Okay, I went to re-examine all images containing Esmeralda but nothing leaped out at me.
I'll come back and check later when you've posted the other story.
I'm glad I went back to check though because I'd been wanting to know more about Tragic and his beautiful companion and it only just now dawned on me.
Tragic = Tragic Clown. I know, I know, you mention Agnes Reaper in your narrative but I was having trouble keeping everyone identified (like, which woman is who?)
Also made an important new discovery! Livvie, I mean, Olivia has the natural freckles you love, hehe.
So much I didn't notice the first two times... :-(
About the cosmology--I have no idea how they're usually represented but I, for example, was thrilled to realize that Alessandra (who I hate) is the daughter of Agonin (who mystifies me).
Also, you've explained Fate a number of times but I keep forgetting who she is. And now we add Calypso. I'm guessing Olivia is like a Watcher.
It would be great to have a visual or textual reminder of who everyone is, or maybe that's just my feeble mind.
This link shows a relationships chart for RP. But it's one way of organizing people in a non-familial hierarchy.
Sorry, for the odd example, it's the first one I saw of the sort I was seeking. I'm not suggesting that you create anime versions of your gods...
Looking forward to everything!
You're fabulous, you know that, right?
I'm actually working on a blog that I'll link to the first page of this. It'll function as a sort of living glossary of a "who's who" so to speak, as well as have family trees and explanations of all the lifestates (Sirens, Sources, Genies [aka Djinns], Nymphs, Spirits... etc. etc. etc). Despite that, I'm still going to make sure I'm explaining everything fairly clearly and hoping that it's not too confusing in the story.
It'll be a bit of time before I can really start working on their story fully (as this story has 100% consumed me at this point, clearly haha - if only you guys knew exactly what I do behind the scenes at all times XD).
Also, apologies! I probably should've thrown in Tragic Reaper's last name in there so you weren't lost as to exactly WHO he was.
Olivia does have natural freckles. She was originally based on my simself, and
I have freckles. She and I have fully diverged though (she's not very representative of me, otherwise she'd be drooling over Majnun and Jupiter and others who shall not be named as you have not met them yet and it's spoilerish), so while we share a name, our personalities are very different.
Kind of odd, when I think about it. Ha.
Think of it this way: you're not missing anything the first time you read something, you're just going to discover new things as you read it over and over! (Forever the optimist over here).
Also, indeed! Agonin is Alessandra's father. She's a piece of work, no? I see so much of Agonin in her sometimes and then there are times when I think she's nothing like him.
Yes! Fate is probably a bit confusing given her name is her title, unlike the other gods (Majnun, Agonin, Calypso, Malice). Her mother named her that out of spite hoping fate would be cruel to her, her ascending to goddesshood through Majnun (who is her grandfather. She is Sheo "Poof" Keeper's daughter.
) was just icing on the cake.
As for Olivia? She's a spirit of protection. You're familiar with Dragon Age, right? Well it works like spirits from that game in a way. Spirits embody one element and don't know much else. She is the Watcher of the Reapers, so they call her that as well. Spirits are very powerful, as they're a piece of raw essence that gained sentience, but they are not stronger than gods (so she is bent to the will gods). These are fantastic questions and I'll need to think about how I would like to address them in the story so they're clear in the future.
Meanwhile, with Calypso, that was more of a name drop for now, because she
will start to become more important in time. I've been trying to prime the scene a bit early so that way when these things come up later it will already be a bit familiar to those who are following along.
Thank you for the example! I would LOVE to create anime versions of the gods, that would be completely hilarious. Could you imagine anime Malice and Majnun choking each other out? Almost too cute for words... meanwhile... they're a bit scarier as they are now. XD
I can't thank you enough for your suggestions and feedback! I hope that I can get everyone something to help those who aren't swimming in the lore like I am a way to reference and learn about the world. Again, thank you so much!
Hopefully with this blog I'm working on, it can help give you the tools you need. =)