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Offline Sherry

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Re: The Slytherin Dynasty - Chapter one: Alohomora
« Reply #15 on: October 18, 2013, 10:45:42 PM »
Cool theme. Can't wait to see who he will choose as spouse.  ;D
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Re: The Slytherin Dynasty - Chapter one: Alohomora
« Reply #16 on: October 20, 2013, 02:58:55 AM »
I'm stunned. I had never imagined so many people wanting to read my little story! Thank you so much, guys, for creating such a friendly forum - it means a lot to a new-comer like me.
And I mean it.

Bwahaha, that conversation with the paper boy! I hope Susan and Boyd know what they're getting into ^.^
Well, that part wasn't excactly planned... I had decided to talk to Skip, for plot reasons, but what really surprised me was how dull he looked at all the shots - I didn't have a single one where he looked intelligent. So I decided to just go with it.
And no, Susan and Boyd have no idea, and they probably never will have. I can't really see Salazar sitting down and explaining it to them. But maybe his wife will...
This looks like fun! I don't mind if Lord Slytherin goes on and on; he's an amusing narrator.
Thank you. It's good to know I hit the nail with Salazar - a bit evil, somewhat snobby and very old fashioned. And I'm quite proud of how it turned out, considering the fact that I am not a native speaker myself.
I don't think I've ever seen anyone use the Wainwrights before.
That's funny, they were a part of this dynasty before I even began playing - both in the science career, which takes a certain level of gardening and fishing skill, both with good genes for the next generation. Just goes to show how many ways you can take this :)
I don't mind about his narration anyway. His writing style, make me smile. I like it :P
And I'm curious about what he'll do to those muggle couple. 

I'll wait patiently for the next chapter~ :3

Thank you very much :) I'm glad you are enjoying my scribblings.
Next chapter will probably be up sometime next weekend - I need to flesh out Susan's and Boyd's personalities before I wirte any further.

I don't mind his narration. I like it actually. Cool that you used the Wainwrights, I haven't seen them in a dynasty before.

Thank you :) I'm glad you're enjoying Salazar's thoughts. I myself find myself more amused by them than I had predicted.
I thought the Wainwrights were somewhat obvious - A man and a woman for passing on the line, gardening skills at level 3 and 4 (I think), and so on. I'm glad I'm not using an old cliché :) And goodness knows I'll leave poor Agnes Crumplebottom alone!
Cool theme. Can't wait to see who he will choose as spouse.  ;D
Thank you. Well, he's set his eyes on someone young, innocent, and therefore easily manipulated... I'll let you guess who ;D

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Thank you for your support. The next chapter will be up next weekend, I think, once I've gotten a more firm grip on Susan's and Boyd's personalities.

Until then!
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Re: The Slytherin Dynasty - Chapter one: Alohomora
« Reply #17 on: November 15, 2013, 10:39:08 PM »
Oh my Grim I love Harry Potter! I hope you'll be able to update again. My favorite house is Ravenclaw  :)
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Re: The Slytherin Dynasty - Chapter one: Alohomora
« Reply #18 on: November 24, 2013, 01:57:21 PM »
Good writing, and an original idea. Can't wait to see more!!  ;D

 

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