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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #405 on: May 03, 2011, 05:44:34 AM »
This dynasty attempt has failed. I forgot to get the child portrait of Callisto.
I'm very sad to say goodbye to the Copernicus family :(
I'll wrap the story up, and I will be starting a new dynasty as soon as I can.

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Lights and sounds were flashing all around me. All I could think of was saving Callisto and Alejandro.
I struggled against the forceful wind that was pushing me back.
Where was I?
What was happening?
I didn't even need to ask those questions. I was sure. I was so, so sure.

As fire, earth and water whipped around me, I felt around for a book. The book. The Immortal Dynasty.
Amongst the haze of dirt and wind, I scribbled down a note and shoved it in the book.

"Luna!," I heard grandad screaming. I needed to hurry. I tucked the book into Callisto's crib. I kissed my baby on her head, as a tear rolled down my cheek. "I love you, Callisto" I said. Those would be the last words I'd speak to my daughter.

The wind broke down the roof, and I scrambled through the wreckage. He was there. They both were.
I grabbed the hands of my mother and my grandad. We stood there, alone, as the Earth started to crumble down upon us.
We started to pray. We prayed to Hermes. We prayed to Hermes, the messenger of the Gods and the guide to the underworld. We prayed for them to take her away. Anywhere.

A blinding light shone from behind the chaos, forcing us to close our eyes. The wind still whipped the Earth around us, pulling us further and further in.
I opened my eyes for a moment. We were no longer on Earth. He was coming to claim us.
We had fallen to Hades.





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Oh Alexandria, I am so sorry to hear that! You were going so strong and then one little portrait... I feel so sad for you.

I loved the Copernicus family and I'm really sad Luna did not get to enjoy being a mother. However, your closing update was absolutely fantastic and I'm looking forward to at least seeing some of her in Callisto. I really admire how you're able to close the story like that.

Good luck with a new start - I will be here to read your next dynasty attempt!

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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #408 on: May 03, 2011, 05:59:17 AM »
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! :'(

I love Luna! I love the Copernicus family! I am so so sorry Alex. I'm looking forward to the restart. Are you going with Mercury?
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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #409 on: May 03, 2011, 06:03:44 AM »
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!
The Copernicus Dynasty is probably one of favourite out of them all and I'll miss them so much! Can't wait for the restart!
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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #410 on: May 03, 2011, 06:06:02 AM »
Thanks guys. It means a lot. I know I shouldn't be upset about a game, but awwww :( haha.

I love Luna! I love the Copernicus family! I am so so sorry Alex. I'm looking forward to the restart. Are you going with Mercury?
It's a surprise :)

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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #411 on: May 03, 2011, 06:43:04 AM »
Alexandria  :(  I'm so sorry to hear about your dynasty.  But you're a great writer so I also can't wait for your new story.  Good luck with the new attempt.
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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #412 on: May 03, 2011, 06:59:37 AM »
Oh NO!! I'm so so sorry.  :'( I love the little fallen to Hades bit, but it's so sad. I'll definitely keep an eye out for the next attempt!

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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #413 on: May 03, 2011, 07:46:19 AM »
Thank you, both of you.
I'm just organising the supermax skills and such, and then I'll get straight into it.

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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #414 on: May 03, 2011, 08:08:15 AM »
I just started up my second attempt. It can be found here - The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty :)

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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #415 on: May 03, 2011, 09:19:17 AM »
I'm a little late but I am sad to see this one end, although you ended it beautifully, Alexandria. *Off to read the new story*
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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #416 on: May 03, 2011, 11:09:05 AM »
*sniffles* I'm not crying. Sooo sad. I'm off to read your next attempt. I commend you on a beautiful ending though.

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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #417 on: May 03, 2011, 11:21:29 AM »
BWAAAAAAAAAHHH!
WHY, CRUEL FATE, WHYYYYYY?!

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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #418 on: May 03, 2011, 11:33:31 AM »
Thank you for your sympathies everyone! It's really appreciated :)
I'm just glad I was only half way through, instead of up to the final generation!

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Re: The Copernicus Immortal Dynasty: Hermes vs. Hades (FAILED)
« Reply #419 on: May 03, 2011, 11:49:26 AM »
Alexandria_, I'm very sorry to hear about this Dynasty coming to an end. :( Good luck with your next effort.