! What I share pictures of on the forum is about a 1/4 of the building I do I just never finish or give up on some projects.  :-\ Since I don't like the Grass in Bridgeport I was thinking about how I would break it up and well I just thought about raising the terrain and building a foundation around the outside rim to neaten it up and then tack the house on the side of it. I don't know what to call it yet and will probably never know!  :P
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Re: Hannah Longing - The Vampiress (New Series)
« Reply #77 on: March 26, 2011, 05:39:33 PM »
I have the same problem with building samoht. :) Their home looks amazing great work

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Re: Hannah Longing - The Vampiress (New Series)
« Reply #78 on: April 13, 2011, 05:04:05 PM »
I am so sorry for the lack of posts but I have been so absorbed with Medieval, Dynasty and Legacy at once not to mention I have been Ill for about Three Weeks and have not felt that much into finishing their House but I have a new update I am writing as you read this and it should make updates be more frequent due to my Bridgeport acting up lately so that is the reason for the plot in the next chapter.
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Re: Hannah Longing - The Vampiress (New Series)
« Reply #79 on: April 13, 2011, 05:30:03 PM »
Hawk is a clever little boy, watching him you sometimes forget who you are and that you are not some horrific creature of the night. I know that Vampires are not horrific but there are times that you lose control and the sheer power overwhelms you, that is my worst nightmare, Hawk and Alex are the only ones who let me forget. It never happens often but you can feel it, feel it building inside of you, the primal instincts. Alex feels it as well I can see it. Soon not even Hawk will be able to hide the events that will happen.



Alex has put his energy into studying two skills so far, he has learnt Cooking. It was his dream to be a Five Star Chef in his own Bistro, he thinks that won't happen now, he doesn't even like the Human food anymore. He has also been studying Gardening, it's slow going for him though, he has to read about it because he can't go out into the daylight for very long, he can't stay out as long as I can, I don't know why.



I have been artistic lately, it's so peaceful to just stand there and paint away and let it grow on the canvas in front of you. I also took my hand at Photography, that was so easy, I don't know why people say it's tricky, I knew what every setting and button on the camera did after a few Photographs!



I want to remember my little boy as he is now, Innocent. If he is anything like me he will get into some trouble but I hope he is like me and gets to a place in his life like this, where I am now. Loved.



We were watching this film I think it was about a Llama Farmer from Riverview or something, don't ask, that reminds me I must never let Alex choose the rental. He was enjoying it and I was just getting into it when the picture flashed and suddenly we were watching the news, on the Screen behind the presenter... There was a riot. Burning torches and large Llamaball Bats. In the middle of them... There was a young girl, a girl with bright purple eyes and pale skin. The camera cut away after they showed us this girl. They were hunting for Vampires, we had grown weak in Bridgeport, we let ourselves mix to easily and rivalries between the clans pushed us away until now when we so desperately needed the Clans together they were broken.



Bridgeport was not safe anymore, we were famous, everyone knew us here, everyone knew where we lived, everyone would come looking and then burning. We could not put Hawk at risk, even if it meant harming ourselves we had to get out of here. The roads, airports, ports, train stations, all would be watched and guarded, we had to walk, walk through the daylight, but where is safe?



We collected a few things that were of value, pictures, paintings a favourite teddy. We needed somewhere to go, somewhere safe, somewhere quiet but where we would fit in. My paintings finally had a use. They saved our lives.



So we left, not bothering to lock the door, even from the Hills you could hear the noise and the screams from the City. Screams that were not Human. We saw a Helicopter take off from the Government Buildings and the news agencies along with the Hospital and Business Buildings, the sheer mass of limos leaving the Film Studios blocked the road out of the City. Bridgeport was gone, only Rebels lived there now, Chaos was the only ruler. They were stupid those people who stayed, there are more Vampires deep within the City and they will want revenge.



I sometimes think that Hawk knows everything, he hears everything and the looks he can give send a chill up your spine. I can tell he is powerful, but how powerful I don't know.



We sheltered in Caves for most Days, Alex was growing weaker by the time we reached our Destination. We hadn't had any nourishment for weeks and we were starved, I felt that instinct to feed building, It was at it's strongest when we reached our Destination. A small town they call Sunset Valley.


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Re: Hannah Longing - The Vampiress (New Series)
« Reply #80 on: April 13, 2011, 05:33:09 PM »
Wooooow... That was awesome. :o
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« Reply #81 on: April 13, 2011, 05:54:53 PM »
Very cool update!

I'm sorry Bridgeport has been acting up on you, but at least it generated a cool plot twist!

I love Hawk's eyes, they're like reflecting pools.
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« Reply #82 on: April 13, 2011, 06:10:33 PM »
Wow, that was cool! Hawk is soooo cute.
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Re: Hannah Longing - The Vampiress (New Series)
« Reply #83 on: April 13, 2011, 06:12:14 PM »
Wooooow... That was awesome. :o

Thanks Simstar!  :)

Very cool update!

Thanks Juxt!  ;)

I'm sorry Bridgeport has been acting up on you, but at least it generated a cool plot twist!

I was Four Weeks into the BP game and it was starting to freeze/pause every time I did something and I didn't want a repeat of what happened last time.  :-\

I love Hawk's eyes, they're like reflecting pools.

Yeah they are pretty cool!  :D They are the same as Hannah's but they seem more dominant in Hawk for some reason, could just be that the eyes look huge on toddlers or something.  8)

Wow, that was cool! Hawk is soooo cute.

Thanks Gogo!  :)

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Re: Hannah Longing - The Vampiress (New Series)
« Reply #84 on: May 07, 2011, 09:44:15 AM »
I am struggling to make time for Hannah Longing and the Path of the Walkers. What with the Legacy and Dynasty, Legacy so close to finishing and Dynasty just plain addicting. I don't want to stop either of these Stories and am trying to work out a solution to get updates.  :-\
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Re: Hannah Longing - Life of a Vampiress
« Reply #85 on: November 13, 2011, 10:09:24 AM »
I have been dormant for a long time now. The months flew by. I stayed young. As I would, using the power of a Vampire causes your life to extend. You gain power, respect and wisdom. What you don't get is how to be Human. Why you may ask would a Vampire want to be Human? I do not wish to be of their species, as I once was. I wish to be able to feel like one and do things that they can do. For this I know how to achieve that. The last you heard of me was many a month ago. We had fled from the cursed place of smoke and smog they call Bridgeport. It once was a beautiful placed when owned by my Kind. Their Kind erradicated us. They still are. Only one place so far is untouched by the clutches of the Hunters. That place is Sunset Valley. Which is why I came.



My name is Hannah Longing. I am a Vampiress. The first of my kind. Never before has a Human turned Vampire become the powerful creature that I am. None are a match for me. That is why I must lead. I must lead whoever is left to lead. For we are strong in power but weak in heart. I have combined my two aspects. The Heart of a Human with the Mind of a Vampire. My Child has inherited my power. He has also inherited the power of his Father. My lover is of the same kind as me. Albeit weaker than me his strengh is strong. I shall rebuild what was lost and form a new reputation for our kind. Not of the heartless creatures of the dark. I shall forge a reputation of the beautiful, mystic and wise beings of the starlight filled night.



As I run through this small town I feel closer to my goal than I did in the concrete towers. I feel the life blood pumping through the town. The Humans, they do not see me. I run as swift as wind and silent as a breeze. I suppose you would like to know of my origins some day. I will tell you when that day arrives. For my origins are at stake. I am born of a Woman. I never met that Woman, I never knew her name. I know her name now. Rumours had spread through the Town of a strange dream. The People remembered a blackness that engulfed them and tore them back to this day. They remembered a whole family that ceased to exist. What worries me is of the vague memory of two women, neither my Mother, although one she is like a Mother to me. They said she walked the Day as she Walked the Night, her companion warked the Day and the Light. Both women wore no shoes upon their feet.



I know who I am. I know who my Mother is. My guess is that some of you may know, some may not. My Mother is a Walker. My Mother is the Seventh Walker. My Aunts are Eighth Walker, the Walker of Life and Death. First Walker is also my Aunt, she is not fond of my kind, although she grants us the Life we need. My Mother is the Seventh Walker. The Walker of the Night. My Mother is dead. As is the First Walker. I feel in my heart that Eighth is still alive. One day I will find her and I hope she will know where my Mother is and rescue her from her torment.



Until then I will stay. I will stay with my Love and my Child. For they mean the World to me. I must raise my Son as best I can, so he can survive the World he will grow up into. Without the Walkers our Kind is in danger as the Humans run free to do as they wish.


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Re: Hannah Longing - Life of a Vampiress
« Reply #86 on: November 13, 2011, 03:39:07 PM »
Oh my goodness, this is amazing! I love, love, love Hannah and Alex and Hawk and you write so brilliantly! You really make it vivid and the screenies are awesome! Well done, Tom! :D

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Re: Hannah Longing - Life of a Vampiress
« Reply #87 on: November 13, 2011, 04:37:13 PM »
I love this story! You're a really good writer samo!

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« Reply #88 on: November 13, 2011, 04:53:52 PM »
I've missed these guys! I wonder if Hannah will find the Eighth?
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« Reply #89 on: November 14, 2011, 11:07:59 AM »
I just read from the beginning and love it! Awesome writing.

 

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