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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #315 on: November 23, 2013, 08:36:26 PM »

I've been reading your dynasty the last couple of afternoons and just wanted to say: it's a hoot and half! I love your zany sense of humor, and I'm curious to see where you're going with the story's plot line. And oh gosh, that shot with the cane! Through the ear and out the eye socket! Talk about painful. Well, no wonder Beatrix is in a crabby mood after all that!  :P Margrethe's outfits look great; insane sims are the best.

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #316 on: November 23, 2013, 08:47:55 PM »
I love Margrethe's new wardrobe! It's tastefully bright and perfect for someone as mad as her.

Oh dear. I bet you want generation six to come soon just so Margrethe can keep her clothes on!
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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #317 on: November 23, 2013, 09:50:03 PM »
I've been reading your dynasty the last couple of afternoons and just wanted to say: it's a hoot and half! I love your zany sense of humor, and I'm curious to see where you're going with the story's plot line. And oh gosh, that shot with the cane! Through the ear and out the eye socket! Talk about painful. Well, no wonder Beatrix is in a crabby mood after all that!  :P Margrethe's outfits look great; insane sims are the best.

Thank you so much! I'm incredibly glad that I was finally able to get that information out there. I've been sitting on it since I began the dynasty back in August, so now I can get the ball rolling!

Insane sims are some of my favorites, ever. I don't like the clothing switches that much, but my goodness, they are funny.

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #318 on: November 23, 2013, 09:52:27 PM »
I love Margrethe's new wardrobe! It's tastefully bright and perfect for someone as mad as her.

Oh dear. I bet you want generation six to come soon just so Margrethe can keep her clothes on!

You should see the maternity outfits I planned for her (I never show them, but I always prepare them in advance so that they don't end up in something awful). They are rad as heck.

If I wasn't in my current situation with house size, generation six would already be here. But I have to wait. I want nooboos!

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #319 on: November 24, 2013, 05:10:38 PM »
53 - 54
Ooh, deviating ::) ? But I prefer last one that you post. This chapter looks serious, but I loved the detail that you given to your story and it look realistic when you talking about rib cage thing. I loved long chapter anyway, because you know when you absorbed to the story, you'll never know that actually already finished but just a wish to craving more to read :)

What---I thought it would be a long chapter when I see a long line before the first picture comes out :P That sepia tone looks good! You're did a good job!

The similarity that I can see from her was her clothes and she almost looks weird like Margrethe, in a good way! She always made me laugh for whatever she did.

The makeovers look good, but the car colour just looks weird, its burn my eyes like someone room :(
I think Margrethe just loved her freedom so much and want to announce to everybody that she will join a Nudist Club::)
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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #320 on: November 24, 2013, 05:30:11 PM »
For a plot-less comic relief chapter, that was pretty awesome. I have an insane Sim that appears to have taken up streaking professionally. Maybe he and Margrethe are co-workers.
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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #321 on: November 25, 2013, 01:27:21 PM »
53 - 54
Ooh, deviating ::) ? But I prefer last one that you post. This chapter looks serious, but I loved the detail that you given to your story and it look realistic when you talking about rib cage thing. I loved long chapter anyway, because you know when you absorbed to the story, you'll never know that actually already finished but just a wish to craving more to read :)

What---I thought it would be a long chapter when I see a long line before the first picture comes out :P That sepia tone looks good! You're did a good job!

The similarity that I can see from her was her clothes and she almost looks weird like Margrethe, in a good way! She always made me laugh for whatever she did.

The makeovers look good, but the car colour just looks weird, its burn my eyes like someone room :(
I think Margrethe just loved her freedom so much and want to announce to everybody that she will join a Nudist Club::)

I cut it off where I did just to up the "WHAM" factor (and I ran out of good pictures of the call, heh, I'll get more soon). It'll continue on for one or two more chapters, once I get more nice pictures.  ;)

Yeah, there are a bunch of similarities between Gwendolyn and Margrethe. It's pretty interesting.

I figured that since everything else about Margrethe is incredibly bright, I'd just go all out. The next generation will have much more subdued colors, maybe brown or dark red.



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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #322 on: November 25, 2013, 01:27:46 PM »
For a plot-less comic relief chapter, that was pretty awesome. I have an insane Sim that appears to have taken up streaking professionally. Maybe he and Margrethe are co-workers.

Maybe, maybe.  ;D

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #323 on: November 25, 2013, 10:59:35 PM »
"WE'RE GOING STREAKING!"

That's the first thing that popped into my head when I saw Margrethe ;D

Well, for starters Margrethe is gorgeous and a belated congrats on her birthdays! I really liked the serious chapter, I love your writing style so much (either way is great though)! Also congrats with almost being half way there.

Just FYI Magrethe is my favorite generation!

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #324 on: November 26, 2013, 08:21:01 AM »
"WE'RE GOING STREAKING!"

That's the first thing that popped into my head when I saw Margrethe ;D

Well, for starters Margrethe is gorgeous and a belated congrats on her birthdays! I really liked the serious chapter, I love your writing style so much (either way is great though)! Also congrats with almost being half way there.

Just FYI Magrethe is my favorite generation!

HA! I love it.

Thanks! I get my normal writing style from many, many years of practice. I've been writing since 1999. I started reading at a very early age (I was about two when I could pick up a book and read it myself), and ever since then I wanted to write my own book. Now many years later I'm majoring in Creative Writing and pretty well known on other websites for my NaNoWriMo 2012 novel. I actually want to try and get it published into an actual book instead of just online.  ::)

I'm so glad to be a hair away from the halfway point, but it's getting boring. Elisabeth still needs to age to elder, and Margrethe needs to be an adult before the next generation comes in. Hence finally dropping the bomb towards the plot, I need something to fill in the major gap I'm going to have.

Margrethe is my favorite, too! I can really just go wild and have a lot of fun playing with her. I can't get enough of her funny faces.  ;D

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #325 on: November 26, 2013, 11:05:20 AM »
Alright guys, crunch time. I'm leaving in a little while, so I'll try to slam out one or two more chapters before I go. Wish me luck!

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A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-five (29/11/2013)
« Reply #326 on: November 29, 2013, 12:33:00 PM »
CHAPTER FIFTY-FIVE

Who wants to eat Thanksgiving dinner with the Royale's?

Well, more on that later.

I had just finished uploading my pictures on Tuesday afternoon and was about to start writing when my dad came home and I had to help load the car. We were on the road for about four hours because there was a huge accident on the interstate but we eventually got to my grandfather's old house. There is absolutely NOTHING out here. The nearest store is twenty minutes away, it was only this year that they actually started delivering pizza, and there's a bunch of creepy abandoned houses and deer. At least my uncle has HD digital cable (despite the only thing being on almost a thousand different channels being shows like Maury). Thank god for my 3DS and knitting...

Thanksgiving was great. The day before I stayed over at my aunt's vacation house with my brother. I watched Jay Leno with my uncle, and in the morning we ate cornbread and watched the Thanksgiving Day Parade and the dog show. My biological uncle and parents showed up, we ate a HUGE amount of food, and then I passed out on the couch in the living room with my uncles and dad while they watched football. We ate dessert, my dad and uncles watched more football while my brother watched cooking shows with my mom in the other room and I played Animal Crossing on my 3DS.

Now I'm laying here on the floor back at my grandfather's old house listening to my biological uncle clean compulsively (he has untreated OCD and is pretty much always scrubbing something down) while I watch TV and siphon wifi off of my mom's tablet.

What's interesting is that a bunch of the rooms in the Royale house are based off of some rooms in this house. I should take some pictures later...

All in all, it's been a good week so far, and I learned that my biological uncle is skipping waiting until I graduate and getting me my new laptop for Christmas. 8 whole GB of RAM! Though it's a MAC, so I can't get the Create a World tool, but at least it'll be faster than my dinky little netbook! Yay!

Anyway, back to the Royale family and their suddenly painfully slow lives.

Margrethe and Gustav graduated the day after aging up to Young Adult. Margrethe was declared valedictorian and was voted most artistic, while Gustav was voted most likely to achieve his lifetime wish. Both graduates got a chance to toss their diplomas in the air before they were ferreted away to their respective places. Margrethe's to her museum room, Gustav's to the spouse memorial room. Since Gustav has been living in the house as a human since he was thirteen, there are lots of photographs of him for the memorial.





I've begun cutting back on the size of Victoria's garden. So far, other than money trees and life fruit, she has three of every plant except for the fruit growing on trees (those she has two of each). She would be out there at five in the morning and wouldn't come in until dinner time, even if she got help from Jimmy. I scaled back, so now she has two of everything and one of each fruit on trees. I also cut back on the money trees and life fruit. The family is now sitting on over a million simoleons, so there isn't much worry about money anymore. Victoria also spends much less time in the garden now and can go fishing as much as she likes again!

Margrethe has a very relaxed schedule. She wakes up a little after everyone else, has a quick breakfast, and heads up to her studio and gets right to work. She talks to herself for her social needs, and uses the bathroom next door for her shower needs before going back to work. She joins the family for dinner, finishes off a sculpture, then heads to bed.



Margrethe wears a Danish soccer uniform as her athletic wear. Care to guess why?



Jimmy really enjoys his car that Elisabeth gave him, a vintage car. It's really slow, the same speed of the sloppy jalopy, but it makes up for that in coolness factor. Plus, it's much easier on the eyes than Margrethe's bright orange and purple skullmobile.



Jimmy is a mad scientist now, so he has a lot of time off. He spent one morning jumping on the trampoline and nearly made it over the house. Wheeeeee!



Margrethe made it to level ten of her scultping skill, so she set to work making topiaries in her formal wear. Tatiana painted her portrait and took her photograph, so she's well on her way. She also got her fourth BlackOp, "Sims on Ice", and I bought her the Artisan Crafter lifetime reward. Nearly everyone else in the house also now has "Hardly Hungry" and "Dirt Defiant", so only Gustav and Margrethe are the ones that really need to eat anymore.



The shower in the purple bathroom went kaplooie.



Like the plumbing in the Royale house, suddenly all of Elisabeth's best friends are dropping like flies. A bunch of her human friends passed, and then for some reason her relationship with her cars dropped. Time for yet another scramble!

But before that, the Royale family had to sit down for Thanksgiving dinner.









After a filling dinner of stuffed turkey and autumn salad, and dessert of key lime pie, they gathered around to drink some nectar before heading off to bed.









Happy Thanksgiving to all!

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-five (29/11/2013)
« Reply #327 on: November 29, 2013, 06:20:40 PM »
One image is missing; I hope that you could do something about it :)
Happy thanksgiving! I hope that we can get more updates from you soon.
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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-five (29/11/2013)
« Reply #328 on: November 30, 2013, 03:04:38 PM »
Happy Thanksgivings to you ans the Royales! The repair person is wearing an odd outfit o.O
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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-five (29/11/2013)
« Reply #329 on: December 01, 2013, 08:50:42 AM »
Happy (belated) Thanksgiving! I like the new car your sims got. Did you win NaNoWriMo?

 

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