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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 10: Keep your enemies Closer
« Reply #30 on: December 08, 2015, 09:52:12 AM »
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 10: Keep Your Enemies Closer
« Reply #31 on: December 08, 2015, 02:13:45 PM »
Poor Gabbi and Cindy, I wonder where he's keeping her so that she can't be found.

This story gets more and more intriguing as it progresses :)
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 10: Keep Your Enemies Closer
« Reply #32 on: December 10, 2015, 05:48:17 PM »
Half way done now!

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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 11: Awaken
« Reply #33 on: December 14, 2015, 08:39:42 AM »
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 11: Awaken
« Reply #34 on: December 14, 2015, 02:46:26 PM »
Poor Gabbi, but what is Keith doing, I trusted him to not know much about his father's life (after all, he didn't turn Gabbi in), but what could these "missions" be?
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 12: Damage Control
« Reply #35 on: January 10, 2016, 08:17:05 PM »
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 12: Damage Control
« Reply #36 on: January 12, 2016, 10:59:51 AM »
Port Cindy and Gabbi:(
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 12: Damage Control
« Reply #37 on: January 29, 2016, 01:22:39 PM »
With all the excitement surrounding Divine Deception's season finale, I completely forgot about this. Will post a new chapter asap!

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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 13: Mission Summary
« Reply #38 on: February 01, 2016, 09:19:33 AM »
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 13: Mission Summary
« Reply #39 on: February 27, 2016, 03:47:37 AM »
Woah , that escalated quickly, suduce a target to killing someone... Hmmmm, poor Gabbi
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 14: Subject At Hand
« Reply #40 on: February 29, 2016, 08:49:57 AM »
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 14: Subject At Hand
« Reply #41 on: March 04, 2016, 11:56:32 PM »
Noooooooo Gabbi, nooooooo
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 14: Subject At Hand
« Reply #42 on: March 12, 2016, 12:02:06 AM »
Congratulations on over 1000 views!!!!:)
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 14: Subject At Hand
« Reply #43 on: March 14, 2016, 09:50:24 AM »
Thank you, Katala. Sorry that I haven't been posting continuously like I was before. Been really busy revising my novel and getting ready for publishing. Unfortunately, that always comes first lol haha. One the bright side, The Man Under My Bed is starting to come to a close and once I am done my revising of my novel, Season 2 of Divine Deception should be up and ready to go!

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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 15: The Morning After
« Reply #44 on: March 14, 2016, 10:12:21 AM »
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Chapter Fifteen --- The Morning After