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Re: Goths Affairs : Rebound?
« Reply #15 on: November 05, 2013, 03:48:28 AM »
Oh, my goood! This is surely a bad idea to leave them two alone. I can't imagine about the chaos that might be fall upon them.
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Re: Goths Affairs : Rebound?
« Reply #16 on: November 05, 2013, 10:10:25 PM »
Oh, my goood! This is surely a bad idea to leave them two alone. I can't imagine about the chaos that might be fall upon them.

Who is the two of them are you talking about?
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Re: Goths Affairs : Rebound?
« Reply #17 on: November 05, 2013, 11:26:23 PM »
Oh, boy... There will be war sooner or later! Gunther! How dare you doing that to Agnes! (-3-)/
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Re: Goths Affairs : Rebound?
« Reply #18 on: November 06, 2013, 01:53:25 AM »
Who is the two of them are you talking about?

Gunther and Agnes O_O

I still can't believe with my own eyes that Agnes has fallen for Gunther charms! I thought that she much stronger than that :(
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Re: Goths Affairs : Rebound?
« Reply #19 on: November 06, 2013, 02:16:03 AM »
Gunther and Agnes O_O

I still can't believe with my own eyes that Agnes has fallen for Gunther charms! I thought that she much stronger than that :(

Well, she is a Hopeless Romantic for a reason as Gunther said  :P

Oh, boy... There will be war sooner or later! Gunther! How dare you doing that to Agnes! (-3-)/

War or not we shall see in the next update... or maybe the next-next update  ;D
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Re: Goths Affairs : Rebound?
« Reply #20 on: November 22, 2013, 11:55:07 PM »
To my dear readers out there~

I'm truly sorry to say that this story is going to be on a hiatus for a while because I'm currently focusing more on my immortal dynasty.
Worry not though, this story will not be abandoned; perhaps just like going on a hibernation of sorts.

Thank you for your attention.  :D
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Mad or not
« Reply #21 on: November 30, 2013, 04:47:51 AM »
Okaaay...So, apparently I still have some of the screenshots that could be put into new a few more chapter and I didn't even realize I have these until yesterday, when I checked my photos bunch.
Sorry for the too early report of hiatus. Though one thing is sure, I can't update this story in a certain frequency coz the timing would be a bit more scattered.
To the next chapter then.



Mad? or not?

Today is the day. The day of what, you ask? Of course the day when Gunther and Agnes return home from Shang Simla.


Agnes    : hmm... there seems to be no one's home yet.
Gunther : Well, that means more time for us. We could-
Agnes    : Seriously, Gunther! We-


Gunther: I could pretend sick, then we could get more time for ourselves
Agnes   : Naaw, stop with the absurd idea. You know Nancy would have expected you to handle the huge importer
             contract from the new country, Isla Paradiso with Ichtaca...
             And then maybe you could have some time spare to look which furniture would looked good.
Gunther: Furniture? What for? I don’t think we need any remodeling in the mansion.
Agnes   : Noup. Not the mansion. I’m thinking that with the sum of money I bring along,
             maybe I could use it to build a resort I’ll start everything from the scratch. It will be interesting.
Gunther: Honey, I've never guessed... You actually interested in business.
Agnes   : Umhm... Let's just say I always needed a lot of sources to inspire me in my writing.
Gunther: Maybe the resort shall be built as a memento of OUR unity?
            We are soon going on land hunting after I'm home today. Promi-

(Vroooom... )

Gunther: Oh My Plumbob! It's Cornelia. Err, maybe I should really fake call in sick.
Agnes   : Naaw, don't be silly. It's okay, I can handle my sister.
Gunther: Whaat? Do you have any idea what you are talking about? This is Cornelia we are talking about.
             She is as fiery as a volcano.
Agnes   : Let's be glad she is not evil then~
Gunther:...
Agnes   : Come on, your carpool is gonna arrive in a while. I promise I'll call ya later on your lunch break, darling.

~*~*~*~
And so, Gunther going to work and leave our two dear lady to talking with each other.


Cornelia : Hey there, Nessie~
Agnes    : Yeah. Riiiight. Hello there too Nellie.
*stare at each other...* *broke into giggles fit*
Agnes    : Ow, Gosh! how long already it had been since we call each other like that? *pfft*
Cornelia : I know, right? Feels like ages ago~

*silence*


Cornelia : At what month already, sis?
Agnes    : Huh? What are you talking about, Nell-
Cornelia : Naaw, you don't need to hide it from me. I know what you did this summer~ *singsong voice*
Agnes    :*gulp* err, sis... you are not angry?
Cornelia : Why would I be? We were divorced, remember?
Agnes    : Yeah, well. But I thought you were going to France to-
Cornelia : Calm my mind? clear my thought?
              Oh, come on Nessie everyone know vacation is the best place for rebound right?
Agnes    : What? You mean you are.... Wait a minute, are you bringing back your boyfriend too?
Cornelia : Noup. But I am expecting a mini version of Ell.

Agnes   : Aww~ That's just sooo cute, Can I feel your tummy please?
Cornelia: Yup. Sooo cute right? Just like with Mort

Agnes   : Erm, about that. Could Mort stay in the Goth mansion?
             I mean, could-would-would you please don't fight for Mort custody with Gunther?
             People even has started to betting on which one of you would get his custody, how long you two are
             gonna fight about it ever since the news of your divorce came out. It-it will be bad.
             Mort will have the un-needed spotlight on him and all those reporters and paparazzis that will just
             gonna asking about hurtful and annoying things. It will be bad for his psychology. So, could you-
Cornelia: Naaaw, naaw~ Remind me again why did I ever stop teasing you for being a mother hen?
Agnes   : GRRRR! I’m being serious here.
Cornelia: It’s gonna be okay. I’ll leave his custody with you two.
             Anyway what’s this about the resort I heard you gonna build?


Agnes   : Thanks Cornelia.
             About the resort... ermmm, It’s just like the rough idea, you know. Not really put into action yet.
Cornelia: Now, now. Don’t hesitate to this chance to build a resort.
             I have a gut feeling this will be the first resort ever build in our town. You know, with the increasing
             newcomers in town that keep coming for that Steel guy, I’d say we soon need a place where we could
             handle the bunch of the new vacationer especially at night.
Agnes   : Well, I think so too. But I for one still have no idea where we should actually build the resort.
             Should it be closer to the beach? should it be closer to the shopping area?
             Or would they like it closer to the nature/forest?

Cornelia: I have an idea. People said the stars we have here is the brightest, right?
Agnes   : Uh-huh... Oooooo. Wait a minute, do you mean that we should built it at the place where people
             could watch the stars at night? But that would be somewhere high. The hill!
             Awww. But there is lake right on the hill top.
Cornelia: Now, worries not, little sister. I know a company that would take on a job like this.
             It will be like magic, they’ll bulldoze the whole lake in a night; and the next day, you could build
             the resort already. It would be just like the lake was never exist.
Agnes   : *sigh* Sis, you are talking about the Altos right? Specifically Nick, right? I’ve told you, he is dangerous.
             That whole family is highly dangerous except well, maybe Holly?
Cornelia: Naaah~ Nessie, this will be nothing personal, just good business. And people like him,
             surely won’t miss the chance for a good business, right?


Agnes: Cornelia, can’t you be more conscious of what you did, and how it would affect your baby?
          This baby is a life form that will need your warmth, affection, and protection.
          If it’s not you then who else would protect and love this baby?


Cornelia: *glassy eyes* *hugs* Agnes, thanks my baby sister.
             You are always be my most dear and loved family ever even if one day I changed.
Agnes   : What? What are you talking about? Why are you going to change?
Cornelia: Well, feelings aside... I’ll finish that lake bulldozing for you, Nessie;
             And we will be ready to create a new record and history in Sunset Valley.
             Anyway, Mort is gonna be home soon right?
Agnes   : Of course he is. Do you want to meet him? He really missed his mama, you know?
Cornelia: Now sis, I think you would do a better job at explaining to him and it’s better if he has more time
             to bonding with his soon to be mother, right? I have other things to do anyway.
Agnes   : Cornelia... take care.


And with those last words, the two sisters departed.






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Re: Goths Affairs : Mad or not
« Reply #22 on: November 30, 2013, 11:10:30 PM »
Hmm, to be honest I don't have anything on my mind as I am kinda of blank right now. But you did a good job with that screenshots, I love how you used bubble thought and combine it with your story. That was neat, but if you can avoid that plum-bob and blue skilling meter in the future that would make your screenshot even better.

I'll just wait patiently for the next chapter. Keep up to good work, Sherry :)
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Re: Goths Affairs : Mad or not
« Reply #23 on: December 01, 2013, 05:55:40 AM »
Hmm, to be honest I don't have anything on my mind as I am kinda of blank right now. But you did a good job with that screenshots, I love how you used bubble thought and combine it with your story. That was neat, but if you can avoid that plum-bob and blue skilling meter in the future that would make your screenshot even better.

I'll just wait patiently for the next chapter. Keep up to good work, Sherry :)

Thanks about the thought bubble. I'm trying to make it as realistically as possible.
To avoid the plumbobs and skill meter I could use 'hideheadlineeffects true', but I would hid the thought bubbles too. So, I just try to scoop what I can  ;)
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Re: Goths Affairs : Mad or not
« Reply #24 on: December 01, 2013, 06:10:33 AM »
This was an unexpected development and I hardly guess for what happening next, haha.

But, just when I saw the girls dialogue, instead imagine about Agnes and Cornelia (You even have some screenshots of them there to convince me that’s them talking) it's more like that there are two Sherry here. Well, it’s true. You should consider distinguishing two of them with how the way that they talk.

Oh, you also can hide that blue skill bar with the right angle. It took time to get the picture that you want but that’s not impossible.

Well other thing that I can say:

Good screenshots, good using of bubble thought and neat dialogue format ;)
 
Story unrelated question for Sherry:
Since legacy can use mods, what kind of mods that you use in this project?
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Re: Goths Affairs : Mad or not
« Reply #25 on: December 04, 2013, 06:58:32 AM »
This was an unexpected development and I hardly guess for what happening next, haha.

But, just when I saw the girls dialogue, instead imagine about Agnes and Cornelia (You even have some screenshots of them there to convince me that’s them talking) it's more like that there are two Sherry here. Well, it’s true. You should consider distinguishing two of them with how the way that they talk.

Oh, you also can hide that blue skill bar with the right angle. It took time to get the picture that you want but that’s not impossible.

Well other thing that I can say:

Good screenshots, good using of bubble thought and neat dialogue format ;)
 
Story unrelated question for Sherry:
Since legacy can use mods, what kind of mods that you use in this project?
I'm sorry Eld, I forgot to look at the legacy block updates hence to late replying. I'm really sorry.

By two Sherry do you mean the one for the opening and the one narrating in the story? hmm... I'll keep that in mind and try to find a way to it. Thanks for telling me.  :)

Yup. I could have get in on the right angle but then I would try to take it from many different angle too like what had happened in my past game playing. I always getting tempted to take many photos from many different angle, and I would usually caved in to the temptation so I would ended up with a whole lot bunch of photos.  :P
Then I'm trying to focused on just getting important pictures only and don't bother with angle. LOL
I'll try to take just one from the right angle. Wish me luck.  ;D

Hey, thx about the neat dialogue format. I am glad about how it turns out.

About the mod, it might be story unrelated but still related too, sort of... Because currently I had to take it off for my dynasty project.
I use Twallan's Story Progression mod because of my desperate wish for the townies to get married and reproduce also I'd like the announcement like sim A and sim B fight, or dating or expecting nooboo.
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Re: Goths Affairs : Mad or not
« Reply #26 on: December 06, 2013, 07:14:59 PM »
By two Sherry do you mean the one for the opening and the one narrating in the story? hmm... I'll keep that in mind and try to find a way to it. Thanks for telling me.  :)

Thank you for your answer, Sherry. Pretty much appreciated especially about the mods. No, it's Agnes and Cornelia dialogue. For me just seeing two of them remind me a lot of you, Sherry. You should take a different style for them and the ways that they calling each other for me just like seeing two same person ^^
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Re: Goths Affairs : Mad or not
« Reply #27 on: December 18, 2013, 07:23:37 PM »
Update.... Please  ;D

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A Chat with Death
« Reply #28 on: December 30, 2013, 07:12:28 AM »
Okay... everyone(yes, this includes you, Avery) , sorry for the late update. Again, real life trouble a toll and I have to take care of 'em first.
I also have to tell you, this one chapter is made differently than the previous chapters, this one has waaay less pictures in it. Sooo sorry to you who had waited to see more pictures from the Goths, but I hope the story would suffice.


A Chat with Death

Right after the ‘little chat’ with her sister, Agnes decided she had to hurried up to the groceries to shopping for some dinner ingredients.

~*~*~*~
That very same time as the shopping trip, a boy had come home from school, a man had come home from work. Soon in the house there is a father is trying to explain to his son about an adult trouble in household.




“Now listen carefully to me, son. *take deep breath* There are times in this world when a guy had to take a decision. It might not be the best for everyone, but he will try to take the one that would cause the least hurts to everyone.” Gunther tried to explained, but with no avail one could see his distress trying to find the right words. *sigh* “I know you are always been closer to your aunt Agnes than to your mom.”

“Yeah, that’s because she’s rarely home. And I think I have some ideas why” Mortimer the ever fast mouth kid answering hid dad immediately.

“What?! You...you have some idea... How? What... I mean who did you heard it from?”

“Peoples. Peoples like to gossip you know? Talking behind you?”

“Okay-Okay. Those cheap gossip of the nosy neighbour downtown is not to be cared for though you might get some information there. Anyway, that’s beside the point. What I’m going to tell you is, Agnes is going to live here with us-”

“Isn’t she living with us already?”

“Yea, she is. But I didn’t mean it that way son.” Gunther is in the verge of groaning out loud in frustration over how to bring this up to his son as gently as possible. “I—



“Let me guess! Now that Dad and Mom divorced, both of you two are rebounding as fast as a basketball. Am I supposed to expect a brother or sister too?! One from both of you?!” Mortimer started to seething on his seat. “I know you guys adults are always thinking that we are just a kid. What could we possibly understand about adults business. We are just a kid that just enjoy new toys and always ask our parents to buy us one. NO! What you guys never knew is we noticed. We knew the signs. We just rarely speak about it to our parents!”

“Wha- You- you noticed? You mean you know?” Gunther is truly shocked beyond belief.

“Not fully. At first I was shocked that my auntie that lived apart from us for years –that I practically not know about her–  suddenly live with us and taking care of me when mom’s not around, which is most of the time. I really liked her a lot, she is really caring and also a good painter. Then I realized you two had known each other for quite a long time back then.” At this statement Gunther face undoubtly shows a confusion and shock.
“*deep inhale* I did eavesdropping you two at the kitchen one night when I was unable to sleep and I want to ask for a bedtime story”. “Yeah. We, kids are not as oblivious as the adults want us to be. Dad and Auntie Agnes is getting together isn’t it? I guess that’s what dad’s trying to tell me?”

Gunther expression immediately turn sheepish but clearly is glad, “Well yeah... I- I truly have no idea you would be so accepting of this situation-

“What?! Dad, Me knowing about the situation doesn’t make accepting this condition any easier! If anything, it gives me more trouble than what you could imagine!”

“But son, we are not asking you to-

“Yeah. good. You are using the royal ‘WE’. Seems like you finally find your one true love and those mushy stuff. No! It didn’t make me any happier to know that you and mom finally get your own love or the stuffs!”



“Well, I got it you are upset that me and your mom had separated now but, all I’ll ask from you is to give it a chance. You are still one of best thing ever happened in my live and I’m sure also in Agnes’ live. We are not going to force you to accept it right away. But at least think about it, okay?”

“Whatever, Dad. I’m tired. I wanna sleep.”

~*~*~*~
And so, the conversation ended. Leaving a man worrying about his son and kinda happy at the same time thinking of possibility new kids in this household. Then got back at worrying about how this might turn out.


Now, do you think I forgot about Agnes? No. She will have the next update on her point of view.  ;D

Do you think Mortimer sounds a bit too old for his age?
Well, I’ll try to explain to my best ability.
I think the reason is it’s because who he is and his family status. People in higher society tends to force their children into a certain behaviour that show their social status, and this influence a lot of those kids personalities. In Mortimer case, he is becoming way more mature than his real age and more bitter about some things like marriage or close relationship with other people.
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Re: Goths Affairs : A Chat with Death
« Reply #29 on: September 24, 2014, 09:08:26 AM »
I'm moving this to the Stories Graveyard due to inactivity. Sherry, you can revive this story by contacting a moderator.

 

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