PrologueI really like the prologue. How do you put it up, that was so creative! Poor James!
Chapter 1This chapter was hilarious! One screenshot make me wonder it’s like why is she in man toilet?
I love the Spyro reference! He’s my favorite dragon too!
Chapter 2Yep, I agree with skipping! Because, to be honest the baby life stage is so boring :p
What a twist! For someone that named Angel had an Evil traits
I love the reference about Immortal Dynasty
Chapter 3 & 3.5There are three pictures that I can’t see; when I click into the picture the link seems broken. I hope that you can fix this, Snuffles. It’s the first two pictures and one picture before James line.
Hahaha! Angel is awesome.
Chapter 4Wishing your Mum dies, that was too far, Angel ;P
Poor Greenie!
Chapter 5Hahaha! I laugh so hard when Angel’s cake was on fire! What a birthday!
I agree with you, Eve is pretty! Eve’s hairstyle choice really suits her well!
Chapter 6I really love when the children complained about Angel to their mother. Haha.
Aww… Too bad that she didn’t have the same hair as when she was a child. Still pretty though
Chapter 7That makeover really suits Chris well. Bravo!
Angel: Goodbye, Eve. You may be the least important child in the family, but you're my most important sister.
Eve: ... wait, I'm you're only sister!
Angel: That's the point.
Hahaha! I was laughing when I see this line. Don’t know why but this was so funny!
Chapter 8That was unexpected!
Chapter 9Ooo… Sibling rivaly!
I love how both of them end really well both of university and love life.
Angel awesomeness has grown on me!
Chapter 10Fjord: Well done on not burning down your dorm, Angel. We're so proud of you.
Fjord: That's great news! And I always thought you were too evil to get a boyfriend!
I always laugh when I saw Fjord’s line. That was too hilarious!
What a unique proposal! Absolutely love the pictures!
Chapter 11Hahaha! Fabulous! Really love that scene!
Ooo… Welcome Bellatrix
Chapter 12My impression about Eve is she is a nice person to have with! Angel can be nice sometimes.
That was a sweet story about her. Congratulations for the engagement
Chapter 13I love Bella’s room
Hahaha, it seems like that is Angel fate to have that hair. I notice that she has the same hair before in previous story after her birthday
Chapter 14Eve is beautiful especially in her wedding dress!
Bella’s turn out to be adorable teenager! The makeover suits her!
Chapter 15Hahaha! Oh, Fjord! Can’t you just stop that dancing?
This is supposed to be a sad chapter, but I can’t stop laughing, lol.
Chapter 16Chris’s face is funny!
I really loved wedding scene that where everyone attend. The place was fits well.
Chapter 17Everything goes so fast!
Chapter 18Lizzie: No, no -- our Watcher is too poor right now for that. But you will get to go on exciting rabbithole space adventures!
Hahaha!
Chapter 19Hunter is cute indeed. Can’t wait for what’s in store for him.