The Jade Dynasty - Failed (Read the New Jade Dynasty!)

[ratchie]

Great update sorry about the consignment store.

Rachel

[samoht04]

Just checking that you saw Chapter 17 as well? I posted two at the same time so I just want to make sure no one misses anything. All my chapters are on the First post as well if anyone ever gets lost in the story. 

[ratchie]

I did see the previous chapter how old is Janna by the way. Will they be trying for a baby straight away.

Rachel

[samoht04]

She has about Three Days till Elderhood. She is already Pregenant.  I am also a bit worried about travelling as The Characters have lost about Four Hours of my gameplay due to the No Return Home Bug. They are also stuck there until I get a Previous Save into Place.  So I am really hoping that stays in that game and not in all of them. 

[Lilygirl]

Congrats on the wedding! It was beautiful.

Can't wait to meet the nooboo!

[Pam]

Is Janna from a family in town?  It sort of sounds like she was an NPC or something. 

[samoht04]

Her last name was Jolly and I could not find her in the Town, she also had to move in to be able to conceive so she must be a NPC. Also I highly doubt a townie would come with a Maxed skill if any. 

Congrats on the wedding! It was beautiful.

Can't wait to meet the nooboo!

Thanks I think it suits Dec to have a private ceremony and he actually did meet her at that beach. I am choosing it's name as I type. I shall leave it's gender a mystery but I know what it is. 

[Juxtaposition]

Yay for noo boos! Looking forward to the next updates extra now 

[samoht04]

I'm going on in an hour after some TV, I just managed to fix my legacy so I was playing them. I am off Ill today but am feeling better.

[samoht04]

Just finished a chapter and my wireless stops working! It better be temporary!

[ILoveDolls]

Is it me or does Janna sound gold-diggerish? She really got lucky marrying into the Jades like that

[Pam]

So, Janna's full name is Janna Jolly Jade.  Haha!

[samoht04]

Is it me or does Janna sound gold-diggerish? She really got lucky marrying into the Jades like that

I suppose but if you knew what I knew it would be a good thing she was old. 

So, Janna's full name is Janna Jolly Jade.  Haha!

Ohno, I just realised that! 

[samoht04]

Chapter 19 - Becoming Immortal

My name is Gabriella Jade, these are my diaries, they hold my feelings and truths. If you are reading this, that means that something has happened, just like Mother said it would and how that old monk my Cemre talked to said. He does not know about the truth, he thought that man was crazy about my side of the family being Immortal, so did I until that day. My Mother told me to come and see her in the Basement, I thought it was strange, I looked everywhere in every room but I did not find her. Until I came across a set of Stairs, they had not been there before.



I slowly walked down wondering how long they had been there, I never noticed them, Dec often played down here when he was young and he never mentioned these stairs. It opened into a corridor, at the end of that corridor was a large Door. I then realised why Mother had been missing a lot recently, she must have been making what ever this was.




I opened the door and walked inside to see Plants, Torches, a Table and my Mother.




She told me to sit down and she told me everything about what she ate to keep her alive, the goals she achieved and that I have achieved, she told me about my Fathers sacrifice, the sacrifice of her heart she made to complete her ultimate goal. She told me everything, left nothing untouched. She told me that Cemre would die, so would Madeline, I would not. I would live forever until the Ultimate Challenge was completed. She stood and walked over to a machine in a little alcove, I remembered that I had got that it was some kind of Replicator, top of the range. Mother said it would help her and me out a lot because we wouldn't need to keep getting ingredients. I never saw it after it arrived.




She told me that I was eating Ambrosia, the recipe was sacred. Before I ate it I needed to know one more thing, where was this Room and why had I never seen it, why had Declan never seen or mentioned it. Her answer was simple yet revealed a lot.
   
   Declan followed me one day here, I didn't know until I saw him at the door, I told him everything then. I told him about his goals and
      challenges and he understood, he has already accomplished most of his goals now that he is a Young Adult. I swore him to secrecy,
      I know I should have told you but I couldn't, I was afraid you would hate me for letting your father die when I had a way to save
      him. I am sorry Gabriella, I truly am.

I was happy then, now that I knew the truth, I told my Mother that I did not hate her, however I think that I shall hate myself for letting Cemre and my Sister die whilst I stay alive. I did not want to fail my Mother and so I picked up my fork and I ate.




The feelings inside of me were not of happiness but of sadness and youth. I felt youth pouring into my  bones but it did not make me happy it made me sad, my vision was colourful and my mind was joyful but my heart was cold as I knew the fate of my husband and sister and all the other family members who will share their fate. I then heard the screaming from upstairs, me and Mother ran to see what was happening...

Gabriella Jade is now Immortal. Her Accomplisments will be posted soon.

[Pam]

Congratulations on your 2nd Immortal!  You're really doing well on this one, Thomas.