I like Alice. There's something about that defiant look in her eye on the last picture. It's an interesting take on the character with her being a little unusual and others thinking she's a bit mad.
She is very defiant! Thank you, I'm trying to make her understandably insane, she's had a difficult time of it with Aurora being cursed and taken away, and being the "ignored" child, so she invents an escape in Wonderland, which we'll get to see more of soon. Thanks for reading!
I feel a disturbance in the Arthur-verse.
Great story by the way. I love it!
Haha, really? Well... there isn't. He's pretty boring as a character. I'm sorry! I actually realised the other day that it's going a bit down the route of a matriarchy here, completely accidentally! I guess I just prefer the princesses and writing women
I'm glad you like it nonetheless!
I love that Alice goes to the white rabbit for assurance on whether or not she's mad. >.< Hahaha... This chapter is more on the fun side, which I think comes with Alice's personality. You're really doing a great job with her. Not in a very commenting mood right now, but I still love your work and am really looking forward to what you've got in store for us.
Well seeing as he's her closest friend... which I agree is pretty weird! Haha yeah it's nice to have some less dramatic chapters from Alice every now and then, though that soon will change! Thanks for commenting, I really appreciate it and even though you weren't in the mood it's still a great comment! Haha.
*bounces on toes* Will we get more soon? I'm kind of in a Disney Sims withdrawal 0_0
You will indeed! Next chapter is up! Hope you enjoy reading it and thanks for sticking around
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Sleeping Beauty 2.3: Once Upon A DreamHi guys, thanks for being patient! I only have time to work on this story at the weekends so expect an update (at least!) every Sunday. I'm going to try and make that my thing. Story Sunday! So here's chapter 3 of generation 2 from Aurora, hope you like it!
I waited and bode my time before a suitable moment happened when I could leave the cottage without Flora, Fauna or Merryweather noticing. They all worked, but at different hours and Flora always worked from home as a gardener.
One evening Merryweather was working, Fauna was visiting a friend and Flora had gone out to collect some Wolfsbane. It was the perfect opportunity.
I headed out to a nearby secluded park. No one would find me here, and it was pretty enough to look around for a while and not get bored.
I immediately came across a wild horse. I don't know why, but animals really seemed to like me. I liked them a lot too, why wouldn't I? They were often my only choice for company; the birds and squirrels that gathered outside my window.
I went further still down the path, near to where the trees and bushes were thicker. It felt good to be outside for a change.
I surrounded myself with foliage, breathing in the clear air. I had a few hours here. I could probably explore until nightfall.
I had just been wandering around, enjoying my solitude for an hour or two when a boy approached me. He looked about sixteen, like me. I had the weirdest feeling tugging on my brain that I recognised him, but I couldn't place him anywhere.
"You look lost. Are you alright?"
"Fine," I replied curtly, trying to get him to leave before he got me in trouble by telling anyone. "Thanks. Not lost, just looking around."
"Well," he replied doubtfully, "you might want to go home soon. It's not safe to be out in the dark on your own like this."
I avoided eye contact. "Okay, thanks. Goodnight." He could give my aunts a run for their money.
I started to walk further down the path before I noticed him turning around to follow me.
"...What are you doing?"
"Just making sure you get home okay."
I sighed. "I'll go home when I feel like it, thanks." I couldn't help but get a bit irritable.
He shrugged. "Fine by me. I'll just accompany you until then."
Seriously. This guy was getting on my nerves. I advanced on him confrontationally.
"Why do you care what happens to me? We've never even met before."
He blushed for some reason, his eyes travelling downwards to the pavement. "You're the most beautiful girl I've ever seen before. I can't just leave you here on your own. If anything happened to you...." he trailed off awkwardly.
Now it was my turn to be uncomfortable. I'd never even talked to a boy before. I didn't really know how to respond. Suddenly I became aware of every millimeter between us.
"Well... fine. I guess you can stay with me if you want." Some extra protection might not be a bad idea, and this boy seemed to be trustworthy.
We roamed around the gardens, slowly getting to know each other. It was really strange, I really did have the feeling that I'd met him a long time ago. I suppose that can't have been true though, seeing as I'd lived inside with my aunts for all my life.
At one point we sat down to look at the stars and he put his hand on mine. I let him. It was warm and comforting.
Several hours had passed, and I knew I had to go home now or risk being caught. He seemed disappointed.
"When can I see you again?"
"I don't know. My aunts are very protective."
"Well, where do you live?"
"Just a cottage in the woods, you won't find it." I gestured vaguely. "Look I really have to go, I'm late."
"Wait."
And then he pulled me in for a kiss. I was stunned, my heart racing.
"What's your name? Mine's Phillip." he asked urgently.
"Briar Rose."
And then I flew home.
I got back just in the nick of time, with seconds to spare before I heard Merryweather returning from work. I knew Fauna and Flora couldn't have been far behind and I should probably head up to bed, but I was so happily tired that I collapsed on to the sofa and fell fast asleep.
I didn't get in trouble, though my aunts did wonder why I hadn't gone to bed sooner. I told them I had fallen asleep accidentally waiting up for them, which I did feel guilty about. But I knew they wouldn't understand if I told them the truth.
Now that I'd had a taste of real freedom, my days seemed to crawl by painfully slowly with the pattern of homework and tutoring from Fauna, cooking with Merryweather and helping Flora with the gardening. I really wanted to see Phillip again but I wouldn't have another chance to sneak out like that any time soon.
One afternoon however, there was a knock at the door. We rarely got visitors, so this was unexpected. I went to see who it was.
It was Phillip. I tried to contain my shock, and keep my voice down. "What are you doing here? You're going to get me in trouble!"
" I had to see you again, Briar Rose. I found your cottage!"
"I am happy to see you, but you have to leave now. I'm sorry."
"But why?" he asked worriedly, trying to take my hand. "I really wanted to see you."
I pulled away. It was best that he didn't get involved.
"Just go, Phillip. Please."
"But when can I see you again?"
"Never."
I walked back to the cottage without looking back, trying to ignore the stinging of tears in my eyes.