The Springs of Immortality immortal dynasty *Graveyard*

[Lizzycakecool]

 Prologue coming soon! By the way, this is a sequel to my failed immortal dynasty. I hope you enjoy this when it comes!

[Lizzycakecool]

Prologue

When I was little, my Mum always used to say "Be good."
All the time.



"Be good."
"Be good."
"Be good."
I never understood it. Be good. When I was a bit older, my Mum had told me "You know all those people, the people that have completed dynasties? They were always good."
And from then on, I wanted to be the girl that wasn't good, but completed an immortal dynasty. My Mum always read to me stories of immortal dynasties. Guess what she would say at the end? No? Figure it out. But she gave me this beautiful book, an amazing book.



She said it was an immortal dynasty rule book. I read it every night.



As I grew older, my Mum grew more nervous.
"Be. Good."
On the day of my birthday, my young adult one, she said
"Look, be my good girl. Please, just be good."

And on that, I was gone.

[Rannera]

This is an interesting start, I'm looking forward to the next post!

[RaiaDraconis]

Ooh, what a fascinating beginning. I look forward to seeing how it goes from here.

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[Lizzycakecool]

This is an interesting start, I'm looking forward to the next post!

Thanks! So far it's going much better than my old one!

Ooh, what a fascinating beginning. I look forward to seeing how it goes from here.

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I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning! I don't want the spouse to be Geoffrey like my old one though ...

[Lizzycakecool]

Chapter 1: Agnes and her flashy car

As I stand on the crisp green lawn, I yawn. I mean, if your tired, you yawn right? But then I remember that I just got transported to the other side of the world. Great. The area around me looks ... familiar. I can't quite put my finger on why. Oh! You obviously don't know me! Well I am Crimson Red - I hate that name - and I am about to start an immortal dynasty! What is that? I have already started!
Voice: YES! WAKE UP!
Me: Who are you!
Voice: Well since I your mother failed an immortal dynasty, I've read a few dynasty's' with watchers and I liked it.
Me: Oh.
Voice: Lets get started!



Most dynasty's start with Agnes, so I go visit Agnes.



Me: I am not going to do small talk. I am Crimson, the new dynasty girl, and you Agnes are going to move in with me.
Agnes: Okay.
Voice: Nice move.
Me: Thanks.
Agnes: I could've said no.
Voice, Me: ...

Agnes sold her car because I told her too. Then we built a house with the money.



Agnes also got a new wardrobe when she moved in.







As tradition, Agnes paints and sculpts. She hasn't started painting but will soon.



But yesterday was a big day for me.
Me: I -
Voice: She
Me, Voice: Changed my/her name to Kylie Spring.
Me, Voice: *Squeal*


Hope you enjoyed it! Next update I will give you her traits as well.

[Rannera]

I like the chapter title. It's a nice start, Agnes looks good in her outfits, and the house is lovely. What are Kylie's traits?

And just to get it straight, "Me" is Kylie and "Voice" is you, right?

[Lizzycakecool]

Oh sorry if it wasn't clear! Yes that's right.
Kylie's traits are: Hopeless romantic, green thumb, natural cook, kleptomaniac and ambitious.
Oh and thank you. I lost a bit of gameplay due to a crash but I will play it the same.

[Lizzycakecool]

Chapter 2: Pearl!

Agnes recently broke this sculpture and some sort of metal came out.
Me: Whoa! Is that a sort of species of alien that exploded your sculpture?!
Agnes: Its woohooium.
Me: So its not an alien?
Agnes: No...



At night, I've been ,how do I explain it?
Borrowing things...




I haven't told Agnes yet. I think she'd give me a right spanking. Even though she's my best friend.
But have you noticed something different about the house?



I got a garden and we got a nursery! A real life nursery!

Voice: Yeah, well done!*sarcasm*
Me: Its not like you did anything!
Voice: I could of pulled that off.
Me*frown*



Guess why we got a nursery!?
Pearl!!

Voice: Pearl is the toddler Agnes adopted.
Me: Pearl! Pearl! Pearl! Isn't she cute?






While Pearl was sitting around being cute,



Agnes was turning young adult.



Agnes: This is strange.



Me: Just don't die!
Agnes: Aaagh!



She did survive. With a few bruises.

And to wrap up this chapter, a random photo of Beau*.



*If that's how you spell his name.

Sorry I haven't been posting a lot. I am busy at the moment.

[Lizzycakecool]

Haha! Double post! 

Chapter 3: Hello room mate!

Yes! We got a room mate!
Voice: Agnes went round at got him. She's old and knows a lot of people.
Agnes: Hey!
Voice: Its true.
Agnes: Is not!
Voice: True
Agnes: Not
Voice: True ...

This could go on for a while. Anyway meet Cyclone! (without all the crazy numbers)



He got a makeover for himself.
Voice: I helped!
Agnes: Not true!
Voice: Is too!
Agnes: Not
Voice: True ...







He got a nice loft room in the new upstairs living area.



























Voice: Go on!
Me: NO!!! *sobs*

















Voice: Kylie has decided she does not want to write any more so I will deliver this next part. Kylie was reading her gardening book when she saw Agnes go upstairs. Everyone else has bedrooms on the ground floor so she knew Agnes wanted to find Cyclone. She silently tailed Agnes up the stairs *mission impossible theme tune* and watched from the corner of the room and what she saw was ....... pretty bad. Agnes was flirting with Cyclone. Kylie didn't know just how much she loved Cyclone before now, and stared dumbstruck.



She was glad Cyclone pulled away and quietly padded down the stairs.

Cyclone's point of view

I wake at six today - like I normally do. So I can get to work by seven. But I don't feel right. Why am I with these people? Why did I agree to the invitation? "You know why Cyclone." I silently scold myself. Then again, the woman flirted with me. Tamara. I haven't told that I'm in a relation with her. But something... no. I'm not sure. What is this household doing to me?




Hope thats a cliff hanger for you 

[Lizzycakecool]

*graveyarding*

[Pam]

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