"He would find Anne. He would tear the world apart as he did."
So romantic! Queen of Mush, you are amaaaaazing!
Oh you think that's bad? Just wait a chapter.
I love my mushy, ooey-gooey chapters. So. So. Much.
"I am Livvielove, Queen of the Mush, Protector of the Hopeless Saps, Defender of the Ooey-Gooey!"
To think this all started with Agnes and Tragic – the early days seem so innocent compared to now. As I already commented up to when Aurora and Raven passed the torch to Emrin I’ll continue from there.
I have not played ITF for so long so I was astonished when Glitch proposed to Emrin and was cheering for them both. Poor Emrin, I’m so pleased she and Glitch found a way to keep both of her boys.
I couldn’t help but think if Isabel had been the heir, her Isla Paradiso would have been completely different from Noten’s but then it hit me – he wouldn’t have existed! There was a line that made me smile: This could be our way to overthrow the corruption, to rise from the ashes like a phoenix.
Aw, man, Noten’s death, whyyyy? I won’t ever think of Ruben in the same light again D=
I love the name theme for the kids, I had thought Edward was named for Edward Kenway but Blackbeard’s better since he was a real person As much as I love both of the kids, I am over the moon that Mary won the poll.
When Palmira was confessing to Carolina about all the things that had happened I started to tear up, good job on that because I rarely want to cry when reading books xD
Can’t wait to read about Mary’s life in Barnacle Bay.
@Nettlejuice (tagging you in for easy comment access without spoilers to other comments! XD)
Aw! I was wondering if I would be hearing from you! Thank you so much for taking the time to read through my beastly story here! I'm going to respond in kind:
Agnes and Tragic did have an innocent start, but I'm working on it (I'll have an announcement in a few weeks, hopefully, about it).
Oh my Glitch. I loved that little bot. He fell for Emrin and I was like "yeup, that's a thing. We're doing that now."
Thank you! That line was one of my favorites to write. I didn't really do the rebellion much justice in Noten's storyline, but that's ok. I mostly feel bad Mary and Edward's childhoods got so rushed due to the unplayability of the world.
Noten's death was so difficult for me to write.
I hope the rest of the story can make up for it (and other things)!
Yes! I loved my pirate-y theme. Both Mary Read and Edward Teach (or Thatch, depending on who you heard it from) were real people, I just based Mary's personality more solely off of the game's (being Assassin's Creed: Black Flag) rendition of Mary Read. Edward I drew a lot of inspiration from everywhere on him, though honestly his personality is probably closer to Jack Sparrow yet with less crazy stunts.
I'm glad! Hopefully I might get the chance to make you cry one day. I'm pretty good at that (view the comment above me, I *am* Queen of the Mush - well, I gave myself the title anyways
XD).
Finally, can I just say how truly, UTTERLY excited I am for you to read about Mary's husband? Like, I'm so excited. Heh. Thank you again for you wonderful comment and for reading along! I, personally, feel you're finally actually getting to the story part of my story. I had a late start with my Legacy's storyline, and you're about to hit it. Hopefully it's still as interesting. :3