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Re: The Hollingsworth Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #495 on: April 05, 2015, 08:39:29 PM »
@EtnaFan666 , thank you for reading, I'm glad you are enjoying. I'm more of a World Adventures fan, I just loved the whole tomb raiding thing and miss that kind of game play a lot in TS4. Although GF is extremely pretty and going camping is fun in real life, I just miss the 'Indiana Jones' aspect!
@Nettlejuice , thanks! I wanted to take Zack and Trin to GF for their honeymoon for ages but I just couldn't quite find the motivation to get started! As for Casey, knowing my luck Grim will be a meanie and come way too soon, fingers crossed he stays away for a while at least.
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« Reply #496 on: April 05, 2015, 09:05:36 PM »
Chapter 116: Honeymoon 2


Zack: G'morning gorgeous.
Trinity: Morning.
Zack: Sleep well?
Trinity: <giggle> Of course!
Zack: Thought I might try to catch our breakfast.
Trinity: Nice! I'm going to take a quick hike around, it's so pretty here.









Zack: It's our last day here. It sure has gone fast.
Trinity: Too fast!





Zack: I thought we might think about trying for a family Trin?
Trinity: Oh!
Zack: If you want to...?
Trinity: Oh yes!











Trinity: We should get one of these.





Zack: Then it wouldn't be so fascinating when you're on holiday!
Trinity: lol how true!




Zack: Lunch is ready.





Trinity: I love how you cook for me Zack.
Zack: I love to know you are looked after.
Trinity: Oh Zack, I don't want this to ever end.
Zack: What? Your burger?
Trinity: Lol, no silly, this. Us. Being alone together.
Zack: We can always come back you know. <grin>





Zack: Bliss...





<sings a love song to Trinity>





Trinity: Sooo... that's not dinner is it?





Zack: You wanna have the first bite?
Trinity: <squeal> No! Ewww, so gross. How can you even bear to touch them?
Zack: Actually, there's chicken stir fry in the kitchen for you.





Zack: If you keep smiling at me like that you're going to find yourself having another early night.
Trinity: Zack Rice.... you're incorrigible!
Zack: Hmm hmm. Complaining?
Trinity: lol... no!





Zack: I love you Trin.





Trinity: Is it really time to go home?
Zack: It is if you want that next work promotion.





Beth: So... you both had a lovely time?
Zack: Sure did.
Beth: I think the watcher might be looking for you.
Zack: That's cool. It was worth risking her wrath.... besides I've got news for her that will take the sting outta her tail.







Trinity: Yep, I'm definitely with nooboo Zack.
Zack: Oh yeah! Woo!


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Re: The Hollingsworth Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #497 on: April 05, 2015, 09:16:00 PM »
Can't sleep so was happy to see another chapter from the Hollingsworths  ;D

You really make gorgeous simmies Playalot. Looking forward to seeing the next nooboo.

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« Reply #498 on: April 05, 2015, 09:28:46 PM »
Thanks Tigerskin, I actually can't wait for this nooboo either! Quite excited about gen 5.  :D
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Re: The Hollingsworth Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #499 on: April 05, 2015, 11:00:53 PM »
Woot!  I love them so much!  Those two are so cute together!

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« Reply #500 on: April 06, 2015, 05:08:07 AM »
Thanx Wolf, it's been so great having Zack since a teen. *sigh* It's like a true romance story!  ;)
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Re: The Hollingsworth Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #501 on: April 06, 2015, 05:44:28 AM »
Chapter 117: Lily Officially Becomes Immortal


Oh there you are young man. I want a word with you.
Zack:Don't even start with me watcher.
I beg your pardon? You have a lot of answering to do.
Zack: Trinity's pregnant.
<Stunned silence> Oh! Th...that's...that's..
Zack: Awesome? Yeah, I know!
<Weakly> Yeah...beyond awesome.





Casey: So you didn't get a whipping then?
Zack: Nope, stunned the watcher silent.
Dude: That right watcher?
Yeah... I'm still kinda thinking on it all....I'm going to chat to Trinity





Are you ok doing that in your condition Trinity?
Trinity: I'm pregnant, not ill.
Yeah, I just meant that their are loads of other people who could be doing this if you don't want to.
Trinity: I'm fine, it's nice and peaceful out here.
Sometimes I think you should have been a loner.
Trinity: Well, I just like 'me time', that's all.
Fair enough.





Dude: Before you ask...it's not for me.
Umm... Lily?
Dude: Bingo.





Are you sure you don't want me to go and get someone... Casey maybe? Or Dude?
Lily: No. I want to do this with you.
You look so sad Lily.
Lily: I guess I just had always thought Ash would be here... and as much as I love Casey it just doesn't feel right to eat ambrosia in front of him.
I know... things don't always go as we expect eh.





Lily: Oh... it's as revolting as it smells.
Yeah, I think it's those fishy chunks in it.
Lily: Hm, kind of poetic justice isn't it.
A foul dish for your sins?
Lily: Sort of.
You don't really believe that? You have had an amazing life so far. Not many people can say they have been loved by two special men. And look at what you have achieved in your work-life! Lily, you have to stop beating yourself up!





Lily: Thanks. I don't feel morose all the time... just every now and then. You know?
Well, congratulations Lily. You are now truly immortal.
Lily: Thank you.
And... well, not to sound trite but enjoy your time. Your time with Casey and your time with your incoming grandchildren. You've got a lot to be happy for, you know.





Trinity: Oh! <retching sounds> Oh, sorry... the smell of that is making my stomach heave!
Lily: Oh Trinity, it's morning sickness love. Poor you.
Trinity: But it's not morning.





Dude: How's your day been son?
Zack: Good. Ummm, I've got an idea I'd like to ask you about.





Zack: I think it's time the Hollingsworths opened a business.





Dude: So how would this all work? What exactly will you sell and who will run the shop and be responsible for the financial wellbeing?
Zack: Well, paintings, your and Beths. My photos and eventually a family photography studio. I would work in it and hire some staff. As well as Beth, although I haven't asked her yet. Umm.... and I will take full responsibility for making it financially viable.





Dude: It might be more work than you imagine it to be.
Zack: Undoubtably Dude. I have thought about that, especially with my first child on the way. But it is time I added to this dynasty and, well, to be frank, Beth needs to be doing more than drinking all day long.





Dude: Darn! You're good Zack! lol. You've taken a big step there and I think it sounds great!





Zack: So it's a go-ahead then?
Dude: Yep
Yep
Zack: Great!





Dude: Well, this book might help you then. "How To Run A Good Business and Influence Buyers"
Zack: Sounds like a badly written personal improvement manual. Lol Still, I'll take all the advice I can get. Thanks Dude.




Zack: Well hello little man. Your daddy's about to build a big shop and get open for business.
Trinity: Oh hun! That's fantastic!





Trinity: I'm so happy for you.
Zack: Thanks Trin.





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« Reply #502 on: April 06, 2015, 06:50:07 AM »
Oh great, glad you are incorporating a business into the story - I haven't tried it yet, only managed the detective career so far.

Zack is so cute, I hope he makes the store a success and will be watching for tips!

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« Reply #503 on: April 06, 2015, 09:59:56 AM »
You have managed to jump straight back into their personalities and write them like you had never stopped! Great to see them all again and to see you using all the new content coming up too. Looking forward to more  ;D

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« Reply #504 on: April 06, 2015, 11:19:43 AM »
Excuse me while I cry tears of joy! I loved the second part of their honeymoon, cannot wait to see the nooboo. Many congrats to Lily also  8)
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Re: The Hollingsworth Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #505 on: April 06, 2015, 12:53:31 PM »
Looking forward to seeing the nooboo, and congrats to Lily on becoming an immortal!
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Re: The Hollingsworth Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #506 on: April 06, 2015, 04:30:54 PM »
@Tigerskin, Zack is a cutie eh. Well, I haven't tried the retail side of GTW yet so I thought I'd jump in. I haven't a clue what I am doing as I haven't read any of the guides etc yet as I like to experience it for myself first. So you might get some ides on how not to do it lol  :D

@KTK10, thanks! Nice to be back! Yeah, like I said to Tigerskin, though I'd give it a whirl.  :P

@Nettlejuice , aww thanks. I really enjoyed playing their honeymoon. It was nice to be in GF and not be running around madly for plants and bugs.

@MarianT , I actually forgot that Lily wasn't immortal as I played her 'reveal' so long ago so when the messages from Grim kept coming up I had thought it was just time for some 'more' ambrosia! Luckily the strange 'nagging feeling' that something wasn't quite right made me check my notes otherwise I would have failed as of course most of her friends had been culled. Anyway, I spent the day making her some more good friends and so the dynasty lives on... until I do something else shatterbrained that it!
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« Reply #507 on: April 06, 2015, 05:05:33 PM »
Chapter 118: Scouting


Good morning my love, a rose for my petal?





Oh I didn't realize you guys were up here. Why so quiet?
Lily: Thinking about my next move watcher.
Casey: Morning watcher.
Morning. Well I'll leave you two to your home date then.





Zack: What?
Oh, nothing. I was just going to say that you are taking your fitness very seriously these days.
Zack: Well, it is my thinking time you know. Sometimes the house gets a little busy with everyone wanting stuff.
*Sigh* Yeah I know that feeling.





You know Trinity, I think it's time we let the cow plant die off. I mean I have had to stop Jamel and Casey sooooo many times from eating the cake that it's starting to do my head in.
Trinity: What? Why do they keep trying to eat the cake? Don't they know what will happen to them?
I dunno... it seems a bit like they are moths drawn to a burning flame... they just can't stop themselves.
Trinity: I don't like the idea of starving the poor thing. Seems cruel.
Yeah. I don't know what else to do though. I mean we can't have it eating anyone.
Trinity: Gosh No! <Shudder> Let me think on it for a bit and I'll get back to you. O.K.?
Sure.





Whatcha doing?
Zack: Going to check out a few businesses. Wanna come with me?
Sure!





Where to first?
Zack: We'll just start here and look as we go I guess.





Zack: Hmm, this one's nice but too many windows. No room for hanging anything on the walls.








Zack: Come on, keep up!
I'm trying... if you weren't so fast...



Shop Assistant: Good morning, may I be of assistance?
Zack: Morning, no we're just window shopping thanks.



Zack: Gosh, this is so fun! No wonder Trin loves to shop!



Zack: What about this one watcher? Make me look handsome?
Yep, not that you need a new outfit for that anyway though.



Zack: Better check out what's up here.



Hmm, although it is very nice...
Zack: Yeah, it's not what we are looking for.




Zack: K, next shop.




Zack: Oh it's just not right either.
Well what does Dude's book say about choosing a business?





Zack: Hmm, says it must be fit for purpose.
Oh right, well, that's helpful.
Zack: You know sarcasm is never attractive, right? I wonder what Dude would suggest?
Well, phone him, better yet ask him to meet us here.









Zack: I've looked at them all and none of them really suit at all. I'm not sure where to go from here.
Dude: Well, have you thought about building your own?




Dude: I mean, it seems like the most sensible option Zack.




Zack: I wouldn't have a clue how to even start building a shop... well, anything actually!
Dude: I believe the watcher might help you there.
Zack: Can she build? Can you build watcher?
Yeah.
Zack: Well, will you hep me out?
Sure. I guess. I mean it's not like I've built a shop before but it can't be that hard, right?





Dude: Well get to it man. Buy the plot before someone else swipes the last building site from under your nose!
Zack: Don't have to ask me twice!





Zack: Thanks for all your help. Hard to believe that next time we come down here it will be to see the new business!
Dude: You're welcome. I didn't really do anything though!
Zack: Yes you did. You are always there to encourage and support. Dude, I honestly hope that I will be half the man you are.
Dude: Oh Zack, you are already much more than that.





Casey: So how big will the actual building be Zack?
Zack: I've asked the watcher to make it 60% of the plot.
Jamel: But that's not including the basement?
Zack: No, but I won't be using that space straight away. It's just there at the planning stage so we don't have to do any major renovations trying to retro-fit stairs and such.
Jamel: Hmm, an unused basement. I feel a horror story coming on!





Dude: Actually, that might not be such a crazy idea. Maybe we could look to running a bookstore come coffee shop later on.
Zack: Wow, this things becoming a monster!
Dude: lol, relax, it's just all thoughts at this stage.
Jamel: That is such a good idea though. Wow, who knows where this could lead?!


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Re: The Hollingsworth Immortal Dynasty- failed....
« Reply #508 on: April 06, 2015, 05:55:58 PM »
So... with a heavy heart I have failed this dynasty. I was flicking through aspirations with Zack, just trying to score a few extra points when I clicked on the Body Builder aspiration. I had forgotten that the last stage is not mentoring sims anymore  and because I made Zack go jogging to get that screenshot....he completed the aspiration just because I clicked on it.

Thank you so much everyone for reading and commenting and encouraging me along the way. I am gutted that I have made this mistake but I have learnt a lot about the game through the process of playing a dynasty.

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Re: The Hollingsworth Immortal Dynasty- failed.... Please Graveyard it
« Reply #509 on: April 06, 2015, 06:20:23 PM »
No, I am so upset and can't imagine what you feel like :'( Sorry this has happened, I thought you had gotten past bugs and well on your way to having gen five. *hugs*
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