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« Reply #30 on: November 21, 2016, 05:28:34 AM »
Hey Magz I can't believe you didn't cite your Dr Who reference.  You're usually so good with crediting other sources.  I'm giving you an A- for this update.  Nevertheless, I've enjoyed reading Gobias' backstory and can't wait for the real deal now that he's found Charity again.

Wow BB - you're a hard marker!  I'm glad you weren't Principal at my school!  I have edited the post to credit the Dr Who reference.
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« Reply #31 on: November 30, 2016, 11:23:41 PM »
Wow, what a really magnificent story @Magz from Oz !!!

I loved the snowy screenshots of your prologue. After reading through to the karmic reunion of Gobbi and Charity last night, I re-read Chapter 1 again just now and everything made so much more sense than during my first read.

Your screenshots are great, your dialogue so realistic, and the narrative premise has snagged me hook, line, and sinker. *bookmarks
Looking forward eagerly to your next update!

P.S. How did NaNoWriMo go for you? I've always wanted to try it someday!



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« Reply #32 on: December 01, 2016, 08:53:30 PM »
Thanks @oshizu.  I'm glad you are enjoying this story. 

NaNoWriMo didn't go as well for me this year.  I had been ill most of the time and lost my mojo for my story.  I'll try again next year.
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« Reply #33 on: December 01, 2016, 09:02:22 PM »
Chapter 8 – New Beginnings

I had used the voice and accent she knew well, hoping to see her usual smile.  I calmly watched her reactions but those gorgeous blue eyes failed to register one flick of recognition and I was not rewarded with her dazzling smile.  Since I had just reset my age to a Young Adult, I wasn’t initially concerned that she’d failed to recognise me. 

What did bother me was the complete lack of joy in those eyes that, years ago, had so bewitched me.  Her eyes seemed vacant and lifeless in her beautiful face.  The anger that she’d displayed in destroying the snowman had burned out turning her eyes into deep pools of dark blue, unreadable but calm, and so very unlike her.  She looked at me curiously and walked away.  I stood and watched her walk a short distance before she stopped and looked back at me.  She was clearly thinking things through.  She turned back and approached me.

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“Do you know who I am?” she asked in a voice an octave too high for her natural voice.  She was obviously anxious.  I wanted to calm her down and reassure her.

“Yes.”

“What is my name?”  Her question worried me.  Something was wrong here... very wrong.

“Your name is Charity Kalamia.”  I’d purposely left off the Kyrios part.  She didn’t need reminding of that monster she’d married if she’d forgotten him. 

“Is that a nice name?” she asked innocently.

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“It’s a lovely name because it’s just perfect for you.”  I replied smiling as I recalled how perfectly her first name framed her personality.  Again, she didn’t return my smile.

“Where am I?”

“This is Sunset Valley.”

“What is Sunset Valley?”

“A little town on the west coast.”

“Are my parents here?” she asked in a trembling girlish voice.

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“No I don’t think so.”  I hesitated.  I had a bad feeling about this.  I was going to tell her about her younger sister being here in Sunset Valley but inexplicably that seemed unwise.  I could feel rather than hear Keith’s voice echoing a caution inside my head.  The hairs on the back of my neck were standing on end and my upper torso was covered in goose bumps.  Something was definitely not right.

This was not the Charity I’d loved.  Gone was the vivacity, the warmth of heart and the smile that danced perpetually on her lips and in her eyes.  This was more like the Charity who had been left behind after Myles departed Moonlight Falls.  Then, Charity had been heartrendingly unhappy.  This time her spirit wasn’t simply broken, it was absent!  This seemed more like the empty shell of the Sim I loved.  It was as if her memory had been wiped clean, a blank page waiting for life’s experiences to write new memories.

I’d met a few ghosts who’d been resurrected in my time but none of them had lost total recall of their previous lives.  Someone or something had gone to the trouble of resurrecting Charity and erased her memory of her past life.  I wasn’t aware of any force that could do that.

“Who are you?” she asked.  Her voice seemed more positive now but it was not yet her natural voice.

“My name is Gobias Koffi.”  I felt it unwise to remind her of Elias Stavros, despite our long friendship.  If she didn’t remember who she was, she wouldn’t remember Elias.

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“Hello Gobias,” she said with more warmth in her voice.

She obviously had some sort of amnesia.  While this was indeed troubling, it was also informative.  Charity hadn’t loved me before.  She had considered me an honorary uncle.  While I’d waited in vain for her to turn those blue eyes in my direction, she’d sought romance elsewhere.  I’d left it too late and she had been manipulated by that scoundrel Myles with a wizard’s love charm, ensuring that she believed that she was genuinely in love with him.  But it hadn’t been true love on either side and had burned itself out.  Was there now a chance that I could coax a different ending to my story of unrequited love?

Did I have the right to turn my tragedy into a happy ending?  I had no immediate answers to my moral dilemma.  Did I have the capability?  Did I have the nerve?  Did I have the time?  What if the time vortex sucked me away at an inconvenient time?  I’d already lost my children to the time vortex.  I couldn’t bear it if I lost Charity to it as well.  I wish I’d had someone wise who could advise me on what I should do. 

I reached down into my inner psyche and remembered my methods for dealing with the time vortex:  to take one small step at a time.  I would never get anywhere standing still or sitting on the fence.  Play nice, be kind and don’t say anything untoward or make any unpredictable moves.

And maybe this time I would not wait for her to make the first move.  Maybe this time I would be the author of my fate.  But this time I was in new territory.  I’d never dealt with someone with amnesia.  I didn’t understand why she had no memory or who resurrected her.  Until I knew more answers than I had questions, perhaps I really should just take it one step at a time and see where it leads.

The snow clouds had gathering overhead now completely blocking out the winter sun.  I wondered if the return of bad weather was a portent of things to come.

“It’s snowing,” she said looking skyward.

“So it is,” I replied and thoughtlessly I added.  “Do you want to build a snowman?”  I wish I hadn’t said the words given that she’d just been angry enough to destroy one.

“I’d love to,” she replied with genuine delight.

Since I initiated this, I decided I’d better make the most of it.  I didn’t know what to talk to her about.  I hope she would begin chatting as she used to but she didn’t say a word.  She focused on building the snowman.

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I remembered a book of hers that I still have and I mentioned that.  She stopped for a moment and looked at me.  “I don’t remember that book.  Tell me about the story.”  Telling the abridged version of story lasted until we’d finished the snowman.  Thank goodness we’d created a classical snowman.  I feared what might happen if we’d built a grim reaper snowman.  Not that I’d ever built one before but perhaps she had built the one I’d seen her destroy. 

Night was falling fast.  I would not dream of leaving her here.  But I didn’t know what I should do next?  I had originally planned to see my father at midnight then catch the red-eye flight to Appaloosa Plains. 

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Charity looked up at the moon which now shone brightly on the gleaming snow.  “I love the moonlight,” she said, her voice now sounded wistful and not quite as childish as it had earlier.  Just then an eerie light, not unlike Moonlight Falls flooded the landscape.  Charity never looked lovelier but the eerie light made me feel very uneasy.  I wanted to leave immediately.

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“Do you have a place to stay tonight?” I asked knowing full well that she didn’t. 

“Can’t we stay here?” she asked.

“There’s nowhere to sleep.”

“I’m afraid to go to sleep.  Can I go home with you?”  If she stayed at my house, the entire population of Sunset Valley would know within minutes.  Nothing much escaped the eyes and ears of this community, especially with the St Clair family who now lived next door.  Neither Rosalie nor Lucy missed much, especially Lucy.  Then it would get back to Faith that I had a pink winged fairy living in my house.  Somehow I knew intuitively that that must not happen, at least, just yet.

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“I was about to leave Sunset Valley to go to Appaloosa Plains,” I said.

“Can I come too?” she asked with more like her old voice when she wanted to cajole me into something.

“Of course you can come too.”  I replied.  Relief flooded through me.  She felt secure enough in my presence to want to stay with me.

It’s a start.  It’s not much but it’s more than I could ever hope for.  Perhaps Appaloosa Plains would be a new beginning for both of us.  This time I am younger.  Perhaps this time, she won’t regard me as her honorary uncle but as a Sim worthy of her love.

I decided right there and then that I would not manipulate her in any way to make her fall in love with me.  I had been outraged when Myles had used a love charm.  Surely a love that was not freely given cannot be acceptable?  Her forced marriage had fallen apart rather quickly, just as her father, Leonidas, had predicted.

I would not want the kind of relationship where one dominated the other.  I wanted a partner who felt we were equal and wanted us to go through our lives together side by side.  I can help her to be the Sim she wants to be.  Charity and I were always the best of friends.  I can guide her and support her and, yes, hope.  I could send her love letters and gifts.  Possibly in time, she may come to appreciate me and love me differently.  Perhaps that is my real destiny... to be a loyal and supportive friend.  I think I could live with that.  Maybe...

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Charity waited outside the graveyard for me to say my goodbyes to my father.  I told him I was going to Appaloosa Plains with a friend.  I asked if he wanted me to take his tombstone there to rest forever beside my mother.  He declined.  I found the rejection of my offer curious.  I’d thought he’d loved my mother.  He quickly said he had made many friends in the Pleasant Rest Graveyard.  He said he was happy enough where he was.  Somewhat mollified, I said goodbye knowing it was unlikely that I would ever see him again.

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The journey to Appaloosa Plains was an easy flight.  In order to get Charity a seat beside me, I upgraded to first class.  It was well worth it.  We landed in Appaloosa Plains on a dull winter’s morning and took a taxi into the central business district. 

As far as I could see, Appaloosa Plains had not changed much.  The town was probably a little less dilapidated than I remembered and there were more businesses and commercial lots than the town had in my memories.  We went first to my dad’s old store.  Nothing had changed there, not even the furniture.  We went in to order breakfast.  It was not much warmer inside the cafe.  Charity asked if we could have tea on the terrace.  She whispered to me that she felt uneasy being indoors.  I ordered tea as well and we went out to the terrace and the snow.

I’d never known Charity to drink tea before.  I wondered if she had acquired the habit while she had been in England on her honeymoon.  I knew I couldn’t ask because with her amnesia, she probably didn’t know and the last thing I wanted to do was remind her of her ex-husband.

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When our tea was served, the waiter didn’t even brush the snow off the table.  I wondered about Charity not wanting to be inside.  In addition to her memory loss, had she developed claustrophobia?  I needed to know what was wrong in order to go forward.  I speculated many things as Charity poured the tea like she was chatelaine of a stately English mansion.

As we sipped our tea Charity asked my advice on how to deal with her loss of memory around other Sims.

I thought for a minute before I replied.  “I’ve found that the best option in all circumstances is be courteous and respectful.  If you’re being gracious and charming, most decent Sims don’t want to be seen to be rude and call you to account for your memory lapse.  If they seem annoyed that you don’t remember them, just say, “Please forgive me, I’ve momentarily forgotten your name.” 

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I took a sip of tea.  It really was refreshing.  “What if they ask me about myself?” she asked.

“Side step it, then ask them all sorts of questions about their opinion on anything from books to arts to food.  If you don’t know how to respond, no matter what they say, your response should be “How interesting”, especially if they say something controversial.  Most Sims want to believe their opinions are unique and insightful.”

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“How interesting,” Charity replied her lips twitching mischievously.  I laughed for the first time in what seemed like forever.  I saw her eyes alive with merriment and felt relieved that some part of the old Charity was still there.  Our tea cups empty I knew we should leave.  But as she smiled at me, my heart literally skipped a beat.  As if on cue, the snow stopped and the pale wintry sun began to shine through.  Charity rarely looked lovelier than at that moment.  I wanted to blurt out then and there that I loved her.  But my moment of declaration was halted by the arrival of an elderly man.

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“Hi Cassie,” the elderly man said smoothly to Charity, “Who’s your friend?”

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« Reply #34 on: December 01, 2016, 09:28:06 PM »
Great update!  Poor Charity has been through so much.  She must feel so confused and frustrated.  I'm so curious about where this is going.  Looking forward to the next update!

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« Reply #35 on: December 01, 2016, 11:19:21 PM »
Gah, things seemed to have been falling into place for Gobias. Not perfect, but easier, more comfortable, trusting.

Then my self-complacent bubble is burst with the entrance of the old man. Who the heck is Cassie!?
What is happening? So many questions!!!!
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« Reply #36 on: December 13, 2016, 12:24:07 AM »
Chapter 9 – A Curley Situation

Charity jumped to her feet and greeted the old man.  Her voice trembled only slightly as she said graciously, “I’m sorry, you must have me confused with someone else.  My name is Charity and this is my friend, Gobias Koffi,” she pointed to me.  Charity was clearly puzzled.  She looked my way raising her eyebrow as if to ask why some stranger had called her Cassie.  I had no more of a clue of what was going on than she, but the look the older man gave me was equally disconcerting.  He had clearly recognised either me or my name.

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“How do you do Sir.  I am Gobias Koffi,” I said politely extending my hand.  He hesitated momentarily before he shook my hand in limp grip common to folk with severe arthritis.  The man examined my face intently.

“You can’t be Gaylord Koffi’s son, Gobias.  You’re far too young.  But I’ll bet the farm that you’re Gaylord’s grandson.  You got that Koffi look about you.”  His voice was loud but slow with the drawl I remembered from my youth.  The man eyed me uncertainly, but the edge I heard in his voice, was anxiety not hostility.  “I see it didn’t take you long to get here,” he continued.  “Them lawyers told me yesterday that they would put a notice in the newspapers.”

I hadn’t the slightest idea who the man was or why he thought I’d come as a result of a notice in the newspapers.  I decided to go along with his assumption that Gaylord Koffi was my grandfather.  Since I’d reset my age, I had planned to pass myself off as his grandson should anyone make the connection to the Koffi name while I was visiting Appaloosa Plains.  I wasn’t expecting this.

“Yes I am Gaylord Koffi’s grandson.  I’m Gobias Koffi Junior,” I said following my own advice and trying to be nice.  “I can assure you; I have not seen any notice in the newspapers.  I had been planning this trip to Appaloosa Plains for years.  Perhaps you would care to enlighten us as to your problem.”

My attention was fully on the man so I didn’t see an elderly woman approach us.  “Tate Curley I can hear you hollerin’ from across the ways.  What ya’ll standin’ around in the snow for.  Have you no sense at all?  Poor Cassie’ll freeze to death.  Unless you want the whole neighbourhood to hear our business, ya’ll best come inside so we can talk in private.”  The woman took Charity by the hand as though she were a child and guided her across the road towards a little house with an overgrown unkempt yard no amount of snow could disguise.  Seeing the old house brought back some memories.

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I vaguely remember a man called Curley.  Not Tate Curley, but Bill or Bob or something like that.  He was a contemporary of my parents.  My father had been a keen horseman and amateur jockey who regularly raced at the Equestrian Centre each Thursday.  Mr Curley would give me some Simoleons to buy popcorn while I watched my father race.  My mother would mind the store while dad and I went to the Equestrian Centre.  It was our weekly father and son treat.

Not quite knowing where this was heading, I followed the woman being very solicitous towards Charity.  From her familiarity with Tate, I guessed she was most likely to be Mrs Curley.  I was puzzled about the issue with Tate but I was more deeply concerned that Mrs Curley had also called Charity, Cassie.

Tate said to his wife, “This here’s Gobias Koffi’s son.”

The woman looked sideways at me.  “Are you Alva Koffi’s grandson?”

I nodded.  She stared at me assessing me closely.  She turned her attention back to her husband and said, “Told you didn’t I?  Them lawyers would find him.”  Without missing a beat, she turned back to me, “You gotta name son?”

“Gobias Koffi...um, Gobias Koffi Junior,” I replied.  I was prepared to pretend I was Gaylord’s grandson for the townies but if lawyers were involved, perhaps I should tell someone the truth... but not til I knew the lay of the land.

Mrs Curley turned back towards Charity as she opened the front door to a neat but tiny house that smelled of wet cat fur.  “You warm enough in that sweater, darlin’.  I can get you a warm blanket to wrap up in if you want one?”

“No thanks.  I’m fine Mrs...um...,” Charity replied, “Please forgive me, I’ve momentarily forgotten your name.”

“Not surprising, standin’ out in the snow like that.  With you being so sick an’ all.  I don’t know what the men were thinkin’, I sure don’t.  You always called me Miss Esme.  I kinda like that, it makes me feel younger,” she smiled kindly at Charity then turned to her husband.  “Tate, you best start a fire.  It’s gone cold in here.”

“I was fixin’ to Esme,” he said far more graciously than he’d been thus far.

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“Now darlin’ can I make you a cup of coffee or hot chocolate?” the woman asked Charity kindly.

“No thanks Miss Esme, I just drank two cups of tea,” replied Charity still obviously confused.  Esme Curley showed Charity to a sofa next to the fire that Tate had lit.  I sat beside Charity so Esme took the chair.  Tate sat at the dinner table and frowned.  I wondered if he was normally grumpy or that whatever issue he had with me, had made him bad tempered.

“So Gobias,” began Esme.  “I expect you’re here in Appaloosa Plains because of them advertisements the lawyers put in the newspapers.  I imagine you are wonderin’ why we was lookin’ for any issue of your grandmother, Alva Doris Koffi-Teeter-Gould-Curley?”

Now I was confused.  My mother, Alva Doris Koffi (as I knew her), had died when I was a child.  I couldn’t imagine why anybody would be looking for her children after all these years.

It was surprising how easily I slipped back into the patois of Appaloosa Plains.  “Actually, ma’m, I haven’t seen any advertisements from your lawyers.  As I said to your husband, I’d been planning this trip for some time.  I was not aware that anybody was looking for me.”

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“Do you have any brothers or sisters?” she asked.  Strictly speaking, no, I had no siblings.  But as I was trying to pass myself off as my son, I didn’t plan to mention Leon or Hope who really were Alva Doris Koffi’s grandchildren because I wanted to know what the problem was first.  Also I was very sure that no lawyer would ever find out they were the children of Gobias Rigby Koffi.

“No ma’m, I’m an only child.”  That at least was true.

“Pardon me for pryin’ but you don’t look much older than twenty,” Esme said inquiringly.  “Did Gobias marry late in life or somethin’?”

“Yes, he was an elder when he married Faith Baker.”  I used Faith’s new surname.  I didn’t want to startle Charity by admitting in front of those people that I’d married Faith Kalamia.  Kalamia is such an unusual name that I felt sure Charity would query the connection.  I don’t know how she’d feel about me withholding such important information from her, but it seemed critical that I shouldn’t reveal too much of myself at this stage of our relationship.

Esme looked across at her husband.  I turned around and Tate Curley looked at me uncertainly as if I hadn’t convinced him of some point in my story.  Heck I could drive an 18-wheeler through the holes in my story.  Esme said to me.  “Well you’re probably wonderin’ what this is all about.”

“Yes ma’m.  I sure do.”

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“Did you know your grandmother remarried after Darris Teeter died?  No you probably don’t.  Your father was only a small boy when he an’ Gaylord left Appaloosa Plains.  Anyways your grandmother married Kim Gould who owned the steakhouse.  Husband number three he was.  When he passed, Alva Gould, as she was called then, married Tate’s father.”  By this time I was more than a little confused.  I’d been told my mother was dead.  I had even been taken to a grave as a child and told by my father to say goodbye to my mother on the day we left Appaloosa Plains. 

“Are you saying my grandmother, born Alva Doris Rigby, married first Gaylord Koffi, then Darris Teeter, then Kim Gould and then Tate’s father?”

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“Are you certain?  I was told that Alva Koffi had died and that was why Gaylord and Gobias senior left Appaloosa Plains.”

“Well I know nuttin’ ‘bout why Gaylord and Gobias left but they left the day after Alva married Darris Teeter.  We are certain about that.  We got copies of all the certificates here if you want to see them?  We couldn’t find any records of Gobias senior ever marryin’ or havin’ children.”  That didn’t surprise me, neither could I, and I knew where to look.

“Was Tate born before Alva married his father?” I had to ask.

“Almost!   Alva married Billy-Bob Curley only five weeks afore she had Tate,” said Esme.  Oh my God! Tate was my half brother!

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Esme continued as my mind reeled taking in all this.  “Alva gave birth to Tate in the spring but by the fall she’d skedaddled to Lucky Palms an’ there she stayed.  Billy-Bob wouldn’t give her a divorce so she stayed Alva Curley til she passed.  That was nearly seven years ago.  She was one of them lounge singers in that big casino there, before the meteor strike, that was.  That didn’t kill her.  She died of old age.  When she died the only will the authorities in Lucky Palms could find was very old an’ out of date.  In that will she’d left everythin’ to her only son, Gobias Rigby Koffi.  But we know that your father was not her only child.  Tate contested the will, of course.  As the will didn’t talk ‘bout Tate at all, he had a rightful claim on her estate an’ he got half.”  I was stunned!  I had a brother!  I had family!  Suddenly my father’s desire to leave to Appaloosa Plains became obvious.  He had not been grieving my mother’s death but her defection.  That also explained why he did not want to return here when I offered him the choice.

“Okay,” I said.  “If I believe what you say is true.  Why were you looking for me?

“To pass on to Gobias his share of the inheritance,” said Tate.  “I have been looking after our mother’s estate but I wanted to find Gobias to hand over his share before I passed.  Where is your father?”

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“My father is dead,” I said truthfully.  “He rests in the Pleasant Rest Graveyard in Sunset Valley.”

“Sunset Valley?” queried Esme, “You two sure moved around a lot.  We was told you’d gone to Simfield.  When Tate an’ I went there, we was told you was headed for Twinbrook so we went there too.  We couldn’t find any trace of you there but the police officer said he’d keep a look out for people named Koffi.  Nice man he was.  I still got his card here.  I guess we better tell him we found you ourselves.”  We never went to Simfield or Twinbrook.  My memories are old and somewhat vague but I’m certain we flew straight from Appaloosa Plains to Sunset Valley.

“Did Alva have any more children?” I asked dazed at the story I’d just heard.

“Not that we could find,” replied Tate.  “Just Gobias an’ me.” 

“What properties are you concerned about?” I asked.

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Tate just stared at me as if I’d offended him so Esme answered, “The Kim Gould Steakhouse an’ the office space above it, the Darris Teeter Art Theatre an’ the Darris Teeter Grocery & The Koffi Cafe.”

“Don’t forget the house on Sweetapple Ridge Way,” reminded Tate.  I was taken aback.  We had lived on Sweetapple Ridge Way.  Were they talking about my childhood home?

“Well aparently, that house was never hers.  It always belonged to Gaylord but Alva had the legal right to use it until her death.  That house now belongs to Gobias Koffi senior.  As his only child, I guess that should pass to you too.”

Wow, I thought!  Alva Doris Koffi-Teeter-Gould-Curley sure got around.  She seemed to have acquired rich husbands with property.  Had her lifetime wish been a Gold-Digger?  If so marrying Billy Bob Curley didn’t net her anything except his name and another son.  I knew next to nothing about her it seemed.  Yet I always thought I’d remembered her fairly well. 

She was pretty and friendly.  She was a marvellous cook, an avid reader, technophobic and a total drama queen.  A career as a lounge singer probably suited her.  If I’d known she was still alive, I’d have visited her.  But perhaps I would not have mentioned that to my father.  I had been told Alva had died after a fall from a horse.  My mother did ride but not very well.  I never questioned my father’s version of events.  I never had any reason to.

“Well thank you Tate, for trying to find me and for looking after my father’s interests all these years.  But as I have no intention of acquiring property here in Appaloosa Plains, I’d like to see your lawyers and if it’s acceptable to you, to sign over my rights to any property to you, Tate.  You could parcel it out amongst your children if you don’t want it for yourself.”

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“Esme an’ me don’t have kids.”  Tate said shrugging his shoulders.  “An’ I’m too old to keep track of everythin’ now.  I been tryin’ to find your father for a long time.  Never thought to look in a cemetery.”

I don’t know why he didn’t consider that the obvious place to start.  Given that Gobias Koffi was older than Tate, who already thought he had one foot in the grave.  The cemetery records would have been one of the first places I’d look.  But then Tate didn’t have my years of police work and investigative skills to call on.  But notwithstanding that, he wouldn’t have found Gobias Koffi in any graveyard.  But he would have found Gaylord and that would have led him to me.

“I don’t want your share of the property, young Gobias.  I wanted you to have mine when Esme and I have passed,” said Tate.  “Them city slicker types keep callin’ on me hopin’ I’ll sell.  But as long as I draw breath, I ain’t sellin’ this land.  I kinda like the idea of stickin’ it to them by passin’ the place on to whatever kin I could find.”

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I didn’t know what to say to that.  I didn’t need my mother’s or Tate’s property.  I hadn’t planned to stay long in Appaloosa Plains.  It was just meant to be a quick visit to walk down memory lane.

Charity spoke up.  “When Gobias and I drove into town we saw parks for cats and dogs.  There is probably one for horses somewhere here too.  So why not turn the land into a park or garden or someplace nice where families with children can go?” suggested Charity thoughtfully.  She had sat beside me in silence all that time but had obviously taken in everything said.  I looked at her and noticed that she looked excited but just a little bit tired.  I’d been so wrapped up in Tate and Esme’s story that I momentarily forgotten about her wellbeing.

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“That’s a lovely suggestion Cassie,” said Esme hastily.  “Tate an’ I will think things through before we make up our minds.  In the meantime, Gobias, why don’t you go over to the house at Sweetapple Ridge Way an’ see if there’s anything there you want first.  I’d better give the Riffins a call.    I imagine that Cal Riffin is worried what’s happened to Cassie all this time.  Tate an’ I will drive Cassie home.  If you’re up to it, we’ll meet you at the lawyer’s office at noon to work this out?  How does that sound?”

Charity looked inquiringly at me and I shrugged my lack of understanding at her while Esme Curley whipped out her phone and dialled a number.  “Hi Cal.  Esme.  Esme Curley.  Just a quick call to say that Cassie is with us an’ we’ll bring her home shortly... What!  The heck you say!  Cassie is there with you?  She can’t be... she’s sitting right here in my house not ten feet from me...  Uh huh... Well I’ll be darned... Uh huh...Spittin’ image... Uh huh... Sure thing...”

“Well dang!” exclaimed Esme Curley putting her phone away.  She took Charity by the hand, “Cassie would like to meet you!  She’s on her way.  You two have gotta be sisters.  It seems today must be a day for family reunions!”

I knew that Charity had a sister but they were as alike as chalk and cheese.  Charity looked at me with excitement, “I have a sister?” she asked.

“Yes but she doesn’t look anything like you.  I very much doubt that this Cassie could be your sister.  But your father is a fairy so anything is possible.  I have not seen him for a very long time.  He could have married again and had another daughter.”

“Do I have any brothers?”

“You didn’t when I knew your family.”

“How well could you have known my family?  You’re too young,” she said clearly exasperated at my vagueness.

I was saved from answering by the doorbell.

“This’ll be Cassie.  I’ll let her in,” said Esme Curley eagerly.  Esme greeted her outside.  I could barely hear their greeting because Tate Curley had picked that moment to rustle around the kitchen.  I did hear Esme ask Cassie to close her eyes.

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I could feel Charity tense beside me.  “I’m going to close my eyes too,” she whispered to me.  But she reached across and grabbed my hand to hold.  I saw Tate sit down again at the dining table but at the other chair.  So he had the best view of everything that would unfold.

Esme led Cassie to the chair she had vacated and gently sat her into the chair.  When Cassie sat down and faced us, I was shocked.  Cassie was a carbon copy of Charity.  This was no sister, this was a clone.

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« Reply #37 on: December 13, 2016, 04:11:28 AM »
I'm really enjoying the way you present us with mysteries which you gradually unravel.
I'm also very much rooting for Gobias and Charity this time around.

Oooh, Cassie the cliffhanger!

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« Reply #38 on: December 13, 2016, 10:47:56 AM »
Wow, a clone! The plot thickens. I like your backstory for Gobias in this chapter, too. So many family secrets!

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« Reply #39 on: December 15, 2016, 10:32:26 PM »
Chapter 10 – Doppelganger

Charity and Cassie opened their eyes simultaneously on Esme Curely’s cue and both stared wide eyed at each other.  Cassie was the first to speak.  “Oh my God.  You look just like me.  We must be twins.  I have a family!  I have someone who can tell me who I really am!”

I felt Charity tense at her last sentence and looked pleadingly at me.  She still held my hand with a grip that she had unintentionally tightened into a nerve numbing strangling grip.  Charity couldn’t tell Cassie who she really was because she didn’t know herself who she really was.  Now I was wondering if I knew who Charity really was.  Could the Sim I think is Charity also be a clone? 

Was this the reason she had no memory of who she was?  Since it was her episodic memory that Charity had no recollection of, a clone was a likely explanation.  Charity knew how to talk and do things so her semantic and implicit memories were intact.  It was her own personal experiences where her memory was blank.  Did Cassie have the same problem?  I had to ask.  Extricating my poor hand from Charity’s death grip, I addressed Cassie.

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“Hello Cassie, I’m Gobias Koffi” I said in my gentlest tone.  “From your last remark, it seems to me that you have lost your memory?  Is that correct?”  Cassie looked distressed so it was Esme Curley who spoke.

“Cassie appeared here in Appaloosa Plains last summer.  She was found by Calvin Riffin up at the Water Treatment facility.  She didn’t know who she was and she was too frightened to ask for help.  Calvin’s sister Chantrelle, gave her the name Cassie O’Peia after a fairy princess in a storybook.  Cassie has lived with the Riffins these past six months.”

“Cassie have you sought medical attention for your memory problem?” I asked.  Cassie looked pleadingly at Esme.

Again it was Esme who replied.  “Cassie has been seein’ Dr Pinkerton who ran a whole lot of tests.  She has no brain injury or defect.  He thinks her memories will come back in time or with the right triggers.”  Pinkerton... I thought.  Now that’s a name well suited to a western town.

“Do you know Dr Gavin Pinkerton?” Tate asked seeing my involuntary smile.

“No Sir I don’t.  I was just thinking that we could really use the Pinkerton Detective Agency on this case because Charity here has the same memory loss as Cassie.”

Charity flinched at my casual mention of her condition.  Perhaps she had wanted to keep that fact to ourselves.  Maybe I shouldn’t have mentioned it but I felt we could be open about it with Cassie and the Curleys.  It was interesting that both Cassie and Charity were dumped in an unfamiliar town with no memory or how they got there or who they were.

“Do you have a career Cassie?” I asked.  Again Cassie looked to Esme Curley to talk on her behalf.

“She sure does!” beamed Esme with pride.  “Cassie is Appaloosa Plains’ only Five-Star Chef!”

“Cassie, can you tell me how to make the Provençal fish stew originally from Marseille?” I asked as a test.

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“You want to know how to cook Bouillabaisse?” asked Cassie doubtfully.

“Actually no; I know how to cook it.  I just wanted to test your memory and reasoning skills.  Clearly there’s nothing wrong with your semantic and procedural memory.”  Bouillabaisse was only a level 3 recipe so it was easy to cook.  But it was one of the international ones, so you had to learn it from a natural cook, through a culinary career opportunity or go to Champs Les Sims to buy the recipe, thus making it an unusual recipe for a Sim to know.

“Our Cassie can cook any recipe.  Even them fancy foreign ones,” replied Esme.

“Do you like gardening?” I asked

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“Our Cassie has replanted the Riffin’s garden and raised perfect plants.  She’s a marvel!” boasted Esme.

“Cassie, apart from cooking and gardening, do you have other skills?”

“She is Appaloosa Plain’s new chess champion,” said Tate also displaying a great deal of pride in her accomplishments.  Clearly the Curleys were proud and protective of Cassie.

“She plays the guitar better than anybody we know.  Even better than Johnny Johnson,” replied Esme.  I hadn’t a clue who Johnny Johnson was, but obviously he was a musician of some note.

“Can you play the piano?” I asked Cassie.  This time neither Esme nor Tate made a comment.

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“I don’t know, Sir.  I never tried,” replied Cassie in the timid little girlish voice that the original Charity had often used when she was particularly distressed.  When Cassie used that voice I knew not to push the issue further.  Cassie was clearly out of her comfort zone and I believed I probably be run out of town on a rail, if I upset her further by asking more questions.

As we talked, Charity was becoming so tense sitting beside me that I became worried for her.  I wanted to discontinue my exploration of Cassie’s character and try to discover if Charity had any skills of her own.

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“Uncle Tate if you don’t mind, I’ll take the keys to the Sweetapple Ridge Way house.  Charity is very tired.  She hardly slept a wink on the plane last night.  I’ll take her to the house to have a nap.  Can we make it tomorrow instead of today to see your lawyers?”

“Yup.  Sure thing young Gobias.  I have the keys here.  I have let the place from time to time so there’s been a few changes,” replied Tate evidently delighted to be addressed as uncle.  “My lawyer is Joe Huebner at Huebner Associates.  They have an office just above Kim Gould’s Steakhouse at 204 West Appaloosa Avenue.  It’s just across the road from the library.  You can’t miss it.  I’ll phone you with the time for an appointment.”

“By the way, could you tell me how to find Dr Pinkerton?

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“You won’t have to look far.  He lives right next door to you at 309 Sweetapple Ridge Way.” Tate grinned unexpectedly.

Charity was so obviously relieved that we were leaving.  If Esme and Tate hadn’t believed she was overtired, they’d have probably thought she was being rude.  But Charity redeemed herself by her profuse thanks for their hospitality.  Tate offered to loan me his car but I declined.  We’d get a taxi so as not to inconvenience them.

We said our goodbyes to Cassie and the Curleys and hailed a taxi. 

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When we arrived at the home of my youth, my mouth was dry.  My childhood bedroom was on the right near the kitchen.  My parent’s suite was upstairs but there was another large bedroom on the left, so I showed Charity that room. 

“Um Charity... would you prefer to eat in or out this evening?”

“I don’t want the entire town thinking I’m Cassie O’Peia.  I’d prefer to eat in.”

“Do you mind if I pop round to the store to get some things.”

“No, you go.  I’ll be fine.  But program your number into my cell phone before you go.”

“Okay.  I promise I won’t be long.”  Actually I was longer than I expected.  Some things I wanted were harder to find but in the end I got what I wanted.  I also hired us a car since we may end up being in Appaloosa Plains longer than I expected.

Parking the car, I saw a man I presumed to be Dr Pinkerton arrive home next door.  He looked beat, so I decided not to pursue that line of inquiry just yet.  I had a few things I wanted to find out for myself first.  Fortuitously Charity was still napping when I returned home. 

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I looked around my childhood home.  There were a lot of changes including that the back deck had been enclosed and set up for an artist.  Good.  Now I had somewhere to put the instruments I’d bought.  Quietly so as not to disturb her, I rearranged the back deck.

Charity woke while I was cooking dinner.  After a quick shower, she joined me at the table.  “This smells nice.  Lobster Thermidor is one of my favourites.”  I knew that.  A clone has the same traits and favourites as the original Sim.

“Hmmm... it’ perfect.  I doubt Cassie could have done better.”  She tucked in and we ate in companionable silence.  Both of us lost in thought.

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“How about I cook us breakfast?  Fruit parfait I think it was you said you liked.”

“Actually Charity, if you don’t mind, I’ve got the ingredients for a Baked Angel Food Cake.  Could you prepare that now while I wash up?  I always like to have something on hand in case we get visitors.”

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“Sure,” she said getting the ingredients out of the fridge and using the blender.  I put away the leftovers and washed up our plates but surreptitiously watched as she expertly prepared the dish.

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Charity not only had level 10 cooking skills but she knew the recipe.  If I could have gotten my hands on a Deathfish, I wonder if she can cook Ambrosia as well.

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Charity expertly made the cake and put it in the fridge for later. 

I asked her if she’d like to join me at the chess board.  “Be prepared to be clobbered!” she challenged me with a glint in her eye.  Charity always said that very phrase to Faith whenever they played years ago.  I speculated that she could be the real Charity otherwise how could she have known that particular phrase.  And clobber me she did.  “Best of three,” I suggested. 

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“You’re on,” she grinned mischievously.

I congratulated her on her admirable cooking skills being able to prepare a Baked Angel Food Cake without having to refer once to a recipe book.

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“Did you ask me to cook it as a test like you did asking Cassie about Bouillabaisse?”

“I did,” I replied wondering how she felt about that.

“I hope we get the chance to eat it,” was all she said.

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“Do you remember when you worked as a member of the Moonlight Falls Symphony Orchestra?”

“No.”

“You play extraordinarily well,” I said. 

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“Do I?  Maybe I’ll try that later when I clobbered you three nil!”  She beat me two to one. 

“Since we're testing my skills, I’m going to try out that sculpting station next,” Charity said once we finished.  I think she wanted an end to my questions.  I hadn’t touched on her family and I was amazed that she hadn’t asked about her real sister or her father who I’d mentioned earlier.

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While Charity began sculpting from a huge block of stone, I went into my boyhood bedroom.  I remember picking out the horse bed on my 5th birthday.  The soft furnishings were not familiar but as it was such a very long time ago, I wasn’t sure what was original and what had been left there as the result of the tenants Tate mentioned.

In the meantime I heard Charity persistently chipping away at her block of stone.  I wondered at her skill level at sculpting.  As far as I knew she’d never tried it, so I was astounded when I went back and discovered that she’d sculptured a masterpiece Urn of Franco.  She had to be level 10 at sculpting to do that one!

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After arranging for it to go into storage for Charity she decided to try the easel.  I watched as she chose a large canvas, carefully drew her outlines and expertly applied the first few strokes of paint onto the canvas.  She clearly knew what she was doing.  My old master, Verrocchio, would have been proud of her structure and skilful application of colour.

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I went to check the weather channel for forecast for tomorrow and found Appaloosa Plains was in for heavy snow for the next week.  I received Tate’s phone call telling me that we have an appointment to see his lawyer at 10:00 AM in the morning. 

I napped for a little bit before I went back out to see how Charity’s painting was progressing, only to find her putting the finishing touches to what to my eyes was a masterpiece.  I knew she could paint but I didn’t know she was that good.

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“Now I want to try that piano,” she said excitedly as dawn’s early light flooded the deck.

“Do you remember how to play My First Dance?” I asked.  That piece was one of the level 10 Master Tracks she’d played frequently in the past.  She sat down at the piano and began with scales and chord exercises first.  Gaining confidence and developing a strong rhythm and speed, she tried a few beginner pieces.

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“I like this piano,” she said as she began to move on from the easy pieces to attempt harder and harder pieces.  Stumbling over a few chords of the difficult pieces of Chopin and Beethoven, she reverted to easier pieces and played superbly often singing along to her playing.

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Eventually she got around to playing My First Dance and played it beautifully, her technique superb.  I grabbed the cello and accompanied her.  I’d originally bought the cello to see if she could play another of her favourite Master Tracks Bridgeport Breeze.  I was dead tired and I was sure she would be too but nothing was going to stop us now, jamming away on our instruments as if the last twenty years had never intervened.

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« Reply #40 on: December 16, 2016, 11:11:28 AM »
Wow! So many skills. She's one talented sim.  They look so happy playing together.  Looking forward to your next update!

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« Reply #41 on: December 16, 2016, 12:02:12 PM »
I re-read your Prologue this morning and wonder now who is who. So many, many questions.
Do the clones have all the skills of the original ghost?
Yes to Gobias and Charity finding happiness.

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« Reply #42 on: December 17, 2016, 11:07:13 PM »
Chapter 11 – So Many Questions Without Answers

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We jammed happily trying out all the instruments I’d acquired.  I was awestruck when Charity executed some wicked rim shots on the drums and I asked her to teach me her technique.  Our jam session of musical and personal harmony was intruded upon by a caller at the front door.  I opened it to the man I saw last evening.

“Good morning.  You must be Gobias Koffi.  I am Dr Gavin Pinkerton.  I understand from Miss Esme that we have another fairy who has lost her memory.  If I can intrude for a short time, I’d like to see the young lady to ensure that she is not suffering any serious or potentially life threatening medical condition.”

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I was sure that Charity was not ill but phrased like that, it was impossible to refuse his request without sounding like a completely insensitive jerk.  Charity who had heard every word of our visitor, willingly came to the front door herself.  Either Esme hadn’t prepared him enough for the sight of Charity or the shock of seeing Cassie’s duplicate was too much to hold in, but Dr Pinkerton was visibly startled to see her.

“Good morning ma’m.  I’m Dr Pinkerton,” he said smoothly recovering his equilibrium.  “Esme Curley told me that you have amnesia.  Do you mind if I examine you for signs of injury or illness?”

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“Hello Dr Pinkerton.  I don’t feel ill or injured but I do want to be sure, so go ahead.”

Coming indoors, Dr Pinkerton checked Charity’s pupil reflexes, eye movements, then gently felt along her skull and neck.  Then he asked “I just want to make some notes, is that alright with you?”

“That’s okay with me.”

“Do you mind if we sit down?  My writing is illegible enough as it is,” he said deprecatingly.

“Sure.  We can use the dining table.”

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Dr Pinkerton extracted a small notepad and pen from his inner coat pocket.  “I’ll start with the easy questions,” he began.  “Have you had any dizziness or loss of balance, seizures or loss of consciousness?”

“No.”

“Have you felt dazed, confused or disorientated?”

Charity thought for a moment, “Not confused befuddled but confused unsure, yes.”

“That’s understandable.  Any double vision, headaches, nausea or vomiting?”

“No.”

“Fatigue or drowsiness?”

“Not really.”

Do you have any difficulty sleeping?”

“Yes.  I am afraid to go to sleep.”

“Hmmm... Are you afraid of the dark?”

“Yes, if I’m by myself but not since Gobias has been with me.”  I positively beamed at the thought that she needed me.

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“Well I see no sign of a skull injury or any tenderness or swelling that could indicate a medical reason for your amnesia.  You understand, that without X-rays or MRI scans, I cannot confirm that you have no physiological symptoms that could explain such a significant memory loss.”

“Thank you Doctor.”

“What is your full name?” he asked.

“Charity Kalamia.”

“Charity Deborah Kalamia” I supplied for him.

“What is your star sign?”

“I don’t know,” Charity replied looking at me.

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“Taurus.  Her birthday is the 2nd of May,” I answered for her.

“Actually Gobias, it would be best if Charity tried to answer for herself.  These are routine questions and often the answers are so entrenched in our memories that they come readily to the surface like autonomic reflexes.”

“Sorry,” I said apologetically.

“What is your alma mater Charity?” asked Dr Pinkerton

“I don’t know that either,” Charity replied looking distressed. 

Dr Pinkerton looked up at me.  “Okay Gobias, do you know this one?”

“Charity graduated from the Everglow Academy in Moonlight Falls but she also attended the Excelsior Scholeío in Sim Kosmo.

Dr Pinkerton turned back to Charity.  “Sim Kosmo?  Hmmm...  Are you single Charity?”

“I think so,” she replied tentatively looking at me.  I nodded.  Now was not the time to tell her about Myles Kyrios.  “Yes, I am single,” she said with more conviction.

“Do you have a career?”

“Yes, I was a member of the Moonlight Falls Symphony Orchestra.”

Dr Pinkerton looked up, “Did you remember that on your own or from something Gobias said?”

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“Something Gobias said.  But I can play all the instruments, and I’m really good at it,” Charity replied enthusiastically.

“Do you remember your family?”

“No.  But Gobias said I have a sister and father who are fairies like me.”  I don’t think I actually said that Faith was also a fairy.  Charity was clearly becoming very distressed and Dr Pinkerton picked up on that.

“Okay I’ll leave it at that.  Your linguistic and reasoning skills appear normal.  I am almost certain that you don’t have a brain injury.  I think whatever affliction you have may be psychological, which is not my field of expertise.  It may wear off and you’ll regain your memories in time.  Other events may also trigger memories.  If you want to make an appointment at the hospital, we can run tests to confirm that you don’t have a brain injury.”

“Thank you Dr Pinkerton.  I don’t think that’s necessary.”

“As you wish.  Please excuse me, I have another house call to make before my rounds at the hospital.  I’ll bid you good day Miss Charity.  Gobias, I have a book in my car you can borrow which may provide some guidance for you dealing with this.  Will you come out to my car with me?”

“Sure,” I replied and followed him out the door.  He stopped just outside his car.  The snow gently falling around us.

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“Gobias have you ever heard of cloning?”

“Of course.”

“What are Charity’s traits?”

“Bookworm, Family Oriented, Good, Hopeless Romantic, Virtuoso,” I replied.

“You’ve met Cassie.  Her traits are identical to Charity.  They may not be sisters.  They could be clones.”

“They are definitely not sisters,” I said.  “I know Charity’s sister.  I think you’re right that they are clones.  But clones retain only the original Sim’s appearance and traits, not their skills or careers.  Both Cassie and Charity appear to have some very high level skills.”

“True, clones generally don’t have any skills or careers.  Although not all clones retain the same traits,” said Dr Pinkerton.  “If enough clones are made with the Clone Drone elixir, eventually you can get a clone who has the opposite or vastly different traits to the original.”

“I didn’t know that,” I said.  “So which one is the original and which is the clone?”

“The original may regain her memory.  The clone never will because she just doesn’t have anything to remember.”

“But clones should at least have memories of how they acquired their skills.  That seems to be a blank page for both of them,” I said thinking it through.

“So we’re dealing with something else in addition to cloning.  Look, I do have to rush.  Here’s the book.  Leave it in my letterbox when you’ve finished reading it.  Keep in touch.  Here’s my card with my emergency contact details.  Please call me if you have any questions or something crops up you can’t deal with.”

As he drove away, I looked at the book title Abnormal Psychology Vol II: Amnesia and Anxiety Disorders.  It may help us.  I looked at my watch.  We still had plenty of time to get to our appointment at Tate’s lawyer’s office.  I could thumb through it for some ideas.  I went back into the house.  Charity had become agitated waiting for me to return inside.

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“What did he say?”she asked obviously nervously.

“He gave me this book to read,” I showed it to her.  She read the title.

“Am I abnormal?”

“No, you are fine but your amnesia is abnormal.  Don’t let that word define you.  You are an amazingly talented and lovely Sim.  Always remember that.”

“Oh okay.  By the way I only have one set of clothes.  Do we have enough time to go shopping before we meet with your uncle’s lawyer?”

“Sure, we have heaps of time,” I said, then on impulse asked Charity, “Aistháneste asfalís edó mazí mou?”

“I beg your pardon?  Is that the name of a store?” she asked mystified.

“No.  Sorry, I was just thinking aloud.  Come on let’s go shopping.”

I think I asked her in Greek if she felt safe here with me.  As her reasoning and linguistic skills were intact, the real Charity would have understood what I said because she spoke Greek far better than I. 

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As we left the house I tried desperately to organise my thoughts.  Clearly the Sim I thought was Charity, was actually a clone.  I felt acutely disappointed.  I wondered if Cassie could be the real Charity but now I knew how I could find out.  But I still had no explanation of why they would both have no memory of how they acquired their skills.

If Cassie and Charity were cloned using a DNA sample and aged up normally or with birthday cakes, they would have some explicit memory of those events.  They don’t.  Also babies cloned with a DNA sample have whatever traits are assigned to them.  Their traits are not automatically identical to the original.

A clone made with a Clone Drone elixir was simply a blank copy.  As Dr Pinkerton said, clones have the same traits as the original but they would have no skills.  Identical looks and identical traits pointed unmistakably to the use of a Clone Drone elixir.    As Cassie and Charity were dumped in different towns at different times of the year, they were most likely not cloned at the same time but perhaps some months or years apart. 

Another consideration was that a Clone Drone elixir was a level 8 skill.  Alchemy was a skill fairly unique to Moonlight Falls.  Even though the Aleister’s Elixirs and Sundries stores can be found in many towns, rarely did Sims from other towns bother learning the skill to level 8.  Apart from Leonidas Kalamia and myself, I didn’t know another Alchemist of that level or higher.  I had never made that elixir myself and I’m fairly sure Leonidas never made them.  He once told me he was philosophically opposed to some elixirs and would never make them, no matter how much he was offered.

Notwithstanding how they came to exist, Cassie and my Charity have skills that clones wouldn’t normally have.  It would also have taken years for them to learn their skills to reach such high levels.  A lot of Sims play the guitar, most very badly.  Few Sims ever learn more than one instrument.  My Charity knew several of the Master Tracks for all four band instruments meaning that she’d have to have learned all the compositions for them as well.  That takes time. 

Cassie even has a career and not just at the beginning or part way up the culinary career track, but at the very top.  Try as I might, I couldn’t remember if the real Charity had made it to the top of the culinary career before she died.  I didn’t think she had but I wasn’t certain.  I needed to find out if Cassie had been promoted to the Five-Star Chef position since she arrived in Appaloosa Plains or that she began at the very top of her career when she started here.

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Driving in snow is difficult so I hoped my Charity would mistake my silence for concentration.  My problem was that I had so many questions without answers!  Before me stood an enigma that I wanted desperately to solve.

Someone had made at least one, possibly two clones of Charity that we knew of.  There may be more.  But why?  And when did the cloning happen?  What would happen if one made a clone of a clone?  I didn’t know and I didn’t know how to find out.

Also at the forefront of my mind was the burning question; had the evil Myles made a clone of his wife and left that clone in Moonlight Falls while he had taken the real Charity when he left town.  Had the real Charity Kalamia-Kyrios died or another clone?

For my own peace of mind, I needed to find out.
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4. The Secret Time Traveler

Offline Cheezey

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Re: The Secret Time Traveler
« Reply #43 on: December 18, 2016, 09:32:06 AM »
Poor Gobias. It must be so disconcerting to know you're dealing with cloning like that. I really enjoyed this chapter.

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Re: The Secret Time Traveler
« Reply #44 on: December 18, 2016, 11:45:54 AM »
Obviously, Gobias is vastly better at posing questions and thinking through them than I am.
And here I'd thought he was about to savor some happy times with his beloved Charity. Who is she? (rhetorically asked).
The suspense is killing me...

 

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