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To Paint the World with Color Chapter 1.04 is up! 5/14/15
« on: December 21, 2014, 03:58:30 AM »
That's right!  I've started an ID!  Actually, I went through about 6 tries before this one XD This one is going well enough, though that I feel I can get quite the story out of it.  So without further ado, I will introduce you to: Azura Chroma, the Chroma Dynasty founder.



Like my legacy, it will be put up on a wordpress blog because I like all the bells and whistles.  Here's the prologue.  Find out why Azura is taking on this crazy challenge to begin with!

Table of Contents:
1.00: Prologue- The Day the Color Began to Fade
1.01: And So it Begins
1.02: The Frog Prince?
1.03: Presenting Mr. and Mrs. Chroma
1.04: Birthdays and Some Wonderful News

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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: December 21, 2014, 04:41:21 AM »
I know I've already said this but WOW! That is one amazing start to an immortal dynasty! I just love it!
Good luck with the challenge. I really am looking forward to the next update.
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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: December 21, 2014, 06:18:46 AM »
I'm also loving this start. Will be reading! :D
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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #3 on: December 21, 2014, 07:46:21 AM »
Great prologue! I'm looking forward to the next update.
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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #4 on: December 21, 2014, 09:01:06 AM »
Awesome start...you are a great writer!


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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #5 on: December 21, 2014, 09:58:14 AM »
Good prologue!

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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #6 on: December 22, 2014, 09:03:46 AM »
I am so, so glad to see this! Hooray for finally getting a Dynasty to work for you - and I love the idea of the founder having some tangible motivation for attempting the challenge. :-)

You also have a great voice in your writing that I appreciate.

I look forward to seeing more from you, Wolfie. :-)
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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #7 on: December 22, 2014, 11:00:15 AM »
Oh. My. Gosh! What a wonderful beginning!

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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #8 on: December 22, 2014, 11:32:09 AM »
Your story is amazing!  Very well thought out, and I love the prelude to the dynasty starting.
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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #9 on: December 22, 2014, 02:44:37 PM »
This is an amazing start! Good luck with the challenge, and I'll be looking forward to reading your story.

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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #10 on: December 23, 2014, 04:02:23 PM »
Can  only think of 3 words... I... LOVE...IT!  ;D

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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #11 on: December 25, 2014, 10:04:34 PM »
You put your heart content into this one, Wolf. You surprised me with your writing style. I really loved the beginning. This is a fantastic way to start an Immortal Dynasty. I’m thrilled to see what happen next! Good luck to you and Azura! Will be reading! ^_^
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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #12 on: December 27, 2014, 07:26:12 PM »
I know I've already said this but WOW! That is one amazing start to an immortal dynasty! I just love it!
Good luck with the challenge. I really am looking forward to the next update.

I'm also loving this start. Will be reading! :D

Great prologue! I'm looking forward to the next update.

Awesome start...you are a great writer!

Good prologue!

I am so, so glad to see this! Hooray for finally getting a Dynasty to work for you - and I love the idea of the founder having some tangible motivation for attempting the challenge. :-)

You also have a great voice in your writing that I appreciate.

I look forward to seeing more from you, Wolfie. :-)

Oh. My. Gosh! What a wonderful beginning!

Your story is amazing!  Very well thought out, and I love the prelude to the dynasty starting.

This is an amazing start! Good luck with the challenge, and I'll be looking forward to reading your story.

Can  only think of 3 words... I... LOVE...IT!  ;D

You put your heart content into this one, Wolf. You surprised me with your writing style. I really loved the beginning. This is a fantastic way to start an Immortal Dynasty. I’m thrilled to see what happen next! Good luck to you and Azura! Will be reading! ^_^

Thank you!  I am so tickled right now... I am also beat red from blushing so much from each of your compliments.  I've always enjoyed writing.  I will continue to do so until I can no longer either type or hold a pen.  But having readers appreciate something I've written makes it all the more special.  So once again, thank you all!

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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #13 on: December 27, 2014, 11:41:30 PM »
Well, I keep getting "Forbidden" messages when I try to post the link to the next chapter.  But if you use the first link, you can go to the next chapter if you haven't already seen it.

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Re: To Paint the World with Color: an Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #14 on: December 28, 2014, 09:29:55 AM »
Keep up the good work, Shewolf!  When are we going to meet Mr. Azura?