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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 13)
« Reply #45 on: November 02, 2013, 05:23:08 AM »
That was a nice way to put all these interactions and put them all into story. I enjoyed every bit of it; I'm surprised I really thought that Tracey will be arrested for real! I didn't know that was Dallas until I see the last screenshot, lol ;D
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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 13)
« Reply #46 on: November 02, 2013, 05:38:36 AM »
Aw, that was so cute xD
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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 14)
« Reply #47 on: November 02, 2013, 10:48:22 AM »
Thank you for the comments, glad you enjoyed it  ;D

Another chapter coming up, I might do some more today as well.



Chapter 14: Birthday Surprises

Dallas is just about keeping up with his ambitious sister in the promotion stakes, he's just been given the keys to his very own patrol car.



Relations with MaryKay have soured slightly since they both took careers on opposing sides, I had always feared this might happen.



Our relationship though is as strong as ever, we don't get much chance to go out together so when Bob invited us to a party we jumped at it.



When it was over we did something we hadn't done since his last birthday, took a ride in the hot air balloon.



Tom is still working on that potion idea of his, he's discovered quite a few others, including one that would make him young again, I told him in no uncertain terms he was not to drink it. I think I might confiscate that one.



Dallas is close to finishing the ice personality challenge, he persuaded June to pose for a sculpture, she's done every sculpture so far, now it would be her turn. His intention was to start it and then once he'd got his last couple of sculptures done for the challenge he would complete it. Well that is what he told his mother anyway.



Lets just say she wasn't overly amused by his little joke.

"I do not look like that!".



MaryKay has been asked on another date, this time by Dallas' boss Hal Breckenridge, Dallas swears blind he had nothing to do with it but I'm not so sure, the poor mans terrified of her, something or somebody must have persuaded him to ask her out.



Needless to say it didn't go very well.

It's Grace's birthday and Tom has finally got that elusive potion he's been after.



I got Grace a nice cake for her birthday, had it all set out in the dining room ready for a family celebration but there was a slight problem.

"You move."

"No, you move."

"I can't move, you've got your elbow stuck in my chest!."



By the time we finally got ourselves sorted Grace had got fed up waiting and had her birthday herself. She's such a brave little thing.



She wasn't the only one though.




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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 14)
« Reply #48 on: November 02, 2013, 10:55:13 AM »
I haven't commented for a while, but then again, I would have just gushed over Grace's cuteness. She really did get the best genes.

And going back to chapter 12, I hate the bright-blue suit too. Well, my retinas do.
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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 14)
« Reply #49 on: November 02, 2013, 12:26:30 PM »
Another bad date, MaryKay? At this rate she may end up old and alone x.x Happy birthday, Grace =]
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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 14)
« Reply #50 on: November 02, 2013, 01:27:14 PM »
I haven't commented for a while, but then again, I would have just gushed over Grace's cuteness. She really did get the best genes.

And going back to chapter 12, I hate the bright-blue suit too. Well, my retinas do.

Yes she did, I've had a lot of kids with Dallas, used them for the baby boomer and service challenge this year (with changed traits of course), not to mention all my numerous games in the past with this pairing and Grace is one of the prettiest girls they have had, I lucked out there seeing as I had to look at her for so many generations  ;D

Another bad date, MaryKay? At this rate she may end up old and alone x.x Happy birthday, Grace =]

Sometimes I'm very tempted to comment on the comments but that would be spoilerish so I have to keep quiet :-X

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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 14)
« Reply #51 on: November 02, 2013, 03:00:55 PM »
That was scary and weird when your imaginary friend is bigger than you. Congratulations, Grace! Hope that MaryKay will find someone that really love her. I know that she has some social problem as teenager, but she can do it. Go, MaryKay!
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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 15)
« Reply #52 on: November 02, 2013, 03:38:35 PM »
Chapter 15: Feeling Old

Grace's behaviour is starting to concern me, she told me that Puzzle had shouted at her not long after her birthday, I tried to reassure her that Puzzle was just a doll and dolls do not shout at little girls, but she just said I didn't understand, that nobody does apart from granddad.



June has done Grace's ice sculpture already, she was very pleased to meet herself and gave it a wave, she's an odd child.



Dallas has Wednesdays off now so we decided to go have some fun, just the two of us for a change. Somehow I don't think we will be giving up our day jobs to become singers.



We took some romantic pictures in the photobooth.



Dallas refused to let me see the next set of photos though.

"Oh come on Dallas, let me see."



"No way, in fact I don't think anybody should see these....ever." and promptly tore them into little pieces.

"Spoilsport."



MaryKay told me she met Dimitri Ivanov in the park, for some reason that made me feel very old, he was just a toddler when we first embarked on this mad plan.



Terra Bella, the Shallows old home wasn't empty for long, it was soon snapped up by Don Lothario, a short while after that he took in some lodgers, Oscar Alphender and Lulu Mather. Oscar is an old friend and so we all got an invite to his spooky day costume party.



Dallas went as his favourite food, not too sure about Oscar, perhaps he's meant to be a tofu dog.



Spooky day also happened to be Dallas' birthday.



"Is that a wrinkle? Oh god, it is!"



Guess who's having a mid life crisis. I actually didn't do a lot with mine other than gradually let it wear off, oh there were plenty of things I wanted to do but not one of them was possible. In the end Dallas got one thing that he wanted, he wasn't very satisfied with that but it was better than nothing.



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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 16)
« Reply #53 on: November 02, 2013, 04:07:18 PM »
Chapter 16: A Vivid Imagination

I realise I don't say an awful lot about what I have been up to, but I haven't been idle, I've mastered painting and I've also mastered the guitar, thus fulfilling my lifetime wish to be a master of the arts.

"So now you're a master of the arts is there any chance I can have my guitar back?" It had never been my intention to keep his guitar, at first we couldn't afford to get one for me and Dallas wasn't using his so I borrowed it, but somehow borrowing had turned into keeping, still he knows all about that kind of thing, he's always borrowing things from the police station.



Grace spends a lot of time running about the garden lately, almost as if she is playing tag but by herself.



She isn't getting on too well with her Aunt, it's no longer as easy to keep them separated as it was when she was a toddler. Thankfully MaryKay sleeps for much of the day and is out all night.



Grace wasn't too worried about making friends with MaryKay anyway, she told me she already had a best friend and didn't need her auntie. I assumed she meant somebody at school, I should have known she was talking about Puzzle. We all thought she was just playing a game, apart from Tom, I could see it upset Grace that nobody believed her when she said Puzzle was real, but we all had to eat our words when she proved us wrong.



"Here this is for you, grandfather says if you drink it you will become real."






Grace claims she didn't know Puzzle was a girl, before drinking the potion she had looked just like the doll, she's a pretty little thing though, almost exotic with her dark skin, black eyes and her strange purple hair with red tips. According to Grace Puzzle talks to herself a lot, and speaks madness to her sometimes, and there I was worried that my daughter might be going insane and all the time it was her imaginary friend instead.

Before the girls had their birthday Dallas tried one last ditch attempt at a camera but ended up having to grovel to Laurel instead.

"Look we're both grown ups now, what happened in high school was years ago, can't we put it behind us, please." But it did no good, she still had no camera for him.



Dallas did Grace's portrait this time, it's really nice to have a record of her as she grows.



Grace was the first to blow out the candles.



Then Puzzle went next, since building the third story I had moved not only the museum pieces but also Kurt, June had made a lovely marble display pedestal and I thought it would be nice to place his urn on, only the next time he put in an appearance he decided he wasn't going to go back and has been hanging about the house ever since, even joining in with the birthday celebrations.



But it wasn't just the girls birthday today, it was also MaryKay's, we shall be living on birthday cake for weeks at this rate.



Ironically Little Miss Temper did not get a midlife crisis.



I never renamed Puzzle so literally had no idea what gender she would be, Grace got natural cook to go with neurotic, clumsy and brave. Puzzle was 'born' with insane, perceptive and rebellious and was given the neat trait when she aged up, if I had thought earlier I'd have had Tom tutor Puzzle so I could pick a trait for her but thankfully she got a useful one.



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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 15 & 16)
« Reply #54 on: November 02, 2013, 04:18:34 PM »
Always be thankful for another neat sim. :P Somehow a lot of my IFs turn out to be insane too.

Happy birthday to everyone!
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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 15 & 16)
« Reply #55 on: November 02, 2013, 04:34:30 PM »
15

That was a couple set of nice screenshot. I love when Dallas didn't want Tracey to see his photo :P
Mid-life crisis is annoying but quite rewarding.

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I laugh at the line, can I have my guitar back? LOL, that was too funny!
Three birthday at once! Happy birthday, everyone! Neat trait is really fun to play ;)

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« Reply #56 on: November 02, 2013, 05:01:28 PM »
Grace is gorgeous as a teen, Puzzle too and I'd thought she'd turn out to be a boy too!
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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 17)
« Reply #57 on: November 03, 2013, 03:47:07 AM »
Two chapters coming up this morning, my proof reader (boyfriend  :P) checked through a few more last night so I'd like to get quite a few added today, at least up to the first immortal which makes it nine chapters, from recollection I'm past the stuff I wrote weeks after it happened and onto the chapters written as I played now.

So hope you don't mind some story spam  :D



Chapter 17: Never Enough Time

June is having a bad day, first she got attacked by a bear.



Then she suffered a butt fire while sculpting.



And as if that wasn't bad enough Puzzle had been at the shower.



A bit of quality time with Tom soon made her day better though.



Grace came home from school alone today, she said Puzzle had gone home with a boy called Preston Franklin, I hope she's behaving herself.



Tom has already outlived Kurt by some days but with everyday that passes so does any chance of a reconciliation between father and son, I just had to give it one last shot.

"Dallas don't you think it's about time you forgave your father?".

"He tried to kiss you! and you want me to forgive that?". There he'd finally said it, we'd danced around this for so long but now it was out in the open at last.

"It was a long time ago now and he's never tried it again, you have to understand he was in a bad place, his marriage was on the rocks, he wasn't thinking straight."

"Don't make excuses for him, grandfather told me he was trying to take you away from me."

"Kurt? and you believed that, oh Dallas. It never ceases to amaze me how even now he manages to manipulate this family, just how long are you going to let a dead man carry on controlling you?".

"Please Dallas, just talk to him, I'm sure you can sort this out if you tried."

"Okay, I'll talk to him in the morning."



"Nothing like a bit of radioactive cider to warm the old bones."

"It better do, I'm freezing."

"Well it was your idea son."

"I know that but I assumed we'd both go and get dressed first, instead you just closed the basket and took off."

"Oh, well anyway were here now, cheers!"



Puzzle has been learning the skills she will need for her future career in science, she's taken a class In handiness and gardening and we have built a greenhouse for her so she can garden in winter. Fishing proves a little more difficult though as the ponds are all frozen, but that didn't stop Puzzle, she just hopped over the wall and started fishing in the pool next door.



Tom has also become quite handy and had decided to do something about the noisy dishwasher, it had plagued us with it's rumbling ever since we bought the thing, he was halfway through upgrading it when Grim finally decided it was his time, he was 99.



"Please, just a bit longer, I was almost done."



The whole family was upset by Tom's passing, I know they have a strange way of showing it but they really were.



"Curse you Grim, why couldn't you have given him a bit longer." At least father and son had made up before Grim came, that is one regret Dallas wont have to live with.



MaryKay though is beside herself with grief, she has lost the one person she could rely on in this world, her daddy.



And if Tom had lived just a few more hours he would have been granted his wish to see his precious daughter become a criminal mastermind.

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« Reply #58 on: November 03, 2013, 03:51:36 AM »
Chapter 18: Mixed Emotions

Grace has decided to take up mixology, I can't help feeling it's not a good pastime for a clumsy person, my heart jumps every time I hear glass breaking, I worry she's hurt herself but as I'm banned from the kitchen I can't go in and check, so a quick "I'm okay mum." through the door has to suffice.



Everybody is still missing Tom, Dallas found comfort from a surprising source, Kurt has been less angry since he died, he floats about the house finding things to amuse himself with and causes very little trouble.



One of MaryKay's co-workers had invited her to meet up at the Gazebo, then at the last minute they had cancelled on her, but to be honest I think it worked out for the best as she ran into an old school chum of ours, Trigger Broke.



They were both hungry so MaryKay asked Trigger to join her for dinner at the bistro, she ran into her co-worker outside, apparently he'd stood her up to make snow angels.



Trigger was also grieving, his elderly girlfriend had recently passed away, MaryKay in a rare act of kindness offered him some comfort.



And in return Trigger offered her a shoulder to cry on.



"I know you're there Dallas, I can see you."

"Oh go on, please."

"Oh alright then, go ahead."



How does he do that? I knew he was there yet still he manages to give me a heart attack.



MaryKay is having a tough time, I understand that, she loved her father as much as I loved mine so I do sympathise, but she has been taking her grief out on Grace, and raising her hand to her was the last straw.



"That's it MaryKay I've had enough, If I see you raise your hand to my daughter once more I'll give you a mid life crisis you wont ever forget!". And I meant it too, my patience with her temper had finally worn out.



Dallas has finished my adult portrait and taken my photograph, they are now in the museum with the sculpture June did for me.



All these birthdays come around so fast, I was shocked when I saw Sherman walk in, but really I shouldn't have been after all I too will be an old lady very shortly.



I look at my friends and realise Sherman is just the first of us, Trigger will be next after me, and then all too soon it will be Dallas.



He thinks I didn't notice him leaving the room, but I did.



I'm not crying over my lost youth, honestly, well maybe just a little bit but can you blame me? I hope Dallas will still feel the same as he did when we took those, and that being married to an old lady won't make him start to look elsewhere.








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Re: For Eternity ~ A Shallow Immortal Dynasty (Chapter 17 & 18)
« Reply #59 on: November 03, 2013, 03:57:48 AM »
RIP, Tom, I'm glad he and his son were on good times when he passed. MaryKay Shallow, I will haunt you forever if you touch Grace again D:<
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