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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 2
« Reply #45 on: July 10, 2014, 08:45:29 AM »
I recently discovered this story and <3 it! And that burglar deserve what what she (?) got! Stealing from a sim who owns only a fire pit and tent? Death!

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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 2
« Reply #46 on: July 11, 2014, 11:57:31 AM »
Hope your back is doing better Khaine... Mine decided to spasm this morning so I'm in agony (had to go to work since I'm a temp and temps don't get sick leave/pay) got Dr appointment at 7:30 tomorrow morning for some much needed pain shots! Great chapter and I'm glad to see that your work-around for installing sims,  well,  worked lol

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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 2
« Reply #47 on: July 14, 2014, 12:08:55 PM »
Cool story! I tried "homeless" playing a while back and it was actually quite a bit of fun.


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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 2
« Reply #48 on: July 16, 2014, 12:17:47 PM »
I'm going to keep an eye on this. This seems like a fantastic story. :D

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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 2
« Reply #49 on: July 17, 2014, 03:13:55 AM »
Chapter 5 – The March of Spring

The very beginning of spring was an odd time of year. In the mornings it was cold, during the day it was rather warm, and then it was cold again at night. Poor Kahlee didn’t know if she needed to spend the entire time hiding in her tent, and it seemed the plants were just as confused. This was seriously going to hurt her ability to get a pile of cash saved up. Despite that Kahlee knew she had alternatives to working on the garden. Every morning, she weeded the garden, and then went to her favourite spot for a bit of fishing.



It didn’t bring in massive amounts of cash, but it certainly gave her enough to put a little aside, and the cheaper fish she used as food for herself. With having more time in the day, Kahlee decided to go back to using the gym to get a shower.



It was better than a sponge bath down at the beach, plus she figured that she’d actually earnt it. Having some more time in her day allowed her to try fishing in new spots. She did try the graveyard pond, but didn’t have a lot of luck there. The mausoleum was interesting though, so the young woman decided to have a poke around inside.



Okay, she came out looking worse for wear, but she did manage to find some mercury and a diamond that she was able to sell at the shop for a good chunk of cash. Realising the catacombs had quite a bit of hidden treasure, Kahlee now had a new plan for spring, at least until her plants awoke from her slumber. Freshen up, go fishing…



…and then wander the catacombs.



That actually worked in her favour. Over the next 4 days, she found some compendium that sold for just under 1000 simoleans, a special seed which she planted immediately and a book titled “The Fall of Atlantis” which she was able to sell for just over 2000 simoleans! That put a good chunk of cash into her nest egg. About half-way through spring, the weather warmed up and the plants finally awoke from their slumber.



Fishing now took a back burner while Kahlee tended to her garden. It needed watering and weeding on a regular basis, though she was reward with respectable hauls that generally sold for 1200 simoleans or around that figure.



It seemed that things were going well for the woman that had just been dumped on a strange island almost a year ago. Not only was she getting a good amount of crops, but she also mastered the gardening skill.



And she found a ton of seeds on the beach of her island!



By this point, there were only 11 days to the anniversary of her being left alone, with nothing but a tent and a fire pit. The woman surveyed her garden and the pile of simoleans she kept stored in her tent, and smiled. Alright, she still lived out of a tent, but she was doing very well for herself. The council had told her she’d need somewhere around the 17k mark in order to claim the land and get a house built, and she was very close to that.

Since she was feeling lucky, Kahlee took another wander through the catacombs…



…and came back out with another special seed, and a piece of jade.

By the evening of her 31st day on this island, she had another load of crops to sell.



Shopkeeper: “Well, hello there Kahlee!”
Kahlee: “Hi! Another load of fresh fruit and veg for you.”
Shopkeeper: “You’ve been coming here a while now. Surely you’ve managed to save up a good amount of cash.”
Kahlee: “I have indeed.”
Shopkeeper: “How much you got now?”
Kahlee: *counts her newly acquired pile of simoleans* “…with this, enough to build a house!”
Shopkeeper: “Hey, that’s great! You’ll be an actual citizen of Isla Paradiso!”
Kahlee: “It would seem so, yep! I’m excited for it. One night left in a tent, and then I can finally have a roof over my head.”
Shopkeeper: “Well, you earned it. Now go on, be off with you.”

Going back to her island, Kahlee sat down and cooked one of her fish.



Kahlee: “No more tent… no more fire pit. A proper bed, a washing machine and a cooker… wait… I can’t cook!
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And on Day 31 of being dumped on an island, Kahlee hit her 17,500 simolean target to get a house built! :D

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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 5
« Reply #50 on: July 17, 2014, 03:26:17 AM »
Nice! Good to see that things are looking up for Kahlee...  ;D Maybe this punishment of sorts inflicted upon her might turn out to be more of a blessing as time goes by... :)

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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 5
« Reply #51 on: July 17, 2014, 07:02:47 AM »
Yay Kahlee! But she cannot forget the burglar alarm. Remember the burglar.



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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 5
« Reply #52 on: July 17, 2014, 09:55:34 AM »
Wow, Kahlee has really accomplished a lot! Kudos to her on her perseverance even though she's still technically the bad guy... :D

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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 5
« Reply #53 on: July 17, 2014, 11:08:45 AM »
I literally -just- took this screenshot for Kahlee's next update... but it came out so well, I had to share it early. :)


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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 5
« Reply #54 on: July 17, 2014, 04:47:07 PM »
We'll done to Kahlee! She worked so hard to get to this point. But as Geniequeen said, don't forget the burglar alarm!
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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 5
« Reply #55 on: July 17, 2014, 06:52:51 PM »
Yeah, a burglar alarm is a must! Although I'm sure the news has travelled that if you rob her Grimm comes for you!
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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 6
« Reply #56 on: July 18, 2014, 01:04:28 PM »
Chapter 6 – Summer’s Dawn.

Having enough money to build a house was a great feeling, and Kahlee wanted to get started immediately, but she knew there were various legal requirements she had to get out of the way first. She was still clean and somewhat respectable, so a visit to city hall was the first item on her agenda for the morning.



Clerk: “May I help you?”
Kahlee: “Morning. I need to register as a citizen, for permission to build a house and as a self-employed gardener. In that order.”
Clerk: “Alright. Well I need name and where you live to start with.”
Kahlee: “Kahlee Watkins, Isla Romantica.”
Clerk: “Oh! You’re the one that’s been camping over there and growing fruit and vegetables!”
Kahlee: “That’s right.”
Clerk: “Well… you’ve lived there so long and actually made the land useful that we can forego the usual fee. Let’s get the rest of the paperwork done.”

No longer than an hour later, she was all done. Kahlee was now a registered citizen, with a self-employed job and permission to build a home on the scrap of land she had claimed. A quick phone call was made to some local contractors to make a start on building her new home. Next was a trip to the gym, she did need to freshen up but she also fancied the idea of using the exercise equipment… and she actually could now! It was only for citizens of the island, and she’d just dealt with that, so hitting the treadmill seemed like a good idea.



Meanwhile, her order for work was being completed. Unfortunately, Kahlee had her priorities entirely the wrong way around. When you have enough money to build a house… you build a house…



She got a greenhouse sorted out first and just had her tent moved into it. The basic shell of a house was completed, but she would need more money to finish it off. Kahlee  figured that looking after the plants first meant she’d have money all year round, so it was a good idea in one respect. After exercising and showering, she decided to swing by the junk yard to see if she could pick up any items to repair for her new home. She managed to find a few rocks…



…and a dryer!



It went cold that night… very cold. While most people would have criticised her decision to look after the plants first, Kahlee was very pleased.



They would now continue to flower and produce harvests no matter how cold it went. Of course, her first stop the next day was the supermarket to drop off another load of produce.



Shopkeeper: “Wow! That’s a lot today!”
Kahlee: “I had a greenhouse built.”
Shopkeeper: “What about, y’know, an actual house?”
Kahlee: “Well… they made a start on that, but ran out of money. I figured the plants were more important.”
Shopkeeper: “I can see why.”

And Kahlee walked out 3000 simoleans better off. That was enough to get a few more bits put in her new home, and she bought herself a MultiTab 6000, since she figured treating herself was very much overdue. The greenhouse had some sprinklers installed to make things easier for her, and the poor house got neglected again. It took a couple more days of selling harvest before Kahlee was able to kit out her new home with some necessities, like a working kitchen, bathroom and a bed.

It was nice to be able to cook proper food…



…and without any classes, online tips or anything else, it turned out she was actually quite good at it!



Being able to sleep in a proper bed was a luxury that Kahlee had been looking forward to for quite a while now.



So was having a shower in her own home!



Of course, she didn’t forget to have a burglar alarm installed.



Love day soon rolled around, which meant everyone had the day off. Kahlee didn’t though, she went straight out to her garden as soon as she’d eaten her breakfast. The plants wouldn’t wait just because everyone else was having the day off. Then she took a quick trip to the main island to grab herself some new clothes and sell her harvest. While there, she missed a call from Guillermo, who apparently remembered Kahlee from her homeless gardening days. She’d taken him some fish quite a while back.

Despite that, he invited her to his party, which she happily accepted… and spent most of it just dancing.



The party ended early, but she wasn’t done yet… so she went straight to the spring festival and just carried on dancing until she was exhausted…



…though perhaps she should’ve changed out of the swimsuit first.

Thing were certainly starting to pick up for the woman who had just been left on a beach in scorching hot weather. After breakfast, she needed to share her good fortune, and there was only one person that she wanted to tell.



Akoni: “Morning Kahlee.”
Kahlee: “Hey! How are you doing?”
Akoni: “Older, not much wiser, but otherwise alright. Thanks for the advice you gave me.”
Kahlee: “Not a problem.”
Akoni: “How about you? I heard you finally registered as a citizen.”
Kahlee: “I did! Even got a house built!”

They chatted for close to an hour, with Kahlee giving him all the details about her new home, and Akoni just talking about what retired life was like. It was nice to be able to share some good news with a friend, especially the first friend she met in this place. For the first time, Kahlee was actually enjoying her life. As soon as the call was over, she went out to the garden to look after her plants. Her phone buzzed and she whipped it out to check what the message was.



Kahlee: “ANOTHER party? You have more money than sense, Guillermo…”

Of course, she went to the party and ran into one of his relatives, a charming young man by the name of Everado.



He was nice enough, and they spent most of the night swapping stories. He seemed both surprised and impressed that this woman had done so well for herself, starting out with nothing but a tent and managing to raise enough money to build a house. Apparently she made something of an impression, because he called her for a chat first thing in the morning.



That didn’t last very long, since she really didn’t have anything else to say. Neither did he, actually, but it was nice to hear a friendly voice at least. She got a call off the local restaurant later that day, asking her to take over some cheese that she’d homegrown. Now, that might sound odd, but she had been taught how to plant cheese, so a trip to the store was made, and she planted 5 pieces of cheese that night.



Kahlee: “This can’t possibly work…”

The next day was boring by comparison. She simply got up, worked on her garden and then sold her produce. That was enough to finish her house to a basic standard, however.



Summer started the next day, and Kahlee mastered her fishing skill thanks to the MultiTab she bought. So, that evening, she went to the graveyard to see if she could catch any deathfish.



That didn’t go well, but she did make a new friend… sort of.



Kahlee: “AUGH! Don’t sneak up on me like that!”
Glenda: “…sorry.”

Apparently even her home was having a few problems of the spiritual variety…



Burglar: “…I told you I was hungry.”
Kahlee: “Oh get back in your urn…”

Exactly one year to the day of being dumped on the island, and Kahlee could say she had done very well for herself. Now, what would the next year bring…

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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 6
« Reply #57 on: July 18, 2014, 02:19:09 PM »
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Buglar: “…I told you I was hungry.”
Kahlee: “Oh get back in your urn…”

That was awesome  ;D

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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 6
« Reply #58 on: July 18, 2014, 03:56:10 PM »
Will the past affect the present?

Or will the clean slate prescribed by the doctor work?

Will she go mad from all these ghosts?

Did grim recognise her?

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Re: Lost In Paradise - Chapter 6
« Reply #59 on: July 18, 2014, 04:31:00 PM »
I will say that Grim DID recognise her. Simply because the reason why is already in my other story. ;)