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Offline Juxtaposition

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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #555 on: May 27, 2011, 05:08:01 PM »
Congrats to Miguel and Nyarah! R.I.P Susie. I soon as you said you won't like this update then to Alexandria I though,"Oh no someone's going to die!" Then I realized Quian was Immortal...

Thank you Gogowars, yeah it was Susie's time, sure did rain on my wedding parade though *sigh*

RIP Susie -sniffles-  You will be very much missed.
Velmoor - make sure to watch after your son.

Congratulations to the happy couple! *Confetti*
Yay nooboo! *confetti*

Awesome 12k views *confetti*


Thank you Ricalynn, yup, the nooboo plane is soon to land, we'll all just concentrate on the incipient cuteness as much as we can.
Velmoor: I will of course keep an eye on my boy, but he's level headed, and has a support system that larger than even just this household.

*sniffles*

Stupid Grim and his bad timing. Velmoor, if I catch up with him, I'll hold him down for you...

Thank you Cathyknits, it really was bad timing, couldn't Grim have waited just a few hours! *Sigh* but no, he can't.
Velmoor: You don't have to hold Grim down, I have a device for that! Ooo, and a punching machine I've been dying to try out, now I've just gotta go talk to Artie Grim so I can make sure I pummel the right one, I don't mean to sound discriminating, but all the Grims look the same to me, I've seen he can tell them apart.

Here I was all warm and fuzzy over Nyarah and Miguel's engagement and then, like a bucket of ice water, Susie passes away!  *sniffle*  It was a beautiful wedding anyhow and I know Susie is watching over her daughter and son-in-law and soon-to-be grand-nooboo.

Thank you Katluvr, I know exactly how you feel, I was all psyched up for this beautiful, coming full circle, last wedding and first wedding in the same place, event, all misty eyed with happy romance, and then BAM Grim shows up, not the kind of wedding I was thinking of, let me assure you.

Awww, heartbreak and happiness all in one party! R.I.P. Susie. I guess she forgot that the Grim likes to become the main event when invited to a party.

YAY for nooboo coming!

Thank you lilygirl, Grim certainly is a show stopping kind of guy, but I'm still a fan, even if his timing can be terrible.

Aw no! Not Susie!
The start to the wedding was a sad one, poor Nyarah :(
But it was sweet of Susie to leave to allow Nyarah to have a child.

On a side note, I love that scene with Quain at the piano.

Thank you Alexandria, I try not to let the dying get me down, but this one was so cruelly timed, not just for Susie who wished to see Nyarah get married, but for the whole family, so I'm rushing toward a nooboo to perk me up again. Quain looks so happy when he plays piano, and I love that!

Aww, that was such a bittersweet moment - losing your mother on your wedding day. *sniff* :'( We'll miss you so much, Susie, RIP.
Go Velmoor, punch that stupid Grim, he deserves it!
I'm just crying here and all sad..
Awesome update, tho. :'(

Thank you Chronic, Grim does deserve it, maybe I'll see if Velmoor can pick a fight with a Grim before he pops off again, that would be funny, and cathartic. I'm so upset at Story Progression right now, I try to make a light funny story and chance is all "no, there's no way you can spin this off lightly Mwah-ha-ha"

In truth I have been waiting for Susie to die for several updates now. Every time I was so happy that it wasn't her time yet, for some reason I really liked her persona. It's heartbreaking she couldn't stay just a few more hours to watch Nyarah get married. I hope she has many limos in her afterlife!

Hahaha *wipes tears out of her eyes*

The first time I read that line I misread carved for curved. I can just hear him sing that.

I LOVE your little "songs"!


Thank you Phyre, she rested at 95 so I was hoping she might hold on just long enough for the wedding, but no such luck. Susie was a charismatic leader type, I wrote her to be liked, and I'm glad I succeeded. I enjoy writing little silly couplet lines, I don't get much call to use them though, another reason writing this story is so much fun.

Juxt, I just love how you entertain me with all your updates.

RIP Susie

Congratulations Nyarah and Miguel :)

Thank you SassySimmer I'm glad I could slip a few smiles in with the sadness. I was certainly trying.

Beautiful wedding. R.I.P. Susie.  :'( Can't wait to see the nooboo though.

Thank you Esther, it won't be long now, nooboo time is near! Do me a favor and have Agnes punch Story Progression a good one for me? ;D



ME: With a slot opened in the house, and Susie's last wishes being very clear, Nyarah and Miguel begin attempting to start a family.
Nyarah: I didn't hear any chimes, but mom said I need to eat plenty of watermelon when trying to get pregnant, mmm, it's delicious, good thing I've grown a big supply.



ME: When I send Quain of to the graveyard, there's a special ghost who seemed to just be waiting for him.
Quain: Mother, you're here, please hold me, I feel as though my heart's been ripped out!
Allison: I know it feels as though she's been taken away from you, but though our mortal forms are gone, and we can't stay long in this world, those who have passed on are still with you. We are all so proud of you son, even those ancestors you never met, they know your name, and we have watched you with pride in our hearts.
Quain: I'm so glad you're here.



Quain (1): If you're all still here, why do we need graveyards?! Why can't you all just come back to life and live with us?!
Allison (1): We don't have that kind of power Quain, it's tiring just to manifest, and without the energy that resides here, our spirits might fade, or become restless.
Quain (2): I don't want to leave my wife here!  All alone, we're both all alone!
Allison (2): You're not alone Quain, you have your whole family waiting for you at home, and I have a whole family here. I will care for Susie, she won't be alone.



ME: Nelson Littler also decides to pop out of his grave, my graveyard has been pretty active lately, with important ghosts popping about.
Allison: Now that I've done what I came to do, time to unwind a bit in the world of the living.



ME: Allison goes to the Gym, apparently they don't have exercise equipment in awesome Sims afterlife.  Do you know how odd it feels to be stalking a ghost car through the city in the middle of the night, pretty darn weird, I'll tell you!



Quain (1): There's something about fishing, Susie spent so much time by my side reeling in fish, it almost feels like she still is there. I keep looking over to see her, I wish I could.
Quain (2): Ooo an underwater birthday cake in a box, umm, I don't want to eat that, sorry.



Nyarah: Why do stars, fall down from the sky, every time you walk by? Just like me, they long, to be, close to you.
ME: Wow, umm, that look on your face sure is, umm, something, Miguel. Maybe she hit a sour note?



Velmoor: That's right, natural gas is flammable, my bad. I totally lost that bet!
ME: *Sigh*



Woohooium: *Glow, glow, glow, heart*
Nyarah (Internal Monologue): Well, I didn't hear the chimes, but mom said I'm eating nothing but watermelon until the baby is born, so that's what I'll do.
ME: Yay! You can't try for a baby anymore!
Nyarah: Why is that a good thing, I want a baby!
ME: I don't want to spoil the surprise for you, you'll see soon enough.
Nyarah: Sometimes I think you keep secrets just to aggravate us.
ME: Yuppers.

Next Time: Proud parents get ready for their new roles.
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #556 on: May 27, 2011, 05:21:10 PM »
Stop being so darn mysterious Juxt, it not very niiiice. :D
Great update(s), I've been a little behind. *sobs* for Suzie, *confetti* for Juxt's-suprise-that-may-be-nooboos! ;D



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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #557 on: May 27, 2011, 05:44:30 PM »
Awesome update Juxt :)  I thought the scene in the graveyard between Quain and Allison was so sweet.  Yay for nooboo-incoming!

I just have something that is niggling me about Velmoor and Nyarah, but I am going to wait to see where the story goes  ;)

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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #558 on: May 27, 2011, 06:15:38 PM »
I love your songs!
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #559 on: May 27, 2011, 06:27:21 PM »
Thanks so much for including the awesome song, Juxt! You are awesome! :D
Still feeling sorry for Quain. *sniff*
Awesome update!
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #560 on: May 27, 2011, 06:36:09 PM »
Aww, that update made me all sad. :(
But it was still awesome!

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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #561 on: May 28, 2011, 06:17:33 AM »
Quain's heartbreak is really sad. Susie was his soulmate.

Hopefully his impending grandchild will be able to cheer him up a little!



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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #562 on: May 28, 2011, 10:06:53 AM »
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Velmoor: That's right, natural gas is flammable, my bad. I totally lost that bet!
ME: *Sigh*

....okay, this time I was alone in the office and I could laugh instead of making seizure noises. :)
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #563 on: May 28, 2011, 12:19:53 PM »
....okay, this time I was alone in the office and I could laugh instead of making seizure noises. :)

OMG, I don't know which was funnier - Velmoor's natural gas problem or the image of you sitting in a cubicle sounding like you were having a seizure!  LOL

Beautiful update, Juxt!  I really loved the scene between Quain and Allison.  It's not like I needed any more evidence that you are a brilliantly creative storyteller, but there it is anyhow.  :D

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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #564 on: May 28, 2011, 01:11:35 PM »
Stop being so darn mysterious Juxt, it not very niiiice. :D
Great update(s), I've been a little behind. *sobs* for Suzie, *confetti* for Juxt's-suprise-that-may-be-nooboos! ;D

Thank you Missmaths, really, I'm mysterious? Cool, because I thought I was only slightly less transparent than glass! Woo! Just one nooboo though, no extras this time!

Awesome update Juxt :)  I thought the scene in the graveyard between Quain and Allison was so sweet.  Yay for nooboo-incoming!

I just have something that is niggling me about Velmoor and Nyarah, but I am going to wait to see where the story goes  ;)

Thank you SassySimmer, I'm kind of waiting to see where the story goes myself, my planning on all of this has been, sparse at best. I was so touched that Allison was just hanging around, like she was expecting Quain to arrive, you can't plan those things ;)

Thank you Gogowars

Thanks so much for including the awesome song, Juxt! You are awesome! :D
Still feeling sorry for Quain. *sniff*
Awesome update!

Thank you Chronic, I added that song just for you, no slow dancing, so I had to improvise ;) It's hard not to feel bad for Quain, and the whole family, I know I did.

Aww, that update made me all sad. :(
But it was still awesome!

Thank you TallStar, and welcome to the forums, I'm kinda flattered that you went straight from introducing yourself to saying nice things to me, I feel all special. Don't worry, the happy will return, it always does.

Quain's heartbreak is really sad. Susie was his soulmate.

Hopefully his impending grandchild will be able to cheer him up a little!

Thank you Phyre, but Susie is his soul mate, she's just kinda ghostly about it.  Nooboos cheer everything up, they're too cute not too.

....okay, this time I was alone in the office and I could laugh instead of making seizure noises. :)

Thank you cathyknits, I'm glad to be causing less seizure noises LOL

OMG, I don't know which was funnier - Velmoor's natural gas problem or the image of you sitting in a cubicle sounding like you were having a seizure!  LOL

Beautiful update, Juxt!  I really loved the scene between Quain and Allison.  It's not like I needed any more evidence that you are a brilliantly creative storyteller, but there it is anyhow.  :D

Thank you Katluvr, I agree, it always makes me chuckle the funny ways people describe they're enjoyment of my humor, I just keep hoping they're not actually having seizures and destroying their monitors with beverages, because then I would feel bad. I feel a bit like my creativity is aided by the game, sort of like Michelangelo must have felt when he described his work as freeing the sculpture from inside the marble, Sims makes writing fast, fun, and easy for me.



Nyarah: G Grandma Aeluna, I don't know how you older Immortals have done this over and over, losing my mother has left me feeling broken, sometimes I feel like I can't keep going on.
Aeluna: I know sweetie, we all loved Susie, joining together, and knowing we'll always be here for you, that's how we get through the hard days, and back to the days we feel like partying.



Quain: Sometimes it feels like now I really know what the word heartbroken means, but watching Nyarah and Miguel, I remember that it was worth it.
Velmoor: I like to think about the talks I had with her, she made so many smart decisions for the people of our city, I like to think I might have helped.
Sashyna: The mortals of our family will never be forgotten, not by us, or this city, we just have to believe that they felt as fortunate to be in our lives, as we were to have been in theirs.



Nyarah: *Blarg, urp, hork* Oh this is simply dreadful, I've never felt so ill.
ME: Well eat a watermelon and remember, this too shall pass. I promise it'll be worth it.
Nyarah: Being sick is never worth it.
ME: You're not just sick.
Nyarah: Do your really mean...
ME: All signs point to yes.



Nyarah: A relaxing trip to the spa, and a morning meal of watermelon, and I'm feeling ready to tackle another day at work, or maybe even something more important.
ME: Nyarah stars in "La Simme Nikita" as the deadly and beautiful villain for hire, action and adventure ensue!



Draigoth: I'm angry, I'm angry at Grim for arriving too early, I'm angry at Velmoor for not being able to stop this, I'm angry at myself for being powerless, I'm angry at ME for letting this happen.
ME: Tell us how you really feel their Draigoth.
Draigoth: I am!
ME: Feeling better?
Draigoth: Yeah, it helps *sigh*



Nyarah: This is the first time I've ever been happy to see a part go to another girl, who cares if I don't star in this one movie, I think I already felt her kick!
ME: I think it's a little early for kicking.



Nyarah: Miguel, we did it, we made a baby!
Miguel: Oh, I didn't know I could be so happy, so proud, I love you Nyarah!



Miguel: So, you hold the bottles like this, see, and the fire helps the drinks end up with better texture.
Nyarah: Yes, I see, it's all very, hot.
Miguel: What? No the drinks will not be hot, do not worry my love.
ME: Nyarah's been taking "mixology lessons," she doesn't seem to be learning anything, but she keeps coming back.

Next Time: Stop! It's nooboo time!
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #565 on: May 28, 2011, 01:33:30 PM »
Awesome update Juxt!  I've never seen her work outfit before but I think it's pretty darn cool, too.

Oh and Velmoor - Artie says he's waiting to consult with you anytime you can get away from ME. 
Juxt - I am prepared to start shoving Artie if you get Velmoor should they go too far.

hehe *confetti* There's gonna be a nooboo!
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #566 on: May 28, 2011, 03:44:16 PM »
Awesome update! Cannot wait for the nooboo. But I am still sad.. :'(
And I don't want for De D'Onlyns to end! :(
Awesome, tho..
And thank you so so so so so much! I feel special. ;D
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #567 on: May 28, 2011, 05:52:11 PM »
Congrats on the pending nooboo! I can't wait to meet her.
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #568 on: May 28, 2011, 06:25:32 PM »
I loved Draigoth letting out his feelings. It was sweet.
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #569 on: May 28, 2011, 11:12:57 PM »
Oh yay, time for nooboos!