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The Henderson Legacy
« on: December 15, 2010, 05:50:44 PM »
Hi everyone! This is my first try at making my legacy into a Sim Story. So, forgive me if it's terrible at first! I wanted to add another element to my "simming" experience so here I am. :)

Meet Daniel Henderson. He's a Genius, Great Kisser, Neat, Schmoozer and Workaholic.

His parents kicked him out a few days ago and gave him the family piece of land in Summer Court. Left him with 1,000 simoleons and went off to their Estate in Egypt.

Daniel was used to people leaving him throughout his life,  and most of his friends left because they were jealous (it's hard being gorgeous and a great kisser sometimes). And to top it all off no one believed he was really a genius and could do almost anything he put his mind too! So, he made his goal in life to become a World Renowned Surgeon to prove them all wrong.


Daniel: "Hmmm, I think today I am going to go start a job at the hospital and learn how to play chess"

A few Hours later....


Daniel: " It's a little more challenging than I thought, especially by myself but I think I'm getting the hang of it!"

After a couple games and raising his logic level several points his spots his new boss Geoffrey Landgraab.


Daniel: "Hello Sir! It's so nice to meet you I am so thrilled to be working in such a great hospital such as yours"
Geoffrey: "Well son, if you show potential tomorrow I might promote you to a bed pan cleaner!"
Daniel: " Thank you! I will do my best"
Geoffrey: " Alright, well I've got to head on home or else my wife will have my head on the chopping block for keeping Malcolm out too late."

The Next morning...


Daniel: " Yum! I love Cereal..but I can't wait to have enough money to buy myself a stove and maybe something else to sit on besides a toilet. It's a little gross, even if I cleaned it earlier."


Okay guys! Now it's your turn to tell me how I did and if you want to give me advice on how to improve please feel free!






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Re: The Henderson Legacy
« Reply #1 on: December 15, 2010, 06:10:19 PM »
Your doing great! So long as you enjoy writing your story and playing your game then its all good. I look forward to reading more.

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Re: The Henderson Legacy
« Reply #2 on: December 15, 2010, 08:32:24 PM »
I think that's a good start too. Are you going to get married soon or wait until he goes further in his career? Chances are, once he becomes a real doctor, he will get called back so often that he doesn't really have time to socialize ):


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Re: The Henderson Legacy
« Reply #3 on: December 15, 2010, 08:37:39 PM »
Great start!  I'm wondering if you plan to hook him up with Jamie Jolina, since she's also in the medical career and a popular founder spouse?

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« Reply #4 on: December 15, 2010, 11:14:20 PM »
AWESOME!!!

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Re: The Henderson Legacy
« Reply #5 on: December 15, 2010, 11:42:30 PM »
Your doing great! So long as you enjoy writing your story and playing your game then its all good. I look forward to reading more.

Rachel
Thanks! I actually do enjoy it! I find myself playing and thinking of what I can say or do next when I am actually writing this story on here :)

I think that's a good start too. Are you going to get married soon or wait until he goes further in his career? Chances are, once he becomes a real doctor, he will get called back so often that he doesn't really have time to socialize ):



Marriage is in the works for the next segment ;)

Great start!  I'm wondering if you plan to hook him up with Jamie Jolina, since she's also in the medical career and a popular founder spouse?

You'll just have to wait and see!

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« Reply #6 on: December 16, 2010, 12:23:16 AM »
Meanwhile several days have passed and Daniel has gone from a lowly Organ donor to a Bed pan cleaner. He has met all sorts of co-workers including the infamous Jamie Jolina.

Daniel seemed to have interest in Jamie from the start, they seemed to both have the same goal in mind: To prove to the world you can be both intelligent and good looking. So he gave her a call.

Daniel: "Heyy Jamie..I was wondering if you'd like to come over today?"
Jamie: " Um NO! Just because we are best friends doesn't mean you can call me the second you get off work to hang out."
Daniel: " Well, I just thought you'd want too."
Jamie: " You thought wrong, I'm not interested right now. bye."
 
Daniel was beyond hurt by how Jamie was treating him. After all he thought they had a great friendship going, and he thought possibly it could lead to something else. So he mustered up the courage to go confront Jamie at her house to see exactly what was going on.
Little did he know something else was going down in the Jolina household.

He opens the door to find Thornton Wolff! His mind goes crazy trying to figure out what had just taken place and why on earth his coworker Morgana's husband would be at Jamie's house.


Thornton: " Jamie, what is he doing here? I thought we were supposed to be alone tonight?"
Jamie: " I don't know he just popped up in here like a stalker!  Daniel, what are you doing here anyways?"
Daniel: " Um...I...uhhh I just wanted to apologize for bothering you earlier.."
Thornton: " Well buddy you ARE bothering her so I suggest you take you and your pink scrubs out of here!"
Daniel: " Jamie..Could we possibly talk in private for a second?"
Jamie: " If we must..Lets go to the bathroom."

Daniel eventually explains his life story to Jamie. Jamie seemed to calm down a bit and began to understand why he wanted to hang out so much.
 
Daniel: " And there you have it, my parent's left me to rendezvous in Egypt and left me here all alone."
Jamie: " Aww you poor thing! I know what it feels like. I don't even know who my parents are!"
Daniel: "Wow, we have more things in common then I thought Jamie, you know I'd like to get to know you a little bit better..but I thought you were single..?"
Jamie: " I am single, Thornton and I are just friends now, he just gets a little possessive and gets back into the "relationship mode" again whenever a new guy comes around. He feels threaten for some odd reason."
Daniel: " So..do you think you can get him to leave and I can sleep over?"
Jamie: " Of course! I'm sure he's left by now anyways."

And as Jamie predicted, Thornton did leave her house before they went back into the living room.
Daniel and Jamie had a great night of making autumn salad and talking on the couch about how much they had in common.
By the morning time they were ready to move their relationship to the next level.


Jamie: "Oh, Daniel.. You by far are the manliest man I have ever met!"
Daniel: " Well you're pretty smokin' if I do say myself."
Jamie: *giggles*

By night fall they went from a steady relationship to fiances!

Daniel: " Jamie..ever since I met you that fateful day in the break room, I knew you were the one for me. Even when you treated me like crap I knew that someday I would break through your shell and see the beautiful pearl of a woman that you are. So I have one question to ask you.. Will you marry me?"
Jamie: "Of course I will!!!!!"

Next Episode will be the Big wedding day! So stay tuned!(which probably won't happen till Friday cause I am booked solid tomorrow with tons of stuff to do! :( )

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I just wanted to say I love how encouraging everyone is here on this forum! You guys are great.




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Re: The Henderson Legacy
« Reply #7 on: December 16, 2010, 12:43:42 AM »
Great work so far - I love it!
And that's so funny that you caught Jamie and Thornton together alone. I've never been able to catch them together, although I know it's implied that they are.

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« Reply #8 on: December 16, 2010, 04:12:53 AM »
I bet they have some beautiful babies. Jamie and Daniel that is not Thornton and Jamie. Although Thornton has got some pretty good genes too.

I am looking forward to seeing wedding pictures.

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« Reply #9 on: December 16, 2010, 04:23:52 AM »
I enjoyed reading this.  Well done.  :)
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Re: The Henderson Legacy
« Reply #10 on: December 16, 2010, 06:16:49 AM »
Haha, I love the death glare Thornton is shooting Daniel there.

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« Reply #11 on: December 17, 2010, 12:52:11 PM »
Here's the new Henderson House!



This is what I spend most of my morning doing..so I didn't get much further in the lives of the Hendersons aside from the wedding ;)

Hookay so Back to the Story!

"Going to the Chapel and we're..gonna get maaarrried.."

Well, actually they just stayed at their house because the Chapel was way to expensive and they spent most of their funds on their new house!

So, Jamie planned the whole wedding all by herself in one day. She had a very rushed morning having to pick up the wedding cake, and setting up the buffet table and getting the caterers to actually come on time before the wedding began!
She finally had some time to herself and decided to read her new favorite book: "Magnetic Attraction" to calm down.

Isn't she gorgeous!?

Soon the guests arrived and it was time for the wedding vows!

(I love her dorky smile right there..haha)
Daniel: " I promise to love you forever!"
Jamie: "Me too!"

Then a loud voice declared they were married and said " You May Now Kiss The Bride!"
All the guests cheered except for Thornton Wolff who absolutely hated the fact his ex-lover was getting married to some punk with a pretty face. He literally tried to gag himself into passing out so he could get Jamie to notice him. But to no avail her gaze was upon her new husband and she never noticed Thornton trying to be dramatic.

Here's the Guest List:
Pauline Wan
Madison VanWatson
Monika Morrison
Thornton Wolff
Morgana Wolff
Geoffery Landgraab

Wooo Party Time!

The guests had so much fun dancing and the new couple enjoyed the moment of casting their cares away on the dance floor.

Soon their favorite song came on and they started to break out into a duet to each other. (Can any one guess the song?)

Daniel: "Never knew I could feel like this..Like I've never seen the sky before..."
Jamie: "Seasons may change, winter to spring..But I love you..
Both: "Until the end of timeeeee..."

Time to cut the cake!

Jamie: "This cake better be good! I paid 1,000 simoleons for it!"
Daniel: " I'm sure it is..gimme a hug and lets go on our honey mooon!



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« Reply #12 on: December 17, 2010, 03:16:38 PM »
Enjoyable read!
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« Reply #13 on: December 17, 2010, 03:55:27 PM »
Lol. I'm sure Thornton wasn't very happy. And depending on Jamie's morals or lack thereof, he may not be out of the running ;) I'm sure Morgana is glad though!

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« Reply #14 on: December 17, 2010, 08:03:32 PM »
Congrats! This legacy is really good, it's a nice break from all the Dynasties I've been reading. :)
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