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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #210 on: March 28, 2016, 02:45:18 AM »
I second the request to know the minute you start a new story! You have more guts than I do, I've been playing since The Sims 1 and I've still never posted more than a screenshot or two anywhere!

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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #211 on: March 28, 2016, 11:32:44 AM »
Make that a third request @oshizu !




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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #212 on: March 28, 2016, 12:22:51 PM »
@LivvieLove   That's great advice!  If I remember correctly, you're a Creative Writing major?

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You gals are so awesome--I hope I can be more innovative in my second story.
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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #213 on: March 28, 2016, 12:35:54 PM »
 @oshizu I suck at taking screenshots :) else I probably would have tried to do some kind of story at some point over the years... Plus, my grammar and spelling is atrocious, so I would probably spend more time editing than posting lol (just ask my NaNo friends how far I got with my NaNo-Novel (hint: it only had about 4K words)

I've seen some of the Prettacies out there and the thought is tempting, but, I'm so addicted to my good looking founders! And, the idea of doing an Uglacy *shudder* that just goes against all my perfect genetic insticts...
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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #214 on: March 28, 2016, 12:59:59 PM »
Congratulations on finishing! I started reading a while back, but haven't finished yet.

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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #215 on: March 28, 2016, 04:44:53 PM »
Oh you caught me!  I'd written Brandon all over the chapter then realized it was Branson and went back to change it. It's always harder to spot one's own typos, innit?

hehe.  To be honest I'd probably not have noticed if I hadn't personally typed out the name in a previous comment!
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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #216 on: March 28, 2016, 05:44:04 PM »
LivvieLove That's great advice!  If I remember correctly, you're a Creative Writing major?

Nope, just a teacher, but I'm glad I could offer you some advice! I can't wait to see what you might have in store! :D



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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #217 on: March 28, 2016, 06:57:25 PM »
*Triumphant music plays, bangs on gong, lights incense, throws confetti*  CELEBRATION TIME!!!  Congratulations my dear friend~~!  You didn't think you could do it but you did and so well.  I've loved every joy filled, laughter inducing, moment.  Well done!  Now, what are you writing next?
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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #218 on: April 03, 2016, 09:37:59 PM »
@reggiko  Thanks for the congrats! This is my first attempt at storytelling and it really shows, but there are a few funny moments.

@Joria       Dear friend, you are the one who first encouraged me to write a story. Without you, I wouldn't have decided to learn how to post images, make an Imgur account, try my hand at storytelling, share my embarrassing builds, and ultimately push my way to the end of the dynasty challenge. You persuaded me by saying that the forum was a very friendly place and now I've experienced that firsthand. Thank you so much, Joria.  *grabs some tissues

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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #219 on: April 04, 2016, 01:48:32 AM »
Awww.  *sniffs, shares box of tissues, hugs*
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Re: The Nishijima Immortal Dynasty: If at First You Don't Succeed
« Reply #220 on: April 05, 2016, 05:01:09 PM »
*shares in the love*

You guys are brilliant! Love and adore both your stories and I'm so happy that Jori managed to convince you, Oshi ;-D

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I'm totally a month behind on this but Congratulations to Osamu and his 7 heirs! ( or is it The Goth Boys and their immortal hookups?)   I've been reading off and on all day so far and I just had to finish the family in my quest to start reading other stories while shamelessly making people wait for updates. 

This was a beautiful story and I was happy to read it all and a little sad for it to be gone.  It's like reading the last page in a book series.  Just a little lost in which direction to go now!    Thank you for sharing your experience and again a big hearty Congratulations!  *Confetti* 
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Years late to the party, but on the off chance you ever come back and check on this thread - it was a great read! Thanks for sharing your adventures with us!

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Years late to the party, but on the off chance you ever come back and check on this thread - it was a great read! Thanks for sharing your adventures with us!
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Haha, I'm a bit embarrassed as this was my first ever simstory, but thanks so much for reading it all!
I'm aware that you're preparing to start a Sims 4 IDC challenge soon and look forward to reading it!