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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 2 October Update
« Reply #75 on: October 09, 2017, 01:39:40 AM »

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Lilith walked into Dina’s room and paused for a moment as she watched her sleep

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It was like she wanted the carefree life that Dina was living to continue forever.. but time was short, she was only free to speak for a limited time

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“Dina.. Dina..” Dina didn’t move to Lilith’s quiet voice. Lilith sighed and then took a deep breath “DINA!”

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This last call woke her up with a start, Lilith gave her a moment to awaken

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“What is going on? Is the baby ok?” Dina looked at Lilith in confusion

“Yes Dina, all is ok with your son. But I must speak with you now” Lilith leaned in with urgency

“Lilith, I don’t understand? Why did you wake me?” Dina asked her with some annoyance

“There are some things that I have to tell you and I only have a short time.. a very short time” Lilith looked at Dina pleading  “Please.. there is so much to say, I know that you will have questions, but you need to hear me out first.. please Dina” Lilith leaned in closer to her

Dina eventually nodded her head in approval, although reluctantly

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“There is so much I want to say.. and I will need to start at the beginning.. Caleb is not my brother.. He is my Father” She had only just managed to finish the last syllable before Dina stood up and started to ask questions

“Dina! Please!!! I swear I will answer everything.. but you need to let me finish this!” Lilith implored her

She could see how many emotions were running through Dina’s mind and waited as patiently as she could for Dina to agree

“I will hear you out Lilith, but you better explain everything! And where is Caleb?? Why isn’t he telling me this?” Dina started to rise again and head towards the nursery

“You need to trust me now and sit down” Lilith’s tone had changed from pleading to warning, there must have been something in her voice that made Dina pause and turn back to her

“You have 10 minutes Lilith” Dina responded

“Actually Dina, I have 30 minutes and I mean to use every single second. So please, let me continue” Lilith stared at Dina until she received a hesitant nod

“I was born in the 1800’s, my Father was a man of many means and had an appeal to him that people were drawn to”

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“I remember looking at him when I was a child with such wonder and love” Lilith continued

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“He had such love and compassion, always smiling and always ready to show his love”

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“I hold onto those memories too hard now I think” Lilith stared in the mirror with distain

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“But I wasn’t alone in my childhood.. I was a twin you see. Not identical, I looked more like my Mother and Victoria, my sister, looked more like our Father” At this Lilith smiled

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“There were other differences as well, I seemed to be fluid, steady, reliable.. Victoria was clumsy,  distruptive, funny”

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“She used to think that this caused our Father distress, but all I could ever see was pride”

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“It often felt like I was never quite alone with Caleb, Victoria was always around.  He loved it, not only the sibling competition, but Victoria was his favourite and having her near him always made him smile”

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Lilith was so caught up in her story she was not noticing the effect of her words on Dina

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“The way he would spend time with her was always so different to how he would spend time with me” Lilith was wistful for a moment

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“I never felt jealous of her or her relationship with Caleb, she was such a wonderful child and sister, you couldn’t help but want the best for her and want to please her”

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Lilith then paused.. “This will be difficult for me, so give me a second” Lilith looked to her lap for a moment, took a deep breath and looked up towards the ceiling “I don’t often get to talk about my Mother.. or even allow myself to think of her, but when I do all the emotions of loss and love come rushing back.. you see, my Mother was Human”

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“Her name was Margaret. She and Caleb were very much in love”

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“Extremely devoted to each other and to us girls, we would often catch them together and giggle”

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It was then that Lilith seemed to remember that she was talking with Caleb’s current wife, and with some guilt she looked at Dina to see if she was OK

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“Continue Lilith.. please” Dina said with steel in her voice

Lilith had the grace to feel guilty about letting her story get too far away from the reason of telling it.. So she allowed herself one more indulgent image to flash through her mind before she continued

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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 9 October Update
« Reply #76 on: October 09, 2017, 04:13:03 AM »
Haha, every time I think I'm going to get some answers, I always end up with more questions.

Love the turn your story has taken. :D



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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 9 October Update
« Reply #77 on: October 09, 2017, 05:21:53 AM »
@oshizu  - Sorry!!! I swear that you will get the answers that you need by the end.. I hope! I'm pleased you like the turn, I wasn't sure how people would feel about it!  ;D

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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 9 October Update
« Reply #78 on: October 13, 2017, 04:25:34 PM »
Wow! Now I know what you meant by cliffhanger! And they just keep coming! I'm enthralled and I can't wait for more. As sorry as I am for Dina, I'm a little jealous she gets all of her answers in 30 minutes and I have to wait for the next update! :)

Margaret is stunning! I'm excited to learn more about her.

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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 9 October Update
« Reply #79 on: October 15, 2017, 10:18:25 AM »
Well... That was a twist I didn't see coming! But, if you tell us that Caleb is trying to "reincarnate" his beloved daughter (yeah, I've noticed the past tense) with a child by Dina, I might have to kick his ass!!!
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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 9 October Update
« Reply #80 on: October 26, 2017, 10:22:09 PM »
Hi Guys! I am soooo sorry I haven't posted! I've been away and only just got back and been spending the last week with my beautiful little girl who missed me not nearly as much as I missed her! hahaha.. I promise I will update in the next few days.  :)

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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 9 October Update
« Reply #81 on: October 27, 2017, 01:37:24 AM »
There's never any need to apologize, KTK10!
We're here. We're looking forward to reading whatever you've written whenever you are ready.  :)



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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 9 October Update
« Reply #82 on: October 29, 2017, 01:57:14 AM »
Yup, we'll still be here no matter how long you take. We're in it for the long haul
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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 9 October Update
« Reply #83 on: October 29, 2017, 10:46:57 AM »
OMG guys.. you seriously are the most amazing people.. thank you so much for your support!.. so I hope this next update is worth the wait!

“We were such good friends, Victoria always  managed to make me smile” Lilith continued slowly

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“We had a bond that was deeper than just sisters.. “ Lilith started shaking her head “Although I have never had another sister, so I am sure that my statement is a rather limited opinion”

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“My goofy sister enjoyed entertaining everyone, especially me”

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“Our evening gatherings were filled with learning, laughing and love.. the three L’s it was often referred to as”

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“Until one afternoon.. everything started to change.. and it was all caused from a simple observation from my Mother” Lilith looked slowly at Dina to see if she was taking too long with her explanation, but this was Lilith’s life story, a story that she has never been permitted to speak about before. “She mentioned to Father that it was so odd how Victoria was so clumsy and awkward, but I was so fluid and graceful, how funny for twins to be so different”

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“She also commented on the fact that anything that Caleb asked ME to do, I did without hesitation and immediately,  however, Victoria was sometimes reluctant and often found ways to be distracted rather than do the chores that were requested” Lilith continued

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“This made Caleb do the one thing that changed our lives forever. He began to experiment..” Lilith gave a small laugh, not in mirth but in anger “He started by suggesting to Victoria that he race her to the fishing hole”

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“And bless my beautiful sister, she ran as fast as she could”

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“She was so proud of herself when she arrived and was very excited to see what our Father had planned”

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“I am unable to tell you what happened, or if anything happened at all.. But I do know that Mother and I were too busy talking and laughing to know that our lives were about to change so dramatically”

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“This is so much information Lilith” Dina interrupted “and I can see that it is something you haven’t spoken about for a very long time, but I don’t know what this has to do with Caleb and me now?” Dina looked at Lilith with a little impatience

“I need you to hold on just a little longer please Dina, you need to understand the entire story of my life, Caleb’s life and your future with this family”

“What are you saying Lilith?” Dina asked with a little bit of fear

“I’m saying, you need to listen, this will be the only chance you get to know and understand who Caleb Vatore really is”

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Lilith took a another deep breath and continued “I believe my Mother was aware of a difference, I would often catch her looking off into the distance”

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“But my Father was never obvious with his intentions..  I guess I can only say that now.. at the time however, I just thought everything was normal.. but just a little different”

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“I didn’t think anyone noticed the slight shift in our family get together’s until Victoria grabbed me one day and asked me what was wrong with Father.. it was the most serious I had ever seen her”

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“Mother and I tried to ignore our feelings, but there was just this knowledge.. that there was something fundamentally different… but we just kept ignoring it”

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“If I had known that Mum only had a few short years left with us.. “ Lilith stopped for a few seconds

“It’s ok Lilith.. continue” Dina lent over and touched Lilith’s hand in support

“.. I just keeping seeing her smile.. her incredible smile..”

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“I would have stopped him.. I would have stopped him dead” Lilith turned to Dina with a look of steel

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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 29 October Update
« Reply #84 on: October 29, 2017, 01:07:51 PM »
*big shocked googlie eyes*

Holy Muffins!!!

MOARRRRRRRRRRR! Please, and thank you
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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 29 October Update
« Reply #85 on: October 29, 2017, 01:25:48 PM »
@Magpie2012 - Thank you!! You made me giggle!! There is a few more surprises coming... so hold onto your hat!!  ;D ;D

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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 29 October Update
« Reply #86 on: October 29, 2017, 01:30:49 PM »
Glad I could help ;-D If I was wearing a hat, it would be pulled down around my ears and strapped on tight! Can't wait for the next cliff-hanger!!!
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Don't believe all the quotes that have been attributed to me. *Albert Einstein*

I can't ignore ALL of the voices in my head - Some of them actually make sense! *Blayzen*

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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 29 October Update
« Reply #87 on: October 29, 2017, 04:47:02 PM »
*practically slips off the cliff but am still hanging on!!!

Yes, we are looking forward VERY eagerly to what comes next!  :D

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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 29 October Update
« Reply #88 on: October 30, 2017, 01:17:27 AM »
@oshizu - hahaha!! Glad you are still hanging on!!  ;D A few more updates coming soon!

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Re: Her Lasting Legacy- 29 October Update
« Reply #89 on: November 15, 2017, 06:13:24 PM »
I've only just started to read but just had to pop forward in time to say...wow! I'm hooked!
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