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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #60 on: March 22, 2018, 10:27:34 AM »
I'm gonna have to keep a close eye on newly spawned sins I mean Sims

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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #61 on: March 22, 2018, 05:02:02 PM »
@Shewolf13  shouldn't be too long to wait, most of Mavericks children are toddlers now.
@LenaLJ   :P
@sdhoey  hmm *nods* once you look past the terrible clothing and hair etc some of the game generated sims scrub up reasonably well.

Well, my dynasty nearly came to an abrupt halt yesterday with this happening (Click). I couldn't think for the life of me how to fix the issue within the rule set at all. Luckily wolfie came to the rescue with a suggestion which LenaLJ approved and so I can now bring you the next chapter in Jax's Dynasty. The bonus for me is that once again I have a save file with a housed Grim which lends itself to all sorts of story possibilities for the future.
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Chpt 10 Grim Visits
« Reply #62 on: March 22, 2018, 05:11:44 PM »
The day started out fine, even good really.

Watcher: Knock ‘em dead Squirt.
Brendon: Will do.

A bit of morning fishing.

Cali: Darn.
Watcher: Ah well, maybe next one will be useful.
Jax: Give it a rest Watcher, Cali’s caught loads of Angelfish.

Followed by some exercise.

Maverick: Just keeping in good shape watcher.
Watcher: Huh? You said something?

It was around then that things started getting weird.

Jax: Woah! Norah! You can’t go around stealing my things!
Watcher: What on earth! Wow! That’s rude.
Nora: I can’t help it.
Watcher: Likely excuse. She has to go Jax, good friend or not – I don’t want any of Kourtney’s paintings going missing.

Nora then walked into the kitchen and tried to swipe the fruit bowl.

Watcher: Right, that’s it. Now Jax!
Jax: Look Nora, we’re friends and I like you but I think it would be better for everyone if you just left.
Nora: Oh! Gosh, I’m sorry, I really am. I’ll see myself out.
Watcher: No you won’t.

Luckily Kori is a much better friend option.

Kori: Well, that was something.
Cali: Who would have thought! Nora’s a thief!
Jax: Ah well, could have been worse. Least she didn’t manage to actually take anything.

The Alter of Cow revved back into life just after I thought I had all the sims trained not to eat the cake. Poor Blake, I felt so bad as she is on her last days.

Watcher: Oh Nooo, I’m so sorry Blake. I was all distracted by Nora’s bad behaviour.
Blake: It’s ok, I’ll go and take a bath.

You could be excused for thinking this is some kind of new dance but in reality it’s Jax getting mentored by Maia at the woodworking table and Blake dying.

Watcher: This day is seriously starting to suck.
Blake: I see a light…
Watcher: Wow, really? Huh. I thought that was just all Hollywood nonsense.

Right next door Cali was having a party for one.


Using my super watcher powers I asked Jax to go view a painting in the great room.

Jax: I’m not sure viewing a painting is that interesting really and..wait is that…
Watcher: Off you go… NOW!

Poor Maia was so busy witnessing her friend die that she had a terrible fright when Grim whooshed in.

Maia: OH MY!
Watcher: Nice whooshy entrance there Grim. Quite the creep-fest.
Grim: Thanks I’ve been practising.

I was trying to remain calm but really Cali is so selfish aging up right at this particular moment. Typical.



Grim: Umm, how do you spell her name again?
Watcher: You have to be joking, right?
Grim: Err, no I can’t seem to find her on the list.
Watcher: B.L.A.K.E
Grim: Ahh ok so like a boy’s name but only for a girl?
Watcher: *face palm*
Maia: *Inconsolable sobbing*

Finally Grim got his game on and finished reaping poor Blake. I sent Maia to play The Sims to cheer her up. I know, I’m nice like that.

Jax: So you want to give me some chess tips? I’ve heard you’re a bit of a legend.
Grim: Sure.


Grim: Well the Sicilian Defense is always a good place to start.
Jax: Hmm
Grim: But you have to be aware of what type of player your opponent is.
Jax: K…
Kourtney: ‘Scuse me, coming through.


Cali: I’m so SAD watcher.
Watcher: Well if you’d done like I asked, which was to stay in the great room, you wouldn’t be sad.
Cali: I wanted to see what was happening.
Watcher: Yes, that’s always your problem isn’t it. Sticking your nose in where it’s not wanted.  What you need is some fresh air. Off you go!


Cali: This has been the worst birthday ever.
Watcher: Well, you’ve only got yourself to blame.

Thankfully the day's fortunes turned around at this point.

Watcher: Ah! Good! You’re home Brendon.
Brendon: Yep, Umm, you’re standing a little close there Watcher. I’m trying to read you see.


Watcher: How’s the food?
Brendon: Aah, good. Umm.. again with the personal space watcher!
Watcher: I’m just getting some pictures of you.
Brendon: No one wants to see me eating.
Watcher: Listen Squirt, you’re a teen-aged boy, eating is about all you do.
Brendon: Fine but no pictures when I’m sleeping. K?
Watcher: Oh, that reminds me!


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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #63 on: March 22, 2018, 05:57:53 PM »
"Ahh ok so like a boy’s name but only for a girl?" is one of the best lines I've seen given to Grim. So much fun.   
It is a little thing of my own. I call it "Heart Foam". I shall not publish it. Farewell! Patience, Patience, farewell!

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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #64 on: March 22, 2018, 06:16:59 PM »
My word! That was action-packed! Simultaneous aging up and dying! And attempted thievery! Maverick!
Don't you listen to Brendon, Watcher. That level of personal space is just fine. Lol about having to take pictures of him eating since he does nothing else. :)
So glad you've got your Grim problem sorted out. I haven't had a housed Grim in a long time, but I remember what horrible problems it caused for you before. Let's hope he stays homeless from here on out!

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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #65 on: March 22, 2018, 10:25:30 PM »
--steals that last shot-- Don't judge me! Lol wow, that was quite a rollercoaster there, wasn't it?

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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #66 on: March 22, 2018, 11:28:20 PM »
So glad you got your housed Grim problem sorted out so this dynasty could continue.
Brendon just gets cuter every update. I'm making that observation from a maternal perspective, okay?

I feel bad about giggling at the screenshot of Maia mentoring Jax while Blake was dying, but the poses of those two are too hilarious.
So if, say, I were to move to Willow Creek, does that mean that Maverick could, like.... (kidding!!!!)
Thoroughly enjoyed this update!



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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #67 on: March 24, 2018, 03:09:36 AM »
@Heart Foam  ty, so much nonsense really!  ;)
@FrancescaFiori  I thought the dynasty was a gonna with getting a housed Grim so early! So annoying but thankfully sorted.  :)
@Shewolf13 steal away lol
@oshizu  I laughed too and isn't annoying how sims always die in the most inconvenient place?
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Chpt 11: A Period of Calm
« Reply #68 on: March 24, 2018, 03:21:47 AM »
Jax was the first to try out the newish pool. It had been installed some time ago, but no one had wanted to swim until the water had heated up a little.

Watcher: Wow you got ripped!
Jax: That’s what happens when you insist on me doing weights all the time.
Watcher: Hmm, might be time for the treadmill, just saying.


Jax: It’s peaceful here.
Watcher: It is. I’m glad we don’t get any crocs bothering us from the swamp.
Jax: I don’t think there are any here, they live mostly in the jungle.


Watcher: You’re happy? Right?
Jax: I am, it’s a good life.
Watcher: *nodding* Good, that’s good.



As always Dale is on hand to give Brendon some writing tips.

Brendon: Oh, I get it now, thanks!
Dale: No problem, always happy to help.

Shea popped around for a visit just before Brendon had to go to work.

Brendon: Hey! Good to see you. *Goofy grin*
Shea: You too. Umm, nice place you’ve got.
Brendon: Thanks. Umm, I’ve got to go to work but you’re welcome to hang out for a bit. If you want to, you know.
Shea: Cool, thanks I will. Have a good work shift.
Brendon: Thanks. K well….umm, see ya later.



Watcher: lmao You goof!
Brendon: She’s the light of my life.
Watcher: You’re little ray of sunshine?
Brendon: Did you see the painting behind her too?
Watcher: Yup.
Brendon: lol I like her though.
Watcher: Yup, no kidding.

Jax spent some time getting to know her and was a little frustrated that she wouldn’t stop mucking around on the PC to sit down and chat.


Shea did redeem herself somewhat by doing her homework though.


A little later that afternoon Maverick completes yet another masterpiece.

Watcher: Nice masterpiece.
Maverick: Thanks, you wanna come hang out with me? I’m going to visit some of the kids.
Watcher: Sure, be good to see how the little rug-rats are getting on.

I’d tell you this tot’s name, but I can’t actually keep track of them all. But Mavericks good friends with all his children mostly due to his Domestic trait.

Maverick: And my awesome parenting skills.
Watcher: Well yes that too, only we don’t have that DLC installed.
Maverick: Whatever, I’m awesome at all I do.
Toddler: *Giggle*

He likes to ensure they have had their fruit and veggies for the day.


And that they are spending their play time learning as they go.


It’s pleasing to see that some of the mom’s take parenting seriously too and are spending quality time with their little ones.


Brendon came home with a promotion after only one shift at work. His A in High School meant he started al L2 so maxing this was a breeze.

Brendon: Nailed it.
Watcher: Nice!

The boys headed out for a night time fishing trip.

Brendon: Hmm, don’t think I’ve quite got the hang of this, I’ve got another tangle.
Dale: Oh, hang on and I’ll take a look.


Brendon: Finally, something decent. It’s pretty weird looking though, take a look Watcher!
Watcher: Hmm, well, it’s a good size. Well done.

Maverick still had one sim to kiss and a few dates to complete his aspiration of being a serial romantic.

Maverick: *blows kiss* Has anyone told you what a great smile you have?
Random Sim: No...oh!
Watcher: Lovely, so romantic next to the park rubbish bin. Sheesh… Anyway, kudos to the guy, he cleared the aspiration in time to join in with the fishing by morning time.


Maverick: Yes!
Brendon: Darn it, another stupid goldfish.

Kourtney came down to the park for a little while to cheer Brendon on. She’s feeling very tired these days, so I encourage her to take it easy.

Kourtney: How’s it all going Bren?
Brendon: Good mom, I’ve caught quite a few fish but no angelfish yet.
Maverick: That takes time, it’ll happen before you know it.


Soon it was school time.

Brendon: I’d rather stay and fish.
Watcher: I know but you can’t miss a day you know.
Malcolm: *Sneering* Oh is this your little protégé?
Watcher: Now now, bitterness is never becoming.
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Chpt 12: Party Time
« Reply #69 on: March 24, 2018, 03:37:24 AM »
Katrina joined Cali the next morning.

Watcher: Hear you’re a grandmother now, congrats.
Katrina: *Snort* ‘Heard’. You put the boy up to it watcher.
Watcher: Well, yes but you must admit, it is nice being a grandmother, right?
Katrina: *Grudgingly* It is.
Watcher: Well then.


Watcher: School time Squirt.
Brendon: K.


Watcher: Gosh, that’s a rather dark painting!
Kourtney: *Drily* I think it’s quite fitting, especially considering the view out of the window.

Kourtney and Jaxon spend much of their time now, out under the tree now, talking and glad to be together.



Kourtney: It’s important to me Jax, that you remember this.
Jax: I won’t forget love, I promise.


Jax: Have I told you how much I love you today?
Kourtney: I don’t mind if you tell me again.
Jax: You’re my best love, my best wife and my best friend.
Kourtney: We’ve had a lot of fun haven’t we?
Jax: Yes, we have!


Sometimes other house members would catch a glimpse of Kourtney and Jaxon as they passed a window, sitting together quietly under their tree. They left them alone, knowing that they were saying their goodbyes the only way they knew how to.

Kourtney needed afternoon naps most days and more times than not Jaxon would join her. Just so they could be close.


Kourtney was always up in time to help Brendon with his homework.



Watcher: Don’t get all buff and muscled out Squirt.
Brendon: Watcher that’s just not going to happen no matter how much I try. I’m too skinny!
Watcher: You are not. You’re perfect the way you are. Anyway, it’s time.

And it was.

Brendon was excited to call up birthday party for his older brother.

It was a huge success.

Everyone danced and chatted, told jokes and played games. It was great!


Watcher: Thanks for the offering Kori.
Kori: You’re welcome ☹


Before long it was cake time.

Watcher: Get.Out.Of.The.Way. Cali. Jeeez.

Happy Adult Birthday Dane!


Cake was eaten, congratulations and compliments flowed.


I sent Brendon out to quickly feed the cows before any further accident could happen but Shea was keen.

Brendon: Ugh, I can’t feed it!
Shea: Oh, more cake! Delicious!
Watcher: Opps.

Talking about cake, more was needed, isn’t that always the way!

Kori: Oh wow! This is divine Jax!
Jax: Oh, it’s just a little something something I whipped up.


Brendon: You ok Shea?
Shea: Umm, no.. I’m not sure…

Brendon took Shea’s uncomfortable mood as the perfect opportunity to give Shea a hug.

Brendon: Aww, you’ll be right.
Shea: *sniff* Thanks.


Jax: *cough* You ok Shea? Enjoying your meal?
Brendon: *mumble* Hmm mm. *Blush*
Shea: Yes, thank you Mr O’Connell.

Afterwards Dane and Kourtney discussed how well the party had gone.


And Eric and Jax chewed the fat late into the night as only good friends can do.


Kourtney even felt strong enough to paint for a while as she chatted to Brendon who was writing his 7th book.

Kourtney: That was a lovely party dear.
Brendon: Yeah, it was. Shea looked nice don’t ya think mom?
Kourtney: She looked very nice dear. The two of you are very well suited.
Brendon: So, you like her?
Kourtney: Most definitely.
Brendon: *Grin* Cool.
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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #70 on: March 24, 2018, 12:06:53 PM »
*sad* I hate this part. My heart is breaking for Jax and she hasn't even gone yet. *sniffs*

But Shea is a lovely girl. How much older is she that Brendon?

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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #71 on: March 24, 2018, 07:01:06 PM »
Aw, Brendon is so smitten! He's adorable. Nice to know that Mom approves, too. :)
That cowplant painting creeps me out every time I see it. Somehow, it's always a masterpiece when my sims paint it, though, so I have to frame it and hang it up somewhere. *shudder*
Loved the sweet moments between Jax and Kourtney. It's nice they have some time to take a break and be together.

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Chpt 13: Unlucky For Some
« Reply #72 on: March 24, 2018, 09:31:42 PM »

Watcher: Morning Jax
Jax: Morning.
Watcher: Kourtney not awake yet?
Jax: She is, she’ll be down soon


Watcher: Nice swim?
Maverick: Yep, best way to wake up I reckon.
Watcher: I concur.


Watcher: Oh, you look stunning!
Maia: Exactly what a woman my age wants to hear!
Watcher: lol
Maia: The water’s lovely.

A peculiar noise came from the art room.

Kourtney: Just so tired. I think it’s time watcher.
Watcher: Oh no, no Kourtney!


Grim: I see this is a founder’s wife.
Watcher: *sob* Yes.
Grim: Hmm, Kourtney, yes, I see her here on my Special List.

Everyone was heartbroken.


As Grim reaped Kourtney’s gentle soul Cali got right in the way. I didn’t have the heart to tell her off.

Grim: Err, excuse me please.

An inconsolable family.



Grim: My sincere condolences Jaxon. I’m extremely sorry.
Jax: *Numb* Thank you.


Jax looked over to Kourtney easel, where his wife had spent so many years cheerfully painting and creating. Now the corner was empty, and her easel stood bare.


Jax knew he was going to have to pull himself together for Brendon’s sake. It’s never easy losing a parent but being a teenager and losing a parent makes it all ten times worse. He had to tell Bren the things Kourtney had charged him with, special messages that she knew her youngest son would need to hear. But Jax needed a moment to sit, to try to breath because for some reason he’d forgotten how to do that.


Brendon called Shea to tell her the dreadful news. It helped ease his sorrow a little.


But not enough. He hid in his childhood room and sobbed his heart out.

Jaxon found him some time later under the tree where Kourtney had loved to sit in the afternoon sunshine.



Jax: Oh son, come here.


Jax gently told Brendon about the unique gift his mother has specifically left for him.


Brendon: I don’t want to be happy, I don’t want to ever forget Mom.
Jax: It’s not about forgetting your mom, it’s about remembering. And this is what she wanted for you, the very last thing she left for you as she knew you’d need it. So, drink up my son and remember your mom with happiness.


And with that Brendon took the drink and a large heart shape cloud appeared. That’s when Brendon realized that love really is transcendent and whatever the future holds, he’ll be ready.


Father and son hugged each other tightly. Their relationship had changed, had deepened and would sustain each through this most difficult time and into the future, whatever that may bring.


The three who loved her the most remained together remembering her with love.


Good bye dear Kourtney, you gave so much to ensure this story would be a success.



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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #73 on: March 24, 2018, 09:36:07 PM »
 :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(

Poor Jaxon and Brendon. That's all I can say on that.

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Re: Jax's Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #74 on: March 24, 2018, 09:51:47 PM »
Yep, never fun losing the Founders spouse. I think Shea is about 6 days older than Brendon if she spawned in the day he was at the park. She is housed so maybe she is older but I guess I'll find out if she becomes his wife etc.
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