You had me at the introduction, really. It looked so epic, I was convinced to vote on Extremely Good since 00:01. The moving light at the start with the PlumbBob background, where Carl's quote is at, moves kinda weirdly, though. I don't understand the video backgrounds for rules 8 and 9. Nice job on rule 14, by the way. The epic booing at rule 15 looks awsome.
I believe one of the best ways to shorten the video is to avoid cutting the text at the bottom so much, and use the entire screen for it (with a drop shadow, perhaps, to avoid unreadable text), or maybe at least change it from 2 lines to 4 lines at a time, mostly at rule 11.
Also, I'm in the video! Woo!
I am very sure that I heard "bird is the word!" at 2:30.