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« Reply #15 on: August 22, 2013, 01:41:54 AM »
Thank you.  Sorry for the delay in updating.  Real life intruding on my leisure time at the moment - how dare it!  :P



Every evening he would call into the diner. He was a single man, after all, and had nobody to cook his meals. I put in a special effort when I knew the food was for him. To say I fell hook, line and sinker for Scott would be the understatement of the year. Suddenly, I took to singing in the morning; I watched romantic movies with Poppy; I frowned at Luc’s escapades and gushed over babies and engagements.



One night, Scott walked me home after work. I think I trod on air all the way and regretted that we lived so close. He took my hand as we parted and kissed my fingers. My heart flip-flopped in my chest. I gasped and a wave of heat flushed over me. I fervently wished that my hands weren’t so chapped and rough.



It became a habit for us. He would wait for me to finish up on the nights I worked



and then he would walk me home. 




I learnt a lot about Scott on the walks and he got to know me too I guess. I confided in him a dream I had never shared with anyone and that was to own my own restaurant. I waxed lyrically on the exquisite dishes I could create for my famished and grateful customers before realizing how silly I must sound but he was smiling at me.



‘If that is what you want, then I am sure that is what you will get. However,’ he added with a wink ‘There is always the chance that some man will snap you up for marriage so he can have you all to himself.'


Scott finally asked me on a real date.




I was so nervous. We went to a movie and sat and talked over coffee afterwards. Scott loved to talk and I loved everything he said. He shared his visions with me. He wanted to transform this town into a Mecca for tourists.



‘Just look at the night sky. Look at how clear it is.’ he said. ‘With the right promotion, astronomers and amateur stargazers would flock to this place in droves. We could build a platform – just imagine a huge platform up on the hill dedicated solely for viewing the night sky. They would love it,” he sighed. 'And then we would need lodging and shops and services to support those visitors. That is where I come in. If only I could convince those dweebs at city hall to think outside the square and invest in their town.’



I hung onto his words, annoyed that our councillors didn't jump at this chance to put Strangeville on the map.

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Re: Mielle
« Reply #16 on: August 25, 2013, 03:22:14 AM »
Our romance was the talk of the town. I had never attracted much attention before and now suddenly people I barely knew were talking about me in whispers.



My ears burned and my face would flush.  Scott Baymont, the rich and handsome stranger to town and mousy little Mielle Moreau.  Who would have imagined it?



It was like I was being swept along in a whirlwind.



And I kept wondering when I would wake from this dream.







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Re: Mielle
« Reply #17 on: August 25, 2013, 04:25:05 AM »
Aww I love this, so romantic - and your screenshots are great!

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« Reply #18 on: August 26, 2013, 03:53:33 AM »
Thank you McHazy  :)

Scott proposed and of course I accepted. 



Our wedding was a simple ceremony really. Poppy could not afford a big wedding and our family home was too tiny to fit many guests. We could have married in Scott’s big house but that would have hurt Poppy’s feelings. Scott did not mind and I loved him for that.

And so, I left behind Mielle Moreau and became, for better or worse, Mrs Scott Baymont.

I was deliriously happy in those first few months of our marriage. Scott didn’t want his wife tired and cross at the end of the day so I gave up my job and happily made him the centre of my world. I had the kitchen of my dreams in Scott's lovely home and I relished having hours to myself to leaf through my recipe books and plan delicious dinners just for us.

You know what they say about the best laid plans?  Right.

Scott worked very hard to make a success of his ventures. He kept long hours and for days we might not see each other. He would crawl into bed at night, quietly so as not to disturb me. 



He barely ate at home. I cooked many wonderful meals which often went bad in the fridge.  Eventually, after throwing out yet another spoiled concoction that I had planned and prepared and coaxed into delicious life, the unhappy truth dawned on me and I understood why Scott had liked the diner food so much.  Food was fuel to him only.  He devoured my finest creations with the same appreciation that he would give to sauce soaked hamburgers.

Then one day, the house next door to us got an occupant. The house was large and grand so it was unusual that a single woman would choose it. She introduced herself as Mrs Honey Labelle and she was gorgeous in every way that I wasn’t.


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Re: Mielle
« Reply #19 on: August 26, 2013, 12:08:17 PM »
I really like this. Looking forward to more.

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Re: Mielle
« Reply #20 on: August 26, 2013, 12:11:05 PM »
Oh no!

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« Reply #21 on: August 28, 2013, 01:31:54 AM »
She was one of those luscious blondes with long, brown legs, taut curvy body and the bluest of blue eyes.  She said she was a widow. Her husband had been a lot older than she was and quite wealthy and he had simply died one day. She said she had come here to escape his family who were all upset that she had inherited the money.

 

‘I did love him and I was just devastated when he died but his family did not believe me and called me a 'gold digger'.  She pouted prettily and dabbed at her eyes.



I didn’t know whether to believe her or not but Scott was entranced. I saw the appraising glances that passed between them and I felt a vague niggle in my stomach. I could almost sense a small black cloud forming above my head.

Honey didn’t work. She was writing a book, she said. It must have been one of those books that wrote itself because she seemed to spend an awful lot of time sunning herself outside on her terrace.




I had taken to watching Scott watching her.  My unease grew .




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« Reply #22 on: August 28, 2013, 05:55:35 AM »
I knew it.  Honey is up to no good.  Oh poor Mielle.  If you've got to watch your man every second, is he worth having?
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« Reply #23 on: August 28, 2013, 09:29:33 PM »
Wow, this is really good so far! Bookmarked for sure. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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« Reply #24 on: August 28, 2013, 11:02:50 PM »
How can a tan blonde named Honey be up to good?

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« Reply #25 on: August 29, 2013, 05:38:41 AM »
Thank you.   :D

There is always gossip in a small town and Strangeville was still very small. I love gossip as much as the next person but this time it seemed to be about me. 



I called into the diner one day to catch up with my old friends. I noticed Tim, the barista, whispering to one of the waitresses. 

I can sense when people are talking about me. He caught my glare and had the decency to blush. I left as soon as I could back to my cold, empty house. 



There were days when I longed for Poppy and our cosy little house again. Life had been so simple then and I had been happy most of the time anyway. Lately I just wanted to crawl into my old single bed and snuggle into the bed clothes without having to cope with this life of social gatherings and a husband whose loyalty I had begun to doubt.

If I could have a baby maybe things would be better. Scott would stop ogling the woman next door and I would have something to do during the day. I imagined my child. A little boy with Scott's good looks and distinctive hair and Luc's brains or a sweet little girl who looked like Poppy.


But the babies didn’t come.  I knew Scott wanted lots of children. He talked of his future 'football team' whenever the subject came up in public. I became despondent but tried hard to put on a cheerful face every time another month brought more disappointment. I had caught a frown, quickly gone, but there for sure on Scott’s brow more than once.



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« Reply #26 on: August 29, 2013, 10:53:10 AM »
This is getting really good. :) Each update adds even more suspense. I hope she gets the nooboo she wants so she's not home alone all day.

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« Reply #27 on: August 29, 2013, 11:07:21 PM »
Ha ha. We will see.  ;)

I was bored and lonely rattling around in that big house all day so I suggested to Scott that I should inquire about work at the diner. 

Scott was not pleased.

‘You will never conceive if you wear yourself out at work’ he snapped.

Perhaps I had become hyper-sensitive but I almost heard the unsaid words ‘Not that you are capable anyway’. 



I was a failure. My husband was handsome and rich. He had shared with me his lovely house with its fine furniture and elegant décor. All I had to do was give him a child and I couldn’t even do that.

I usually spent every Wednesday helping out at the hospital. Unpaid volunteer work is quite acceptable to Scott especially when the Lady Mayoress is on the board. To tell the truth, it bored me there. I fetched vases for flowers and plumped up cushions and comforted the mildly sick as they didn't let the volunteers loose on the serious cases.

Today though, I was going to miss my turn on the roster because I had an appointment with Dr Farmer instead. I had finally plucked up the courage to consult with him about my infertility. I didn't tell Scott about it. If Dr Farmer confirmed that I was barren, I wanted time to digest it, alone. I couldn't have borne to see Scott's eyes if there was anything but love and understanding there.




Dr Farmer asked me lots of personal and embarrassing questions and examined me, pushing and prodding my tummy and peering into places I'd rather not talk about.



Dressed again I sat nervously perched on a chair at the doctor's desk. He smiled kindly and pronounced me a healthy specimen. He said that based on his examination and the information I had given him, there seemed to be no obvious physical reason why I couldn't conceive. He went on to speak of further tests available - scans and xrays and blood tests - but - and he waggled a finger at me when I enthusiastically started to agree. These tests were invasive and expensive and he wouldn't order them anyway without first examining my husband.



My husband? My jaw dropped. I heard his words as a buzzing in my head but I had tuned out already. There was no way I could suggest testing to Scott. 

Shoulders slumped I left the clinic.


I could never suggest such testing to Scott.  I could almost picture his derisive laughter.  As if he could be flawed in any way.

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Re: Mielle
« Reply #28 on: August 31, 2013, 02:36:06 AM »
Whoa. That doctor is very handsome. I think Mielle should definitely take a look around and realize that she could a lot better than Mr Cold & Wandering Eyes.

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« Reply #29 on: August 31, 2013, 04:56:10 AM »
Get rid of Scott, go for the doctor! Here's hoping she sees the light :)

 

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