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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #30 on: December 20, 2010, 05:13:03 AM »
I managed to pull some strings in the military to find out where my child lived, that was this morning before dawn. Now it is evening and I am there. You may be thinking that going into his home is suicide but I have a suspicion that Beau's plan has failed, mainly as me being one of the biggest celebrities in the city and yet the Press have not found out about my child. The searches also resulted in Beau's location, another aid to my theory, Beau was currently in the local Mausoleum. Beau had been dead for a year, my child had been taken from me a year ago. Something had happened to him. I was going to find out, one way or the other.



I walked in and looked up the room number and called up, I did not want to suprise him, if he attacked me I would win. He may have been born a vampire but my Mind was far more powerful than his. It took only a few words for him to Buzz me up.

 
"Adam, It's me."



I paused outside his door, reaching out trying to sense his presence, I soon found him right where I thought he would be.




He was watching Kids TV, he was laughing and smiling like a small child should. His mind was that of a child not an adult, he may be strong and powerful but inside he was just a child. It hurt me to think of what Beau did, I walked in front of Adam and I almost started crying, his face, it was scarred and disfigured, Beau had made him into a monster.



He stood up and said three words and he sounded like a small child that had just done something that he knew upset his mummy and wanted to say sorry.

"Mummy, I'm sorry."

Then we hugged and I knew I had my baby back, I reached into his mind and he let me in and I felt pain, misery and he was sick, I felt the presence of Death in him and I knew that I did not have him for long.



I led him by the hand all the way home and he went upstairs and spent an hour standing in his old nursery.



For the next few days he stayed on the Treadmill, he needed something to keep him busy, I am glad that he has something to feel proud of, he keeps telling me that he wants to go and sign up for a sports career. I just smile and nod my head, I don't know if he will be well enough soon.



I had ordered a parcel online which was to be Adam's Birthday present, the delivery man had buzzed up saying he left it down in the hall, it was then that I met this guy...



We switched numbers and I still managed to not get his name! He got mine as he said it straight away, how typical of me.




Then he went into the lift and went high up into the Building, I watch the numbers speed past until it settled, the floor below mine, I smiled and collected my parcel and waited for the other lift. I was already picking a dress out.

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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #31 on: December 20, 2010, 05:22:08 AM »
Ooohhlala! Mysterious..

Great update.  :)



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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #32 on: December 20, 2010, 05:50:24 AM »
Very clever not showing us Adam's face, Thomas!  I'm glad to see Hannah's story continuing.
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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #33 on: December 20, 2010, 01:13:52 PM »
Wonder how Beau died. ???
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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #34 on: December 20, 2010, 02:17:43 PM »
Whoa! This is my first time reading this. Little ugly dude he was. I can't wait until his unveiling ;D Great story Thomas!

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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #35 on: December 20, 2010, 02:40:14 PM »
Thanks everyone! I will tell you that Beau's death will be found out in the next few chapters, the seed has been sown for Hannah to find out what happened. For anyone interested in what this new guys role is then you may have to wait, he will be a main character just not yet.  ;)
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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #36 on: January 01, 2011, 06:15:12 PM »
Woot! ;D
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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #37 on: January 02, 2011, 02:29:00 PM »
You all remember that guy I met down in the lobby? Yeah well his name is Alex, I ran into him again this time at the Brightmoor or whatever that place is called, I was driven there by my agent anyway, he said it would do my status good to get out more. I guess it was a good night afterall. I was feeling a bit down after all the events that had happened recently so I went straight to the bar and was planning on spending the whole night there.



I was starting to get a bit tipsy when my phone ringing brought me back to the world of the living, well theoretically of course since I am not in the world of the living. I then noticed that someone was sat next to me, it happened to be Alex.



He looked at me and smiled then got up and indicated towards the dance floor, I didn't need to read his mind to work out what he meant. So we started to dance and it was fun, we were still dancing until he club closed.





The sky was getting lighter and I was getting a bit worried about getting caught out in the sun too long, I was about to say goodbye to Alex when he asked me if I could spare another half hour with him, I thought 'Why Not' and agreed, he took me to his car and he pulled into the traffic, about five minutes later he was taking me by the hand and leading me down a path to this beach which he called Smugglers Cove. We stood by the water for a long time. Watching the water and the lights of the City which was just waking up or going to sleep after a hard night of partying.



Then all of a sudden he pulled me close and...




I couldn't believe that just happened, I let a mortal kiss me, he didn't know that I would still be alive and young when he was on his deathbed, I couldn't keep a secret like that and lead him on, so I told him about me, how I was a Vampire, I had a Son the same age as me due to his evil father who used some dark power on him, how I saved my son and how his father was dead, then I said I could not be with a mortal...



I waited for what seemed like ages for his reply but he did not say anything, he pulled my arm to caress his cheek, then he revealed his neck to me. In an instant I realised what he wanted, he wanted to be with me.




Now the wait begins until I can be with him, as he begins his transformation...
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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #38 on: January 02, 2011, 02:31:14 PM »
I'm glad Hannah found another love. When can we see Adams face?
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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #39 on: January 02, 2011, 02:32:19 PM »
Soon... Very Soon.  :)
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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #40 on: January 02, 2011, 03:01:08 PM »
Soon... Very Soon.  :)

Your just as bad as Pam with midnight show us already. ;D

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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #41 on: January 03, 2011, 05:44:28 PM »
Today Adam let me give him a makeover, he said it makes him feel more confident, I saw him smile for the first time today. He seems to stay glued to the Computer though, I am getting a bit tired of seeing the back of his head, he is going on this online forum about this fantasy world called Earth, I don't understand, me and technology don't mix. What do you think? Of his hair anyway? He hasn't shaved in a while and has a beard well stubble anyway, it suits him I think.



He also has this strange power and urge to see or make fire, it is getting quite worrying, especially since he can just conjure it like magic, he keeps burning objects in the lobby but stops the fire from spreading, it's a bit weird.



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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #42 on: January 03, 2011, 06:34:07 PM »
Soooo... He's a Pyro? ???
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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #43 on: January 03, 2011, 06:37:53 PM »
Yeah, I don't know how I mean, Hannah was never a firefighter and I don't think Beau ever was? Did Beau even have relatives?
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Re: The Life of Hannah Longing
« Reply #44 on: January 03, 2011, 07:14:25 PM »
From the Sims 3 Wiki: "[Beau] is one of few sims to have the Pyromanic hidden trait though it isn't visible in his family tree."
Makes for a pretty cool plot point!  ;D

 

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