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The Radcliff Dynasty
« on: February 03, 2011, 10:40:22 PM »

Chapter 1: A New Life?

Sacred Heart Hospital.
Room 312

A lone body of a young woman laid motionless on the hospital bed.
Her chart reads:
Name: Charlotte Radcliff
Age: 24 years old
Admitted February 12, 2008 at age 21


No one knew where she was from. A local farmer claimed he had found her in his pasture with nothing but a piece of paper than read: "Charlotte Radcliff, 21 years old". The farmer took the girl to the hospital and the doctor examined her body and found severe brain injuries along with several broken ribs and a broken arm but there was still a heartbeat. They all expected her to not live through the night. Instead, Charlotte hung on for 3 years in a comatose state.

Until one fateful morning, Charlotte's eyes began to flutter open. She had no idea where she was, or what had happened to her all she knew was that her whole body felt paralyzed and she couldn't speak. An overwhelming fear swept over her as she tried to scream for help but nothing came out of her mouth.
Just then a nurse came in and yelled "Oh my goodness the girl is awake!" then she quickly rushed over to the bed and helped Charlotte calm down.
"Hey it's okay sweetie, you are alright just been in a coma for 3 years..just calm down, shhh..."

The doctor came in soon after and explained to Charlotte why she couldn't move or speak and what had really happened to her.
" ...So, we can take you through some therapy and get your arms and legs moving and hopefully you can regain your speech as well. Do you remember anything about yourself?"

Charlotte sadly shook her head and wondered if she would ever get out of this place..But Charlotte swallowed hard and decided to just accepted the hard road ahead of her.

The next few months went by as a blur to Charlotte. She had regained most of her limb movements and was able to talk a mile a minute now.
As Charlotte was getting ready for bed one night, a nurse walked in clutching a letter in her hands. She handed over the letter and Charlotte opened it in confusion.

Dear Charlotte,
I have some important information disclosed in this letter that you must not tell anyone about. You, my dear are about to receive the secret to a very special gift. This gift has been kept a secret for thousands of years and is only granted to those who can prove their potential power and resilience. This gift is immortality, however you must complete a series of challenges before you obtain it. I have chosen you because I could not complete it myself and I have high hopes that through you the  Immortal Dynasty shall be completed successfully. You have conquered all odds and survived, I hope you shall do the same with this next challenge. With this, you shall receive more instructions once you have found the piece of land left for you at 15 Summerhill Court. Best of luck to you.

Sincerely,
Alexander Lancaster


Charlotte sat there in silence, soaking in all the information Alexander Lancaster had told her. She had to admit it did sound appealing being able to live forever, even if it seemed hard to achieve. In the end, she decided it would really be in her best interest to accept this guy's challenge and start a new life.

" I mean, why not right? It's not like I know anyone in this town anyways and even if I did I wouldn't remember them."

The next week Charlotte said goodbye to the only home she knew and packed up her meager belongings. She traveled to the land that was stated in the letter, she found  another set of instructions in the mailbox that gave her a layout of all the challenges she was to complete.

"Hmm..So I guess the first thing on my checklist is to find a spouse?"


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Okay guys, I'm sorry it took me SO long to start a new Dynasty. I have been really really busy (still am, but I made time for you guys :D ) with life and it's test week at school.
I tried a different twist with this story just to keep y'all entertained. So tell me what you think! If you hate it, suck it up (jk) ;)
I'll have more updates soon!

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Re: The Radcliff Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2011, 11:22:30 PM »
I love the way you started this dynasty.
I'm looking forward to reading more.



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Re: The Radcliff Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 11:24:23 PM »
Fabulous start, Kattiq! It's sad to see the Lancasters go, but welcome to the Radcliffs.
You've played too much TS3 when ... your 13 month old's babble sounds like Simlish!

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Re: The Radcliff Dynasty
« Reply #3 on: February 03, 2011, 11:26:24 PM »
I love the way you started this dynasty.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
Thank you so much!

Fabulous start, Kattiq! It's sad to see the Lancasters go, but welcome to the Radcliffs.
I know :( I'm still heartbroken over it..But I am also excited because I have a fresh new, and organized outlook for these guys!

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Re: The Radcliff Dynasty
« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 11:33:46 PM »
Awesome restart Kattiq! Poor Charlotte, I'm glad Alexander could tell her the things she needs to do! I'll miss the Lancaster's too. But Go Charlotte!

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« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 11:40:42 PM »
Awesome restart Kattiq! Poor Charlotte, I'm glad Alexander could tell her the things she needs to do! I'll miss the Lancaster's too. But Go Charlotte!
Thanks! ;)
Yeah, Alexander got pretty good at telling everyone what to do the last go around so I figured he'd be able to give her some good guidance :P

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« Reply #6 on: February 03, 2011, 11:49:35 PM »
You're welcome! Yeah he should be good at it!  ;D



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Re: The Radcliff Dynasty
« Reply #7 on: February 03, 2011, 11:50:51 PM »
You had me with "Charlotte Radcliff". Epic pun is epic. Keep it up!

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« Reply #8 on: February 03, 2011, 11:55:53 PM »
You had me with "Charlotte Radcliff". Epic pun is epic. Keep it up!
Haha, I'm glad I got you suckered in.
The only thing is I have no idea what epic pun you are talking about  :-\

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« Reply #9 on: February 04, 2011, 01:18:14 AM »
What pun?  ???

Great restart.  ;D

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Re: The Radcliff Dynasty
« Reply #10 on: February 04, 2011, 02:45:06 AM »
Sorry about the Lancasters but I am looking forward to meeting the Radcliffs.

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« Reply #11 on: February 04, 2011, 06:12:40 AM »
The only thing is I have no idea what epic pun you are talking about  :-\
What pun?  ???

Charlotte Radcliff? Carl Ratcliff? Wasn't that an intentional pun?

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« Reply #12 on: February 04, 2011, 06:18:50 AM »
Charlotte Radcliff? Carl Ratcliff? Wasn't that an intentional pun?

Wow if it wasn't I think it's even 10 times more awesome, unintentional plays on words always are.

Welcome to the world Charlotte, good luck to all the future Radcliffs!

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Re: The Radcliff Dynasty
« Reply #13 on: February 04, 2011, 11:13:52 AM »
WOW! Awesome start! I'm definitely gonna keep reading this one! ;D
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« Reply #14 on: February 04, 2011, 01:33:08 PM »
Thank you @ Simstar, Choccolatee, Ratchie! I am excited to see what their life will unfold. :)

Charlotte Radcliff? Carl Ratcliff? Wasn't that an intentional pun?
Haha, wow yeah it definitely was not intentional. But that's hilarious! It never even phased me that it was similar to Carl's name xD It really just randomly popped into my head one day when I was thinking of names to begin my dynasty with :P Must be because I spend so much time on here.

Wow if it wasn't I think it's even 10 times more awesome, unintentional plays on words always are.

Welcome to the world Charlotte, good luck to all the future Radcliffs!

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Agreed! And thank you for your support!