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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #360 on: April 29, 2011, 02:19:15 PM »
Aww, that was very nice of Drezebell. Well done for thinking that up!

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« Reply #361 on: April 29, 2011, 03:44:43 PM »
Wow. That's such a creative way to save your dynasty. I love how you made us - the readers - part of these events. You could've just asked Metro for permission and _not_ record the twin-event, but you choose to intertwine it with your story and it has made it that much better and absolutely unique! I take my hat off for you!



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« Reply #362 on: April 29, 2011, 09:30:14 PM »
My hat's off to you too! Absolutely ingenious, Juxt.
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« Reply #363 on: April 30, 2011, 04:37:33 AM »
Drezebell made the right decision. But not without the help of Juxt. Hats off to you, Juxt.
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« Reply #364 on: April 30, 2011, 12:16:08 PM »
That's awesome! Wow you are so inventive with your story! Thank you Drezebell and welcome Renee. May you live long enough for only one nooboo!

Thank you Esther, that section was so fun to write, it flew by, I spent almost 3 hours writing that day, and didn't notice until my beau came home LOL

Aww, that was very nice of Drezebell. Well done for thinking that up!

Thank you Alexandria, I'm not even sure how this particular series of events was what occurred to me, but as soon as Metropolis Man said I could go back and fix it, this whole thing jumped into my head fully formed.

Wow. That's such a creative way to save your dynasty. I love how you made us - the readers - part of these events. You could've just asked Metro for permission and _not_ record the twin-event, but you choose to intertwine it with your story and it has made it that much better and absolutely unique! I take my hat off for you!

Thank you Phyre, amusingly enough not only did I ask permission to go back to a previous save, I asked him if it was OK to write it in, thank goodness he said it was fine right? :D

Thank you lilygirl.

Drezebell made the right decision. But not without the help of Juxt. Hats off to you, Juxt.
P.S. ;)

Thank you Chronic, but by the set of totally imaginary rules I've made up whole cloth, Juxt couldn't help directly because no Sim but Velmoor knows Juxt really exists, they only know ME, who is my Sim Controlling Avatar. (Juxt: Though I did upgrade the time machine myself with Metro's technology, so I helped that way, plus it is my game ;) )   Though thank goodness Drezebell made the right choice, I was so worried the twins would tank my dynasty, I had stress shakes all day until I managed to fix it. Yay!



ME: Renee asleep in her redecorated room, no expense was spared in making her feel a welcomed member of the household.



Susie (1): Don't you have some widom to offer *huff, puff* like 'this too shall pass' or something?
Aeluna (1): The baby is coming aaa!
Susie (2): Sashyna, you're worldly and experienced, what should I do?
Sashyna (2): The baby?! Right now?! Eeek!



Susie: Our family is being totally freaky, why won't anyone reassure or help me?!
Quain: Oh my gosh, it's a baby!  It's coming from your belly! What do I do?!
Susie: Well at least I know where you get it from.



Sashyna: Someone has to do something about the baby coming!
Susie: Oh thank goodness you're here Velmoor, you're a doctor, you know what to do right?
Velmoor: About a baby?! Panic, that's what you do!



ME: Reintroducing Nyarah, this time born alone, allowing the dynasty to continue.  But what might happen to a twin who never knew her sister, will it affect her?
Susie: My beautiful baby, ten finger, ten toes, you're just beautiful!
Sashyna: Hello G3 Granddaughter, welcome to the family, you'll never be alone.



Velmoor: Mom, I have to tell you something, and I don't know if you'll be able to believe me, I just know I can't carry this secret by myself.
ME: Dude, I told you not to tell anyone!
Velmoor: Then stop me! Mom, I've made an invention, and it took me forwards, and backwards in time, I've done things, changed things, and I've made promises that I must one day keep.



Aeluna (Internal Monologue): I don't know what to believe, everything is fine, but is it possible that something else happened first, something bad?  Have we been saved, or is my son losing his mind?
Susie (Internal Monologue): I can't believe I agreed to pose in my strapless formal, I'm freezing, I wish Quain were here to keep me warm. *Blush*



Renee (1): My work is done, and though there is more I could do, I already feel my spirit growing restless.
Renee (2): Without my physical body to hold me back, I feel free!  Think of all the new things I might see!



Draigoth: Thank you for staying with us Renee, we're so glad we could fill your last few days with joy.
Quain: We only recently met, but you're a kind lady, I'm glad Velmoor asked you to live with us, even if it can't be for longer.
Aeluna: Thank you Renee, for all you've meant to us.
Aeluna (Internal Monologue): Were you just a friend, or were you our savior?



Grim: The time has come, leave your physical form to the grave, it is time for greater things.
Renee: Yes Grim, I coming.
Susie: Goodbye Renee, I'm sorry you couldn't stay to see Nyarah become a child, our family loves you, go with peace.

Author's Notes: Wow, did Renee know how to bow out gracefully after getting the job done or what? She lived for only 3 days, then moved on.  Granted she was 89 when she moved in, I rolled a jackpot with her. Spirit cookies for Renee!

Next Time: Babies, birthdays, and the band.
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #365 on: April 30, 2011, 01:04:12 PM »
Awesome saving of the dynasty, I never realized I was holding a breath for what? 3 days? until I released it when there was only one "twin", as it were. Bless Drezebell's heart for giving up her life for the Dynasty, may she forever RIP until Velmoor makes good on his maybe-promise. :D
I can see just how crazy that last sentence was now I've written it ;D

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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #366 on: April 30, 2011, 06:55:48 PM »
Welcome Nyarah! (again) R.I.P. Renee, awesome job!



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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #367 on: April 30, 2011, 09:46:52 PM »
RIP Renee. 

Welcome baby Nyarah!  Wonderful job as always!  I love all the shots of everyone freaking out.
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #368 on: May 01, 2011, 03:18:27 AM »
RIP Renee. And welcome to the world, baby Nyarah! Wow, this story is awesome! :)
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« Reply #369 on: May 01, 2011, 06:15:11 AM »
I'm a little sad we're not going to see more of Drezebelle - undoubtedly the coolest person in simland!

Still, congratulations on just the one daughter!

Renee's being very considerate - I guess that's her way to thank Velmoor for those few good days.

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« Reply #370 on: May 01, 2011, 08:44:27 AM »
RIP Renee, and thank you for saving the dynasty!

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« Reply #371 on: May 01, 2011, 12:25:32 PM »
Awesome saving of the dynasty, I never realized I was holding a breath for what? 3 days? until I released it when there was only one "twin", as it were. Bless Drezebell's heart for giving up her life for the Dynasty, may she forever RIP until Velmoor makes good on his maybe-promise. :D
I can see just how crazy that last sentence was now I've written it ;D

Thank you MissMaths, it was a harrowing time for me as well! *nods*  Yes, many blessings on Drezebell's head, thank goodness the family managed to raise her well.  Well, I can guarantee that she won't be Resting In Peace forever ;)

Welcome Nyarah! (again) R.I.P. Renee, awesome job!

Thank you Esther, yay for only one nooboo!

RIP Renee. 

Welcome baby Nyarah!  Wonderful job as always!  I love all the shots of everyone freaking out.

Thank you Ricalynn, I love the freak out shots too, they make me laugh, I take so many of them LOL  Plus it was the second time Susie went into labor, and I was panicked, why should my Sims get off that hook? ;D

RIP Renee. And welcome to the world, baby Nyarah! Wow, this story is awesome! :)

Thank you Chronic, I'm really glad you're enjoying it!  Yay for only one nooboo!

I'm a little sad we're not going to see more of Drezebelle - undoubtedly the coolest person in simland!

Still, congratulations on just the one daughter!

Renee's being very considerate - I guess that's her way to thank Velmoor for those few good days.

Thank you Phyre, but don't think Drezebell is going to disappear into obscurity forever, she was right to put her trust in Velmoor.  I will install World Adventures as soon as my Dynasty is over, and then their zany World Adventures begin.  I'm strongly considering uploading the two of them when the Dynasty is over as well, so that everyone who wants to can give them wacky adventures together.  Renee was awesome, I love a guest who knows not to over stay their welcome LOL

RIP Renee, and thank you for saving the dynasty!

Thank you Alexandria, and I second that, thank you to Renee for saving my dynasty, and thanks to Metro for still allowing me a chance for the hall of fame afterwards, woo!



Velmoor: Grandpa knows how to make nooboos happy, I'll change your diaper while I sing for you.
*Baby cries louder*
ME: Geez Velmoor, just because you're a genius doesn't mean you can carry a tune in a bucket, stop torturing that poor girl!



ME: Nothing keeps Velmoor happy like defeating gravity once again, and a party animal just can't say no to the trampoline!



Aeluna: My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard, and they're like "It's better than yours" Darn right, it's better than yours!
ME: Aeluna shows off her moves at the Grind.



Susie (Internal Monologue): I thought I wanted to have a big public party for Nyarah's first birthday, but now that it's here, I'm worried this is too much for a little baby. Oh, I don't want her to grow up, can't she stay little and precious forever?



ME: But time marches on relentlessly, and Susie herself takes her daughter to the cake for this special moment. This birthday party was a total failure, because for some reason the party set itself for the next day instead of this day.  I wanted a party, a gig, and a birthday all at once, but two out of three isn't bad, right?



ME: In a cloud of sparkly confetti, Nyarah becomes a toddler.  No, no, look at the camera silly cutie!



Susie (1): For a girl to be pretty, it's important she stay clean.
Nyarah (1): pwetty giwls
Susie (2): Every day we must brush, brush, brush our teeth.
Nyarah (2): Bruf, bruf teef!
Susie (3): Everyday we get served our favorite meals.
Nyarah (3): Hungry, noms now?



ME: Susie takes Nyarah home to fill her needs, and put her to bed.  I make sure she gives a fashion show before bed.  Her favorite color is white.



ME: The rest of the De D'Onlyn family stays at Banzai to preform as the Incarnations, with their newest member, Quain on Keyboards. Quain proves he can keep up with his all star relatives by busting a sweet behind the back move.
Quain: Woo! We love you Bridgeport!

Next Time: Little Nyarah has her first day as a toddler, and she's cute about it too!
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Re: De D'Onlyn Dynasty
« Reply #372 on: May 01, 2011, 12:32:47 PM »
Happy Birthday little Nyarah! She is a cutie.

Nice move there, Quain, way to be part of the band.
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« Reply #373 on: May 01, 2011, 12:34:19 PM »
WOOT! Happy birthday Nyarah! *waves* ;D
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« Reply #374 on: May 01, 2011, 12:38:38 PM »
Happy birthday Nyarah! Awesome move Quain! I love that song! My milkshake...Oh man now that song is stuck in my head!!  ;D