Red's Legacy Challenge (The Starr Family) [graveyard :( please ]

[arimau]

*snip

...just a hunch

Well, I'm looking forward for the next updates. I can't wait to see the cuteness and random things in the entire family

[justproud2b]

Day 24: Making Room

[arimau]

It seems there's something off with the site, big bro. Just looking around thumbnail pics thing @ popular post other than that it's fine. Just want to let you know.

Cerise resembles Red a lot, seems that she taken a liking to her mom hair and Rosebud more into Gideon. It's so cute to seeing a whole family getting together. Everyone starts from zero to become their own hero, so it's alright. You'll getting better from time to time, Red. It took ages, experiences and sometimes bloody tears to be good at something. Nothing comes up in an instant, instant noodles also need to be cooked before we could eat that (hahaha, I must be hungry then). At least do something that you loved, hanging out with someone who appreciates your work, that's all the matter, Red.

You're a wonderful Mom, Red. And I'm proud of you.  I'm looking forward for the next chapter and hilarious things in the caption. Well, what's wrong with this family? Seems mellow, cheers up guys. 

P.S: Well, Cerise shared Grizz's trait. He's hot-headed too

[Magpie2012]

As always, I love your story, JP2B!

I want Red to be MY mom! But wait, then my mom wouldn't be my mom cuz Red would be my mom and then I'd miss my mom I think I just confused myself!

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[arimau]

I want Red to be MY mom! But wait, then my mom wouldn't be my mom cuz Red would be my mom and then I'd miss my mom I think I just confused myself!

Well, that's not confusing. Red always could be your second Mom.

But, that's not for me though. I will be slapped by my girl if she found out that I really love Red the most. Well, the good thing is I found my own Red. So, no such begrudge again for Gideon. We're cool bro. But, if you make Red hurts, I'll promise that I'll... not let you to do that.

[KTK10]

Red really did turn out to be a great Mum huh? I can't believe that neither of your sims kids got the red hair  .. not that it matters too much, they are both beautiful. 

[arimau]

Red really did turn out to be a great Mum huh?

Not only a great Mom. She's also a lady. That's why I attracted to her. Only a gentleman could see the gems inside her, that's Gideon. So, she made a right move since she must take a hard decision. That's why what comes up outside not always show what lies beneath. That's why such a shame for people who disrespect her. She had class and not everyone see her true beauty. 

And that's why there's a beauty in simplicity. I agree with her. She ever stated about this before

[justproud2b]

Day 25: Gideon’s Birthday

[Playalot]

The gift that just keeps on giving, right? lol Perfect gift for a neat sim!  Great update as always. 

[KTK10]

I love that bin.. it's one of the first 'big' gifts I treat my sims too. Happy Birthday Gideon!

[arimau]

Why Red ended up woke up in an empty house? That's a lovely makeover I bet that Gideon loves the changes. That's pretty ladylike in my opinion.  Gideon... Hmm... He looks young just same as I met him at the first time. The difference is maybe he looks different inside. 

[justproud2b]

I am struggling big time with this story. I've heard first gen has this big slope in it for stories but nothing exiting has been happening at all with the family. I have no idea what to do to spice it up. Rosebud will be a teen soon but it's still very stale.

[justproud2b]

Day 26: Red’s an Adult

[KTK10]

It doesn't fell stale to me justproud.  The only idea I would have is to play with the intention of just enjoying the game, and if Rosebud becomes a teenager before inspiration hits - it doesn't matter. As long as you are enjoying yourself, all the readers will see it and an inspiration will eventually hit!  Not that I know anything about writing though! 

[Playalot]

But that's just life in a sim house! It's fab, after all the craziness doesn't usually start until you have a few personality traits that just don't work well together. I say count your blessings that its all calm and ship shape. lol Don't go looking for trouble!   
Besides.... teenage daughters....'trouble' is their middle name! 

Try exploring a few of the different whims that come up and see if their is a potential story line. That's what I do to try to pull out the characters of my sims. Sometimes the darnedest whims come up at all the wrong times. For example Kennedy in my story had a whim to ditch her job one tiny bit away from being at the top. No way was I going to do that, but it was interesting playing out how unhappy she was in a stable relationship and a stable job!

Anyway, they're just suggestions, I like your story how it is.