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Desan Dynasty | Chapter 5: The Incredible Transformation
« on: March 21, 2014, 12:11:25 PM »
Chapter 1: Meet E

It was a lovely summer day. The sun was high in the sky. The world was waking up from a night out on the town. Life was wonderful for young Enero Desan, because today was the day he became a true adult. No more curfew, no more school work, and no more limitations on his interactions. It was wonderful.

E woke up late and ran down the stairs of his family's luxurious home on the outskirts of Bridgeport. There was a cake sitting on the counter with his name written all over it.

"Happy birthday son." His mother greeted. "Hurry up and blow out the candles."

E didn't take a moment to contemplate his mother's eagerness. His own exceeded hers. He rushed up to the counter and leaned over the cake. He paused for a moment to think of his wish. He had access to all the simoleons he could ever want. His house was big and grand. He never had to work a day in his life. He had the prettiest girlfriend a guy could ever want. What did a guy like him need wishes for? Then he knew.
I wish I could live this life forever! He thought to himself as he leaned over the cake and blew out the candles.

Things escalated from there. Sparkles surrounded him and he grinned excitedly. He suddenly felt the need to spin around. When he did he looked down and he was bigger and taller. His wardrobe magically changed (and not for the better), but he always blamed that on his magic overflowing on his birthday.

His hands moved to his hips and he grinned proudly. "So this is what freedom feels like?" He asked with a smile.

"About that freedom..." His father spoke up, clearing his throat.

"Your father and I have talking. And we feel it's best if you..."

"What is it, mom?" Enero asked with a confused look on his face.

"Well we think its best if you got your own place." His father finished.

E grinned widely. His own place! He could throw parties every day, invite his girlfriend over, and leave all the mess for his maid to clean up. "That sounds like a wonderful idea. Where am I moving to?"

"Out." His father said rather abruptly.

"I know. Where am I going? Oh please tell me you bought me the penthouse across from the Prosper Room!" Enero asked eagerly.

"There is no penthouse for you. There aren't any simoleons for you. There isn't even any cake for you." His father said seriously, pushing the cake away from him.

"But why?" Enero was beyond confused now. He didn't understand what was happening. "Mom?" He asked turning hopefully to his mother.

"E, this is beyond us. You're going somewhere we have no control over. Its just how its supposed to be. Besides this now gives your father and I the chance to retire and move out to Isla Paradiso. We've always wanted to own our own hotel chain." She explained a little more gently.

But the damage was done. "You don't want me." He said, wanting to phrase it like a question, but he knew better.

"Its not like that. This is something you must do. In time you well know the truth of it all."

With that, E found himself standing outside the gates of his family home. Despite knowing the code it still wouldn't open, it kept ringing the doorbell and asking for entrance, which was denied each time.

"But Mom! Dad!"



With that he was left with the only other option. He sought out Aimee, his one and only. She lived with her aunt in the middle of the hustle and bustle of the city. She'd surely help him out.

"Why don't you stay with us for a while? It'll be like a permanent sleepover! I'm sure Aunt Kat won't mind. Make yourself at home." Aimee smiled at him.



E was already feeling a little better. He knew he could trust Aimee. She had always been there for him. Well always as in since he knocked over the punch bowl at prom. That's when she first noticed him and by the end of the night they were going steady. They spend the rest of their school year skipping class, egging houses, and throwing parties when his parents were out of time. And he knew it was meant to be.

In the other room he heard Aimee speaking with her aunt. Her voice raised momentarily before lowering so E couldn't listen in. Not that he'd do that anyways...
 
It was a while before Aimee emerged from her aunt's room. She looked bummed and upset. E tried to cheer her up with some bad jokes, but it didn't work. So instead he had a crazy idea and decided to take her out on the town.

The Banzai Lounge wasn't a hot spot tonight, but it wasn't dead either. So it was perfect for what E had planned. They danced for a little bit and enjoyed a few drinks. On the house, of course, the perks of being famous.

"You know, I've never met anyone who made me feel like you do. Call it crazy, call it love or whatever you want to call it. But I want you. I want to be with you forever and ever." Enero explained as he lowered himself down onto one knee. "You the one that I want. O, o, oo, honey..."

 

"Look E. You're great and all. And we had fun in high school. But isn't this a little too fast. Don't you have plans? Wishes, Lifetime Goals? You didn't even want to propose, did you?"

"Well it never popped up, but that doesn't mean I love you." E replied a little disappointed.

"Our relationship isn't even quite there. I don't need commitment issues to say no. You are being extremely awkward."

"Last call! The bar is closing!" The mixologist announced. Though he lied, even E wanted to grab another drink, the bouncers were already pushing him out the door.

"We can still work things out Aimee. In a few hours we can pretend this never happened and we can move on with our lives. We can start a fresh. I'll get a job. Whatever you need me to do."

Aimee mulled the idea around for a moment before the answer popped into her head. "No Enero, We can't." She answered. "It's over. Go find someone else to bother. I don't need you. I never needed you in my life.  You were just arm candy for the hallways. Now in the real world, I need a real man to take care of me. Perhaps that Beau. He's a nice strong vampire. He'd certainly take good care of me."

"Aimee, you can't be serious. I need y-"

"No E. Get out of my sight. And if I ever see you again, I'll...I'll..." She couldn't even finished her sentence. She just turned away, tears obviously forming in her eyes.

E was defeated. He didn't know what to do, so he turned and sulked away, his heart heavy and broken. First his parents, now Aimee. What was going on?



As he walked down the the dark streets of downtown. A voice reached out to him from the beyond. He was confused at first, but he soon realized it must be a sign from the beyond the glass.

There's a better ending to your story, Enero. And your wish will come true.

"It's already fallen to pieces. How could it possibly come true? I'm broke, single, and homeless. I've reached the lowest of the low." 

Not exactly. You wished this life would never end.

"So. My life is ruined now."

You're still alive aren't you?

"Yeah, but what's the point now?"

I can give you everything you once had and more. Future generations will aspire to be just like you. And you will have life. Forever.

"What? Would I be...a god?"

No, Enero. You would be. Immortal.

"Immortal? But how?"

Let me show you how, next stop...

The words faded before he ever learned his destination

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The world blacked out and a grey bar suddenly appeared. Nothing happened at first. Then it suddenly turned green. Gradually the bar got greener and greener until suddenly...
The blackness was greeted by the sun. And Young Enero Desan found himself stumbling through a medieval world, wondering what just happened.



Okay, well stumbling might not be the right word…
 
"Are you crazy? What am I supposed to do? The entire world is covered in dirt and stone? How is a party animal like me supposed to survive in the wild like this. There aren't even any dance clubs or flashy lights!"

Calm down. I've got you covered. Cha-ching, cha-ching.

"How'd you do that?"

I've got my ways. Until then, let's explore.

"Oh hey! What's this?"



I forgot to mention. Welcome to Dragon Valley.



"Sweet."


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« Reply #1 on: March 21, 2014, 12:28:16 PM »
I'm already on my third generation, so I'll try not to get too ahead of the story. c:

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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 1: Meeting the Founder
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2014, 02:32:19 PM »
Wonderful start, and it's great to hear that you're so far ahead!
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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 1: Meeting the Founder
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2014, 03:57:09 PM »
 
Wonderful start, and it's great to hear that you're so far ahead!

Third time's the charm. Heh. My first two tries made it to generation 2 before they fizzled out.

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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 2: Exploring Dragon Valley
« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2014, 04:52:03 PM »
Chapter 2: Exploring DV


Time to go out and meet the locals! The voice from beyond the glass spoke once again.

Enero looked up quizzically, "You mean I can't stay here and play with Vie?"

You've already named it?

"Of course you can't have a dragon without a name." He replied like it was common knowledge.

Otherwise they'd eat you?

"Vie would never do that would you, would you?" E cooed at the dragon tickling its belly.

You're never going to reach immortality are you? The voice stated shaking its unseen head.

That captured Enero's attention. "Well you've never told me how. So how am I supposed to know what to do?"

I told you to go out and meet people. That's the first start. You only have 1800 simoleons. You and Vie are going to sleeping outside otherwise.

"What!? I hate the outdoors!" E exclaimed, wide eyed.

That's not one of your traits.

"Well I strongly dislike it. How about that?" He crossed his arms and stuck his tongue out childishly.

Whatever, let's meet some of the locals and get you a wife.

"A wife! I have to get married too! You saw how badly that turned out last time!"

Because you moved too quickly, or too slowly. Besides how else are you supposed to have kids?

"I'm beginning to regret this choice." He didn't ever think to weigh his options. But at the time this seemed like the best bet. Now, not so much.

Yeah, well you're stuck with me for 8 generations.

Enero let out a loud groan and shook his head. "I can't believe it. You tricked me."

I offered you immortality. Everything comes with a price, you just failed to ask what that price was. Now go...

It was a slight surprise, when he begrudgingly turned and head towards the street. Though not without making at face first.

First stop. The neighbors.



"Hey! What's up!? I'm Enero, but all the ladies call me E!"

"Fare morning to you as well, sire." The woman responded questionably.

"I'm suppose to wine and dine the ladies so I can become immortal."

"I've got to go… feed the hog." Susie turned and ran back inside as quickly as possible.

"What did I do wrong?" Enero asked disappointed.

You may be a born salesman, but your flirting skills are seriously lacking. You sure you're not unflirty? Let's meet some others.

"Oh how about this guy! He seems cool!"

Fine, just tone it down just a bit. Try not to scare anyone off or you'll be sleeping in a sleeping bag for the rest of your life.



"Okay okay…I won't mess this one up…" Enero responded as he approached the man with the peculiar green hair and purple skin.

"Top of the morning, neighbor! I haven't seen the likes of you around Dragon Valley. I'm Kearney O'Shea!"



"What kind of name is Kearney?" E sniggered. "My name is Enero."

"Well, what kind of name is Enero?" Kearney retorted.

"I like you." Enero grinned. "You should move in with me."

"Maybe I will. Can my brother come too?"

"Why not. The more the merrier!"

Wait E! All sims in the household that are non-im...

"Too late!"

You're hopeless...

"Guess what I found!"



Oh god, not another one!

"His name is Rogue."



This is going to be a long dynasty...

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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 2: Exploring Dragon Valley
« Reply #5 on: March 21, 2014, 05:17:39 PM »
Great start I love Dragon Valley so this should be fun to read.

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« Reply #6 on: March 21, 2014, 08:31:18 PM »
Good choice Enero. The O'shea brothers will be a great next heir spouse provider.
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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 2: Exploring Dragon Valley
« Reply #7 on: March 22, 2014, 02:53:54 AM »
Great start I love Dragon Valley so this should be fun to read.

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Its a nice town. I love how convenient everything is to the Dynasty lot. They all just walk to work. Well unless they're being lazy.

Good choice Enero. The O'shea brothers will be a great next heir spouse provider.

I like the O'Shea Brothers. Though even towards the end I still could tell who was who. Though their makeovers didn't help me one bit. Since I like to remain in the same family as their 'favorite' color, their favorite color was the exact same. They were similar enough already…sigh. Its done now.

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« Reply #8 on: March 22, 2014, 03:21:31 AM »
I find it easy to tell the difference between the O'Shea brothers. They have different skin and hair colours.

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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 3: Slaves, Dragons, and Other Wet Things
« Reply #9 on: March 22, 2014, 03:58:41 AM »
Chapter 3: Slaves, Dragons, and other Wet Things


It wasn't long after the brothers moved in that E learned that his new roommates came from supernatural backgrounds.

Kearney, his purple friend, was a mermaid. And because of his advanced knowledge of sea life, and the fact that he had to eat something, he took it upon himself to study fishing.



Let's start out by saying, mermaids are not meant to live on land. They can barely survive the summer. But he can magically change his skin tone when suffering from a sunburn. That's a plus right?





"If I would've known I'd be constantly running out to the beach to save him, I never would've invited him to live with us!"

Yes, you would've.

"Well it doesn't mean I like it any more than you do."

Onward, Breandan O'Shea on the other hand is a witch, or wizard, just like E (if I haven't mentioned that part yet). It had no effect on his slave skill in the house.

"Did you just say slave?" Breandan piped up. "Kearney! What have you gotten us into?"

"I can do magic!?" Enero exclaimed excitedly, waving his hands around. "I'm going to make some more money!" Sadly what appeared in his hands wasn't the simoleons he was looking for. Instead it was simply an apple that by the looks of it had been left alone for way too long. But E ate it anyways. He'll probably regret that later. That or he just likes worms. He is a child after all.

So while Kearney focused on raising his angler skill and not shriveling up on the beach. Enero and Breandan remained back at the shack, working on their sculpting skills.





With the O'Shea brothers in the house now, Enero had enough contacts to throw a mediocre sized party. He put down his chainsaw long enough to whip out his cellphone and invite a few friends over.

What Enero didn't expect was an uninvited guest to arrive midway through the party.



Let's just say the party didn't last much longer than that. But he did get the meet the newest sister to the O'Reilly family, and that put him in a good mood for the next 24 hours.



"All this talk of nooboos makes me want another one."

You have children!?

"No silly. Another dragon, of course."

I give up. Here's an egg for you. The voice obliged and a green scaly egg appeared on the ground before E.

"I knew you'd give in to their cuteness." E replied with a satisfied grin. "You're so cute, aren't you? Yes. When you grow up big and strong we'll pay tag and I'll teach you to drive." He told the egg as she sent word around town that he was having another party. He was surprised cell phones even worked out here. He was certain he'd be using pigeons to sent out word of his little get togethers, but even in the olden days, apparently they all had cellphones and texting. 

But little did he know what would happen next.

Plates scattered the lot, as his guests had no place to set their house warming meals.

"You told me to bring the mac and cheese? But where am I suppose to put it?"

"Next to that blade of grass well do?" E told his guests as they arrived on his lot.

"This blade of grass or that one?"

"That one, you imbecile. How many blades of grass are there?"

"You do live on a 64 x 64 square lot, so I'd reckon over a million."

"Just put the plate down!"

So many stubborn people, how does that make you feel? The voice asked mockingly.

"Shut up, you."

There was plenty to do. The music was playing loudly. People were playing musical chair with the only chair on the lot, fighting for a place to eat their vegetarian Salmon. Some pop singer's high pitch voice filled the air. Something about a wrecking ball.

Then it happened all too quickly. Enero was talking with Chloe O'Reilly about her new baby when Jennifer Pleasant arrived.

It wasn't her first instinct to dance to the music or grab a plate of hot and sour soup. Nope. She was interested in the dragon egg. She stood there a moment admiring it.

Enero smiled as he turned to look at her. He was so proud of his pride and joys. "Hey Jen, don't touch that it's about to ha-"

He stopped dead in his tracks as he watched Jennifer bend down and grab the egg, hiding it somewhere on her person.



"You can't just take people's eggs, Jenn. Give it back!" Enero demanded heatedly.

"Woah, Calm down E. It's just an egg."

"Ju-Ju-Just an egg! That's it!"





Well that worked out real well for you, huh?

"I'm not finished. Hey Jen. Come back tomorrow. Gotta present for you."

"Alright, thanks. Great party by the way."

Uh-Oh, What are you going to do.

"You'll see, you'll see."

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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 3: Slaves, Dragons, and Mermaids.
« Reply #10 on: March 22, 2014, 04:03:33 AM »
I find it easy to tell the difference between the O'Shea brothers. They have different skin and hair colours.

Rachel

I can kinda tell the difference, but I failed to ever get their names right. And when I wanted one I ended up with the other. It was a never ending fail. Even with one being a mermaid, I would look at the stats and it not register who was who. Kearney would constantly be complaining that he was hungry because I would feed him cake  and waffles instead of fish.

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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 3: Slaves, Dragons, and Mermaids.
« Reply #11 on: March 22, 2014, 06:48:51 AM »
Ouch! a dragon stealer! That's why I always put dragon eggs in the sim inventory after finish talking with it.
I once had 'a thief' (very rude house guest) that steal my egg just because I let it lay on the ground. I had to stalk the dimned sim for days.
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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 3: Slaves, Dragons, and Mermaids.
« Reply #12 on: March 22, 2014, 03:09:54 PM »
Ouch! a dragon stealer! That's why I always put dragon eggs in the sim inventory after finish talking with it.
I once had 'a thief' (very rude house guest) that steal my egg just because I let it lay on the ground. I had to stalk the dimned sim for days.

Unfortunately, I never found out what happened to that dragon of mine. I suppose she still has it in her inventory. She's taken the elixir of the fae and is still around to this day. Perhaps I shall woo her, cure her and move her in to see if E can finally get his hands on it. Haha.

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Desan Dynasty | Chapter 4: Above the Law
« Reply #13 on: March 22, 2014, 04:33:29 PM »
Chapter 4: Above the Law

When Jennifer came over the next day, Enero was playing with Rogue casually.



"So Jenn, I hear you like dragons, huh?" Enero questioned with a sly smile on his lips.

"They're alright. John and I moved all the way out here just to see them. I never thought about owning one." Jenn replied with a shrug.

"Yet you thought about stealing mine." Enero muttered under his breath.

"What was that?"

"Nothing." E put on a wide smile as he approach the side of his shack. "How would you like to have Rogue here. He's a wonderful dragon and he would be a great addition to your family."

"Really? You mean it? What do I have to give you in return?"

"Only your friendship and perhaps we and mend our little feud and you can join me in my household of slaves."

"What was that last part?" Jennifer asked with a raised brow. It was obvious she had a slight hearing problem. But E ignored her.

"Here take Rogue and treat him well." Enero stated, letting Rogue take flight from his arm.



"Uh, E. What is he doing."

"Rogue. Dracarys!"



"ARGHHH!!! YOU'RE CRAZY!!!" Jennifer screamed as she danced on top of the fires, running as far away as she could.

Enero only stood there laughing manically.

"This is a wonderful place to live. Sure it's a shack but it's home. And E is such a wonderful person. I couldn't have asked for a better life…" Kearney droned on, clearly oblivious to the happenings behind him.

Well that was quite mature, E.

"That'll teach her to mess with my dragons."

You're hopeless. You still need to find yourself a spouse. And you might've just chased off a potential one.

"Don't worry I got this."

"Who are you talking to?" Chloe O'Reilly approached with her pen and pad out.

Always the center of attention, huh E?



"Nobody of importance." He grinned at her, ignoring the voice from above.

"So I heard you just blazed the pants off Jennifer Pleasant. Do you have any comments?" Chloe asked eagerly. It was hard to tell if she was a journalist or a police officer, but Enero took the upmost precaution when delving into the story.

"You see Chloe. That brown-nosing little wannabe came wandering onto my property, stealing my eggs, and getting into fights. She had it coming. So I decided to teach her a little lesson. I was going to fight fire with, well ah fire. And it was glorious watching her burn. Dancing from foot to foot, screaming like a little baby." He laughed. "And then when all was said and done. And she was singed liked a roasted duck. She ran off crying like a little babe!"

Oh god. That's it we're all going to jail.

"Thank you for your time." Chloe smiled pleasantly as she turned and ran off to spread the word of the crazy neighbor.



The next day the local paper ran an article about the local Dynasty Man and his obsession with dragon eggs.

DV local Dynasty man has weird obsession with dragons. He spends his days going around stealing eggs from your homes and local businesses. Yet should you steal from him, the fires are released and he'll hunt you down like a werewolf on a full moon. DV Local Jennifer Pleasant was a victim of his latest attack. "I had no control over what I did, but he had full control over what he did. He even argues with himself. I don't know what's going on, but I suggest he should be locked up as soon as possible."

"Woah! You lit Jennifer Pleasant on fire!" Breandan exclaimed excitedly.

"Yup. And I enjoyed it too." E replied proudly.

Breandan, aren't you a police officer? Shouldn't you be arresting him?

"Nope, I quit that job when I moved in with you guys."

Right. I forgot. Kearney?

"I left the military, too. Though you said once I reached level 5 you'd let me join law enforcement again so I can achieve my lifetime goal."

Well the police will be swarming the place soon enough, I suppose. Better pack our bags and call it the end.

"Not so fast. I'm one step ahead of you. I went out and bought Garda Police and Military." Enero announced proudly. "So if the want to keep their jobs they'd do best not to arrest us."

How'd you even afford that. We don't have any simoleons.

"Well it only cost us about a grand." He answered sheepishly. "But we get a hundred simoleons each week!"

For once you've done something right. Now you still need to get yourself a wife.

"I was hoping you'd forget that." Enero responded with a shake of his head.

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Re: Desan Dynasty | Chapter 4: Above the Law
« Reply #14 on: March 22, 2014, 07:58:55 PM »
Hoho...
Invite Jennifer over and then smash the jar of friendship on her then ask her to moved in. Then take your dragon back and have her as torment object for free. (In case you want to moved her in)
Just burn her and chase her with fire all the time and everytime you see her (In case you don't want to moved her in)
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