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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 3
« Reply #30 on: May 22, 2014, 03:48:37 PM »
WOW! Just got up to speed on the legacy story and now there's this... I have to say I am really enjoying your writing and wit, Pippin. Babs is super feisty and I can definitely see the characters you say you used as inspiration in her...
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Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 4
« Reply #31 on: May 22, 2014, 05:11:29 PM »
Chapter 4



Babs continued swimming through the tunnel and found it connected to another well shaft.  She began swimming up. 



Mere seconds later, she surfaced from the pool and found herself face to face with a large, red and gold-colored wall.  And Demond.  The NASP agent was blankly staring at the wall as if trying to figure out what to do next.



“You should stay right there,” Babs said as she walked up and got a satisfying surprised jump from Agent DeCourte, “it’ll be a good spot to watch me leave with the Fist.”
“You’re soaked,” he observed, then glanced at the dive pool. 



“Ah, yes.  That would make sense.”
Babs ignored him and looked at the inscription on the wall.
“Ah, yes, that,” DeCourte said, “not really a student of foreign languages and such.  Just thought I’d wing it without the instructions.”



“Yeah, that’s worked well for you so far, hasn’t it?” responded Barbara.  She then began translating, “Numbered like the beating of a heart and the fists within.”
“Hearts and fists?” a confused Demond mused.
“It’s a riddle,” Babs replied condescendingly.  “You may need to use that squishy thing in your skull as something other than padding.
Barbara then assumed a meditative position and began pondering the meaning of the clue.



“I’ll just wait here while you ponder then?” Demond asked.  “I’ll ponder too then.  Two heads and all that.  Fists and hearts.  Hearts and fists.  Yeah, I got nothing.”
Barbara’s thoughts turned over the exact words.  Beating of a heart.  A single heartbeat.  But the heart pulses twice per beat.  Fists.  That combined with the double beat of a heart could mean two fists.  Fists within.  It’s the venting holes in the wall!  They’re not two vents.  They’re two handles for the door.  The two fists go within the vents into the heart of the wall.”
She then sent Demond to one while she took the other. 



As they both reached in, they found handles (after Demond squirmed because of the presence of bugs).  Turning the handles, they stepped back and watched while the wall shifted and opened, revealing the treasure room within, the Fist of Simla sitting atop its pedestal, and a smirking Victor Clavell.



“So nice of you to act as my rescue party,” he said with a self-satisfied grin.  "I'm afraid I won't be sharing the prize, however.  In fact, I’d already ensured myself full access to the profits from this venture.”  At this, he gestured toward the unmoving form of a man laying against the far wall.  "The door had a pressurized trap and shut on me when I lifted the Fist.  Seems that you've solved that problem, though, so I guess I'll just collect my treasure and go now."
“Think you're leaving with the Fist, huh?" Babs asked.  "Well, you're about to get a fist, but it's probably not the one you're expecting."
"Yeah, you're not leaving with the Fist," added Agent DeCourte, lamely.



“And who’s going to stop me?” asked Clavell.
“She is,” responded Demond. 



At Barbara’s look of derision and disgust, Agent DeCourte added, “Well, don’t look at me to stop him.  I get by in this role on my charm, not my fighting prowess.  As they would say, I’m a lover, not a fighter.”
“As smooth as you’ve been throughout this little adventure,” Babs added, “I can’t really confirm you’re much of either.”



Seeing this exchange of banter as a chance to gain the upper hand, Clavell tried attacking the apparently unsuspecting Barbara.  If he’d known her reputation, he might have thought twice about it.
Clavell is a rough houser.  He knows how to fight dirty and he knows how to hit hard.
Agent Pleasant-Mithrilen is a trained martial artist with years of training.  She knows where to hit and when to strike.



Clavell didn’t stand a chance.
Realistically, Clavell only accomplished one thing through fighting Babs:  he kept her busy while DeCourte snuck off with the Fist.



Though he did leave her his card.




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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 4
« Reply #32 on: May 22, 2014, 05:58:10 PM »
Oh Pippin. I love this!  DeCourte seemed too useless to be an Agent but he is ruthless and manipulative too.  Go get him Babs!
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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 4
« Reply #33 on: May 22, 2014, 06:18:09 PM »
Argh! That DeCourte is a sneaky one! I'm sure he and Babs have not seen the last of one another. Surely he'll need her to save his sorry butt at some point. :P

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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 4
« Reply #34 on: May 23, 2014, 12:38:22 AM »
Ooooo!  ok, this is probably terrible of me, but I love DeCourte more now XD  I sincerely hope that Babs teaches him a lesson, but I always had a weakness for the bad boys lol  I really enjoyed watching her kick Clavell's butt though hehehehe

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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 4
« Reply #35 on: May 23, 2014, 01:12:49 AM »
 “You may need to use that squishy thing in your skull as something other than padding." I find your use of words very pleasing.
And what a fight and then there's the card DeCourte left... perfect.



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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 4
« Reply #36 on: May 23, 2014, 03:45:53 AM »
Mr. DeCourte isn't quite the James Bond, but that's certainly another way to be a good agent. Or an evil way to be an agent, using others to get what you want.



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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 4
« Reply #37 on: May 23, 2014, 10:54:50 AM »
Oh Pippin. I love this!  DeCourte seemed too useless to be an Agent but he is ruthless and manipulative too.  Go get him Babs!
Yeah, he's a schemer.  The ones who know their own limitations are the ones who can best manipulate others to cover those weaknesses.

Argh! That DeCourte is a sneaky one! I'm sure he and Babs have not seen the last of one another. Surely he'll need her to save his sorry butt at some point. :P
I love this!
Aww, thanks!
Oh, Babs' isn't done with Demond just yet.  He'll be a recurring figure in her stories.

Ooooo!  ok, this is probably terrible of me, but I love DeCourte more now XD  I sincerely hope that Babs teaches him a lesson, but I always had a weakness for the bad boys lol  I really enjoyed watching her kick Clavell's butt though hehehehe
I don't know if he's as much a "bad boy" as he is a sneaky boy, but I'm glad you're enjoying him.

“You may need to use that squishy thing in your skull as something other than padding." I find your use of words very pleasing.
And what a fight and then there's the card DeCourte left... perfect.
Thanks!  I put quite a bit of time into scripting this all out before I even tried to start taking screenshots and putting it together.
I added in the card bit since the empty pedestal just randomly has a card on it.
Glad you enjoyed the fight scene!  It is the biggest usage of pose player I've done thus far, so I was a bit nervous about it.

Mr. DeCourte isn't quite the James Bond, but that's certainly another way to be a good agent. Or an evil way to be an agent, using others to get what you want.
DeCourte.  Demond DeCourte.  Yeah, he's not James Bond.  I'm glad, however, that people are enjoying his way of being very capably incapable.

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Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 5
« Reply #38 on: May 30, 2014, 09:39:32 AM »

Fist of Simla,  Chapter 5

The Shang Simla airport.



It seemed strangely deserted this day.  Where the usual hustle and bustle of tourists and travel stress would reign, today found few travelers and the easy option for privacy.  That suited one traveler particularly well.

An oasis of peace seemed to exist around a young blonde man who sat awaiting his flight and looking very self-assured.




“Yes, everything went just fine,” he said into his cell phone’s receiver.  “No, no one even remotely suspects that there was a connection.  After all, how would they when most of them don't even believe--” he then looked up and said hurriedly, “I’ve gotta go,” and clicked off his phone.



Approaching him rapidly with a half ton of visible angry energy, and perhaps more importantly, accompanied by two security guards was a strange ash gray woman he’d never seen before.



“He’s the one,” she blurted out, pointing directly at Demond.  Looking around did no good in providing Agent DeCourte with any possible alternatives for who this woman might be accusing.  "It was him!" she asserted again, clearly pointing straight at him.



She then began to choke up as she turned towards the guards and added, “He accosted me and said that if I didn’t carry that tube of strange liquid on the flight, he’d… (sniff) he’d kill me!”



“I…what are you…I didn't....officers, there seems to be…” Demond started to say.
“You’ll be coming with us, sir,” said one of the guards, quietly, but sternly.  “You have the right to remain silent…”
“Okay, okay,” he said, waving his hands in resignation, “I’ll come with you.  Like I was trying to say, it’s a misunderstanding, or mistaken identity, or else she’s just delusional.  I’m sure we can clear this whole mess up in no time.  Just let me grab my bag.” 



As he turned, Demond came to a startling realization:  his bag, the bag containing the Fist of Simla, was missing. 
"As I was saying, you have the right to remain silent..." the guard began again.
"But my bag is missing!" DeCourte protested.



"Did he mention that right to remain silent?" asked the other guard, sarcastically.

Barbara smiled to herself as she stood in the terminal with her new piece of carry-on luggage.



"It's too bad," she said to herself, "that Agent DeCourte had to go with those guards.  He would have had such a great view of me leaving with the Fist." 

 
*Thanks to notjustabook (Louise) for helping me out by custom-making the seated phone pose for DeCourte!  You're awesome!

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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 5
« Reply #39 on: May 30, 2014, 12:13:13 PM »
HA!  Way to go Babs!  That was awesome!

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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 5
« Reply #40 on: May 30, 2014, 01:00:19 PM »
Ha! Clever ruse...though I admit I do sort of feel sorry for DeCourte... :P

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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 5
« Reply #41 on: May 30, 2014, 01:15:10 PM »
HA!  Way to go Babs!  That was awesome!
Thanks!  You had to know our girl would come out on top  ;=)

Ha! Clever ruse...though I admit I do sort of feel sorry for DeCourte... :P
Aww, the foil to our heroine comes across as loveable in a bad boy way.  That's what I was hoping would happen.
And yes, Babs is clever.  She could taking on an adversary in chess just as easily as kickboxing.

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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 5
« Reply #42 on: June 02, 2014, 01:24:01 PM »
Hey! Was that ash-colored girl a Schlick-Wainwright? What is she doing here? Back to your own story, please.

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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 5
« Reply #43 on: June 02, 2014, 03:45:37 PM »
Lol I think that was Mal helping out her "twin"

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Re: Barbara Pleasant-Mithrilen: The Fist of Simla, Chapter 5
« Reply #44 on: June 03, 2014, 11:46:26 PM »
Hey! Was that ash-colored girl a Schlick-Wainwright? What is she doing here? Back to your own story, please.
Well, technically, Babs isn't originally from this story either, so...

Lol I think that was Mal helping out her "twin"
That was Mal.  Guilty as charged.  This story will feature some well-known townies as well as some characters who featured in other stories I've done. 

 

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