Finally! I can caught up with your story:D I had to read TS wikia to understand about things in TS3 and yes I did. Things that I love here are:
The first TS4 story ever in this forum! You’re connecting TS3 with TS4 in this story (I think that’s great idea for using TS3 as prologue.) and it’s a good way to introducing TS4 that time. I know there is so much harsh review about TS4 and I hate it, it just spoiled the fun for the new user like me. I love your writing style; it’s well-written too, just like read a novel (I hardly could write like that. I think that’s not my style haha). I also love when you can balance about the drama and comedy. I had chuckles when I read yours (Man! Looking Pauline wore the same thing like an elder that she met just priceless) and I love the pictures that you picked; some of them are hilarious (like when Pauline tried to extinguish the flame and she ends up like man in black, lol) and cute (like the paintings)!
Hank and Pauline also grew up as a person, looking at their bios in TS3, I’m glad that they can overcome their fears and move on with their life. There are lots of things that made me curious, but it’s up to the author herself. Not every story ends with a happy ending though. But, you’re wrapping the end of the story with humor, so I’m not too sad and that’s great
I’ll looking forward to see another story of yours (still catch up!)
Thank you for sharing
