I never comment but this is a good story anyway. I love to see there is another Goth enthusiast. To be honest, I never liked a story with affair thing, but I can let it aside for Goth <3
Yeah, I just wondering that Cornelia is ever happy being married with Gunther? I believe that more look like her parent force her to be married with Gunther just because of their money. That was Gunther? I thought that he was Connor Frio, lol.
Just enjoy to be yourself, each person has different style of writing. Each time you practice you will be better writer
I hope that you'll continue this story
Yay! another Goth enthusiast~
Just like you, I actually don't believe they are happily married. What's my proof of that is their relationship bar; it was even less than the Wolff couple who had married just for show.
And about the affair... hehe, actually they were really trying the love inspector when she suddenly had a wish to try the kissing booth, so I just play it to that direction.
Anyway, before it really becoming an affair they had broke it off. Because the last part of this flash back is the first chapter: when they broke it off
Thx for your comment Luna